I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 20)

Hey guys watsup……???
Kya hua??? Y not replying…. Ok got it gussa ho kya???
Plzzzzzz forgive me guys… Too much busy…
Yahh humesha yahi kehti hu par kya karu…
Tu ki site down this… Oh not down Talli thi…. Right CHUMMZZ??
Guys I had very lil time and had two option
1. Read all ur beautiful ff’s which I have missed from last 4 days….
2. Continue my ff….
So before wasting time I started and even completed reading all the ffs which I missed out….so sorry didn’t commented….. Plz again maaf kardo nanhi si Jaan ko…
Then after completing DAT I wrote this… And as yamini requested for treat…. Here it is…. I hope uh all guys like it……. Love uh all so so so so much……… Let’s start……….

Kunj worrily looks at her and observes her fainted, he carries her in his arms and take her to his room and make her lay on the bed… bitoo comes in a jiffy and jerks him… every1 rushes there…
B: twinkle… (pats her face slowly and sprinkles water droplets on her face) twinkle are uh ok? (twinkle gets consious)
Every1 takes a sigh of relief…. Kunj looks at her and steps towards her….
K: are uh ok twinkle?
B: (bitoo faces him and fumes, kunj step back from her) wat happen to uh all of a sudden?
T: nothing bhai…. I m not able to understand myself… I don’t know….. I m able see sumthing…. A small girl 2boys and..Oh gods… Its paining so much
M: what are uh saying di… say it clearly…
A: ya that only…
S: ya twinkle openup urself, doctor also told that uh r taking more stress and that’s y uh are feeling giddy
L: oh is that the reason? I toh thot that di must be preg….
Kh: shutup luv… the matter is serious….
M: shruti di what tension? What stress?
(Twinj and bitruti look at eachother….)
T: nothing mahi…. Uh guys don’t take stress… ok I m all fine… go and sleep its very late….
S: ya she is right… comeon every1 let her rest and uh guys also sleep… (ever1 heads out of the room and heads to their resp. rooms… shruti looks bitoo still holding twinkle’s hand.) come bitoo, we also need to go
B: what about her? are uh ready to leave her alone with this DEVI….. (he remembers the clip and feels strange)
S: we have to bitoo for mahiya….
T: bhai… plz
B: take care of urself (covers her with the blanket) sleep now… No need to worry about anything…. Ok…(kisses her forehead)
T: (nods) hmm
S: call us if uh need anything…. We are just a call away….
(Both motions to leave wen bitoo stops and turns)
B: twinkle uh don’t need to go through this for more… I M SOON FILING FOR UR DIVORCE (echo’s)…….(both leaves the room)

(Twinkle and Kunj both are shocked to hear this and Kunj is shattered….. )
(bitoo fumes at kunj and leaves followed by shruti)

Kunj is still wearing his glares…. And controlling his tears from falling. Twinkle getsup and closes the door… kunj feels strange…
K: y uh locking the door twinkle
T: I thot uh wanna have me so….
K: (kunj motions to her and hug her tightly…. A bone crushing wala hug and starts crying) I m sorry…. I m really very sorry twinkle…. I know I don’t deserve ur love for whatever I did, ya I m really a devil, but uh r my angel twinkle….. uh r the one who opened my eyes… that what I have become… I m sorry twinkle…. I m really very soory… plz forgive me… I will change all my ill habits for uh…. Uh want me the way like before na… I will change myself but plz dont leave me… plz…. I will die without uh
Plz twinkle don’t divorce me… plz twinkle plz….. (he is crying and his tears are continuously flowing now twinkle coundnt control herself from not hugging him, she found a genuine applogy and she also started crying and respond his hug passionately…. They both were lost in eachothers arms…. Twinkle was overjoyed to have her kunj back…. After few minutes they pullout the hug and faced eachother…. Twinkle found kunj still with glares, she tookout the glares from his eyes and was shocked to see kunj’s swallon eyes… twinkle could feel his pain just by looking at his condition… twinkle cupped kunj’s face kissed his both eyes… kunj feeled her soft touch and was lost in it… twinkle apart her lips and watched his innocent face… kunj slowly opened his eyes and noticed twinkle starring him lovingly… twinkle smiled a bit and kissed his right cheek then left cheek… kunj was lost in her soft touch wen he noticed twinkle lips coming close to his lips…. Twinkle parted her lips to touch his… but he backout…. He moved away… from her… twinkle was confused…
K: plz twinkle… don’t do this… I know uh r not comfortable with me, I know uh are doing this for the deal, I know that….. (before he can say further…. Twinkle kissed his lips passionately… kunj also responded….. The kiss was unbreakable…. There tongues playing with each other and her hand caressing kunj’s hair…. Kunj was holding her from waist… The kiss was getting deeper and deeper…. And the lips were so into each other as if they don’t want to be apart them…. After sumtime, Kunj broke the kiss and turned back… Twinkle comes to senses and blushes on herself…
K: I m so sorry twinkle…. I was not able to…..
Twinkle realises wat he is saying and pulls him to face her….
T: don’t uh even dare to tell it was a mistake….
K: I m confused…. I m not wat uh deserve….
T: (angry) thik hai then leave me
K: no…. I don’t even want to leave uh…. Oh god… Wat to do???
T: have uh seriously lost ur mind… Wat uh want Kunj? Uh don’t want to b with me nor uh want to leave me… Wat uh want???
K: twinkle I….
T: just shut…. Just shut up ok…. I m sleepy… and even uh r….
(She heads towards the bed… And sleeps over her side…
T: for god sake have some mercy on ur eyes…. Its already slowllen… Don’t make it more worse… Plz Come and sleep…..
(Kunj moves to his side of the bed and sleeps facing his back towards twinkle…
Twinkle was also facing her back… But she expected him to cuddle her and sleep… But he didn’t…. Twinkle fumes and Makes him turn around to face her… Kunj is shocked with her behaviour… He looks at her with confused face…. Twinkle comes close to him and holds his hand and place it on her waist… Then keeps her head on his chest… And closes her eyes… Kunj smiles at her innocence and hugs her back as they were sleeping in an hugging position And both doses off…..

Next morning
Kunj wakes up and finds twinkle sleeping peacefully in his arms and he smiles at within….. He tucks her hairs behind her ears…
Kunj’s POV:
How can I ? How can I even try to do all this things to uh? How can I torture uh like this? How can I just play with uh body….

He feels disgusted on his own deeds and he tries to free his hand from her as he was doing this she getsup and finds him struggling to free his hand from her…
T: kunj I m sorry… Uh must b late… I…..
K: (cuts her) don’t b twinkle I m sorry for each and every thing… Bitoo is right I don’t deserv…… (Twinkle cuts him by kissing him… A short peck on his lips)
T: how much uh speak… That to rubbish… Uh haven’t change na…? 5 yes back also uh NVR used to wish me gm and still uh do the same….
K: uh know twinkle how much and in wat manner I have changed
T: no…. The kunj who is right now with me is the same who was 5 years back…. Kunj plz dont create a new mess… I have got uh after 5 long years I don’t want to leave uh…. Plz forget all the things…. Let’s begin with the new start….
K: (cups her face with one hand and gets close to her still sleeping on bed) twinkle I just told uh 1 sorry and uh forgive me for everything… That to so easily? Y twinkle….
T: coz I m madly in love with uh…. I m crazy for uh…. I don’t want to leave uh Kunj…..uh are my everything…
K: twin…kle… Y uh used to take those pills???
T: coz I don’t want to get pregnent in DAT time wen u r not with me. I don’t want my child to hate his dad…. I m sorry… But I had to do this…. ( she starts sobbing) Ku…..n..j…. I m rea….lly so…orr…ry
K: no baby I m sorry…. I made uh do that…. I m feeling so much guilty…. Twinkl…e bcoz of me… Uh had to go through all thi….
T: Kunj ( hugs him) I got uh that’s more important for me….
(Both hugs eacheother with a smile on their faces)

In the hall
Kh: I m not greeting anything related to twinj in the clip… Are uh sure mahi that it is the same clip???
M: ya khush I m 100% sure
L: sachi uh sure?
M: (butting her nails) haa sa….chi
L: look she is not confident…
A: stop it yaar… Its better we ask leela aunty…
On phone…..
Lee: amu beta kese ho tum Sab ??? Twinkle aur kunj se mile? Vo dono kese hai??? (amu dear how are uh all? did uh met twinj? how are they both?)
A: arrey maa humsab thik hai… Aur in lovebirds ka haal…. Kya batau aapko… (offo… mom, we all are fine… and those lovebirds?… wat shud i tell uh…)
M: (snatches the phone) haa maa hum kabse hall mein wait kar rahe hai… And yelog abhi tak room mein hi hai….(giggles) (ya… mom… we all are in the hall waiting from them and they still in their room only)
Lee: (laughs) arrey besharam aese koi bolta hai kya? (uh shameless… so any1 speak in this manner)
L: (snatches the phone from mahi) maa yeh pagal hai… Muje ek baat bataiye k aapne Jo mahi ko clip di this vo…. (mom, she is crazy… uh tell me 1 thing… that the clip uh gave mahi that…..)
Lee: (cuts him and laugh) hehe….. Vo clip mahi yahi bhul gayi hai… Haina?? Mene kal hi dekha… K vo clip abhi bhi study room k drawer mein hi hai… (that she forgot here only na? i saw in yesterday only… that the clip is here only in the drawer of the study table)
L: nahi toh….. Maa…. Mahi toh clip le aayi hai…. (no mom… mahi has brought that clip)
(Twinj and bitruti enters the hall)
Lee: arrey mene kal khud aapne aankho se vo clip Dekhi… To vo kese leja sakti hai… (but i saw the clip by my own eyes.. then how can she wud have taken?)
L: nahi maa humne kal sabne vo clip Dekhi… Bache the teen angel or do devils…. (no mom… we all watched the clip… there were 3 babies… 1 angel and 2 devils
Lee: (shocked) kya?????? Mahi vooooooo…. clip ……leke….chali gai? (Stammers) (wat….. mahi took that clip?)
L: kya hua màa? Vo clip MATLAB? (Mahi snatches the phone and puts it on speaker) (wat happen mom? that clip means?)
Lee: (tears start flowing from her eyes) vo clip…. Twinkle or Kunj se dur rakhna…. Vo clip vapas leke aajana… (plz keep that clip away from twinj and bring it back to me….. (All are shocked to hear this…. Twinj look at each other)
L: par ma…… Ting……. Ting….. ( the phone disconnects) maa…. (Looks at the phone) oh god phone got disconnected….. (Pouts)
M: (suspicious) maa ne aese q kaha par???
A: haa yeah toh bad ek clip hi hai…. Par aese behaviour q???
B: yeh Sab chodo…. Humlog late ho rage hai…. Mahi mam….. Aapka PA ready hai….
Just order me….. ( all laugh)
M: ya guys we all r going for picnic……
Kh: picnic????? Really???
A: (excited) kaha!????
Mahi and bitoo smirks……. While Shruti has a big smile on her face….
Rest all are just excited and curious to have there ans…..

Guys uh also excited na…??? Sachi batao… Guess guys wer r dey gonna go for the picnic/outing…..???? Keep guessing….
and again another mystery na…? kya karu lagta hai i shud change my name to mystery girl only…..
Prantika Prottasha… Ty so much dear…. For reading, loving my ff…. Plzzzz don’t resemble urslf as my fan… Uh r twinj fan I m just a frnd to uh… Loveuh darling…..??
And all my preety chumzzzz ty ty ty so much for coming in my life uh all are darlings and sweethearts yaar???
Readers love uh too…. all ur comments always give me peace and i smile endlessly reading it…. after reading that all my stress bcoz of the hectic day vanishes……
and for that…………………. a bigggggg wala thankkkkkk youuuuuu…….
buhbye…….

106 comments

  1. simran

    Thank god finally you come back i misssss yooooouuuuuuu sooooooooo much and episode was ammmmaaaaziiinnnggggg

  2. Saira

    It was AMAZING….loved it soooooooooooooooooooo much
    Plz plz plz
    Plz plz plz don’t make us wait for long time
    Post the next one a sap

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm saira?
      Dear…. I to don’t like to make uh guys wait….
      But CNT help it…. So busy schedule…
      I will try my best darling??

  3. Queen

    Oh god I was really waiting for your epi and it was so good just loved it and your mysteries oh god waiting for it to get solved do post asap

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm queen?
      Dear…. So much glad to here this words…
      So sorry to make uh wait….
      I will try to post asap…..??

  4. Sidmin(twinj)

    Sabyyyyyyyyyyyy finally you posted your ff… I was waiting for your ff like hell… Bahut intazar karati ho tum yaar but it’s OK first studies then only other stuffs… Plzzzzzzzzzzzz post next soooooooooooooooon can’t wait… And today’s episode is amazing awesome lovely fab fantastic and what not… Plzzzzzzzzzzzz next episode aaj hi post karna ho sake toh do char episodes aaj hi Kar Dena hehe just joking but plzzzzzzzzzzzz try to post soooooooooooooooon… Love you and your ff to the moon and back????????????????????????????????????

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm sidmin(twinj)?
      I m so so so so so sorry… … To make uh wait so much for my ff ……
      But I happy that uh undrstnd my condition
      I will try my best to post asap
      Love uh too darling???

  5. Rashiverma2199

    |Registered Member

    Oho Saby…..u have to continue ur ff…. Even if u give late updates…but u have to finish ur story…..
    Well kunj was lovely yo watch in this episode…..awesome…..
    Excited for picnic…..

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm rashi?
      I m surely continuing my ff
      And my story…. Wat to tell uh
      I m having so many things in my head but not getting time to note it….
      Forget…. Surely will post asap??
      Loveuh

  6. nrk

    I was eagerly waiting for your ff.where were u?iss bar mar maaf kar diya.our pyaara kunj is back. lovely very much excited for next episode. post it asap

  7. AYESHA KHANUM

    awsome saby cant say anything to ur ff but one thing post as soon as possible I was waiting for u r ff very badly

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm ayesha??
      Darling so sorry to make uh wait so long…
      Plshh forgive and
      Surely I will try my best to post asap

  8. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Main bohot gussa hu…..main bohot gussa hu sahi mein…..main phir se keh rhi hu main bohot gussa hu….arey manaane ka irada bhi nahi hai kya? Leyo….manaayegi bhi nhi….kaisi didi mili hai…..ek toh itta gussa dilati hai aur ab dekho mana bhi nahi rahi hai…..aur toh aur puchh bhi nhi rhi hai kyu gussa hu main…..nahi puchh rhi? Hey bhagwaan! Main hi bata deti hu….pehla reason itte dino baad aana…..dusra reason itta achha likhna ki main ro padu buri tarah se…..teesra reason ye suspence…..I hate suspence and mystery…..sachhi mein I don’t like suspence…..andar se kha jaata hai mujhe…..anyways agar mujhe aap ne nahi manaaya….main gussa nahi chhodungi…..main abhi bhi gussa hu??…..ab aap samajh lo…..

    Aur isiliye main love u bhi nahi kahungi….kehne ka mann tha par iss gusse ne rok liya….take care bol hi sakti hu….chalo theek hai….aap apnaa khayaal rakhna…..agle episode mein love u bol dungi…..filhaal aap mujhe manao to?…

    • Saby

      |Author

      Omg …… Ladoooooo??
      Jaan tu mujse gussa hai….
      Oooooooooohhhh goddddddd
      Seriously…. Subhese I was chatting and didn’t realise uh r angry with me….
      Awww show shorrry…. Darling….
      Itna gussa…. Oh god mu dekh apna tamatar ki tarha laal ho chuka hai….
      Chal I know aese achi lagti hai par smile me isse zyada achi lagti hai….
      Maaf karde… Dekh mene kaan bhi pakad liye….. I m show shorrrrrry for….
      1. Posting the ff very late…
      2. That I made my darling cry
      3. For so many suspenses…
      4. Itna late manane k liye….
      Expect a big love uh…. In next epi….
      Love uh so muchhhhh????

  9. Sidmin(twinj)

    Saby really can’t wait plzzzzzzzzzzzz post next epi soooooooooooooooon… It’s my request no no no my order orelse il kill
    ????????????? you…Hehehehe… I think in video clip angel and two devil’s are twinkle and Kunj and bittoo… I love the way bittoo pampers twinkle… Jaldi aaj hi post karna do char episodes nahi toh il frequently comment and torture you…

    • Saby

      |Author

      Ahhhh….. Save me… Ohhhh….
      Someone save me plsss….
      From whom… From this knifes and bullets thrown on me by my wild reader …..
      Sachi sidmin plzzz marina mat….
      Abtak toh meri umar hi kya hai???
      Jokes apart….
      I m glad uh loving the track so far….
      And will try to post ASAP….

  10. Priya

    Excellent..!! Tussi great ho ji…
    How can u write it so well…
    I envy you…
    Waiting for the next part

  11. Sidmin(twinj)

    Your really a mystery girl change your name to mystery girl soooooooo many suspended… Sachchi can’t wait saby baby post it soooooooooooooooon…

  12. Adina

    Ur crazy u r really crazy …whenever i saw ur ff on this tu page i started laughing out loud and jumping tooo…u r just amazing but ehat about that clip .plz reveal fst if possible than in the next episode …plz its a request from yoir fan n i have another request plz upload ur next epsiode soooooon ….plz plz plz …. i had just became a I AM A DEVIL OF MY ANGEL ADDICTED ….pl zuplpad sooon ..plz plz plz

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm adina?
      Firstly…. Nice name yaar….
      The way uh addicted towards the ff….
      I m addicted to ur cute comments …
      Seriously…. I m glad my ff makes uh happy….
      About the clip… It will b revealed to uh guys of course but not to twinj….
      And next part….
      I will surely try my best to post it asap….

  13. RiaA MendeZz

    Awesome epi but u confused me a bit with the Hindi as I couldnt understand it…no big deal tho… I love the major change in kunj..now can bitoo gt over him self? Ugh! Will be waiting for twinj romance.

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm riaA?
      I m so very sorry….. I forgot to give English translations….
      It just slipped of my head….
      Henceforth I will keep this in mind….
      Again sorry to make uh confuse…
      Surely uh will see twinj romance ahead

    • Saby

      |Author

      Y every1 behind of me to kill me…?
      Plshhhh don’t do this yaar…
      Tysm and will try to post asap….
      Plshhhh spare me again?

  14. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Awesome. .kitna wait kiya maine… kal toh pehle tu website down thain pure din….I was like episode post hogaya hoga I cant read it…….. I literally thot the problem is wid my phone nd network. …..but now read ur episode its ♥♥♥♥♥♥♡ ab aur mat tadpana jaldi se aaj hie upload kar next episode ……plzzzzzxxxxxxxxx I ur fan…. apne fan ki baat maanjaaa…
    the three babies in clip r bitto twinkle nd kunj…..
    bext episode ka intezaar hai.

    • Chehak

      |Registered Member

      Next episode upload karde…plzzzzzz…
      mien tere hath jodti hun…plzzz
      mien teri fan hun nd apni fan ko itna mat tadpa

    • Chehak

      |Registered Member

      Please plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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      Next episode upload karde…….plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
      itna bhi mat tadpa

    • Chehak

      |Registered Member

      Mien tujhe se bohoot gussa hoon….. not gonna talk to u know :-(:'(:-(:'(:-(:'(:-(:'( tu bohoot wait karati hai… :-(:'(:-(:'(:-(:'(

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm chehak???
      Meri Jaan kya karu…. Meri halat bhi Teri tarha hi thi… … And option ekhi that either to write my ff and post or read others .
      Kya karu I cudnt control myself from reading other ffs as they are just mindblowing and love it so much…
      So was very late to post mine …
      Real reason no excuse….
      And will try to post asap….

      • Saby

        |Author

        So sorry yaar…. Plshhh understand …. Arrey San naraz ho jaoge….
        Kaiser managing sabko….
        Nanhi si Jaan…
        Baadi pareshan…?
        Do forgive me will try to post asap… Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  15. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it Saby
    I think there is a past which Leela does not want to reveal and about the picnic spot it must be a very good spot coz you are the one who selected it
    Love you 🙂

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm sidmin?
      Ya its out of every1’s imagination….
      But its damn cute… Uh gonna love it….
      Loveuh too….

  16. Amii

    Finally the good moments between twinj. Loved twinj moments.. N yr tum kitna wait karati Ho. Pls update next soon.

  17. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Finally u posted the nxt part of ur ff..u know i was eagerly waiting 4 it..n coming to the epi it was just awesome!!!..so much of suspense n too many twists..i just love it!..now plz dont make me wait anymore n post the nxt part soon..

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm fan?
      I m glad uh liking these mysteries and twists…
      And so sorry to make uh wait for the ff for so long…
      Will try to post next part asao

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm fan?
      I m glad uh liking these mysteries and twists…
      And so sorry to make uh wait for the ff for so long…
      Will try to post next part asap

  18. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    I’m very angry with u …very very angry ….itna wait koi karwata hai kya …I waited for ur ff so long …
    But sach baat bataun tera itna cute ff padhne ke baad na mera saara gussa khatam hogaya ….aur waise bhi apni chumz se koi kitni der tak naraz reh skta hai ….nd don’t thank us dear …u r one of the pillar of chumz forever ..
    Bakwass bahut hogayi meri …ab bata dun tumhara episode kaisaa laga…toh saheban gadardan channdh lafz apki tarref mein pesh kiye hai irshad farmae…

    ” Tera ff padhene se aati hai mere face pe 440 volt si smile …
    Jaldi jaldi post kiya Karo …kyuki mujhe pasand hai yeh smile …”..

    Sooooooooooooooo cute episode…. Kunj’s breakdown made me to cry …his lines was so touchy ….
    Waiting for mystery to get revealed …thanks this Talli TU started to work or else I won’t be able to read ur ff ..
    Love u …….itna jitna tum soch bhi nai skti…

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm sayuuuuuu…..
      Jaaaneman…. Ya kya sun rahi hu…..
      Tu bhi mujse naraz thi…. Sachi….
      Aesa na karo yaar…. Gussa mat karo….
      But I m glad atleast my ff made uh forgive me….
      Dekha mere ff ka jaduuu… I used it to convince uh…..
      But ek jaduuu tumhara Jo humesha mujpar chal jata hai…
      Tumhari batein….. I love uh for DAT my bak-bak queen……??
      I love uh chummmmmmz????

  19. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Awww me gusa toh ho aabke saath liking maaf kaar bi cukau….you wrote this episode so well yaar amazing….or twinkle or Kunj ki patch up brought tears into my eyes like this?. I think the clip is some kind of old memory which lella doesn’t want to show and twinkle fainting is also something related to them…I can’t decide on the picnic spot kyunki you’re saby naa…anything can cook up in your mind anytime…I loved today’s episode which was a total blockbuster….warning pls pls pls post kar ya and request new liking order hu…,I can’t wait for your little Sissie will you pls post next one asap???I love you..

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm angita??
      I m so sorry to make uh wait so much….
      And so glad I have the tool with me to convince uh roothe hue logo ko…. Through my ff?
      Ya uh r right I m saby… And anything can cook in my head… But the thing wch is cooking right now…is a big dhamaka….
      Hope uh guys like it … Loveuh….

  20. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Finally hamara kunj has changed…….. Lovely epi Saby
    Ur ff is so filled with mysteries ……eagerly waiting to know which picnic spot is that……I know its gonna b the best one bcoz it’s u who has planned it so it has to be something better than the best….eagerly waiting

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm kruti??
      I m glad uh liking the track…and mysteries…
      Picnic spot is better….. I hope uh like it that it can turn to the best….
      Will try to post soon

  21. Zaku

    |Registered Member

    Finally Kunj changed… Epi was amazing But
    Aur ek mystery huh I will solve it myself
    mujhe Lagta hai ab 99% sure ki bitoo hi tha vo Bhai Twinkle ka…Aur Leela ko Lagta hai vo margaya!!
    Bas mystery solved By Zaku!!!!!!!!!!!
    Post soooooooon aur mystery ko solve Karu

  22. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Loved it so much plzz post next epi soon ???
    Eagerly waiting for mysteries to solve
    New kunj aww so cute ????

  23. Apoorwa

    |Registered Member

    saby saby saby it was too good
    and we want a compensation from you
    u always say sorry but this time you are worthy of punishment
    and your punishment is post next epi today only
    if not possible then tommorow
    pleaseeeeeee saby post next epi soon
    mysterious girl i love your mysteries and suspenses

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm apoorwa?
      Wats this? Comment in my style….
      Oh god punishment…..
      I m liable to that…. I know srry wont work but still sho sho sho shorry….
      Will post tomorrow…. Plomishhh….

  24. Joonakanksha

    |Registered Member

    Finally you posted…
    I m just in love with this new kunj ????
    epi was awesome….
    Really excited for their picnic….
    Do cont asap

      • Shamz

        |Registered Member

        Hey Saby how can I be angry….though I was eagerly waiting for ur ff but I know that u might b having any prob and talli TU also….as I’m also a writer so I know ur duvidha…hehe

  25. Yamini

    Thank you sooooooooooooo much for the treat? I was eagerly waiting for your FF please
    post the next one asap and do show us TwiNJ ROMANCE durning the picnic
    Post the next one soon please ?

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm yamini?
      Happy now…. Ur treat was up to the expections na??? Hope I did DAT….
      And sure dear… Ur this request will also b fulfilled….
      Will post asap???

  26. Aishwarya

    Awesome epi saby. Nd y thiz much late i was waiting for a long tym nd pls read my ff also. Tere mere pyaar twinj

  27. Asma

    I missed ur epi soooooo muchhhhh??. But atlast u posted…..sooooo happieeeee??. Awesomeeeee epi??luvd it sooo muchhh?❤❤. Plz post da nxt one soon….waited too long fr dis….??

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm asma???
      Glad to see uh happy….
      Warns San yaha toh merit Japan lenepe tulle hue hai. ???
      Just kidding I love their nakreys… And uh…
      Love uh dear and will post asap

  28. jasmin

    Saby di u finallly posted it..missed u badly..n loved the epi to the core..n plzz don let us wit for more time..loved it..yess finally kunj is changing..loved the episode to the core..love u..muah!!

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm Jasmin?
      Jaanu…. So sorry…..
      I missed uh too….
      And I m happy to see uh like the new Kunj…
      Will try to post asap….
      Love uh……??

  29. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Our queen….its okay baby I can understand…nowadays TU is not well…I Think we should consult doctor….hahaha…yaar I can’t wait for next episode…outstanding baby…I was waiting for you ff eagerly….when you told that you posted you ff…I felt very happy….Thank you sooo much for updating….Really please post next episode…The way you write Masha Allah superb…love you babes….take care

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm afffa di???
      Uh understand so well…..
      Dekho na ye sab log is nanhi si Japan she naaraz go gaye hai….
      An yeh tu talli tga toh meli kya galtu hai bhala….? Huhhhhh…..
      NVR mind mein sabko manna lugi….
      And thankyou so much dear… Love uh lots and lots more .. ???

  30. sidhants dieharder fan (manu)

    Yeeehhh finally our kunj is back and also our saby di was missing u so badly plz plz plz post asap…..and I am not angry with u u r like my sister and hopr u also trat and feel for me as your lit sis….

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm manu??
      Thankgod uh r not angry on me….
      I missed uh too baby….
      Ovio my small sissi… I will try to post asap

  31. SMC

    Just landed…sorry for not commenting for a long time….this episode was awesome epsecially the emotions…saby loved it.ll

  32. zayb_zikra

    Oohhhh toh madam ko tym mil hi gaya batao…..
    Sachhi Sachhi batana kyu ASA kiya yaar..???
    Jao ao se na mai baat nai kalti….
    Katti jao….????
    Aise b Kai karta hai bhala batao toh…???
    Nahi na to phir kyu kiya aisa…????
    Batao batao…….
    Ha ha jaldi batao na???..
    Chala ap toh bata NE se rahe …..????
    Chalo sorry bole jaldi ha….
    No nakre n all ha…?????
    Chalo toh pehle mai hi sorry keh deti hu ……
    Sho sho shorry yaar for commenting late….
    Pleaashhhhhhhh sholy na baba maaf kardo na pleaashhhhhhhh……
    Ab is choti si bachi ki jaan lo ge kya…????????
    Ha batao toh Zara nai na toh phir …..
    Kya ap bhi……kuch b …….
    Yaar avein tension lere ho na ……
    Ok nw commin to d epi…..
    It ws amazinggggggggly osmmmmmmmm…….
    Loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much…..????❤❤❤❤???????????
    Kahani me new twist kya baat hai kya baaaat hai……
    Ahan manna padega apko toh yaar Matlab kamal hai…..
    Ap ka toh koi jawab hi nahi…..
    I swear yaar I jus luv ur ff alot…….
    Ap ko b karti hu pyaar bt ff se thoda SA nahi bahot zyada. …
    Yaar ab ye kya hai..????
    Matlab hai kya…????
    Arre zyada socho mat na …..
    Mai video clip k baat karri hu na……
    Ab ye kounse naya past hai…??????
    Batao toh Zara…….
    Are kya mai b kuch b avein puchti rehti….???
    Agla epi padugi to tab pata chalega na….
    Mai b kitni beshram hu…????
    Aur dekho to Zara aisa has rahi hu apne ap per…..
    Hu na ek dum jhalli type ki ladki…..????
    Ab mai Jo hu so to hu….
    Par ap ka kya.????
    Are kya soch re ho????
    Ap ki late ane ki adat ufff….
    Kisi din na meri jaan leker rahegi ……
    Arre ek toh ap late ate ho aur upar se itne amazing se epi likte ho….
    Toh shocks aur twists to hote hi haina……
    Ok nw do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz………….????????????????????????
    I ll b waiting for u……..
    Jaldi ana ha……..
    Toh chalo biee tc luv u …..
    B back soon…..?????❤❤??????
    It’s IMPATIENT DEVIL……….
    Jhalli si stupid si zikraa…………???????
    Ik mai aisi hi hu….
    Kya kar sakte hai…..????
    Adat se majboor…..
    Ufff again bakbak….
    Ok do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz……❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Luv ur ff to d core….
    Luv u to d moon n back….
    Lub u so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much……..❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • Saby

      |Author

      Zikraaaaaaaaaa?????
      Was waiting for ur comment….
      I was thinking that only sab mu chadaye huye hai yaha….
      Sab daat rahe hai…..
      Much naaraz hai….
      Insab k beech meri zikra kahi Sikh nahi rahi….
      Or dekha Toh madam ka comment sabse last hai….
      Sunn zyada suna mat….
      Mein Teri hi sis hu…
      Haina???? Ha bol…
      Bol…..
      Hu na???
      OviouslyOviously hu…..
      Isliye toh humesha late hoti hu….??
      Dekh tera mera fituus ha ab???
      And mera dimag…. kya kahu? kuch bhi utpatang sochta rehta hai….
      Us sab soch ko…… Muje jab tym milta hai tabhi mein bayaan kar leti hu… Ff k through
      and and and….. Sab dekh na naraz hai is nanhi si… Pyari si… Cute si…. Innocent si….
      Bachi se…. Bolna maaf karde….
      Dekh mein so bhi nahi paa rahi iske vajahse…..
      Nvr mind… Chall merit Jaan. ..
      Chalti hu…
      Buhbye…. Loveuh soooo much??
      From the innocent angel?

  33. Romaisah

    Ahhhhh
    This episode yaar ??
    Goshh it was amazing breathtaking Mindblowing….i dont have words Sabyyyy
    Too good n emotional i hope bitoo dont do anything bad to kunj ?
    And the clip and leela??? Aur picnic? Kya yaar? So much mysteries
    Cant wait for next epi so plz posg soonnn plzz plzz pweezee !!!

  34. Baby

    |Registered Member

    amazing saby di luvd d episode finly evrythng is cleared bw my sidmin luvd d episode pls continue di asap

  35. sidmin lover

    Finaly u posted waiting for ur ff nice lovely epi kunj is realy chnge aur he is pretending infront of sis. Aur is there any bigest twist to come with kunj behviour bt i like that devil kunj more becoz of dis charcter ok kunj u mde in ur ff make ur ff difrnt frm other i hope u undrstand my point ie i like ur ff

  36. Shan

    Not only your name… we have to change to story name too… the mystery girl wiyh her mysterious stories…… lol… Really the epi is amazing….. keenly waiting to know about the second devil in your mysterious story…. till now snehal… its really lovable and amazing…. and today episode is really romantic too…. and the guess about picnic would be really dificult to say…. as you are the best mystery girl… hahaha…. lol…. good going snehal…. love you a lot babaria… love you so much dear!!!

    • Saby

      |Author

      Shan Darling I m gonna kill uh….
      For wat haa…..
      Don’t even dare to ask…..
      I m angry with uh……
      Year itna I mean itna late koi comment karta hai kya????
      Batao batao…. Arey say na….
      Lev it…. Huhhh….
      And call me saby only darling plsssssh…
      I undrstud my real name is no more a mystery but still I will like if uh call me dat….
      Keep loving…. Keep commenting…
      Stay tuned😍💜💜

  37. bulbul

    Soooooooooooo sorrrrrrrry for commenting so late but kha karoon adat se majboor and episode was just awesome and I am aur bitoo is tw brother

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