I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 15)

Hi….. eid mubarak to all my readers…. May all ur dreams come true on this auspious day….. wanna reveal sumthing about me…. I m a very straight forward, thodisi jalli, thodisi dramebazz, thodisi attitudequeen, thodisi selfiqueen but bohot se bhi bohot zyada sweet….. itni sweet k jab mera bf hoga to usse diabetes ho jayegi…
I m a cllg student studing in sy from mumbai…. I do part-time job for experience or uh can say…. Like internship….. this makes me whole day busy so I cant post early…. And I m 1…. Wait y shud I reveal my age? Hmmm I m still my bhai’s chotti….. its one of my nick names…. and my real name, uh hav to do efforts to know that…. Ppl wanna b frnds in person can ping me on this sanaya.chauhan.50 [at] facebook.com……. Its at fb acc. Dnt uh think its my name… uh will find sumthing else…. And that wch uh find will b my real name… hint as my name is Saby…. S is the initial of my first name, A for my fathers name…. B is the initial of my surname…. And y…. ummm don’t wanna tell uh… its secret……..
……………………………………….. ITNA BADA INTRO… SO SORRY… LETS BEGIN WITH THE STORY……….

Twinj’s rooms…… oops sorry Kunj’s room:
Kunj is smoking and walking left to right inside the room with confused face and is thinking something. Wereas margret is picking up all the stuffs of twinkle from the room… just then twinkle enters the room and watches him desperately walking from here and there… just then kunj turns and notices her and rushes to her like a blow of wind…. And twinkjle’s drama again start…
T: (covering her face with veil) no kunj ji plz stay away from me… look I don’t want to go away from uh, plz plz stay away from me… I beg uh (she joins her hand in praying gesture and she smiles brightly under the veil, which is not seen by kunj)
K: just stop calling me that, have uh lost it dammit, uh r a famous model and uh r behaving like this…. (disgusted face) like this veil, and who wears this kind of sari full sleaves blouse. I mean from wen uh started covering ur body so much?
T: its all bcoz of uh kunj ji uh made me understand that a girl should listen to his husband….. I m just obeying uh…. Uh don’t like me exposing myself na? see…. (showing herself) now I m fully covered.
K: (irritated) great…. Uh are just impossible infact…. Ek toh yeh 3 yrs ka drama upon that this mentally sick siyappa queen…. God, save me from dieing…. (turns around makes an irritated face which shows still confusion)
T: (stilling giggling within veil and controlling from bursting out) I know uh r not able to understand, but its all bcoz of ur love kunjji and punditji has told me to do this… and I will perform my each and every duties towards uh… afterall uh r my pati-permeshwar… (saying she bow down at kunj feet, while kunj is hell shocked and leaves the room with confused and disgusted face….. and slams the door hardly…. Dhaaaaam!)
Twinkle puts her veil down and winks at margret while she also gives her a bright smile….. they both shift twinkle’s stuffs to the adjacent room.

Twinkle is tired shifting and doing drama. she informs margret to call her wen kunj arrives… and lays on bed.
Twinkle’s pov:
God! whats happening? I myself wanted to be in kunj’s arms and now I m only not liking his touch. I still love him but cant bear him like this throughout the lifetime. I wanna be his wife and not a sl*t.
(she takes a pic out of her purse and started admirring it)
Flashback–––––––––––––
Kunj and twinkle are in primaryschool and sitting next to each other, while twinkle is miffed with kunj. (guys imagine them talking in childish tone as they are kids about 10 yrs old)
K: shorry na twinkle. Plshhhh forgive me
T: forgive uh? No way….. see uh r not holding ur ears also
K: (holds his ears) see now I m holding na… plshhh forgive me now…
T: no I cant
K: but y? now toh I m holding ears also
T: ya uh r holding ur ears but not saying sorry see… uh r only saying to forgive uh.
K: (still holding his ears) sorrrrryyyyy twinkleeeeeeeee
T: its ok kunj… I forgive uh… but plomish me that uh will not eat any chocolate akele akele… plomish kalo….
K: plomish
T: pakka wala plomish?
K: pakka wala… uh trust me na?
T: more then myself (both hugs eachother)
Just then snap….. leela clicks this cute moment and this pic was with twinkle from childhood till now which kunj is still not aware of.
Flashback ends––––––––––––––––––––––

I want this wala by bhola bhala, innocent, masoom kunj and not this angry and disgusting kunj.
Twinkle slowly dosesoff bcoz of such a tiring day still having that pic in hand…

Kunj comes home drunk and not in a state of walking also, gets inside the home… margret watches him coming in this state and calls twinkle but as she was sleeping she was not aware of the calls.
Margret asks kunj for having dinner, he says he already had it and proceeds towards his room and falls on the bed and dosses off…

Next day
Twinkle had her beautysleep after so many days… because of the sunrays she wakesup and finds herself in her room and gets woried that she slept last night without seeing kunj. just then margret knocks and walks in…
M: mam, sir is still sleeping with his office attire and shoes…
T: oh god! (getsup with no time) did he had dinner?
M: I asked him, he said he already had it…
T: ok (she leaves hurrily)

Opens kunj’s room door and finds wat margret said was truth, kunj was sleeping facing the ceiling with his office attire and shoes and was sleeping peacefully… she gets close to him and removers his shoes, then socks and then slowly takes out his coat and she unbottons his 1st two buttons of the shirt and she was about to go when kunj moves and watches twinkle very close to him… he gets surprised… twinkle getsup from him as she was half leaning on him… and feels akward. While kunj is blank with her action.
K: uh here? Do uh need anything?
T: vo…. Vo…
K: oh god ! twinkle…. Again uh started vo…vo….
Just then margret enters with lemonade and gives it to twinkle and leaves…
T: (giving the glass to kunj) have this uh will feel good.
K: (he takes the glass and throw it on the floor, with the sound of the glass break, twinkle gets frighten and closes her eyes.) wat do uh think, I m still drunk and need this for getting my hangover finish….? Uh know what no need to show your concern to me. just obey me and nothing else.
Uh can leave. As ur panditji said be away from me right.
T: (getsup just then kunj holds his wrist) kuuuu…. jjj ji
K: (pulls her towards him because of the sudden jerk, she keeps her foot on glass and hurt herself and falls on kunj)
T: ahhhhh…… (wincing in pain)
K: (holds her wrist and make her come more close) arrey I didn’t even did anything… y r uh making sounds?
T: (pushes him away and sits on bed looking at the glass piece peierced inside her foot) ahhh… ouchhh…
K: wats wrng twinkle (he was about to step down from the bed that to on glass unknowingly but twinkle holds him and makes him sit there)
T: kunj vo glass lag jati tumhe…. (pointing towards the glass)
K: (looks at the pieces and then notices her foot bleeding) (yells) Margret…… margret
M: (comeing inside the room) yes sir…
K: clear this mess…. And uh brng me a milkshake….
M: yes sir I just clean this… and milkshake, sure…
K: (getsup from other side and takes his clothes from wardrobe and leads to bathroom) I told uh only to clean the mess… twinkle is going to make milkshake… (twinkle widen her eyes) and ya last night I didn’t ate anything so twinkle make some paratthas too…. (gets inside the bathroom with a smirk)
T: (her eyes is just gonna pop-out any minute and mouth is wide open) wat the hell he think of himself… m I his cook… oh god, muje toh parattha khana aata hai sirf…. This akdu…. Sadu…. Khadoose… Is he not able to see I have got hurt, upon dat he want me to breakfast for him….. wait a sec… (something strikes in her mind and smirks) now I will show uh kunj……. Breakfast kesa hota hai……..

Twinkle fresh-n-up herself and comes out wearing a punjabi dress as in a perfect patiala look…. Oops patakka look…. and dresses her cut and with much difficulty walks down the kitchen. And the biggest siyaapaa begins……
T: (smiles eveily) Now see kunj sarna wat mind-blowing breakfast uh get today
She brings milk and a shik-shake…. And pours the milk in shik-shake and then adds red powder (ovio its mirchi powder) and shakes the shik-shake…
M: (surprised) mam y the the milk is turning red?
T: (think… wat to say) ummm… kesar… haa… its becoz of keasr…
M: but kesar adds yelloish colour…
T: (she has no idea of kitchen stuffs) I added red wala keser na that’s y red colour…. (still confused)
M: but mam….
T: (cuts her) plz margreat go and clean my room… I can manage ove here… plz.. (makes childish pouts)
M: ok… (she leaves)
Twinkle smiles at her going…. She pours the shik-shake wala milk into the glass and places it on the table… and comes back to the kitchen and start making paratha… while cursing the flour becoz it was kept sumwer upside…. Twinkle streaches herself to reach to the box… but…. Dhaammmmm….
The box falls on the floor and opens up and half of the flour spills out…. Making the kitchen more attractive….. she ignores and takes the floor in a vessel and pours water in it………..
T: oh god y this flour is so like a pond of frogs… did I added extra water? (smashes the flour with the water) oh god… save me…. Y this is geeting streched like a rubber-band…. (Makes faces) mum…… I misshhhhh uh (cries fakely, atlast giveup)
(makes sad face) great twinkle, uh r just awesome… uh were thinking of teaching him a lesson, but uh urself need get teaching first…. (just then a voice is heard……… “ahhhhhh…… pani…. Pani” )
T: (smiles evily) now I can say mission accomplished (rushes outside the kitchen and starts her drama again) kunj ji are uh ok…. Wat happen…. (holds the jug not allowing him to have water)
K: ahhh….. twi…. Twin….. lemmme…… ahhh
T: (still holding the jug in her hands and pretending) kunj ji… wat happen to uh…. Are uh mimicing me? (laughs within)
K: look…. Twi…. Let me… drin……
T: no no kunj ji, morning morning me…. No drinking…..
K: shu….t ahhh…. (he snaches the mug at she is not leaving it, both are fighting as two rats fighting for same piece of cheese…….. and then the mug falls and breaks)
T: (makes ababy pout) sho shorry….
K: (gets heel angry and pulls her close to himself kisses her just to reduce her burn… but has no effect as she is not responding) plz respond twinkle, its burning….. plz… (twinkle melts in… looking at his red eyes and red lips… infact he is looking as a tomato a red wala cute sa tomato)

Saying so he again starts kissing her and she also gets in…. she sucks her lower lip and then the upper one… while he is still smashing her lips like an hungry animal….. twinkle cups his face and slows him down…. by caressing his hair… kunj is overjoyed and don’t want to break the kiss… they both kiss each other very passionately…. After sum time, twinkle tries to pullout from the grip but kunj pulls her more close by her waist and dippens the kiss more…. They are still kissing each other very passionately as they wer waiting for this from years…………….

Bitoo and shruti enters the mansion and gets glued-up on the entrance itself….. shruti is feeling nice SEEING THEM TOGETHER where bitoo is just pressing his fist in ANGER… (bro wala anger uh see)
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How was the epi? Let me know by ur cute cute comments………
I will eagerly wait for that……….

75 comments

  1. Priya

    Dhamakedaar episode..loved it… Can’t wait to read the next episode…
    Twinkle Aaj full on hit thi…loved the sherni mode..kunj..I think he started changing..

    Waiting for the next part….

  2. SidMin

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    Loved it Saby and waiting for the next episode Twinkle really is a Punjabi sherni I loved the way she added chilly powder in Kunj’s milkshake and their kiss was so cute and Bitoo”s anger was so cute brother sister relation so sweet

  3. Amii

    Thank god saby at least you are going to update fast thank uh soo much… And please keep updating fast.. Coz m jus addict of ur ff.. And Eid Mubarak to you too ? luv uh… And kal Eid hai dear to Eid pr bonus to Banta hai na.. To kal 2 episodes Milne chahiye wo b lengthy ??

  4. Rashiverma2199

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    Wow…..saby darling…..the episode was awesome…..loved it to the core….really awesome…..specially the last wala part…..muuaahhhh?????

  5. Kruti

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    Awesome epi saby…….humari pattaka me kunj ke much mein partake phi diya…hehehe
    Eagerly waiting for d nxt one

  6. Ritzi

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    Oh mah god! Saby I don’t hv words yaar….shit! Awesome word seems nothing infront of this ff….I love it….pls post the next part today itself na……vaise nhi u made me wait for 2 days na!

  7. Esha

    OMG. This is the first time I’m commenting but I just need to ask you……how do you write sooooo good???? This ff is absolutely awesomee

  8. Misha

    OH god it was super Nono super dipper owsome. You are great , not soo.
    Thanks for this seriously. My eid was going soo much boring. You know na. Gab twinkle is happy she shows a lot of attitude and when I read your ff I become both. Again thanks
    Soooo sorry.but I don’t had fb id soo…
    Btw love yooooou???

  9. Ria

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    Hey Saby, it was amazing.. enjoyed it a lot especially the last scene.. by the way, even though I know your name I won’t say it. Let others say..hehe..anyways, eid Mubarak to you too.

  10. zayb_zikra

    Ahhh wooa sista I mean u r d best…?????
    Luv u for this….❤❤❤❤❤???
    Muaahhhhhhh wala epi yaar……?????????????
    Dekliya mera kaam I mean siyappa Yarr….????
    Eid mubarak kehne se pehle hi shuru hogai na mai b na kabhi sudrugi nahi haina haina????….??????
    Akhir hu b mai zikra……???
    Chalo ajj me b apna ek secret khol hi deti hu…??
    Pata hai kya batau??mmmm???
    Soch rihu yaar…secret haina….?????
    Toh suniye mera naam na SANA hai……
    Omgggggggggg i told may name ya really bt zikra iz zikra hu na use koun badal salta hai bola????????????
    …..hehhehehee????
    Zyada socho mat kyu hasri hu ….kyu ki kya plan banaya hai yaar …..
    Epi ws jus osmmmmmmmm loved it so much….???????
    Lat part omggggggggggggggggg freaking hot….??????
    Jussssssssssssssss loving it
    Acha r u on Instagram plzzzzzzzzz if u r thn do tell me….???
    Plzzzz wanna chat wid u…my dea….???????
    Ok chalo biee n once again eid Mubarak to u …….di…….????
    Ab kya liko age ??????????????????????????????????????????
    Kya likhu…?
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    Ur jus amazing diiiiiiiii………..??????????????????????❤❤❤❤❤?????
    …….. .
    Jus luvv u to d moon n back…….
    N luv ur epis to d core……….???????
    Luv u……..❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Jus do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz??????
    Hats off to u..?????
    Salam…………
    Ok eid Mubarak eid Mubarak may dis eid brings alot of happiness to alll be blessed guyzzz…..?????????
    N to all ff wrters happy Eid Mubarak guyz luv u n b blessed…………????????
    Ok ab sachi wala bie biee …..Tata luv u……
    Keep writing……
    Keep smiling…?????
    Keep loving……??????????
    N m too luv u so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much…….????????
    Luv u to d infinity…….?????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    your’s lovingly ,
    Jhalli natkhat badmash dramebaaz shaitan n most importantly zikraaaaaaaa yaaar………
    Bieee bieee luv u…,…❤❤❤❤????❤❤❤❤❤❤??????
    Most importantly urs IMPATIENT DEVIL…..??????❤❤❤❤??????????
    Maaf kardena kafi chota comment kiya na ….haina..????..?
    Marna mat plzzzzz yaar ……..warna mera chera kharab no jaiga na…..????
    Aisa kaise hone de sakti hu mai…….?????
    N ya do tell me ur Instagram ACC……..??????
    Ok ab to sachi wala bie biee………
    Biee Tata……?????❤❤❤❤

  11. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    awesome…twinj ka kiss tho….woww…no words…plz post asap…n eid Mubarak to u too…

  12. Sayeeda

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    Sorry for the short comment …kehna to bahut Kuch chati hoon lekin majboor hu nai bol skti hai coz my sir is dancing on my head for the work ….Baad mein bolungi…
    loved the episode… too good

  13. Chehak

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    Eid mubarak ♥ ♡ ♡
    coming to episode its awesome mind blowing . I am jabra fan of ur ff. Its amazing. Itne ache ideas aate kahan se hai. Lovely. .kamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal kar diya.
    yaar saby apna real name nd age bata de.
    chal mein mera bata deti hun mera naam chehak hai tuujhe pata hai..lloll
    nd age 15 yrs

  14. Sameera

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    Wow jaandar Shankar wala epi tha aww twinkle love u love u it’s too awesome saby n eid Mubarak to u too ???

  15. Kiara

    It’s as always awesome ????? loved our sherni waiting for Kunj softness hope he will change soon . Luv u ??

  16. Jenisha

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    Mind blowing ….. superb…..

    I read all epi today ….. I loved it….. all time reading last epi I was laughing???…

    Plz update soon….

    Love you??

  17. SMC

    Eid Mubarrak Saby…
    Cumin to the episode it was fantastic epically twinkle u got her confidence but and ofcourse the chilli powder incident..
    And what happened bcoz of the burn was even more awesome..
    Love u..
    ??????????????

  18. Apoorwa

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    saby you should get best writer awards for 10000000000000 centuries
    i enjoy you ff soooooooooooooooo much

  19. Zaku

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    Epi was amazing … funny
    Sry for late comment ….Today was EID
    That’s why!!!
    Post soooon

  20. baby

    Yr saby amazing episode osm jst luvd it bt pls post nxt 1 asap Pls cant w8☺☺????☺?????bchara sidhant bt dn he gt his sweet as well by jasmin?

  21. misha

    plz atleast try to post 1 everyday and every morning
    plz plz plz
    i want start my morning with it love youuuu

  22. mavo

    i really loved it ………but pls saby can u pls tell when will u post d next episode ??? pls pls pls

  23. Affaa

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    Sorry sorry for being late wo kya hai nah I was bzy in eid…so I was not able to comment sorry…I hope my sis will understand me…..
    Epi was adorable…terrific…outstanding
    ….mind blowing….superb yaar…my words will be less to appreciate you
    …Please post next epi ASAP…I can’t wait anymore..
    Love you…take care

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