I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 22)

After there pakda-pakdi (I dnt know the translation) they sit on the mats…..
Bitruti and kunj already sitting over there and they come and compose themselves over there… lie on the mat…. Luvkhush almost lieing on mat, were as amu and mahi sitting on the either sides on kunj and resting on his shoulders… twinlkle is sitting between bitruti and resting his head on bitoo’s shoulder……. All are breathing heavily as they ran so much….

M: (breathing heavily) ohhhh goddd di… kitna bhaga ti ho…. (kunj puts sandwich in her mouth, she eats)
A: ya… I m toh tired now… (now kunj makes her eat and the other piece of sandwich)
L: we didn’t said anything…. Haaa….
Kh: (cutting him) then too uh beat us…
T: uh all deserve that naughtyheads… how dare uh guys say that our pair doesn’t look nice? Huhhh (with full attitude wala look and her head is up in pride… kunj smiles looking at her)
All 4: ok baba…. Forgive us…. Ur pair looks the hottest pair in the whole world…..
B: (rubs her back and sidehugs her as she was resting on him) angel they were just teasing uh…
T: ya… devi…. (understands what was gonna spill from her toungue… she thinks… devil was I about to say that? but y?) bhai kuch nahi…. (her face turns pale, smile fades and her eyes interlocks with kunj)
(kunj thinks…. Wat is the unseen bond between bitoo and twinkle? Y I always feel jealous seeing them together… bitoo was my best buddy but the day from twinkle entered in our life he has forgot me…. And twinkle she is so reserved type of a person.. how is she so comfortable with him?)
All are having some snacks and sandwiches, chips, cold drinks….
S: btw bitoo ur angel is very much happy today….
B: how do uh know that? (everyone gazes her)
S: somebody told me wen she is happy she shows attitude… (twinkle eyes show a deathglare to kunj as she knows who cn be the person… while everyone giggles)
T: (miffed tone) I don’t do that…. huh… look di… I m the sweetest girl in the whole new york,… wait not only newyork in the whole world,… infact not only world in the whole universe….
K: (saracism) ya… ya… itni sweet ki muje toh diabeties ho gayi hai….. (that much sweet that I m suffering from diabeties)

Everyone laughs at his statement……
T: arghhhhhhh…. Uh guys are impossible… and uh sadu sarna uh just meet me alone… (angry look)
M: (cupping her face) oh god di…. Alooooonnnnne?
A: ya y alone… say in front of us only na… we also wanna know how uh torture by poor bro….. (amu cups kunj’s face dramatically and kunj makes puppy face)
T: uh both just shutup…. Uffff
B: hey no1 will tease her… do uh get that.. (to mahiya_)
T: dekho na bhai… ( and shows tongue to mahiya and to kunj…. Kunj smiles seeing her cute expressions)
L & kh: enough guys…. If we sit like this only na then whole day will go in fighting only… lets play a game…
All: (excited) which game?
L & kh: blindfold game…
All: yaaaa…..
Everyone getsup and starts to motion towards the grass area…
All: we are ready…. Who is the dyner?
L & kh: (smirks at eachother…. Both are having one blind fold In their hands and luv has the blindfold in which nothing could b visible but khush is having a blindfold in wch everything cud be visible….)
L: ok so…. Before starting the rules…
kh: ya it will b boys v/s girls
all: wat? How?
L: ya….. let us explain…. Boys and girls wil be in different teams and boys need to catch girls wereas girls need to catch boys…. But all will be playing… But in that if a girl catches girl and a boy catches boy then there points will be deducted…
Kh: at the end if girls win we are liable for wat ever uh say….
L: but if we win…… uh guys are liable to do watever we say…..
B: sounds interesting
K: not only interesting, awesome rule…. Kya hua girls daar gaye?” (wat happen girls are uh frightened?)
Girls: not at all…… we are ready….

Now the game begins….. cheating wali game friends…..
M: lets start…. I will be the dyner….
Lu: (smirks) ok….
Luv blindfolds her with the one whch she wont be able too see… and everyone begins to call out her name and mahi tries to catch them…
M: oh god…. I m regretting…. Y I accept to give the first dine? Uhhuhhhh… (dramatically cries)
Boys: hahahha…… now catch us if uh can
she touches bitoo… or must say he delibrately got caught…
kh: oh god bitoo bhai….
Girls: yipeee… (hugs each other in excitement) we got one point
T: (showing tongue to kunj) we gonna win …
K: (controlling his smile and faking anger) we will see…
Now its bitoo’s turn…… khush blindfolds him with the cheating wala blindfold…
Ya I mean the blindfold frm which its seen…
Kh: (wispers in bitto’s ears) plz bhai…. Pretend it’s the real blindfold
B: (smiles) I will… (pats his shoulder) {score is girls 1/boys 0}

Bitoo acts he is blindfolded and after sum time catches shruti…. {score is girls 1/boys 1}
Shruti …. Catches luv….. {score is girls 2/boys 1}
then luv catches amaya {score is girls 2/boys 2}
Then amaya catches kunj…. {score is girls 3/boys 2}
Kh: oh no…. kunj bhai… ur turn now…. (he comes forward and says same wat he said to bitoo)
K: wat? But I m not…. (khush doesn’t listen and went away from him)
K: (thinks…. Wat this khush said it is not a blindfold… it is visible… but I m toh not at all able to see… hav I turned blind…. (sacared) no.. kunj this boys both are mad… he must be just joking…. Now let me catch my angel (smiles)
S: kunj wat r uh thinking?
M: ya bhai… uh havent moved a bit… to catch us
B: I think he slept
A: (teasing) bhai are uh dreaming something…..
K: (smiles) ya… (motions towards there voices and they try to escape from him) I was thinking about someone… near to my heart…
T: (fumes) acha… whos that?
K: (smirks… thinks…made uh speak… now I cn catch uh, motions towards her voice ) hmmm… wat to say twinkle… there is somebody…
A: whos dat bhai….
K: she is my jungliiii (moving his hands to catch someone)
T: (realising he is talking about her… and talks loudly) amuuuuu, let him play naa… lev that
K: (now he was just few cms away from her… as he was following her voice) arrey twinkle let me speak na…
T: (just about to escape, almost escaped wen her hair touches kunj face bcoz of the wind and he holds her wrist) (makes a pout) ohhhh no…. (kunj opens the blindfold)
K: (wispers to her) I just missed it..
T: no uh caught me… see (showing him, her wrist which he was holding)
K: not this…
T: then (confused)
K: missed to watch uh, looking hot… wen uh were boiling in anger (winks at her)
T: (controls her blushing) watever…
L: lets blindfold twinkle di…. (he comes with the blindfold and starts blindfolding her)
K: (thinks….. the blindfold is in my hand then, which blindfod luv is blindfolding twinkle? Remembers khush words….) noooo…. (but before he couls speak, twinkle unties the blindfold from her eyes and fumes in anger….. kunj’s hand is covering his face and taking a glance of twinkle from between the gap of the fingers) margaye……
T: uh….. cheatercocks…….
Girls: cheatercocks?
T: ya… they were doing cheating and explain whole thing to girls…..
Girls: (fumes in anger and gives death glares to boys…) akramaaannnnn
(saying this girls run behind boys…. To beat them for the cheating done…….)

Twinkle is running after kunj…. They are much away from others….
K: (while running) stop twinkle… plz….. I had to do nothing with all this…. I didn’t knew this…. I swear…
T: (running behind him) uh lier…. Uh cheated us… I m not gonna leave uh….
K: (kunj is tired he givesup and stops, turns to look at twinkle and just then….. dhummmm…. Twinkle bumped upon kunj and as they were so tired… kunj cudnt able to hold that sudded jerk and fall on grass with twinkle on top of him…… they both were breathing heavily…..)(teases) great… this was the thing uh were running after me? Uh wud hav informed me first only… I wouldn’t have run so much… (holds her from waist)
T: (makes hwww… wala look) hwwww….
K: (cheezy way) I m just feeling like eating uh wen uh give this hww wala look (acts as biting her but doesn’t)
T: (moves her head) uh naughthead…. Leave me… and stop teasing me with your chessy talks
K: no I wont…
T: uh have to…. Or else….
K: orelse wat twinkle?
T: orelse… I will
K: orelse my jungli billi will bite me again?
T: (blushes) leave me kunj…. Ppl are watching us
K: (tightening the grip) so wat twinkle? This is New York… everything is allowed over here… even (comes close to her lips)
T: (realises wat he is upto) even wat… kunj… (brethes more heavily)
K: even…… (twinkle parts her lips and kunj lossens the grip and she escapes from his grip and standsup… hitting his chest) this is cheating twinkle…… (pouts)
T: cheaters deserve to be cheated…. (shows toungue and runs back to the group… while kunj smiles at her innocence…. Still seating on the grass)
K: this girl will make me go crazy for her…. again (he has a bright smile on his face and moves to the group)

A stranger who was noticing all this from a little distance…. “thank god so much to make them unite again, I m so much guilty for my deeds, but I m happy to see them together again…. I hope twinkle accept my appolgy…. I miss uh twinkle…….” (he is the same man tw and bitruti saw in restaurant remember…. The mystery man….. do uh remember or not?)
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hey lovely ppl……. watsup? missed me or not? so so so so sorry yaar…………………….
dnt be confused, my soory is because i made all of uh to appologise… reading to ur sorries i uderstud its sumwer my mistake also… from starting i used to update regularly and now i dnt do so… i know you guys are very loveable and supported me throughout… i request the same support in my tough times… which i m facing now… due to shortage of time……. lastly i have a question……
i know the question i m gonna ask is wierd but seriously i need a answer from all my commentators……

*** Wat is actually the reason of my readers liking my ff and my commentators commenting?
1. bcoz of the title…
2. bcoz of the story
3. bcoz of the characters
4. bcoz of the tracks and mysteries
5. bcoz of my writing
6. bcoz of anything which makes uh read my ff…..
seriously need to have this ans……. do tell me……
love uh all lots and lots more,………

47 comments

  1. Rashiverma2199

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    Hy Saby…..lovely it was…..awesome blossom…..u nailed it…..I love reading ur ff because of its title , its story, track , mysteries and ur writing…..

  2. priya

    saby.. day by day u r making me gripped to the story..
    i was eagerly waiting for ur updates…
    plz plz update it soon..
    anxiously and eagerly waiting for the next episode..

  3. Mahi

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    All r in my answer I like every9in it
    Todays episode is also awesome like always
    Love it & love u dear

  4. Sameera

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    Haha nice epi saby I think that mystery man was uv 😂😂n about ur answer
    I used to wait for ur epi bcoz of story and tracks n mystery bcoz ur story is diff from all of us not like a typical love story I liked kunj jungli wala behaviour seriously u must be thinking everyone likes a care love n all wala hero but I like kunj wild character which makes me gone crazy for ur ff 😘😘😘😘
    Love u too
    Post next epii soon
    Can’t wait for it 😁😁😁

    • SidMinTwinj

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      Hey saby I lyk ur ff coz of the story,the way you write and the tracks and mysteries… Today’s epi is awesome… Love you n yr ff soooooooo much baby…😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘

  5. Anam

    Hey saby!❤the episode was amazing as always sorry for not commenting on previous ffs actually I was out of town n the network was hell slow! But now will comment on each n every episodes💕💖💘 n ya…I like ur ff most for twinj romance and because of the story😊do continue as soon as possible💟

  6. Ria

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    Saby, the episode was amazing as usual. Oh God! Twinj romance is so cute. Is this man Yuvraj as Shruti said na that Twinkle committed suicide cuz Yuvraj separated Kunj and Twinkle. I guess that’s what she said. By the way, I love your ff as I love the story as well as the way you write. Loads of love.😃

  7. shalu

    awesome episode…..n I think the mystery man is uv…..loved it please continue soon…….and my answer for ur question is all of the above options… love u♥♥♥♥

  8. shalu

    fabulous episode…..n I think the mystery man is uv…..loved it please continue soon…….and my a

  9. Peewangmo

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    All of above but mostly your storyline is totally unique from others.. Which naturally make me to fall for your ff. The way of your writing is so perfect with amazing title.. About character twinj is my ever time besty.. More over i like the story which you have already protrayed 👍 Wel done & seriously Its a grt job 👌
    Keep posting when you get time ☺
    Good luck for your future 😘

  10. Ritzi

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    Hey saby everything about yr ff is mindblowing bit still I got addicted to ur ff bcus of the story in beginning….. Tht how kunj turned devil nd tortured twinkle….then his guilt…..it was unique

  11. Shan

    I think this should be the multiple options question….. when I’m at iit roorke….. i didn’t find this type of hard question…. really saying one option can’t justify my answer…. while I’m going through the other ffs…. just saw the title name nd i got bit excited to see the title… just read that part… i think its episode 9 or something… just i damn loved your writings and opened the first ff and started reading your ff…. from that day loved the mysterious tracks which were done by you……… somehow the characters also created a lot of interest by moving aome romantic topics and childhood moments…. so totally this would be the multiple choice question saby…. love your ff a lot saby…… love you a lot!!!!!

  12. Queen

    Oh amazing epi and I read and comment because of each and every thing the title story and all wil be waiting for next epi

  13. Priya tripathi

    Hey wonderfull i think that mysterious man is yuvraj n i like ur story bcoz of title bcoz of story n mysterious track i don’t like ur story ur bcoz of charcters i don’t watch tashan e ishq after quite of old kunj i never see what track going on the show i m seriasly say that i have crush on yuvraaj i like whatever he play in the show negative or positive role

  14. Aishwarya twinj fan

    Becuz of ur story track nd the characters.
    And di pls read my ff also.
    Tere mere pyaar twinj

  15. Joonakanksha

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    Heyyy saby….awesome epi….
    I loved everthng about your ff…all the options…
    And yr plz one req…plz show more of twinj scenes in you next epi….
    Love u 😘😘

  16. Saira

    AWESOME episode especially the TwiNj romance
    Your FF is so unique and the story the tracks and mysterious and moreover whatever misunderstanding created between them their love for eachother will last forever

    This is the only FF I read as one of my friends told me so I started it and I loved it so much I eagerly wait for your FF
    I best FF ever
    Love u so much
    Plz post asap plz plz😞

  17. SidMinTwinj

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    Hey saby I like your ff bcoz of the story, the way you write and the tracks and mysteries… Today’s episode is awesome… Love you and your ff soooooooo much…😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘

  18. simran

    Saby dear episode was just fab and i am reading yr ff because of the title,tracks,yr writing god bless you love u sooooooooo much

  19. Shreya098

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    Wow what an awesome epi…..😍😍
    Enjoyed reading it….
    And coming to ur question..
    I love ur ff because……..ya the first time I saw our ff …I got attracted to it because of the title…and then after reading the first epi itself….I was like wow what a story…what a track….soo mysterious… I was sooo curious to know the reason behind kunj’s changed behaviour…..I was soo engrossed in ur ff that I always used to think about it only …like what’ll happen next….as I loved ur mysterious track…

    And ya at the end…
    .. no matter how good a story is…..it’ll be interesting only if it is beautifully penned down…..the fate of a story totally depend on the fact that how it is written….
    And ur writing skill….unke baare mein to mai kya bolu….mje ni lgta mje kch bolne ki jrurat hai……mere paas to words hi ni hai describe krne k liye ki how awesome u are…..really tmhe to script writer hona chahiye…I just loooove the way u write😘😘
    So overall I love ur ff because of the story,mysterious track,and the way u write it……
    😍😍😘😘

  20. Laddoo

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    Oh my God…..I have nothing to say….meri pyari pyari Saby di itta talent kahan se bhar kar laati ho? I mean likh kaise leti ho aise? Hadd se zyada achha tha yeh toh…I mean incredible, awesome, amazing, mindblowing, fantastic, fabulous, excellent, outstanding blah blah blah…..kya mashallah likha hai….aur wo biting wala scene toh I can imagine in frnt of my eyes….Kunj kitta handsome lag rha hoga!!! Wo mystery man pkka Yuvi hoga….ab tukka maar rhi hu gakat hua toh I Dnt Kno….aur jo kast mein ques puchha gaya uska answer main numbers mein dungi…
    1
    2
    3
    4
    5
    6
    Saare ke saare…I mean har ek point mere liye reason hai why I love ur ff….tab tak ke liye bye bye see u take care….and love u😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  21. Baby

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    hey saby di first of all osm episode den bt nt 2 say i thnk d mystery man is uvraj den 3rdly d answers 2 ur question i luv d title den i luv d story as well i toh m in luv wid d characters also n d tracks n mystries r also jst fab n ur riting is also jst gr8 n yah d odr reason is u u r also toh fab di amazing kya likha hai sooooooooo jst luvd it di n continue asap

  22. Kruti

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    Superb epi saby loved d picnic fun
    And ya I like ur ff not bcoz of 1 reason but 3
    Firstly bcoz of ur story which is very unique
    Nxt bcoz of d tracks and mysteries u never make a track feel that its getting dragged
    And finally bcoz of ur writing skills……u describe things so well each and every emotion comes out so well in ur ff
    Love u and ur ff♥♥

  23. Fan

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    Hey saby dear..super epi!!!…loved it😍😍…i love reading ur ff because of the title,characters, mysteries n most importantly ur writing…iam a fan of ur writing..

  24. AYESHA KHANUM

    because of we r loving u write for us regularly mainly because of ur writting love u so much missed ur ff vry badly thank you very much very much for writings amazing loved it

  25. Zaku

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    Amazing👌👌👌👌👌👌👌‼️Awesome👌👌👌👌👌👌👌‼️
    The mystery man 😱 Another mystery To be solved 🤔
    Yuvraj 😳😳☝️Solved By talented me 😰😄😅
    ……………
    About ur ff I don’t know why I read it 😜🙄😳😱🤔😊
    Post sooooooooooooooooooooon PlZ👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

  26. Sayeeda

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    Saby …my jaan …is their is a need to ask that why we love ur ff …
    We love ur ff for everything…. it is the best one for me ….
    Ur ff is in the top of my fav list …

    Episode was amazing ….Kunj’s jealousy ….how cute.. finally the devil kunj turned to good one ….
    loved it…

  27. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Saby …my jaan …is their is a need to ask that why we love ur ff …
    We love ur ff for everything…. it is the best one for me ….
    Ur ff is in the top of my fav list …

    Episode was amazing ….Kunj’s jealousy ….how cute.. finally the devil kunj turned to good one ….
    loved it…..

  28. Aamu

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    hey it wa amazing n I LOVE UR FF BECOZ OF UR MYSTERIES ALSO N STORY ALSO
    keep writing
    n i think its uv only D MYSTERY MAN

  29. Maggi

    Hyyy i think dat mystry man iz uv….
    Awsm as aiwayz ….u write fantastic epi..
    Nd i luv ur ff fr il d abv mentiond reasons…
    Keep writing more of these beauties…
    Luvd it 2 core💚💚💚

  30. twinjfan (tamanna)

    I really really don’t hv ans to ur ques ..I love It means I love it… ….the title is just so cute…u know I told one of my frnd the title she got too curious to know the story…nw im telling her ur ff stry… 2.story tho kya kahu I cant just explain…tumhe yeh story ka ek film tho bana na hi hoga…3.characters kya kahun I don’t hv words. ..mostly bcz of kunjs character….4.suspense ka tho power packed stry hai tumara ff…5.ur writing…tumhe novel tho zarur likhna chahiye…6.not bcz of anything but fr every single thing I love ur ff…

  31. sidhants dieharder fan (manu)

    Sabbbyyyy di I love ur ff for every hing each and evey decision iits one of my favourite ff for which I wait so curiously and eagerly ur writting ur way o describing evrything ur title every thing attract me to read ur ff and ya I can’t forget in my whole life that I first commented in ur ff on part 7 and it was pleasure for me andddd todays epi awesome I love the dialogues of ku and al the twinj scenes and I think the man is uv but I can’t trust u maybe another mystery ok now bye I will not bore u from my talk…and last but not the least plz plz sun lo pakka last post the next epi asap

  32. Affaa

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    I like the way you write…and your storyline…and you make connection with your readers….I started read this ff bcoz it’s very interesting…and big walla thanks for your ff this amazing ff…I don’t know to explain how much love you and your both are fabulous…really you stoles our heart by your ff…llove u take care

  33. zayb_zikra

    Oopssss again!!!!
    No nt again…..😭😭😭😭
    M toh sachi wala late hogai yaar….
    Wht to do….
    Really busy wid my stuff…..
    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo na pleaashhhhhhhh maaf kardo….😈😈😈😈😈😭😭😭😭😭😭😛😛😛😝😝😝😝
    My lovely sista na pleaashhhhhhhh…..
    Pleaashhhhhhhh pleaashhhhhhhh……….
    Bahot Sara shorry…..
    Kaan pakad ker shorry sholy pleazzzzz……..
    Ok nw commin to ur epi it ws jus jus..
    Jussssssssssssssss……😒😟😟😈😈😈😈😈
    Fab yaar…….
    Loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much………😘😘😘❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤
    Superbbbbbbb boletoh jhakass😂😂😂😂😂
    ANSWERS…..
    Now first ans is I luv ur title……😘😘😘😘
    2)is I luv ur story…❤❤❤❤❤
    3) is superbbbbbbb characters…..😍😍😍😍😍
    4) is ur tracks n mysterious ways r jus fab…..
    5) isisur killewriting…muahhhhhh lajawab…..😝😝😝😊😊😚😚😚
    6) is bcoz of uh my sista…….
    Srsly these r my ans…..😝😝😘😘😘😘
    Ok epi ws jus osmmmmmmmm loved it ……..
    Do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz………
    N ya maaf kardo na pleaashhhhhhhh pleaashhhhhhhh……
    Luv u loads……..
    Luv ur ff to d core…….
    Lub uhhhh sho sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.,…….
    Keep smiling….😊😊😊😊😊
    Be happy…..😚😚😚😚😚
    Keep writing…..😂😂😂😂😂
    Urs jhalli si stupid si……
    Dramebazz stupid….
    N most importantly urs IMPATIENT DEVIL…..😈😈😈😈😈❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Of my angel …….
    Lub uhhhh to d moon n back…….
    Shorry for short comment hehehhe.😂😂😂😂
    Lub uhhhh..

  34. Shamz

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    I’m soooooo sorryyyyyyyyyyyy Saby for late comment…. U know na my reason….
    Now coming to ur epi it was perfect…. U just bring more and more curiosity day by day…..
    QuestionQuestion answer tym……
    1 -> I loved ur title…. And u know this from my 1st comment only as I told u…dat I read ur previous episodes and then came back to ur 3rd epi and commented on it…
    2-> u knew this as well dat I always wanted to write a story on Kunj in grey shade character but I’m juggling with my ff which is going on and I don’t have tym to write 2 ff simultaneously…. So the Kunj’s grey character attracted me to read ur story….love u dear…

  35. sujina

    1-title-devil also fall 4 angel
    2-story-amazing.awesome.fantastic.mindblowing.n.many.more
    3-character-superb blend of new.variety
    4-track-difn.n.unique.concept
    5-mys-epi wise suspense.n.revealation.so.smoothly..making.more.curious.afterwards
    6-writing-flawless
    sceenario.funmoms.nokjhoks.brothernsisterhood.so.nice
    loved it a lot….<3…<3…<3……2…d….infinity

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