I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 13)

Next day
Twinj room
Kunj and twinkle both are sleeping very peacefully… kunj is in his denim shorts with naked body.
And twinkle sleeping wearing kunj’s shirt… now it has become her habit… what else she will do… ab biwi hai… itna toh hakk banta hi hai… wait a sec guys let me tell uh guys that they are sleeping on the same bed but both on their either side of the bed and not even touching each other a bit… there sleeping positions looks same as two like poles of a magnet repelling from each other….
It is 7 in the morning and Beep…. Beep….. the alarm starts ringing… kunj is very punctual and serious about timing and specially about office. He gotup and found twinkle sleeping showing her back towards him… he ignored her and went for jogging, after sometime he returned and found her still sleeping, he again ignored her an went for bath…. He came out having bath and and found her still sleeping peacefully, he ignored her as he was getting late for office and dressedup himself in his office attire….. it was almost 9 now and kunj was just waiting for her to wakeup but she didn’t moved or motioned a bit…. Kunj was continuously gazzing her back from the mirror as he was combing his hair….

Kunj’s pov:
Oh god just look at her its almost 9 and and she is not even in a mood to change her position…. she is still a sleeping beauty… She is still the same, she has not changed a bit…

Flashback––––––––––––––
Twinkle is having her beautysleep on her soft bed hugging her tuffy… just them dhuuuum… the door got smashed hard, still no effect on her… and kunj comes inside…. And sits near her on the bed
K: (shaking her) twinkle….. twinkle,…. Uthja…. meri sleeping beauty….
T: (still in her sleep) ummmm
K: (still shaking her from shoulder) twinkle its 1 o clock and uh are still sleeping…. Plz getup otherwise every1 will leave us… and we will miss the roadtrip.
T: (still sleep) uhhh… (pulls the blanket and covers her face)
K: stop it twinkle getup yaar plz…. Thik hai uh have ur beautysleep over here I m going for the roadtrip (acts to standup which he don’t want to)
T: (holds his wrist and pull him down, bcoz of the jerk he falls on bed beside twinkle, her eyes are still closed but she is awake… holding his arm tightly) don’t uh even think of leaving me…
K: (stil on bed sleeping next to her) then wat shud I do?
T: sleep like me (she hugs him and keeps her head on his chest)
K: (smiling in his heart) oh god twinkle… hav some shame, getup from me
T: no I wont, y shud i?
K: bcoz uh cant sleep like this with me, I m not ur teddy
T: shutup khadoose. Tum mere sab kuch ho and (opens her eyes and sits a bit and watches his face) wait a second wen uh lie on my lap that is ok? And today I did then I cant… y that so?
K: vo… voh..
T: see uh don’t have any ans… (again sleeps on his chest while kunj smiles on her madness) just lemme sleep kunj
K: (still sleeping) twinkle…. Plz getup… I request uh
T: y?
K: cause my heart is beating fast and I think it will burst if uh don’t getup from me.
T: (twinkle feels butterflies in her stomach and gets flowed away in the flow) I just love it wen ur heart beats fast… I love the rhythem they make…
K: wanna know for whom its beats?
T: (comes back to her senses and getsup with a jerk as she understood that he was going to confess his love) oh god, we are very late…. I m going for bath… wait for me I will just be asap…
Twinkle walks off the room and gets into the bathroom in a jiffy…. Kunj is smiling at her madness…
Flashback ends––––––––––––––

Kunj’s pov:
Uh always knew how much I love uh but uh played with me, my emotions, my feelings, I wont bear uh this time…. Today uh are also on the same place wer I was 5 years back….. today uh are loving me, like I used to and today I m playing with uh like uh used to….
(his thoughts get disturbed when there is knock on the door)

K: whoes there?
M: sir its me, margret
K: ya come in
M: sir uh r getting late for ur office, and george (driver) is waiting for uh
K: (looks at twinkle and thinks… I m late today bcoz of uh, I will not spare uh) ya tell him I m coming.
(he takes his bag and slas the door and rushes down)

Just then the sleeping beauty has a cunning smile on her face and she gets up streaching her hands… “good morning hubby“ (talking to kunjs photo on the table) so sorry that I was awake so early but wishing uh now, but what to do, uh khadoose have become a devil na, so I have to save myself from uh so acted as I m still sleeping” (holding the photo to face her and talks to it innocently with a pout) “uh know, when uh sees me, I feel like uh almost gonna eat me, and I feel so scared that cant do anything and aaaahhh oooucch…. (wincing in pain) look how uh treat me… stupid, idiot, duffer, nonsense, mental…. urgggh I don’t know badwords also…. Hmm…. Plz plzz god show me some way to get back my kunj… vo khadoose chalega yeh devil nahi….. plshhhh….”
Knock… knock….
T: ya come in
M: mam! shruti mam has told uh to get ready, she wants uh to join in her shopping
T: ok, tell her I will be der.
M: sure mam and she has told to give uh this (gives a bag, she takes it)
Margret leaves and twinkle getsup for freashing up….
She looks at the bag and opens it… it has a s*xy cream mini skirt till her thigh lenght and a violet backless top… and a note inside it…
Note–
Twinkle plz wear this, as uh are seriously looking as a aunty in ur sari wala attire… just kidding uh
Plz yaar don’t forget urself… uh are the famous model and this is what uh wear a boring sari?
And zyada nakhre kiye na sachi usha aunty ko call kar dugi that tu yahape voh boring sari pehenti hai… and uh know wat she gonna do…. Cause unhone khud kaha tha don’t wear this stuffs which uh r not comfortable in….
And and and….. no buts atall, I m not listening to any of ur excuses uh hav to wear that…
Cause I cant see uh in sari with me in a shopping mall that to in newyork…
Urs jalli bhabhi (shruti)

Twinkle gets a bright smile on her face and gets ready. She is just looking awesome as always…..
Ohhhh not awesome… just stunning and too hot. She puts light makeup, grabs her clutch, bids bye to her teddy, and heads downstairs…
Shruti is waiting for her in the hall…. She looks at her
S: just look at urself, uh look so s*exy in this and even uh r so comfortable in this…
T: ya shruti… thank you so much
S: no… I should thankyou, that uh came back to ur zone… like seriously tell me what made uh wear those sari’s wen even usha aunty permitted uh to wear modern wears… and even uh are having ur moderns wears also with uh, now don’t tell me NO coz I myself hav helped uh in packing…
T: wooo…. (thinks… how to tell uh its all bcoz of ur loved bro, I don’t want to expose myself a bit infront of him, oderwise really he will eat me up whole and sole)
S: arrey… wat vo…. Tel me….
Just then bitoo enters…
B: mam if uh r done then can we leave plz…. Ur driver is waitig for uh (indicating himself as driver)
(both the girls smiles) oh god… shruti ye tere bajume kahi vo famous model Ms taneja to nahi… (dramatically)
T: bitto bhai…. (making a cute pout and hugs him)
B: (hugs her back) thank god uh ok, warna muje laga k bebe se pehle tu buddhi ho jayegi…
T: (shocks and widens her eyes and does her fav expression) awww…. wat….
Bitoo runs from there and twinkle runs behind him to bit him playfully….
Shruti: (thinks.. I pray uh be happy like this only always…)

The whole day goes and twinkle is just enjoying with bitruti (bitoo + shruti). They went for shopping, then lunch, then for movie in the evening and again had dinner in a restaurant. its around 10, they are waiting for the dessert in the restaurant…

T: bhai, when will the dessert come?
B: it will come baby… have some patience…
T: no I m like zikra… I don’t have patience…
S: wat who zikra?
T: don’t uh know her, she is also a model and one of my friend too… uh know shruti, we girls are always told to keep distance from strangers but tell me if we will keep distance from strangers then how the hell we be friends…. And uh know this modelling carrer made me meet so many nice ppl around the industry… uh have no idea… they are all just fab…. Mahi, Sonali, Sayedda, Sohi, Lover, chahek, Ariya, Aruu the dreamer, Shatakshi, Tamanna, Radhika, Srija, Callmenazu, Joonakanksha, Fatarajo, Apoorwa, Kruti, Aashi, Baby, Loveleen, Priya, Dheemahee, Meeta, misha, Sudhika, Rashi, Sam, Jenny, Isabella, Pinkistar, krystal, arifa, sameera, shamz, maanvi, jaya, ayesha, sara, kai, dolly, tasha, happiness, jwala, sayeeda, riaA / ria / riya, smc, purnima, kiara, dharti , mannat, sana (aamu), figo, kavina, lovely, simran, afaa, alisha, komal, amii, chandra, poorvi, romaisah, bulbul, sidmin…… and so many…. As uh know industry is so big… and ya how can I forget him our photographer abhinav he is just too good in arranging parties after every project (she names them all with cute and a million dollar smile)

Bitoo and shruti with a open mouth in amasement
S: like seriously uh remember so many ppl… that uh are literally naming them all…
T: ofcourse I do… they just more worth it… I met them in at different places at different modelling projects… its said model have wars between them but not in our case…, we all praise each, push each to do more good and congrats each other wen achieveing success…. Uh know shruti they all are just so pure by heart…. Just like me what say…. (winks at shruti)
B: uh are right… a person who is pure by heart feels all around them are just like them….
“its not true, she doesn’t think like that when it comes to me… “ voice comes from the table on her back, the man getsup…. He is wearing a blue jeans with white t-shirt and black blazer. He is looking handsome… but saying his he getsup and leaves the restaurant. Twinkle turns and finds him leaving… bitruti also shocked to hear what he said… and finds strange like that…
T: who was that?
S: god knows and y did he said like that?
B: ignore him the dessert has arrived… come lets have it….
They all complete it and getsup to leave…. Wen suddenly a hand approaches twinkle’s waist. Twinkle turns around and looks to the person he is kunj in his office attire… bitruti also stops.
K: hey my wifey over here… that to without me?
T: (with tashan) ya… so do I need to take permission from uh?
K: (pressing her waist) ya ofcourse uh need to…
S: what did uh say….
K: nothing sis… (looking at twinkle) just teasing my love… (twinkle giving tough looks)
B: (makes not interested face and holds twinkle’s wrist and walks) come we need to go…

Approching towards the parking––––
bitoo walking with twinkle and kunj walking with shruti…
S: so how uh r here?
K: came for a business meeting, it was late so decided to have the dinner… wat about uh guys?
S: wat to do, wen uh have no time for ur wife, atleast we need to take care of her needs. So had a dayout with her…. Enjoyed alot
K: ya that’s visible with her attitude
S: what uh mean
K: wen she is happy she is on cloud9 and shows lots of attitude…
S: kuch bhi
K: u don’t believe me, look by urself only (approching her) hey wifey letss hav ice cream
T: (rolling her eyes) no need I just had a dessert.
They reached the parking… bitoo opening the cars door, twinkle huming a song and standing there.
Kunj infront of her…. shruti standing at some distance and laughing at them.
K: twinkle lets have a nightwalk, uh love na?
T: (looking at her nails) ya I do, but not in a mood
K: wat? Not in a mood?
Now bitoo sits in the car at the drivers seat, twinkle seats adjactent to him with door open and legs out, kunj holding the door wide open and standing there and talking to her)
T: (looking at hrself on the cars rear mirror) ya not in a mood…
K: ok then, come we will go in my car…
T: (widening her eyes) wat? Ur car? Its mine too
K: (shocked) wat? Explain me how?
T: (getsup from the car and stands infront of him) look I m ur wife, so jo tera hai(pointing him) vo mera hai… (pointing herself) get that? (with attitude) now tell whos car it is?
K: (streacting the word) ours, now can we proceed?
T: ya sure…. Bhai I m leaving with him…. Bye shruti…. (gives a flying kiss)
B: ok baby…
T: (to kunj) get my bags from bhai’s car… (walks gracefully to kunj’s ooops no twinj’s car showing lots of attitude)
K: (looks at her going and then looks at shruti, who is not able to control her laughter now…) saw now?
S: heheheeheh…. Ya…. Hehehe! Kunj, ur wife is a big dramaqueen…. (hugs him) bye… (gets into the car and waves at him and the car rushes away and kunj smirks…)

Twinkle is standing beside the car and busy in her mobile… when he comes and backhugs her… his one hand on her belly and and the other moving sensually rubbing her hand… and his face rubbing her cheecks from behind… twinkle is feeling the butterflies this time and is lost in his assese… kunj drags her at the backseat of the the car and she gets into senses that what he is upto… twinkle protests but he doent stop and makeout in the car…. Just then twinkle’s phone rings, its her manager, guys she is a model to manager to hoga hi… Twinkle feels embarssed and just feels yukkk… she is very much angry and feeling disgusted… before she could take her phone grabs it. He composes his clothes and gets out of the car… taking twinkle’s phone…
K: so this is the phone, which came in between us… (twinkle is still composing herself and her clothes) now nomore it disturb us… (he bangs the phone at the floor)
T: (comes out and shouts at him) y uh did this? It was my phone…
K: (giving cunning smile) wat did uh said? (acts to think) ya… jo tera hai vo mera hai… so I slamed our phone and vese bhi when we both are one body, one soal then y do we need two different mobiles…?
T: have uh gone crazy? How will my manager contact me… he was going to talk to about the new project.
K: wow great… means I did it in the right time… seriously what a mind-blowing timimg I have…
T: wat do uh mean by that
K: (shouts at her) I mean that uh r no more Ms. Taneja… U r Mrs. Sarna… and I wont allow my wife to expose herself to the world… DO UH GET THAT… (holds her by hairs) never getout of the house without asking me, that to in this clothes… (straching his words) m I clear?
T: (cries) hmm…..
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Hope uh guys liked… so sorry if anyone is hurt by me in any way…. I tried my best…
And and and I hope my feeling that I love all my readers are expressed by twinkle well…. Let me know if I missed out someone…..
Lights….. check
Camera…… check
Comments… check
Suggestions… check
Complaints solved…. check
Replies….. check
Readers arrived…. Check
Are they smiling….. arrey are they smiling…. Not check…. awww  

100 comments

  1. Priya

    Sach mein.. Hasa hasake meri toh death hi hogayi…
    Par last part ?..
    Waise kunj kuch zyada over possessive nahi Ho rahe hai..!!jo bhi ho Aaj tho twinkle ki dramaqueen wala switch on ho gayi…
    I have one doubt kya wo aadmi uv the…

    Now one important baat plz yaar ho sake toh do do episodes dena ho sake tho…
    Waiting for the next awesome mindblowing episode….

    • Amii

      Yes me 2 think same that person is uv. n sahi kaha yrr do episode update Ho to. Mast Ho.. Lets c what our writer think next

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm priya?
      I m glad at least today I made uh guys happy rather than sad ?
      Twinj ka nakhre vo hi jane….
      Ek sher to dusra savasher hai….
      And keep guessing who the guy was??

  2. Callmenazu

    |Registered Member

    hey Saby! d epi was just awsm luvd it 2 d core.
    Ryt now I am just at loss for words. U describe each and every scene so amusingly that we are lef aghast that how do U write so nicely
    Luv U and ur ff 2 d core
    will be waiting for d nxt epi so do post it as soon as possible

  3. Amii

    Tw attitude is good… Thank god she is not reacting like a bechari. But when she is suffering from something I just thought kunj melts or care for her.. Lets c.. What’s next.. N baby pls update soon coz Mai bht shiddat s wait krti Hu is ff ka.. Seriously

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm amii?
      Darling I respect ur impatient behaviour for my ff….. But I always try my best to upload it asap…..
      And twinkle was made to rebel only bcoz uh guys demanded….

    • Amii

      Yeah saby.. I understand.. But at least upload soon yrr. Its 4 today u r not updating 🙁 m still waiting dear.

  4. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Saby,the episode was superb.. I mean hogayi shuru Twinkle ki dramebaazi.. vaise ye khadoos Sarna toh sach mein khadoos nikla.. moreover, purane khyalato ka bhi.??

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm ria?
      haaa….Twinkle ki dramebazi…. Shuru ho toh gayi
      Par kuch kaam nahi?
      And plz usse purane zamane ka mat samj…. He is doing this bcoz vo twinkle ki khushiyan cheen na chahta hai

  5. Kiara

    Saby now I m a bigggggggggggggggg fan of urs ??? I think twinkle had suffered a lot now start changing Kunj lil bit . Otherwise it was 1000 on 1000 ??. … I just wanna ask where are u from if u don’t mind

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm kiara??
      I m from Mumbai
      And darling plz…. Don’t resemble urself as a fan of mine…. Uh all are my readers….. Plz…. I m just like uh guys…..
      Ur words mean alot to me…..??
      Loveuh ?

  6. Sameera

    That’s not fair yaar kal ankhe chura li aur aaj dil ab kya aare organs lene hai seriously how do u write so well superbb epi dong know what to comment idea of models was too good just love ur ff yaar ?????twinkle attitude was uff lagta hai ab mujhe diabetes hone wali hai ???plzz post next epi asap

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm Sam?
      And churana toh kuch nahi chahti par….
      Kya karti aakhir tumhara dil tha kese nahi
      Churati???
      Or diabetes nahi hone dugi….
      Yeh waada raha?
      Love uh dear?

  7. purnima

    shandaar jaandar ……mind blowing epitha…funny twinj scenes bt at last devil kunj……

  8. purnima

    shandaar jandaar mind blowing epi tha…..drama queen twinkle…twinj scene was amazing…bt at lat devil kunj….

  9. Sara

    OMG! U are probably getting tired of hearing OMG from me. Lol but i wait eagerly for ur ff than the actual show. U are amazing and I loved Twinkle’s attitude in this episode. Saby….love you! ?

  10. RiaA MendeZz

    I see u included my suggestion.. Thanks lots.. I just love the way twinkle showed him attitude..I enjoyed every bit of it. But look hw quickly she paid for giving so much attitude na. Lol. Awesome episode 🙂 & thank u for including my name in ur breathtaking ff.

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm riaA?
      And kese consider nahi karti?
      Afterall uh guys are my Jaan….?
      I m writing coz uh all….?
      So apka hukum sar-aakho ?
      Love uh?

  11. Shamz

    |Registered Member

    Hey amazing as always dear…and sorry for not commenting on ur previous epi as I was very busy…my life had became like a break fail car which cannot be stop….

  12. zayb_zikra

    Hey saby diiii.. ?????
    M speechless right now wht to tell??
    U left me so speechless???
    Yaar u jus made my day….??
    Really I mean u gave me a million dollar wali smile diii….??
    Ab wht to tell …ya actually I woke up for seher n checked d TU for ur ff I u kno I saw it…..I ws literally jumping like maniac..yeyeyye….??
    Nt srsly yaar u r gr8 I mean superbbbbbbb Matlab super duper amazing ho yaar Matlab ab kya batao….
    Words can’t describe it r cn say express my feelings for u…??
    Really blessed n lucky to have u guyz in m life…
    N n n I read it n after reading half part…
    When I saw my name d view in front of me left me
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    Jus awestruck at it an amazing smile appeared on my face…??
    Like srsly if u were infront of me na thn I would surely give uh a tight bone crushing wali jhappi…..????
    N ap k chubby chubby cheeks khiti …?????
    N nw ab kya karu jis tarha apne mujhe itni imp dii i mean…
    Mean matlab no body has ever given me yaar..???
    U r jusss amazinggggggg….
    Epi ws as always superbbbbbbb
    Mindblowingggg
    Amazingggggg
    Osmmmmmmm
    Fab
    Fabulous….
    Fantantic….
    Marvalleous…..
    Wonderful…..
    Excellent…
    Brilliant…..
    Extra ordinary……
    Tooo gud…..
    Best…
    Mast…
    Zabardast…..
    Mashallah……
    Undefined…..
    Undescribed….
    N wht nt…..
    Hatts off to uh…????
    M D IMPATIENT DEVIL…???OF MY SABY D ANGEL….?????
    To good n loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
    Yaar bas I can’t describe it anymore….????
    Bas itni di baat hai mujhe tum se aur tumare ff se pyaar haii?????????????????????
    Ok ab jaldi jàldi cont karo…
    Bas do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz??????
    Plzzzzz yaar itna acha likte ho ki sabr hi nai hota….
    Ok ab bas ha ha pata hai kabse yahi kehri hu k bas ab bas…haina..
    Ik Ik ki ap b bore hoke mujhe maro GE..hehehhe
    Here sumthng to u MY FF QUEEN.??
    U r n u deserve it…..
    Ok Ik mai bahut bak bak karti hu haina?? Chalo ab sharmao mat bata hi do ki hu na mai aisi???
    Chalo chodo tum b kya yaad rakhogi ???
    Phir se sry di bahut hogaya na bakbak…????
    Kya karre adat se majboor hu????????
    Maaf kardena plzzzzz
    Allah maaf kare meko itna irritate karne k liye…???
    Ha to kaha thi mai yup ap log jab apne readers ko reply karte ho na yakin mano mai toh cloud9 per hoti hu…???
    Pata hai kyu??kyuki isise pata chalna hai ki mai NE correct comment kiya ki nahi…
    Ok nw coming to d epi it ws osmmmmmmmm loved it…
    Twinki yaar srsly she’s a drama queen?????
    N kunj possessiveness overloaded ha….???
    Feeling pity for her.??
    Ok chalo bieee luv u …
    Loved d epi to d core
    Keep smiling
    Keep writing….
    Ok do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz…????
    Mai b zikra hu sudrugi nahi haina??
    Ap ko toh pata hi hai…????
    Ab isse pehle ki mujhe dakhe maar k nikali mai khud hi chali jaogi …Biee biee Tata luv uh loads…
    Luv u to d moon n back..??????????????????????????❤❤❤❤❤
    ?????????????

    • zayb_zikra

      Again zyada bakbak hogai…??
      Siyappa…???sry kitni beshram hu mai b …
      Dekho phir se karri hu…
      Oh nt again pir shuru hogai na mai …
      Ok bieee
      Luv uh loads

    • Saby

      |Author

      Zikra zikra zikra?????
      Omgggggggggg omggggg omg?
      Tu sachi mere Jedi hai?
      Jalii kahiki?
      Dramaqueen?
      Chatterbox? (my colleagues call me that)
      And maru tuje kya…..
      Mein bhi pagal hu puch q rahi hu mein
      Usme puchna kya
      Ek kheech k lagaugi na tumhare face pe waterballon k zor ka zatka lagega
      Pata hai q…..
      Pagal uh silly girl
      Socha bhi kese mein tera comment scroll kar dugi huh…..
      Dumbo I love ur comment very much
      And for ur kind info I m habitual to ur long comment……?
      Ur every word means a lot to me…..?
      Love uh so so so much darling….???

      • zayb_zikra

        M sry yaar…
        Ur rply brought a million dollar wali smile on my face…..?????????❤❤❤❤❤
        Luv u to d infinity yaarr….
        Uh r jusss amazing…..??????
        U donno u r jus osmmmmmmmm……?????
        Ws jus kidding babes …..????????
        Plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz maaf kardena plzzzzz?????
        Dekhliya mujhe na kahi se b bakbak shuru katne ki adat hai….
        Hehehhe lol…..????
        U donno my antics….???????
        Luv u loads…❤❤❤❤❤

      • Saby

        |Author

        Love uh 2 darling?
        And chal maaf kiya tuje….
        Tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi……
        Kitni achi frnd mili hai tube???

      • zayb_zikra

        Find bana liya..
        Dil Tod ditta tune mera ye ummed nahi thi tumse dii…?????????????????
        Main NE tumhe di mana tha par tumne….????????????????????
        Jao tumse baat nai karti mai….?????????????????

  13. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Awesome ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ as usual. I loved it nd one request plz dont let twinkle obey kunj. Let her do her modelling assignments nd wear mordren clothes. ….plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz its my last request . Paka plzzzzzzz

  14. misha

    it was owsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.i want to ask if you have an gmail id.plz we alll are your biggest fanssssssssssssssssss sooooo plz if you dont mind plz plz pl zplzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzgive us your email address plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz epi was awsome
    i cant express my feelings.
    i think should ask aobama how to express about this owsome feeling.
    you know what,your ff always cheer up my moooood
    plz try to post 3 4 every day
    plz plz plz
    think as jasmine bhasin aka twinkle is ordering you to post 3 4 everyday as she loves it soooo much.
    btw love it

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm misha?
      And wat uh will ask obama???
      rofl????
      Sunnnn….. Twinkle ka order huh?
      Twinkle ki bachi….. Muje yaha time kaam milta hai…. And tu is maasoom si bachi ko oder karte hue sharam nahi aati…..
      Love uh darling??
      Sho bad….. ?
      Just kidding babes but I seriously can’t….

  15. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    oh wow….amazing. ..don’t hv enough words…plz…koi muje words dund ke laado…im seriously speechless…jaldi se post kardo plz…plz…plz…

  16. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Extraordinary piece of writing……MATLAB twinkle ka attitude …uski dramebazzzi full on swing me the yar……meri toh hasi control hi nahi ho rahi thi…….. Aur for kunj ka devil gala mood chalu……
    Loved d epi …..love u and ur ff……keep smiling and keep writing

  17. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Yrr Saby …..hats off ….seriously if u r present me I would have bow down my head in front of u in terms of respect …batao bhala itna accha koi likhta hai kya ??…
    Tooo good yrr….amazing…. Saby u always stole my heart ….u nailed it ..
    I’m so happy to see Twinkle to rebel against him…it’s just starting slowly ; slowly the devil will also change …love u ….

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm sayu….?
      And yaar she has to rebel for her dignity
      And Kunj ko samajne k liye tysm
      Hint for uh…. He will remain devil but in a different ?
      Love uh so much?

  18. Dreamer...arundhati

    |Registered Member

    Saby…I m speechless..I was so happy while reading this..a big wali smile was adorning me whole time..hamme acknowledge karne keliye bahut bahut sukriya…muah..luv u
    Today’s epi was superfab..mast, fandu, amazing, marvellous, brilliant, to gud, dhamaks, extra ordinary, well expeesses, perfect.
    Thanks saby 4 giving us this wunnerful ff.
    Emotions r very well expresses.
    Ctd soon
    Loads of love.
    Keeo writing
    Keep smiling

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm aaru?
      Ummmmhaaaa love uh darling??
      Uh comment in fact each word from ur comment matters me so much?

  19. sonali

    osm epi…..really loved it to d core…
    saby seriously u r a fabulous writer dear….d way u express everything is just mind blowing sorry for late comment but what to do as yesterday I’m hell busy….
    & ya really very thanks for mentioning my name….thanks a lot & I’m so lucky that I got friend like u…love u…

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm Somali?
      I m so glad uh guys love my ff….so much?
      I m just giving my best?
      I m too happy to have uh lovely ppl as my readers….. Love uh darling?

  20. Lover

    |Registered Member

    maast nhi nhi jhakkas episode love it to the core. and thanks for mentioning my name.waiting for next one.

  21. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    oohh woww its out of d world…..ths is it..i jus want twinkle to shw d same tashan ……let her shw sm self respect…n yeah thnk u fr mentioning my name….i loved d episd waiting fr nxt…

  22. Romaisah

    U no saby .. You’re a drama queen ?????? and two crazyyy so much u love us?? Haa yaar ofc she has to :v 😉 anywhere amazing epi n can’t wait for ur next episode…

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm romaisah?
      And how do uh know that…..
      I hope uh r not spying on me….
      I know I m so preety….. And kindhearted
      Toh has to love uh all Darlos…..
      Plsshhhh wait for next epi….

  23. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Wow saby…
    Yeh Punjabi pataka aapne role me as he gaye
    But this kunj….omg he is terrible…
    Kitna possessive h yaar…
    But aabhi to real game start hua h…
    ❤❤❤

  24. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    fantastic episode…
    feeling bad for twinki
    ….but I just love ur story..a different story altogether..just loving
    continue soon..waiting for the next part

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm shreya?
      I guess uh r a new reader?
      Keep liking…. Glad that uh find it different
      Next epi will b updated asap

  25. Crazy

    |Registered Member

    This z d first episode I read f ur ff..
    Now tommo my exam
    N I m forced my my mind to read it from epi1..
    Really yar tunetho mera dil jeetliya…
    Wow indeed keep.up d work…

  26. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved the episode and feeling sad for Twinkle hope she does not leave her job her modelling Waiting for the next episode

  27. Apoorwa

    |Registered Member

    saby i had read your last 3 episodes 3-4 times i loved them shoooooooooo much
    and tune mujhe aur dikhao aur dihao ki lat lag wa di
    sorry i can’t able to comment in all as my school had started and you already know how much homework we get but i promise i will comment when available
    frankly speaking that i read your ff first then all others
    it make soooooooooooooooooooo impatient

    • Saby

      |Author

      Apoora darling tysm?
      I didn’t knew my ff is ur 1st priority and uh wait for it so eagerly…. ???
      And its all ok… Do comment when uh r able to?
      Love uh lots??

  28. Happiness

    |Registered Member

    Hey saby , I was a silent reader till now bt now enough is enough …. u r damn gud I don’t have words…. plz post the next one now it’s 4 today plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

  29. Saby

    |Author

    guys having some personal issue…. cant upload, not filling well…. i will try to post asap…. plz understand guys…. love uh all,….. miss me

  30. Jwala

    |Registered Member

    superb dear.. take your time for updating dear.. and loving devil kunj.. don’t make him good soon.. god bless you. tc

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