I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 21)

Hi…… mood off hai…..
Pata hai q? just bcoz of uh guys…. Uh are so demanding yaar…..
Uh always do this… nanhi si jaan is very much pareshan……
Uh guys made me cry…. Itne saare frnds eksath katti ho jayege toh rona toh aayega hi na….
Ektoh I m jumbling btw my job, then cllg, then studies then reading all my fav ff’s then writing my ff…. have some….. some… like really lillll mercy on me…. I wil try to give it as soon as i can but cant plomishhh to post regularly……. Ur comments always makes me feel soooooo good that I m smiling my heart out but this times I was so sad that uh guys think I purposely make uh wait….
Its not true….. love uh allllllll so muchhhhhhh………. Here we go with the story…………

Leela is crying very badly…
Leela’s pov:
Y history is repeating… Y again twinkle has to be away from his brother even though he is so close to her…. Y he is not understanding me… Y he is not ready to accept us….. Y he wants to be with that fake identity…. But he still loves her sister so much…. I hope twinkle and Kunj are ok right now….. And that clip… I must deny that it is not of twinj. But how cn i? I dont want to hide this truth from twinj that Vihaan taneja their devil is alive

New York (Kunjvihar)
B: I hope all r ready….?
M: yaa dey are…. Yaa bhai….bags are packed… Tickets are booked…
B: (phone rings) uh all motion…. I just come….
Bitoo leaves with the phone……. While every1 heads towards the bus

Amritsar
Rt is on phone…. Conversation on phone
Rt: don’t do this vihaan….plz come back
Call: I m with the person I want to be…. I m never coming back
Rt: vihaan plz try and understand… Don’t forget I m ur father and leela and me both need uh….
Call: look sir… I have been performing the responsibilities which uh suppose to perform… The things I m coming across makes me feel I was right uh can never be a good father…
Rt: which things??? Tell me??? Is she fine???
Call: I m always there to protect her…. (Someone from back of the person…. “Bitoo bhai chalo…” the person says. “Ya angel coming”) (cuts the call….)
Rt: (looking at the phone) I m happy at least uh have accepted ur angel….
Leela: (walks towards him sobbing) ae ji…. Aapki baat hui kya vihu se? ( did uh had a talk with vihu?)
Rt: tumhara beta abhi bhi zidd pe adda hua hai… Abhi bhi apne aapko bitoo kehta hai…usne twinkle se abhi Tak sach chupaya hai…. (ur son is still behaving stuborn and still he identifies himself as bitoo… He is still hiding the truth from twinkle)
L: kya voh Hume kabhi maaf nahi karega?(will he never forgive us?)
Rt: (consoles her) kar dega… Twinj usse mana lege… Isiliye mene vo clip badal di… (He will forgive us…. Twinj will convince him… That’s y I changed the clip
L: (shocks) vo clip aapne badali thi??? (Did uh changed the clip)
Rt: (cries) or kya karta leela…. Muje ab sirf twinj se hi ummed hai k vo mera beta vapas laaege… Or Shruti? vo ladki kab tak aese uske sath rahegi… (I had no other option leela…. I have hope with twinj only that they will convince him… And Shruti? Till hen that girl will stay with him?
L: muje viswass hai dekhna twinj usse mana lege air fhir him Shruti or vihaan ki dhumdham she shadi karvayege… (I have faith that twinj will convince him and then we will make Shruti and vihaan marry
Rt: zaroor…. (Both hugs consoling each other)

New York
Bitoo is marching towards the bus….
B: ya dear say….
T: bhai did uh just called me angel?
B: ya twinkle y??
T: nothing bhai cum v will go…. ( He entangles his hand with bitoo arm and gets inside the bus…. Shruti sees them and has a big smile on her face and tears of happiness which she wipes as soon as any1 can notice)
The bus is an openair bus… All sitting on the top…. (Just like the bus in song naach meri jaana from ABCD2..)
All couples sitting together….
Twinj sitting together…. Biruti sitting ahead Twinkle was having a big curve on her face…
K: twinkle uh looking so beautiful in this dress (she is wearing a knee length Capri and a tube top Kunj is wearing a red v neck T-shirt and blue jeans)(his hand is entangled with her hand)
T: thankyou so much kunjjj.. and Leave my hand….
K: (holding her hand) y but… I m not leaving it ever…
T: kunjjjjj…. Plzzz.
K: ok only at one condition
T: wat
K: if uh kiss me… Like last night…. (Naughtily) remember…..
T: kunj stop it I can’t….
K: y but?
T: uh know y…. Coz we are not alone here…
K: ohhhhh so if we wud have been alone.. Then uh wud have kiss me?
T: (not in her senses) ofcour….. (Realises) of course not… Uh naughty head…
K: btw yesterday uh were looking so hot in that angry look… Wen I didn’t cuddle uh
T: hwwwww how mean of uh Kunj… Means uh knew that I wanted that then to uh delibratly ignored me…. (She bites his hand and frees her hand from his grip)
K: aaaahhh…. Ouchhh… (Sucks the portion where she bite)
T: (cunningly) uh deserve that….. Huhhh…. ( stands up and talks with bitoo)
T: oh my god bitoo bhai…. Seriously I will die with this curiosity
B: wat???
T: yaa bhai don’t uh know curiosity kills the cat… plz bhai tell me wer r we going???
K: (murmurs lil audible) Cat? Say wild cat… (Billi nahi junglii billi)
T: (gives death glare to Kunj coz she heard that) bitoo bhai say na…
B: baby chilax… I hope uh like it this is the place wer I and Shruti used to visit wen we use to feel low….
S: let me explain bitooo….
B: ya y not…. (Smiles)
All: start…..
S: this is a big par…. It stretches along the East River near North 7th, 8th, and 9th Streets, and offers unobstructed views of the Williamsburg Bridge and Midtown Manhattan. Oh my god that view… I can die looking at that… Seriously its so preety…. (To twinkle) the way uh think about Marines in Mumbai… The same I feel about this place….
T: oh god mariens… My fav place to hangout… I miss it so much……😟😟
S: uh gonna love this place too… Twinkle its just awesome…
M: aur batao na Shruti…
All: ya…. (Kunj is just sitting ideally as he has undrstud wat place she is talking about… But has a cute wali smile by seeing twinkle so happy after so many days…
S: else wat to speak… Its just marvelous…The grassy areas are ideal for kite-flying, picnics, and hipster courtship. A narrow, rocky beachfront area leads into the river, where, in the summer months, one can spot many a RayBan-clad twentysomething. And a large concrete area in the center of the park hosts Williamsburg-friendly activities such as adult dodgeball games and the displaced McCarren Park Pool Parties… expansive waterfront views—from the Williamsburg Bridge to the Empire State Building and beyond—make it all worthwhile.
B: hey my wikipidea…. Just hold on… Wat made uh to give this brief…. Just look at there faces… (Everyone has a shocked expression with their mouths open… Were as Kunj smiling from within looking at twinkle’s cute… Hwww wala expression)

Kunj’s POV:
Awww she is so cute… And her this expression like this hwwww wala… She looks more cute in that… Dil toh kar raha hai kha jau isse…. Arrey koi toh rokkk lo…

T: like reallllly….. Omg how can uh say all this in just one breathe….
K: look who is asking….
All: (every1 laughs at his statement)
T: hwwwww…. (Mouth open and cupping her face)
B: (smiles and rubs twinkle’s back) leave them come… We have reached…..
(Every1 heads down the place and are numb to see the scenario… Its marvelous… Owesome… Oh god….. Watch the ff ka image.. Its the same place)
L: Shruti its just awesome yaar….
Kh: ya men just look at the waterfalls…
A: oh my my…. Beautiful…. Mahi let’s go der…. (Drags her and both runs)
L & kh: hey girls wait for us…. (Holding pincin stuffs and run behind them)
B: ye dekho joru k ghulam… (Bitruti and twinj laughs)
S: ya joru k…(dramatically) I wish I too had that chance…
B: wat uh wish??? Even we are not married then to uh treat me like that only…
S: uh deserve that… Huhhh… (Walks towards the park with attitude… Fake wala.. While bitoo gives a she won’t change wala look and grabs some stuffs and follows her)
(Twinj were looking at them with surprised face)
T: did they heared while we were fighting?
K: I guess not… It was just a conincedence that uh both spoke same lines. Let’s move…
(Twinj motions towards them… It is looking as a perfect picnic spot.. Mahi and amaya unpacking the stuffs like snacks from the bag were as luv-khush are spreading the mats…
Bitruti are having some personal talks with each other… Entangling their hands with each other.
T: awww… They look so addorable na?
M: ya di…. (Every1 looks at them as they were sum distance apart)
K: even we do look adorable…
A: no uh couple don’t look adorable…
Twinj: wat? (Disheartened)
A: (winks at mahi and luv-khush notice this) ya… I don’t find ur couple cute also
M: ya amuu is right… Ur couple is not at all cute…
L & kh: ya girls are right… (Bitruti comes towards them)
T: (sad face) do we look so bad…?
K: not at all twinkle…
T: no we do.. See wat they are saying..
K:… Arrey.. Twinkllllle…
All: hhhahahhahh…… (Everyone burst out laughing)
M: oh god di uh r so innocent
A: and uh guys are the most hottest pair yaar😍😍
L: uh took us serious??
Kh: yaa.. We were just kidding….
T: (fake anger) uh naughtyheads I m gonna kill each one of uh…. (Everybody runs out of fear and twinkle runs to catch them)
Kunj and bitoo thinks…… I was waiting for this smile… Ur laugh from when… I will never let this smile fade from ur face… Its ur devil’s promise my angel…
Screen freezes on twinkles face…..

47 comments

  1. Angita

    |Registered Member

    I’m really sorry yaar…I behaved so selfish na…by demanding you…..without understanding your situation….. I’m feeling really guilty and I’m actually literally crying….ho Sakta toh mujhe maaf karto na pls varna I’ll feel so guilty yaar dii. Pls….pretty please with some sugar on top………coming to the episode
    Awesome
    Fantastic
    Fabulous
    Amazing
    Mind blowing
    Breathtaking
    No words
    Standing ovation
    👏👏👏👏👏❤💜💜💜❤👍👍👍👍👍🌞🌞🌞. You’re my sunshine dear…..I loved your episode darling…but pls forgive me yaar

  2. sweety

    AMaizing wow!!! Fab epi…I’m new here to comment buh…I always read all the members ff’s os’s n wht not…

  3. Laddoo

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    Mko chocolate chahiye….chocolate chocolate chocolate….maine sahi guess kiya tha….maine kaha tha ki dusra devil bittoo hai…pr kya pata tha ki sahi ho jayega…ek min…comment mein nhi bataya tha khud ko bataya tha….arey pakka promish….shachhi plomish maine shahi guesh kiya tha…aur kishi ka mood off hai? Aww…meli pyali wali didi ka china wala mood khalaab ho gya? Chlo…koi bhi meri didi se gusha nhi hoga…chlo shab sholly bolo…saby shtyle mein….meli didi bohot pyali hai…hum smjhte hai…shab samajhte hai….pehle padhai phir kadhai….kadhai se mera matlab ff tha…hehe…..lona mat….rona mat I mean….and love u to main keh keh ke thak gayi…pr tab bhi…….I LUUUUVVVVV UUUUUUUU…..LOOOOOVVVVVEEE UUUUU…..bada wala love u maanga tha…I guess double size ka diya hai😂😂😘😘

    • Laddoo

      |Registered Member

      Aur maine kyu sorry nhi bola ye to pata hi hoga….nhi pata? Sahi mein nhi pata? Arey….ajeeb baat hai….kyuki dosti ka usul hai….no sorry no thanku….ab samjhi? Haan…ye hui na meri sisso wali baat…😉

  4. simran

    Wow yr kya likhti hai hatts off uou know what i am big fan of your ff or your’si loved you every episode very very much

  5. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Saby di…Amazing.. I just love ur ff and Take ur own time to post next part…I will not pressurize you …kyunki meri situation bhi kuch vaisi hi hai..
    But agar time mile toh mera ff bhi padhna…
    Love you😘😘

  6. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Saby, the episode was amazing. Finally, everything is sorted out between twinj. Now, the vihaan Taneja case ahead. Excited!!
    Also, don’t get disheartened. I know you aren’t doing it on purpose. Even I have the same condition. I barely get time and when I do I’ll first read the ff’s and if I’ve the time I’ll start writing. Please continue when you’re free.

  7. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Wow Saby di the place was awesome and the part of Vihaan Taneja was so emotional want to know what is the reason behind this and Twinj bus wala talk was so good that I don’t have words to express it and Twinkle’s emotions her cute talks imagining them was so funny and cute and Di I know you are very busy bechare you have so much work but still pls post asap
    The last line was epic “I will never let this smile fade from your face It’s ur devil’s promise my angel” 🙂

  8. Amii

    Awwww.. So shweeet.. To ur ff n uh too.. V r so demanding very sry for that.. But what to do yrrr .. Tum likhti Hi esa Ho.. N happy to hear this that from now u upload regularly. 😘😘 luv uhh n thanx for post.. Actually such a best ff.. Waiting for ur next.. Sry again for a demand 😜

  9. Saira

    Soooo sorry for being demanding
    But I can’t help it I’m so addicted to your FF every day i open TU to check either u posted or not
    Sorry again
    Please forgive me
    The episode was as usual AWESOME
    Post the next one whenever your free
    Will not demand u for posting a sap
    Love u

  10. 😘sana(aamu)

    Awwwww.saby kitna cute epi tha😘😘😘
    Loved 💗💗 it
    Ab muje b koi to rok.lo 😊😉
    Haayyeeeee
    Or haaa tum late epi update kro fir bhi i dont ha. Any pro.😊😊😊😊😊😊
    Twinj now a prfct couple 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    N bittu tw kaa bro👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍
    its. 🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒
    Pta hai mene abhi tu open kiya or tumhara ff open kiya n now my time is over coz its mumma fon 😭😭😭😭😥😞

    Post next soon……
    Tilll den………..
    Learn… learn n learn. 😞😞😞😞😞

  11. shaki

    hi this is a fan of SABY’S WRITING..The episode was so superb fantastic mindblowing.I also want to know how do u create a ff, how do become a registered member and how do u change dp… And just remember that whoever does not comment on ur ff but I will always comment bcs I just love ur ff and writing tooo

  12. nrk

    thank u itni jaldi post karne ke liye. its superb.as u write very good ff to demanding hona padta hai.human wants are unlimited 😉

  13. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Awwwww just loved the epi want to read it again 😘😘shorry saby plzz post next epi whenever u get tym but plshh thoda jaldi n whole epi was awesome vihaan taneja uff
    Dono devil’s I love ur ff so much 😍😍
    Twinj cute talks I can imagine kunj cute face n last whole epi Wass awesome no it’s more than awesome

  14. priya

    aww so so so cute…. man karta hai ki aise hi padte jao padte jao…
    so so so… excellent…
    loved the last line from kunj and bitoo..
    eagerly waiting for the next part..

  15. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Sorry for being demanding dear……. nd plz dont feel bad………I luv u nd ur ff alot…… nd todays episode was amazing. … really loved it. Kunjs vute little smile twinkles innocence everything is amazing. … marvellous♥♥♥♥♥

  16. Apoorwa

    |Registered Member

    my najuk si bachi ok post when you are free
    sorry i became sho sho sho swarthi
    but please don’t be sad
    next time no pressurisation ok
    now about epi it was full of suspenses
    and was damn good

  17. Shonaa...

    |Registered Member

    Ab itna acha likhegi to demanding to hoge hi naa…. plzzz keep writing lyk diz…. d episode was awesome as always…. dialogues r amazing…. loved it to d core…. nd understand ur condition so post whnevr u get d tym…. love u….

  18. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Sabbyyy…
    Literally yaar koi mujhe pakro…I m gonna faint
    Seriously it was just Awesome…
    Loved it to the core❤❤

  19. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Wah……wah ….Saby meri jaan …kya cuteeeee episode tha …loved it …
    Kya twist layi hai yrr tu …..maza agaya …..
    Seriously now I don’t have any name of give u …as every tittle given to u is so less in front of ur ff …..
    Love u dear..

  20. Asma

    First of all soooorrrrryyyy di😢😢 we dint understand u. Par abb se i wnt force u di u take ur tym n post only wen u free di. Commin to epi….it was amazingly awesomeeee❤❤❤ luvd it till da core😍😘😘😍

  21. Baby

    |Registered Member

    omg saby di amazing lyk srsly last wala dialoge of kunj n vihaan 2gthr 1 ws amazig luvd it n d twist omg di luving it u r amazing di aaj toh i m speechless acha di ab bitruti ko pta hai kya dt r sidmin hv united n cleared all d prblms bw dem pls tell n yah ofcourse ur episode ws jst fab u nailed it di n di aap itna demanding likhte ho tbhi toh sb demanding hain di bt i m sry bt mene aapko nhi rulaya di mein ne kb apse ka ki mein apse kutty hun nvr di nvr luv u take care n han post asap wen u r free bt ll b w8ing lyk mad fr u ur frnd cm sis baby

  22. SidMinTwinj

    |Registered Member

    Hey saby really very very sorry for not understanding your problems and forcing you to post your ffs soon…I’m extremely sorry bahut bahut sorry…today’s episode was just beyond heights of awesomeness… I won’t compel you to post next episode soooooooooooooooon take your own time and post it…once again I’m extremely sorry…last time maine tumhe knives and bullets se marne ki dhamki di thi na hehehe toh ab tumhe pyar se kissi dungi😘😘😘😘😘😘💋💋💋💋💋💋💓💓💓💓💓💓…plz muhje maaf karde na…love you and your ff to the moon and back dear saby…

  23. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    wow…kya epi tha💞💞💞💞💞
    finally the devil mystery is resolved….
    and ya the last scene where everyone teases twinkle that was so cute…
    twinj scenes😍😍😍😍
    loved it

    and ya do post whenever u have time…
    itna sab kuch manage krna…job,college,writing,studies,ff…kaise kr leti ho yr itna …..its really tough ..hatsoff

    chalo ab jldi se apna mood thk kro and smile☺☺
    love u😘😘

  24. Queen

    Oh god what to say yeah loved the epi it was fantastic and I really want to se that place it looks so good pls post as soon as possible will be waiting

  25. Purnima.agrawal30

    |Registered Member

    awesome amazing fabulous marvelous epi…yr kinna accha wala likha h….loved it….& take your own time….jb tym mile tb post kr dena…hum log wait krenge……

  26. Yamini

    🙏 sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry
    I know sabse zyada demands mere the sorry pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee maaf kardo
    Todays episode was brilliant awesome amazing marvelous
    Ek Akri demand (not sure of akhri🙈)
    WHANT moooore TwiNj ROMANCE 🙈
    But next episode jab Mann Kare tab post karna koi jaldii Nahi hai……
    Aur meri so called AKHRI demand agar ho sake to puri karna and please please don’t be angry coz I again demanded something
    Loveeeeeeeee u soooooooooooooo much but much more to your FF 😜

  27. Peewangmo

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding job 💟
    What a amazing writer u are 👍👍
    Hope for best from ur side as alys.. Good luck & bring more beautiful epi next time too..

  28. Shan

    To call you as saby….. it will be really different for me…. as I haven’t called you as saby till now….. but you likes me calling saby right…. cool dear…… saby….. saby….. saby….. its an amazing story…. the content of the story is really well….. everyday with bunch of twists its really like canberry juice…. good going dear….. really well….. sorry for late comments….. bit busy with my work…… may be the late comment but not the least lovable one…… love you at peaks….. love you a lot saby…. ping me at fb saby…..

  29. sujina

    wow saby finally u revealed…
    n my guess was ri8…
    u r such an amazing writer…
    demand toh banta hi hai…
    finally u bring smile on twinkle n kunj realise…
    n ur last line was heart touching…
    do cont. asap….
    wa8in is still on

  30. bulbul

    Saby – S – super A-amazing B-bubbly Y- yummy sis awwwwww di it was just
    Fantastic
    Amazing
    Fantabulous
    And I had guessed it right that bitoo is the devil and I am felling like
    Nana nana….nana ..nananana
    But don’t fell that we pressurising u ok do post according to to ur comfort and be happy u got 103 comments isnt that azing I got only 11 and if u have time do comment on my ff love u bye

  31. Zaku

    |Registered Member

    Episode tu achaa tha par itna Jaldi post kiya aapnei 😂😂😋😛 Itna Jaldi expect nhi kiya tha😱😱
    Haha don’t be angry I was just joking👌☺️☺️😊😳😳
    Mystery solved thank god!!

  32. zayb zikra

    Ohh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo……
    Nt again yaar …..😂😂😅😭😭💚😭
    Dis tym too….😛😛😛😡😡😡😈😈😈😈😈😈
    Hw cud me????
    Lyk srsly hw cud me…?????
    Arre arrre yaar zikra hold on babes chill…😝😝😝
    Arre arre ye kya ab ap kyu pareshan hore ho???
    Arre ha wo gadbad b toh mai ne hi ki hai na???😝😝😝
    Hw cud b I so stupid yaar…???😈😈😈😈
    Ap ko b yehi lagta haina???
    Ha ya na????
    Batao batao ab bolo bhu.???
    Arre phir shuru hogai na mai….😛😛😛😛😅😅😅
    Kabhi b sudrugi nahi na??….
    Ha mujhe toh aisa hi lagta hai.. Haina????
    Kyu sach hai na. …..?????
    Chalo chodo b ….
    Arre kya chodo????
    Sochte ho na ki pagal hogai huna mai….
    Ha ye toh sach hi hai k pagal toh mai zaroor hogai hu …..
    Bt nt bcz of uh my angel…..
    Bt bcz of my lazyness yaar……
    Ab isko lazyness kaho ya ton mera bad luck…😞😞😞😒😒😅😅😅
    Arree phir se zyada socho mat yaar …..
    Isliye kahri hu k late comment karri huna mai …..
    So uh kno mai pagal hojari hu ……
    N really really sho sho sho shorry yaar…..
    Zyada socho mat……
    Isliye ki apse baat nahi ki na ?.?….
    So jusss leave all this my boring bakbak…..
    Ya where I ws..????
    Ya ya I got it….
    Commin to d epi…
    Ab kya kahu yaar . .????
    Kehne ko kuch choda kaha hai????
    Ha ha aphi se keh RI hu …
    K ur ff always make me feel amazing……
    It’s an amazing refreshment type ….
    N sho sho sho sho shorry yaar….
    Kaan pakad ker shorry sholy pleazzzzz…..
    Maaf kardena plzzzzz……..
    Abse nai kahugi k jaldi post karo. ,…..
    Sholy na shorry to make uh cry ……
    Oh god hw cn I do dat???
    Hw cn I..???
    Hw cn I make my angel cry…..
    Dat too bcz of me….😅😞😞😞
    Shorry…..
    N ya loved ur epi to d core…..
    As always luv u to d core……..
    Luv u to d moon n back. ….😘😘😘😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    N ya do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz……
    Nahi sudarugii na mai????
    Kabhi na??…..
    Never…..
    N l knew that….
    Hehhehehee kitni beshram hu na mai???
    Arre ye b koi puchne wali baat hai?????
    Kya mai b….
    Ha toh kaha thi mai….
    Ya got it…..
    Ha toh ap bhi mere hi Farah ho late …..
    Chalo koinai…..
    M toh hamesha ur side ….na……
    So no fikar when zikra is here……
    Kuch zyada hi filmy hogaya na???
    Ok nw m toh really really m speechless………
    Abt uh…..
    Wht to tell??????
    Nw do cont asap….
    Pleaashhhhhhhh pleaashhhhhhhh……………😝😝😝❤❤❤❤😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
    Frm urs IMPATIENT DEVIL…..
    To mah lovely ANGEL……
    Nw finally biee. …
    Biee Tata bubayyeee…..
    Lub uhhhh sho sho sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much……😍😍😘❤❤❤❤❤😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈

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