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I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 21)

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Hi…… mood off hai…..
Pata hai q? just bcoz of uh guys…. Uh are so demanding yaar…..
Uh always do this… nanhi si jaan is very much pareshan……
Uh guys made me cry…. Itne saare frnds eksath katti ho jayege toh rona toh aayega hi na….
Ektoh I m jumbling btw my job, then cllg, then studies then reading all my fav ff’s then writing my ff…. have some….. some… like really lillll mercy on me…. I wil try to give it as soon as i can but cant plomishhh to post regularly……. Ur comments always makes me feel soooooo good that I m smiling my heart out but this times I was so sad that uh guys think I purposely make uh wait….
Its not true….. love uh allllllll so muchhhhhhh………. Here we go with the story…………

Leela is crying very badly…
Leela’s pov:
Y history is repeating… Y again twinkle has to be away from his brother even though he is so close to her…. Y he is not understanding me… Y he is not ready to accept us….. Y he wants to be with that fake identity…. But he still loves her sister so much…. I hope twinkle and Kunj are ok right now….. And that clip… I must deny that it is not of twinj. But how cn i? I dont want to hide this truth from twinj that Vihaan taneja their devil is alive

New York (Kunjvihar)
B: I hope all r ready….?
M: yaa dey are…. Yaa bhai….bags are packed… Tickets are booked…
B: (phone rings) uh all motion…. I just come….
Bitoo leaves with the phone……. While every1 heads towards the bus

Amritsar
Rt is on phone…. Conversation on phone
Rt: don’t do this vihaan….plz come back
Call: I m with the person I want to be…. I m never coming back
Rt: vihaan plz try and understand… Don’t forget I m ur father and leela and me both need uh….
Call: look sir… I have been performing the responsibilities which uh suppose to perform… The things I m coming across makes me feel I was right uh can never be a good father…
Rt: which things??? Tell me??? Is she fine???
Call: I m always there to protect her…. (Someone from back of the person…. “Bitoo bhai chalo…” the person says. “Ya angel coming”) (cuts the call….)
Rt: (looking at the phone) I m happy at least uh have accepted ur angel….
Leela: (walks towards him sobbing) ae ji…. Aapki baat hui kya vihu se? ( did uh had a talk with vihu?)
Rt: tumhara beta abhi bhi zidd pe adda hua hai… Abhi bhi apne aapko bitoo kehta hai…usne twinkle se abhi Tak sach chupaya hai…. (ur son is still behaving stuborn and still he identifies himself as bitoo… He is still hiding the truth from twinkle)
L: kya voh Hume kabhi maaf nahi karega?(will he never forgive us?)
Rt: (consoles her) kar dega… Twinj usse mana lege… Isiliye mene vo clip badal di… (He will forgive us…. Twinj will convince him… That’s y I changed the clip
L: (shocks) vo clip aapne badali thi??? (Did uh changed the clip)
Rt: (cries) or kya karta leela…. Muje ab sirf twinj se hi ummed hai k vo mera beta vapas laaege… Or Shruti? vo ladki kab tak aese uske sath rahegi… (I had no other option leela…. I have hope with twinj only that they will convince him… And Shruti? Till hen that girl will stay with him?
L: muje viswass hai dekhna twinj usse mana lege air fhir him Shruti or vihaan ki dhumdham she shadi karvayege… (I have faith that twinj will convince him and then we will make Shruti and vihaan marry
Rt: zaroor…. (Both hugs consoling each other)

New York
Bitoo is marching towards the bus….
B: ya dear say….
T: bhai did uh just called me angel?
B: ya twinkle y??
T: nothing bhai cum v will go…. ( He entangles his hand with bitoo arm and gets inside the bus…. Shruti sees them and has a big smile on her face and tears of happiness which she wipes as soon as any1 can notice)
The bus is an openair bus… All sitting on the top…. (Just like the bus in song naach meri jaana from ABCD2..)
All couples sitting together….
Twinj sitting together…. Biruti sitting ahead Twinkle was having a big curve on her face…
K: twinkle uh looking so beautiful in this dress (she is wearing a knee length Capri and a tube top Kunj is wearing a red v neck T-shirt and blue jeans)(his hand is entangled with her hand)
T: thankyou so much kunjjj.. and Leave my hand….
K: (holding her hand) y but… I m not leaving it ever…
T: kunjjjjj…. Plzzz.
K: ok only at one condition
T: wat
K: if uh kiss me… Like last night…. (Naughtily) remember…..
T: kunj stop it I can’t….
K: y but?
T: uh know y…. Coz we are not alone here…
K: ohhhhh so if we wud have been alone.. Then uh wud have kiss me?
T: (not in her senses) ofcour….. (Realises) of course not… Uh naughty head…
K: btw yesterday uh were looking so hot in that angry look… Wen I didn’t cuddle uh
T: hwwwww how mean of uh Kunj… Means uh knew that I wanted that then to uh delibratly ignored me…. (She bites his hand and frees her hand from his grip)
K: aaaahhh…. Ouchhh… (Sucks the portion where she bite)
T: (cunningly) uh deserve that….. Huhhh…. ( stands up and talks with bitoo)
T: oh my god bitoo bhai…. Seriously I will die with this curiosity
B: wat???
T: yaa bhai don’t uh know curiosity kills the cat… plz bhai tell me wer r we going???
K: (murmurs lil audible) Cat? Say wild cat… (Billi nahi junglii billi)
T: (gives death glare to Kunj coz she heard that) bitoo bhai say na…
B: baby chilax… I hope uh like it this is the place wer I and Shruti used to visit wen we use to feel low….
S: let me explain bitooo….
B: ya y not…. (Smiles)
All: start…..
S: this is a big par…. It stretches along the East River near North 7th, 8th, and 9th Streets, and offers unobstructed views of the Williamsburg Bridge and Midtown Manhattan. Oh my god that view… I can die looking at that… Seriously its so preety…. (To twinkle) the way uh think about Marines in Mumbai… The same I feel about this place….
T: oh god mariens… My fav place to hangout… I miss it so much……😟😟
S: uh gonna love this place too… Twinkle its just awesome…
M: aur batao na Shruti…
All: ya…. (Kunj is just sitting ideally as he has undrstud wat place she is talking about… But has a cute wali smile by seeing twinkle so happy after so many days…
S: else wat to speak… Its just marvelous…The grassy areas are ideal for kite-flying, picnics, and hipster courtship. A narrow, rocky beachfront area leads into the river, where, in the summer months, one can spot many a RayBan-clad twentysomething. And a large concrete area in the center of the park hosts Williamsburg-friendly activities such as adult dodgeball games and the displaced McCarren Park Pool Parties… expansive waterfront views—from the Williamsburg Bridge to the Empire State Building and beyond—make it all worthwhile.
B: hey my wikipidea…. Just hold on… Wat made uh to give this brief…. Just look at there faces… (Everyone has a shocked expression with their mouths open… Were as Kunj smiling from within looking at twinkle’s cute… Hwww wala expression)

Kunj’s POV:
Awww she is so cute… And her this expression like this hwwww wala… She looks more cute in that… Dil toh kar raha hai kha jau isse…. Arrey koi toh rokkk lo…

T: like reallllly….. Omg how can uh say all this in just one breathe….
K: look who is asking….
All: (every1 laughs at his statement)
T: hwwwww…. (Mouth open and cupping her face)
B: (smiles and rubs twinkle’s back) leave them come… We have reached…..
(Every1 heads down the place and are numb to see the scenario… Its marvelous… Owesome… Oh god….. Watch the ff ka image.. Its the same place)
L: Shruti its just awesome yaar….
Kh: ya men just look at the waterfalls…
A: oh my my…. Beautiful…. Mahi let’s go der…. (Drags her and both runs)
L & kh: hey girls wait for us…. (Holding pincin stuffs and run behind them)
B: ye dekho joru k ghulam… (Bitruti and twinj laughs)
S: ya joru k…(dramatically) I wish I too had that chance…
B: wat uh wish??? Even we are not married then to uh treat me like that only…
S: uh deserve that… Huhhh… (Walks towards the park with attitude… Fake wala.. While bitoo gives a she won’t change wala look and grabs some stuffs and follows her)
(Twinj were looking at them with surprised face)
T: did they heared while we were fighting?
K: I guess not… It was just a conincedence that uh both spoke same lines. Let’s move…
(Twinj motions towards them… It is looking as a perfect picnic spot.. Mahi and amaya unpacking the stuffs like snacks from the bag were as luv-khush are spreading the mats…
Bitruti are having some personal talks with each other… Entangling their hands with each other.
T: awww… They look so addorable na?
M: ya di…. (Every1 looks at them as they were sum distance apart)
K: even we do look adorable…
A: no uh couple don’t look adorable…
Twinj: wat? (Disheartened)
A: (winks at mahi and luv-khush notice this) ya… I don’t find ur couple cute also
M: ya amuu is right… Ur couple is not at all cute…
L & kh: ya girls are right… (Bitruti comes towards them)
T: (sad face) do we look so bad…?
K: not at all twinkle…
T: no we do.. See wat they are saying..
K:… Arrey.. Twinkllllle…
All: hhhahahhahh…… (Everyone burst out laughing)
M: oh god di uh r so innocent
A: and uh guys are the most hottest pair yaar😍😍
L: uh took us serious??
Kh: yaa.. We were just kidding….
T: (fake anger) uh naughtyheads I m gonna kill each one of uh…. (Everybody runs out of fear and twinkle runs to catch them)
Kunj and bitoo thinks…… I was waiting for this smile… Ur laugh from when… I will never let this smile fade from ur face… Its ur devil’s promise my angel…
Screen freezes on twinkles face…..

47 Comments
  1. wow saby finally u revealed…
    n my guess was ri8…
    u r such an amazing writer…
    demand toh banta hi hai…
    finally u bring smile on twinkle n kunj realise…
    n ur last line was heart touching…
    do cont. asap….
    wa8in is still on

  2. Saby – S – super A-amazing B-bubbly Y- yummy sis awwwwww di it was just
    Fantastic
    Amazing
    Fantabulous
    And I had guessed it right that bitoo is the devil and I am felling like
    Nana nana….nana ..nananana
    But don’t fell that we pressurising u ok do post according to to ur comfort and be happy u got 103 comments isnt that azing I got only 11 and if u have time do comment on my ff love u bye

  3. Episode tu achaa tha par itna Jaldi post kiya aapnei 😂😂😋😛 Itna Jaldi expect nhi kiya tha😱😱
    Haha don’t be angry I was just joking👌☺️☺️😊😳😳
    Mystery solved thank god!!

    1. Post soooon

  4. Ohh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo……
    Nt again yaar …..😂😂😅😭😭💚😭
    Dis tym too….😛😛😛😡😡😡😈😈😈😈😈😈
    Hw cud me????
    Lyk srsly hw cud me…?????
    Arre arrre yaar zikra hold on babes chill…😝😝😝
    Arre arre ye kya ab ap kyu pareshan hore ho???
    Arre ha wo gadbad b toh mai ne hi ki hai na???😝😝😝
    Hw cud b I so stupid yaar…???😈😈😈😈
    Ap ko b yehi lagta haina???
    Ha ya na????
    Batao batao ab bolo bhu.???
    Arre phir shuru hogai na mai….😛😛😛😛😅😅😅
    Kabhi b sudrugi nahi na??….
    Ha mujhe toh aisa hi lagta hai.. Haina????
    Kyu sach hai na. …..?????
    Chalo chodo b ….
    Arre kya chodo????
    Sochte ho na ki pagal hogai huna mai….
    Ha ye toh sach hi hai k pagal toh mai zaroor hogai hu …..
    Bt nt bcz of uh my angel…..
    Bt bcz of my lazyness yaar……
    Ab isko lazyness kaho ya ton mera bad luck…😞😞😞😒😒😅😅😅
    Arree phir se zyada socho mat yaar …..
    Isliye kahri hu k late comment karri huna mai …..
    So uh kno mai pagal hojari hu ……
    N really really sho sho sho shorry yaar…..
    Zyada socho mat……
    Isliye ki apse baat nahi ki na ?.?….
    So jusss leave all this my boring bakbak…..
    Ya where I ws..????
    Ya ya I got it….
    Commin to d epi…
    Ab kya kahu yaar . .????
    Kehne ko kuch choda kaha hai????
    Ha ha aphi se keh RI hu …
    K ur ff always make me feel amazing……
    It’s an amazing refreshment type ….
    N sho sho sho sho shorry yaar….
    Kaan pakad ker shorry sholy pleazzzzz…..
    Maaf kardena plzzzzz……..
    Abse nai kahugi k jaldi post karo. ,…..
    Sholy na shorry to make uh cry ……
    Oh god hw cn I do dat???
    Hw cn I..???
    Hw cn I make my angel cry…..
    Dat too bcz of me….😅😞😞😞
    Shorry…..
    N ya loved ur epi to d core…..
    As always luv u to d core……..
    Luv u to d moon n back. ….😘😘😘😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    N ya do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz……
    Nahi sudarugii na mai????
    Kabhi na??…..
    Never…..
    N l knew that….
    Hehhehehee kitni beshram hu na mai???
    Arre ye b koi puchne wali baat hai?????
    Kya mai b….
    Ha toh kaha thi mai….
    Ya got it…..
    Ha toh ap bhi mere hi Farah ho late …..
    Chalo koinai…..
    M toh hamesha ur side ….na……
    So no fikar when zikra is here……
    Kuch zyada hi filmy hogaya na???
    Ok nw m toh really really m speechless………
    Abt uh…..
    Wht to tell??????
    Nw do cont asap….
    Pleaashhhhhhhh pleaashhhhhhhh……………😝😝😝❤❤❤❤😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
    Frm urs IMPATIENT DEVIL…..
    To mah lovely ANGEL……
    Nw finally biee. …
    Biee Tata bubayyeee…..
    Lub uhhhh sho sho sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much……😍😍😘❤❤❤❤❤😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈

  5. fabulous episode. ……plzz update soon

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