I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 22)

After there pakda-pakdi (I dnt know the translation) they sit on the mats…..
Bitruti and kunj already sitting over there and they come and compose themselves over there… lie on the mat…. Luvkhush almost lieing on mat, were as amu and mahi sitting on the either sides on kunj and resting on his shoulders… twinlkle is sitting between bitruti and resting his head on bitoo’s shoulder……. All are breathing heavily as they ran so much….

M: (breathing heavily) ohhhh goddd di… kitna bhaga ti ho…. (kunj puts sandwich in her mouth, she eats)
A: ya… I m toh tired now… (now kunj makes her eat and the other piece of sandwich)
L: we didn’t said anything…. Haaa….
Kh: (cutting him) then too uh beat us…
T: uh all deserve that naughtyheads… how dare uh guys say that our pair doesn’t look nice? Huhhh (with full attitude wala look and her head is up in pride… kunj smiles looking at her)
All 4: ok baba…. Forgive us…. Ur pair looks the hottest pair in the whole world…..
B: (rubs her back and sidehugs her as she was resting on him) angel they were just teasing uh…
T: ya… devi…. (understands what was gonna spill from her toungue… she thinks… devil was I about to say that? but y?) bhai kuch nahi…. (her face turns pale, smile fades and her eyes interlocks with kunj)
(kunj thinks…. Wat is the unseen bond between bitoo and twinkle? Y I always feel jealous seeing them together… bitoo was my best buddy but the day from twinkle entered in our life he has forgot me…. And twinkle she is so reserved type of a person.. how is she so comfortable with him?)
All are having some snacks and sandwiches, chips, cold drinks….
S: btw bitoo ur angel is very much happy today….
B: how do uh know that? (everyone gazes her)
S: somebody told me wen she is happy she shows attitude… (twinkle eyes show a deathglare to kunj as she knows who cn be the person… while everyone giggles)
T: (miffed tone) I don’t do that…. huh… look di… I m the sweetest girl in the whole new york,… wait not only newyork in the whole world,… infact not only world in the whole universe….
K: (saracism) ya… ya… itni sweet ki muje toh diabeties ho gayi hai….. (that much sweet that I m suffering from diabeties)

Everyone laughs at his statement……
T: arghhhhhhh…. Uh guys are impossible… and uh sadu sarna uh just meet me alone… (angry look)
M: (cupping her face) oh god di…. Alooooonnnnne?
A: ya y alone… say in front of us only na… we also wanna know how uh torture by poor bro….. (amu cups kunj’s face dramatically and kunj makes puppy face)
T: uh both just shutup…. Uffff
B: hey no1 will tease her… do uh get that.. (to mahiya_)
T: dekho na bhai… ( and shows tongue to mahiya and to kunj…. Kunj smiles seeing her cute expressions)
L & kh: enough guys…. If we sit like this only na then whole day will go in fighting only… lets play a game…
All: (excited) which game?
L & kh: blindfold game…
All: yaaaa…..
Everyone getsup and starts to motion towards the grass area…
All: we are ready…. Who is the dyner?
L & kh: (smirks at eachother…. Both are having one blind fold In their hands and luv has the blindfold in which nothing could b visible but khush is having a blindfold in wch everything cud be visible….)
L: ok so…. Before starting the rules…
kh: ya it will b boys v/s girls
all: wat? How?
L: ya….. let us explain…. Boys and girls wil be in different teams and boys need to catch girls wereas girls need to catch boys…. But all will be playing… But in that if a girl catches girl and a boy catches boy then there points will be deducted…
Kh: at the end if girls win we are liable for wat ever uh say….
L: but if we win…… uh guys are liable to do watever we say…..
B: sounds interesting
K: not only interesting, awesome rule…. Kya hua girls daar gaye?” (wat happen girls are uh frightened?)
Girls: not at all…… we are ready….

Now the game begins….. cheating wali game friends…..
M: lets start…. I will be the dyner….
Lu: (smirks) ok….
Luv blindfolds her with the one whch she wont be able too see… and everyone begins to call out her name and mahi tries to catch them…
M: oh god…. I m regretting…. Y I accept to give the first dine? Uhhuhhhh… (dramatically cries)
Boys: hahahha…… now catch us if uh can
she touches bitoo… or must say he delibrately got caught…
kh: oh god bitoo bhai….
Girls: yipeee… (hugs each other in excitement) we got one point
T: (showing tongue to kunj) we gonna win …
K: (controlling his smile and faking anger) we will see…
Now its bitoo’s turn…… khush blindfolds him with the cheating wala blindfold…
Ya I mean the blindfold frm which its seen…
Kh: (wispers in bitto’s ears) plz bhai…. Pretend it’s the real blindfold
B: (smiles) I will… (pats his shoulder) {score is girls 1/boys 0}

Bitoo acts he is blindfolded and after sum time catches shruti…. {score is girls 1/boys 1}
Shruti …. Catches luv….. {score is girls 2/boys 1}
then luv catches amaya {score is girls 2/boys 2}
Then amaya catches kunj…. {score is girls 3/boys 2}
Kh: oh no…. kunj bhai… ur turn now…. (he comes forward and says same wat he said to bitoo)
K: wat? But I m not…. (khush doesn’t listen and went away from him)
K: (thinks…. Wat this khush said it is not a blindfold… it is visible… but I m toh not at all able to see… hav I turned blind…. (sacared) no.. kunj this boys both are mad… he must be just joking…. Now let me catch my angel (smiles)
S: kunj wat r uh thinking?
M: ya bhai… uh havent moved a bit… to catch us
B: I think he slept
A: (teasing) bhai are uh dreaming something…..
K: (smiles) ya… (motions towards there voices and they try to escape from him) I was thinking about someone… near to my heart…
T: (fumes) acha… whos that?
K: (smirks… thinks…made uh speak… now I cn catch uh, motions towards her voice ) hmmm… wat to say twinkle… there is somebody…
A: whos dat bhai….
K: she is my jungliiii (moving his hands to catch someone)
T: (realising he is talking about her… and talks loudly) amuuuuu, let him play naa… lev that
K: (now he was just few cms away from her… as he was following her voice) arrey twinkle let me speak na…
T: (just about to escape, almost escaped wen her hair touches kunj face bcoz of the wind and he holds her wrist) (makes a pout) ohhhh no…. (kunj opens the blindfold)
K: (wispers to her) I just missed it..
T: no uh caught me… see (showing him, her wrist which he was holding)
K: not this…
T: then (confused)
K: missed to watch uh, looking hot… wen uh were boiling in anger (winks at her)
T: (controls her blushing) watever…
L: lets blindfold twinkle di…. (he comes with the blindfold and starts blindfolding her)
K: (thinks….. the blindfold is in my hand then, which blindfod luv is blindfolding twinkle? Remembers khush words….) noooo…. (but before he couls speak, twinkle unties the blindfold from her eyes and fumes in anger….. kunj’s hand is covering his face and taking a glance of twinkle from between the gap of the fingers) margaye……
T: uh….. cheatercocks…….
Girls: cheatercocks?
T: ya… they were doing cheating and explain whole thing to girls…..
Girls: (fumes in anger and gives death glares to boys…) akramaaannnnn
(saying this girls run behind boys…. To beat them for the cheating done…….)

Twinkle is running after kunj…. They are much away from others….
K: (while running) stop twinkle… plz….. I had to do nothing with all this…. I didn’t knew this…. I swear…
T: (running behind him) uh lier…. Uh cheated us… I m not gonna leave uh….
K: (kunj is tired he givesup and stops, turns to look at twinkle and just then….. dhummmm…. Twinkle bumped upon kunj and as they were so tired… kunj cudnt able to hold that sudded jerk and fall on grass with twinkle on top of him…… they both were breathing heavily…..)(teases) great… this was the thing uh were running after me? Uh wud hav informed me first only… I wouldn’t have run so much… (holds her from waist)
T: (makes hwww… wala look) hwwww….
K: (cheezy way) I m just feeling like eating uh wen uh give this hww wala look (acts as biting her but doesn’t)
T: (moves her head) uh naughthead…. Leave me… and stop teasing me with your chessy talks
K: no I wont…
T: uh have to…. Or else….
K: orelse wat twinkle?
T: orelse… I will
K: orelse my jungli billi will bite me again?
T: (blushes) leave me kunj…. Ppl are watching us
K: (tightening the grip) so wat twinkle? This is New York… everything is allowed over here… even (comes close to her lips)
T: (realises wat he is upto) even wat… kunj… (brethes more heavily)
K: even…… (twinkle parts her lips and kunj lossens the grip and she escapes from his grip and standsup… hitting his chest) this is cheating twinkle…… (pouts)
T: cheaters deserve to be cheated…. (shows toungue and runs back to the group… while kunj smiles at her innocence…. Still seating on the grass)
K: this girl will make me go crazy for her…. again (he has a bright smile on his face and moves to the group)

A stranger who was noticing all this from a little distance…. “thank god so much to make them unite again, I m so much guilty for my deeds, but I m happy to see them together again…. I hope twinkle accept my appolgy…. I miss uh twinkle…….” (he is the same man tw and bitruti saw in restaurant remember…. The mystery man….. do uh remember or not?)
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hey lovely ppl……. watsup? missed me or not? so so so so sorry yaar…………………….
dnt be confused, my soory is because i made all of uh to appologise… reading to ur sorries i uderstud its sumwer my mistake also… from starting i used to update regularly and now i dnt do so… i know you guys are very loveable and supported me throughout… i request the same support in my tough times… which i m facing now… due to shortage of time……. lastly i have a question……
i know the question i m gonna ask is wierd but seriously i need a answer from all my commentators……

*** Wat is actually the reason of my readers liking my ff and my commentators commenting?
1. bcoz of the title…
2. bcoz of the story
3. bcoz of the characters
4. bcoz of the tracks and mysteries
5. bcoz of my writing
6. bcoz of anything which makes uh read my ff…..
seriously need to have this ans……. do tell me……
love uh all lots and lots more,………

47 comments

  1. Affaa

    Affaa

    |Registered Member

    I like the way you write…and your storyline…and you make connection with your readers….I started read this ff bcoz it’s very interesting…and big walla thanks for your ff this amazing ff…I don’t know to explain how much love you and your both are fabulous…really you stoles our heart by your ff…llove u take care

  2. zayb_zikra

    Oopssss again!!!!
    No nt again…..😭😭😭😭
    M toh sachi wala late hogai yaar….
    Wht to do….
    Really busy wid my stuff…..
    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo na pleaashhhhhhhh maaf kardo….😈😈😈😈😈😭😭😭😭😭😭😛😛😛😝😝😝😝
    My lovely sista na pleaashhhhhhhh…..
    Pleaashhhhhhhh pleaashhhhhhhh……….
    Bahot Sara shorry…..
    Kaan pakad ker shorry sholy pleazzzzz……..
    Ok nw commin to ur epi it ws jus jus..
    Jussssssssssssssss……😒😟😟😈😈😈😈😈
    Fab yaar…….
    Loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much………😘😘😘❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤
    Superbbbbbbb boletoh jhakass😂😂😂😂😂
    ANSWERS…..
    Now first ans is I luv ur title……😘😘😘😘
    2)is I luv ur story…❤❤❤❤❤
    3) is superbbbbbbb characters…..😍😍😍😍😍
    4) is ur tracks n mysterious ways r jus fab…..
    5) isisur killewriting…muahhhhhh lajawab…..😝😝😝😊😊😚😚😚
    6) is bcoz of uh my sista…….
    Srsly these r my ans…..😝😝😘😘😘😘
    Ok epi ws jus osmmmmmmmm loved it ……..
    Do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz………
    N ya maaf kardo na pleaashhhhhhhh pleaashhhhhhhh……
    Luv u loads……..
    Luv ur ff to d core…….
    Lub uhhhh sho sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.,…….
    Keep smiling….😊😊😊😊😊
    Be happy…..😚😚😚😚😚
    Keep writing…..😂😂😂😂😂
    Urs jhalli si stupid si……
    Dramebazz stupid….
    N most importantly urs IMPATIENT DEVIL…..😈😈😈😈😈❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Of my angel …….
    Lub uhhhh to d moon n back…….
    Shorry for short comment hehehhe.😂😂😂😂
    Lub uhhhh..

  3. Shamz

    Shamz

    |Registered Member

    I’m soooooo sorryyyyyyyyyyyy Saby for late comment…. U know na my reason….
    Now coming to ur epi it was perfect…. U just bring more and more curiosity day by day…..
    QuestionQuestion answer tym……
    1 -> I loved ur title…. And u know this from my 1st comment only as I told u…dat I read ur previous episodes and then came back to ur 3rd epi and commented on it…
    2-> u knew this as well dat I always wanted to write a story on Kunj in grey shade character but I’m juggling with my ff which is going on and I don’t have tym to write 2 ff simultaneously…. So the Kunj’s grey character attracted me to read ur story….love u dear…

  4. sujina

    1-title-devil also fall 4 angel
    2-story-amazing.awesome.fantastic.mindblowing.n.many.more
    3-character-superb blend of new.variety
    4-track-difn.n.unique.concept
    5-mys-epi wise suspense.n.revealation.so.smoothly..making.more.curious.afterwards
    6-writing-flawless
    sceenario.funmoms.nokjhoks.brothernsisterhood.so.nice
    loved it a lot….<3…<3…<3……2…d….infinity

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