I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 23)

Hey frndss…..
Frnd kaha hai aaj… Pata hai q???
Bcoz frnds accept uh with whole heart and with all flaws…
So do uh guys do….. Love uh for dat😍
And I read all ur lovely comments… In the last 2 episodes but was not able to reply back… Bcoz of my bsy schedule….. Sho shorry….
Keep commenting….
Keep supporting…..
Love uh alll….
Let’s begin………

Everyone and hell tired and seating on the mats….
B: lets see waterfalls
S: ya… this is the perfect time… as it is going to be dark soon and there will be colurfull waterfalls
All: really…. Ya lets go… (everyone are going towards the waterfalls… but somebody holds kunj’s wrist)
T: kunj…. Vohhh I m not able to find my phone…. Plz come with me…
K: yaa… (his phone rings) I have to attend this twinkle… I m here only you search na
T: (makes a miffed look) okkk
(Kunj attends the call….. and turns to look at twinkle…. Just then collides with a girl… the girl is about to fall and he holds her on-time, the girl is in his arms and is lost in his eyes… kunj looks here and there and composes her and make her stand…. But sumone is noticing this… who could it be? Ovio its twinkle…)
K: are uh ok?
Lady: (starring at him) m I dreaming…..
K: no uh r not….
Lady: (surprised) oooooo no, plzzz pinch me, I m infront of the most eligible bachelor of the world… (kunj smiles) oh god… uh look so dashing…. So hot…. So handsome…. (touches his arms) I m still amazed I fall in ur arms….. (kunj notices twinkle boiling in anger and slowly removes the lady’s hand from his arms..)
K: actually…. Uh are mis… (before he cud speak further
Lady: ya I m mistaken, uh are bachelor in front of the world… but everyone knows that… wat are uh good at…. (moves his finger on his chest, in a way of seducing him… kunj is now hell scared, looking at twinkle and closes his eyes)
Just then the lady is been jerked away from kunj and kunj opens his eyes… ya it was twinkle
T: (angry) how dare uh touch my husband? Dnt uh know he is happily married and uh shameless creature how can uh even touch him like this…. huh…. (pushes her a bit) huh.. say….
K: (holds her from waist with one hand and another hand on her shoulder, a way of backhugging her) twinkle lets leave… (drags her behind)
T: how can we? She needs to give explanation…. (tries to come out from his grip and kunj still keeps dragging her) how can she do that kunj… (turns to the lady) I will kill uh… if uh repeat this…
K: (turns to the lady and gives a sorry wala look and sideholds twinkle and move towards the group) wat r uh upto twinkle… is this the way to behave? (bitruti, luvkhush and mahiya are shocked to see twinj fighting)
T: (jerks him away from her) stop being my parent got dammit… didn’t uh saw wat she was upto? she was just into uh and uh…. Are telling me to behave…
K: I wud hav tackeled the situation by my way twinkle, wat was the need to fight with her…
T: (shouts) ur way huh… (pushes him) ur way (pushes him again) and wat is this ur way? To sleep with her and entertain her, is this ur way kunj…… (on the peak of the voice) is this the way uh wud have tackeled the situation? (everybody are shocked and are numbed to hear her)
Kunj feels embarrased and his eyes turns heavy…. He moves from there…..
Twinkle watches him going and realises that he over-reacted… she hits herself on the forehead and runs behind him…. Bitoo was just about to stop her when shruti hold his wrist and nodded in a no…
B: i cant trust on kunj anymore… (he runs behind twinkle)
M: (to shruti) wats wrng shruti?
S: (composes herself) nothing uh guys leave for the waterfalls…
A: buttt
S: dnt wrry, ur bhabhi has became lil jealose… they will be ok…
Kh: so uh guys are not joining us?
S: no uh all carryon… we will be at home…. Come soon buhye….. (she leaves and calls bitoo)
On phone… “wer r uh?” (just then she locates him and watches him consoling twinkle as she was crying very much)
S: (concerned) wat happen twinkle? (twinkle narrates the situation)

Flashback…..
Kunj moved out with teary eyes… twinkle followed him….
T: (running behind him) kunnnjjjj….. kunnnjj….. I m sorrryyyy…. Plsssss stoppp
(kunj is still numb and walks fast, he is about to catch a cab, when twinkle cathes him… holds him by wrist… kunj stops and slowly with his other hand removes her hand holing his wrist)
T: kunj look I m sorry, it was not intentional… It just spilled out of my toungue in anger… (cups his face) look at me kunj (kunj is moving his head to come out of that cupping)
K: twinkle plzzzz (yells)
T: (her eyes starts flooding n number of tears) plzzzzz kunj…
Bitoo arrives and kunj catches a cab and leaves…..
Flashback ends–––––––––––

B: cool down twinkle y uh need to cry for that jerk?
T: (she comes out of his arms and gives him a sad look) uh still think of him like this? No bhai.. he has changed… he confessed that he loves me.. and that london wala scene… he was going there to attend some rehab… that he can getout of his ill habits…. (to shruti) shruti yes my kunj has changed… my kunj loves me so much and today I hurt him… i m so sorry, it came out of frustration
S: (cutting her) its called jealosy twinkle… (wipes her tears and cupps her face) I support uh twinklke to convince ur miffed kunj… (both smiles… while bitto is about to leave, twinkle watches and holds his wrist)
T: bhai plz… forgive him and accept him… he really loves me… and I too love him very much….
B: (cups her face) and I love uh very much… I m there with uh my angel, just never hide ur pain from me… ok?
T: pakka promise… (hugs him and smiles, shruti smiles looking atast bitoo has forgiven kunj)
B: (composes from the hug) lets leave, humare jijaji ko bhi toh manana hai… (lets leave, we have to convince my brother-in-law) (trio laughs and catches a cab and leaves for the mansion)

Kunjvihar….
Bitruti comes out of the cab and motions in the mansion…

Twinj’s room:
Kunj was sitting with a sad look on the couch, as he was hurt by the incident… Bitoo is carrying twinkle in his arms and lies her oh the bed…. Kunj gets up (concerned)
T: ahhhh bhai….
S: areey sambhal k
B: (to shruti) kya sambhal k? is she a small kid to run behind a cab… now see she got so severe sprain na…
S: its ok bitoo, it happens… (winks at twinkle…. kunj gets shocked)
K: wat? She ran behind the cab?
B: ya the cab in which uh were there…
S: (holds bitoo by arm) its ok bitoo… lets leave… (to kunj) plz take care of her… and, doctor has prescribed that ointment… do help her…
K: ya sure… dnt wrry…. (they leave…. he closes the door)
T: (smirks…. and starts her drama) ahhhh… kunj…
K: (feels weird) twinkle… stop that…
T: wat? Here I m diding in pain..and god knows y uh making irritated faces… ahhhh…
K: uh visited doctor na… now it will be ok…
T: no Kunj…. Aaahhh (Kunj looks at her leg)
K: stop moaning like that twinkle…. (Sits near her on bed)
T: like what Kunj…. (Comes near him) kunjjjj…. (Traces her finger on his face… Then neck)
K: (gulps in) waaattt arrrre uhhh doing twinkle?
T: (smiles within) y r uh stammering? (inserts her hands inside his shirt as the first two bottons are opened… And Rubs her hands on his chest)
K: (slowly remover her hands) let me apply ointment…
T: ya sure… (Gives him the ointment from beside table and gives cheesy smiles)
K: (thinks…. God knows wats been cooking up in her mind… And stupid me.. She is injured then to I m feeling like having her… Ohh damn and y today she is giving me green signals… I m not able to gulpin more… Just one touch of her and I will melt away… I guess…) Wer are uh hurt? (Touching her foot) here?
T: no upar…
K: (Kunj touches ankle) here?
T: no or upar..
K: (kunj touches her knee) here?
T: no or upar…
K: (Kunj is surprised and gives one eyebrow look) or upar? Kaha twinkle?
T: (holds his hand and places on her chest… Indicating heart side) here….
K: (Kunj understands she is just acting….he removes his hand from her grip and tries to standup wen twinkle holds his wrist…)
T: plx Kunj I m sorry… Plz forget that…
K: ( Kunj getsup and removes her hand from his wrist) uh must be tired go and sleep…. ( saying this he went out of the room)
T: (to herself) oh so uh r still miffed on me… Bitoo bhai ur plan didnt work… (Sad look)
Ok if uh r Sadu Sarna… Then I m also THE TWinkle Taneja…. Huhhh.. Ya ya The Twinkle Sadu Sarna. I will make uh forgive me… Trust me… (Smirks)

80 comments

  1. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Finally. …. was desperately waiting fr it… oh god… thanks fr uploading. ..
    plz update the next episode soon.. loved it.

  2. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Hahah missed u shoo much n about the epi it’s was fab awsm hope Twi knows soon about vihaan aka bitoo loved each n every part 😍😍😍

  3. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    You know what di…this was something called..
    Fantabulous..
    Marvelous..
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    .which made me speechless!!
    Tooo good..
    Muah muah muah
    .ab bas kunjju maan jaaye…
    Loved it as I do you😘😘😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm zaku… 😘
      And are uh taunting me ???
      Huh say… Vly bad….😜
      I will post soon… Sachi…😉😜😜

  4. shalu

    awsome update kunj is miffed with twinkle and twinkle manaoing kunj…..so romantic…..can’t wait for the next update. ……plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

  5. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Main tennu samjhawan ki….na iss ff ke bina lagda jee….tu ki jaane pyar mera…main karaan intezaar iska…ye dil par tu hai jaan meri….jaan meri….

    My fav song with some moderation by the great Laddoo….OMG meri pyali pyali Saby di….main isspe koi comment kr hi nhi skti…tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good…..hazaar words likh du toh bhi kam hai….love u….bada wala….😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Ladooooo….. Meri jaan merit isshuuu😍😍
      Itna cute comment….
      Hayyy… Already mein itni sweet hu…
      Uoar she tera yeah sweet we zyada sweetest comment….
      Irada kya hai? Muje diabeties toh karwana nahi chahti na….
      And and and its my fav song too….
      Same pinchi….
      Love uh toooooo😍😍😍😍

  6. Sidhantian (isabella)

    Most awaited epi…
    Really missed your ff dea… 👍
    As alys no comment..
    Its was jst awesome… 😃

  7. Sidhanshi

    Wowww…what an episod!!! Loved u’r ff. Hi saby, i’m sidhanshi. Till now i’m a silent reader but today i can’t control myself from commenting. I’m with TU from last 7 months but i read all the episods of u’r ff.. today for the first time i commented. Loved it nd waiting for the next part.

    • Saby

      |Author

      Hi sudhanshi….
      So again one silent reader caught….
      On TU from last 7 months… Like really?
      and abhi telling… This is not fair….
      At last my epi made uh to comment….
      Thanks for liking the epi….
      Thanks for commenting…. Keep commenting now….
      Will post it asap….

  8. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Saby…….ufff what an epi loved the emotions and that dramebaaz twinkle
    Love u soooooooooo much ♥♥♥

  9. priya

    wah..!!! twinkle ki sherni mode on..
    aaj toh twinkle devil nikli..
    waiting for twinkle’s “kunj manao mission”

  10. SidMinTwinj

    Davy finally you posted it…I was waiting for your fflike hell…superb episode…try to post next episode asap…

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm dear…. 😘
      Do tell ur name… Plshhh…
      As its difficult to know who’s commenting…
      Will post next epi asap

  11. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Saby, as usual it was awesome. Loved the way Twinkle made Bittoo accept Kunj and she tried to sort out everything between themselves but, maybe it’ll take a bit of time. Anyways, hope you get to upload soon.
    Loads of love
    Your Riu😃😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Awwww my riuuuuu😍😍😍
      R uh liking the twihaan bond?
      Do tell me if sumthng is exaggerated….
      Ty ty ty so much…… For the comment
      And love uh too…. Too much😘😘😘

      • Ria

        |Registered Member

        Ofcourse I am loving the bond. Theirs nothing you’re exaggerating about the bro-sis bond.😃

  12. Baby

    |Registered Member

    omgg amazing saby di luvd d episode i mean srsly osm n simply jst cnt w8 fr ur nxt episode jas mannoo sid misn haha ll b w8ing pls post asap bt pls tel dis alsoo 2 me how doooooo u rite soooooooo gud fab amazing n leave us speechless

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm baby😍
      Uh r seriously a darling yaar….
      I m glad uh liking my writing…
      I hav no idea how do I write so well….
      Its a mystery maybe…..
      Will post next epi asap…..
      Love uh….😍😘

  13. simran

    Finally……i’m waiting for it from long time btw the episode was mind blowing,fantastic and everything loveeeee uuuuuu

  14. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Yahooooooooo…..dii what an episode…………..was so so so so amazing
    Awesome
    👍👌👏❤😘

  15. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it Saby di ……😍
    Twinkle jealouse ……Kunj angry noe Kunj manao time 😅
    Even though he is angry with Twinkle he still cares for her so sweet 😊
    Loved it waiting for the next pls post it asap🙇love you 😙

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm jisha😘
      Jaan its ok if uh comment late…
      I m glad uh commented… That more I m concerned….
      Must say… Uh have a good office knowledge.. And corporate knowledge…
      Talking about ur ff… Love it…

  16. Shan

    Well episode saby…. nice going…. hope you will get some more time in your life…. i mean i would like to ask god to give you 25 hours a day… so that you will be able to write the amazing story…. lol… love you a lot saby… waiting for next epi dear..

    • Saby

      |Author

      Hey shannnn….
      Uh literally made me laugh….
      Seriously uh gonna ask god to given me 25 hrs… Plz ask for 26…. 😂😂
      See I m so demanding na…. God too knows that …
      Acha wait… Wat to commented last time????
      Ping me…. We’re to ping uh…???
      Will I snd a piegon to ping uh… ?
      Fb? Watsapp? TU? A least somwer uh MST b having a I’d?
      Let me know… And tysm😘
      Love uh too😍😍

  17. zayb_zikra

    Omggggggggggggggggg saby diiii……!!!!!!!!
    Ur jus osmmmmmmmm loved it…..😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤
    So so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much…..😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Damn ur jus freaking awesome yaar….❤❤❤❤❤❤😚😚😚😚
    Loving ur track …..😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Ur goin gud….😘😘😜😜😜😜💙💙💖💖💗💗
    Superbbbbbbbbbbb yaar…..
    Lub uhhhh…….
    D epi ws o my gosh…..😜😜😜😊😊😊
    Sho sho sho shweet dea really good……….
    Ur ff is jusssssssss amazinggggggg,……..
    Kya kahu mai.????
    Batao ab kahu toh kahu kya….?????
    Yaar m really really shorry…….
    Sho sho shorry…😭😭😭😜😜😜😜
    Kaan pakad ker shorry…….😜😜😟😝😝😝
    Sholy bola na….??!!!!!
    Acha chalo apne is khufiya dimag per itna zoor mat dalo….😂😂😂😂
    Allah k liye yaar….
    Arre kya mai bhi kaha se kaha chali gayi?….
    Ha where I ws?????
    Ya ya got it…..
    Shorry right????
    Ha toh wo isliye tha ki..k…
    .k
    K
    …K
    K…..
    ….,
    .
    .
    Haa yaad agaya late comment karne k liye….😂😂😂😝😝😝😝😟😟😟😜😜😜😭😭
    Wo actually na meri tabiyath kuch thik nahi hai ….
    So isliye…..
    So anyways…..
    Bieee bubbay……
    Luv to d core…..
    Luv ur ff to d moon n back…❤❤❤😚😚😘😘😘😘💙💙💙💙
    Are mai toh phir se bhul gayi k…
    Kya mai b ….
    Kitna bakbak karti rehti …hu….
    Fever hai phir b….
    Beshram hu..😚😂😂😂😂😂
    Ha toh wo yeh thi k ….
    Do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz pleaashhhhhhhh….❤❤❤❤❤
    Luv u na…..
    Ya one thing I wanna ask uh that k y r uh nt replying…??????
    R u angry widme..??😝😝😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Anyway do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz….
    Frm ur jhalli si dramebazz stupid si zikraa……
    N most importantly UR IMPATIENT DEVIL….😂😂😂😂😂😂😛😛😛😛😛😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😟😟😝😝😝😝😝😝😝
    Luv uh so SO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH…❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😘😘😘😜😜😜😜😈😈😊😊😛😛😛😛😝😝😝😝😝

    • Saby

      |Author

      Zikruuuuuuuuu………
      My zikraaaaaaaaa…………..
      Jaan jaanemaan…..
      Pata hai kitna miss kita tuje….
      Tere comment pe 2 days she reply nahi de pa rahi…. Kya karu…. Tym nahi….
      Ha ha an gussa mat hona…
      K itttu itttu se kaam k liye tym nahi….
      Par kya karu jaan tube reply deti to sab bhi toh merit Jaan hai… Unhe bhi reply dena padta…. And less tym… Isslia reply nahi diya….
      And tune soch bhi kese liya… K mein apni notanki… Dramebaaz jalli zikruu de naraz ho jaugi????
      Huhhh… Bata toh….
      Rehnede tu kya batayegi….
      Offo… Need to go office me hu…
      Buhbye….
      Acha sunn……
      Sunn na….
      Arrey toh sahi…..
      Hw cn i contact uh?…… I wnt to b in contact wid my jalli zikru… Let me know ok….
      Now pakka margai… TL k haatho….
      Chal buhbye…. Andand and
      Love uh tooooooo much😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm shikha😘
      I m glad uh liked it…..
      Roothna mananna the thing I like the most
      Will cont soon……. asap

  18. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Wooooooow saby kya epi hai yaar mindblowing….i just loved your epi…each and every thing….the way you write amzing ….im wondering how your doing this…hatsoff to u yaar….im proud to say Your my sis….love you baby take care….

    • Saby

      |Author

      Awwwww afffu…. Di….
      My chummm di….
      Still confused di bulau ya nahi????
      Uh only solve this mystery….
      I m sooooo much happy to know that uh r proud of me….
      Vese mein aapki hi toh been hu… Toh zahir so baat hai… Aapki tarha hi hogi na…
      BT then too uh are still better no no best then me…..
      Loveeeeee uhhhh shooooo muchhh😍😍😍😍

  19. Bulbul23

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god wt an episode superb di

    I was waiting for it from so long and finally but amazing episode and hope they get fine again

  20. sujina

    twinkle…jealous..xo.xo.xo.cute…
    loved it a lot…
    wanna c punjabi patakas move 2 melt kunj…post asap…<3…<3…<3…

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