I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (last part)

recap: arohi is miffed with the family and twinkle calls her and she has a big curve on her face seeing twinkle……………..

a: maasi…. (runs and hugs her)
t: hey my baby… (composes from the hug and cupps her) purvi is cuming… so uh also get ready… we are getting late na… the function is starting at evening so get ready fast….
a: sure maasi… (gives a peck on her cheeks and runs… to her room and mahi and luv follows her)

next scene
a big theatre is been decorated as a newly wedded bride… the lights… the voice of the fans howling… the talks of the reporters… the red carpet indicates there is a premeire of a new movie… a big car streched like a mercides… gets stop at the gate… the director of the movie comes out and walks inside the theatre answering some reporters he gets in… the line is unstopabble… many celebrities getting along the red carpet… and entering the theatre…. but the crowd is waiting for someone else… and here she comes… the diva, the angel mrs. twinkle…. with his handsome co-star mr. sidhant gupta. they walk hand in hand in the red carpet and get sorrunded by many reporters and the anchors gautam gulati(g1) and gauhar khan(g2) stop them to hav a chat with them…
g1: twinkle… oh god… uh hav flattered me by ur killer looks… (and every1 giggles)
t: aww! gautam i m blushing uh see… (winks at him)
g2: good evening sidhant… uh looking smart, dashing in this suit… the blue tie is just cherry on the cake…. so both of uh excited for ur first ever movie?
twihant: ya…

g1: are uh guys feeling nervous?
t: not at all gautam coz i know the movie is going to be the best… and my fans are going to love it..
s: i too think the same as the story writer is such talented… (side hugs twinkle)
g1: (towatrds camera) ya… the famous model mrs. twinkle is an all-rounder person… knowing all the ways to rule many hearts…
g2: yay… she is not only the lead actress in the movie… but
g2: but but but….. (pause) she is also the story writer of this movie…. (people hawl…)
s: yes twinkle…. the janta… the fans want to know, from wer do uh get so much talent… we hardly have one… (laughs and hifi’s gautam)
t: its just that i m god’s masterpiece… (winks at them smiling)
g2: ohhh….
g1: lets go inside…. the grand priemere is waiting for the sensations…. twink and sid… all the very best
they both have hugs with them and get inside hand-in-hand….

all take their seats… kunj is seating with thire family and twinkle is seating ahead with sidhant and the movie starts……. the title slides down…. with a music…..
“the wish to become urs forever”
casting twinkle & sidhant….

the movie starts and all are deeply engrossed in the movie… the story revolved around a simple girl struggling to make her dreams come true… to become a singer… in this struggle she meets a funloving.. and rich carefree dude… who helps her throughout her journey and to fulfill all her dreams… the girl and the boy had a secret love for one-another which no1 spoke to each other… in fear of losing the other person and their friendship…. many difficulties and hardships she suffered to become a singer as she was a poor girl but the boy help her throughout and was like a shadow of hers… after the girl becomes the most popular singer and in the climax… the girl and the boy sitting on the terrace and finds a falling star… the boy immediately closes his eyes and wishes sumthing…. the girl laughs at his innocence… “oh god…. again the same thing… i told uh na that this all is just superstitions, wishes cant be fulfilled by this…” boy stares at her innocent laugh… and says, “ i know one day god will definitely fulfill my wish” the boy standsup and turns to get inside the room…

the girl “acha tell me, wat is that wish” the boy stops… and closes his eyes… his heart starts beating faster… the girl is standing behind him well he is facing his back to her….
“ the wish to become urs forever” the boy speaks… and the turns to face the girl and…. he sees that she is having a big million-dollar smile on her face and before he cud say anything else she pulled him closer and grabbed his lips into hers giving a passionate liplock….. and story ends and well as the movie…
kunj is not able to control his anger and he leaves from there…. twinkle notices him going and follows him…
kunj is about to sit in his car wen he gets surrounded by a group of reporters….
r1: mr. kunj sarna… wat are ur views regarding the film?
r2: how was ur wife’s acting?
r3: wat are ur views regarding ur wife’s and mr. sid’s bond?
r4: uh r awarded as the best entrepreneur this month do uh think ur wife is going to get awarded as the best actress this month?
r5: how do uh support ms. twinkle in her carrear?
k: (lil loud) she is mrs… not miss…

just then twinkle comes out with sid as they were searching for kunj and reporters run towards them and kunj escapes from them in his car… he is very angry… his eyes is blood red… the only thing flashing infront of his eyes is the kiss…. twinkle kissing sid… he drives to his farmhouse…

sid and twinkle attends the reporters and sid asks twinkle to leave and he will handle the people… twinkle agrees and asks jas to stay with him…and family… twinkle follows kunj and finds he is driving to the farmhouse…

kunj slams the door and gets inside his room and twinkle reaches the gate and hears the sound of the door and bites her toungue… “oh god mela malai chaap so much angry today?” she opens the door of the room and finds kunj standing in the balcony… kunj is nit aware of her presense she walks to him and backhugs him…

“aww mele malai chap ko kya hua?” “nalaj hai mujshe kya?” kunj jerks her away and enters the room and twinkle follows him just then her phone rings its sid… twinkle attends the call and kunj is angry as he was jealous of sid… twinkle on phone, “ya sid don’t wrry i got him, dnt wrry mera malai chap muje choke kahi nahi jayega i know” sid says ok and cuts the call but twinkle smirks as she could feel his handsome hubby feeling jealous about his co-star, she starts acting “acha toh vo chalagaya toh tu haina sid…” “aww… uh like my lips so much that uh were busy gazing at it throughout the premiere?” and bits her lips… and winks at herself and smiles within… kunj couldn’t control his anger now and makes her face him by her arm and snacthes her phone and slams it at the wall…. and holds her arms and pinns her to the wall…. and yells… “uh are mine twinkle just mine” twinkle stares his deep red eyes and feels guilty for wat she did… before she could speak anything… he smashes his lips on her lips and kisses him wildly… sucks it harder and deepens the kiss again and again… he bites her lips which make her moan…”kunj”…

he holds her by waist and and turns her to face the wall and tear her clothes and starts sucking, kissing and bitting her back wildly… he squizzes her waist and belly and is hold is so wild like a hungry animal… but twinkle is enjoying his torture without any pain… she is in comfort with his wildness… kunj turns her with a jerk and diggs his head on her neck and strts kissing and sucking there… his one-hand is squizzing the curves of her body and other hand is tearing the cloth from her body… twinkle’s eyes are clossed and feeling his touch… infact his tortures and her one-hand is busy carasseing his hairs and the other hand is digging the nails on his back…

twinkle pushes him on the bed… kunj smiles naughtily and holds her by her waist… she leans on him and he squizzes her waist with one hand and pull her more close by his other hand on her neck… twinkle is ontop of kunj and starts unbottoning his shirt… and kunj rotates her under him and throws his shirt away and leans down at her and finally gets her cloth out of her body… twinkle pulls him close by his neck and he again starts attacking her like a wild devil and consumate once again….

after 2 hours
twinkle pushes kunj beside her… and kunj has a shocked expression lying next to her… both are inside a blanket….
t: oh my god! (breathing heavily) are uh trying to kill me or what…? (still breathing heavily)
k: arrey… what i did? (facing her… still lying beside her)
t: hwww… what uh did? let me show uh what uh did… (she starts uncovering her side of blanket to which kunj is having a naughty smile… but before only she realises her state and covers herself again with the blanket and makes i-will-kill-uh-wala look to kunj)
k: (controlling his smile and pressing his lips) allley wat happen to my rashmallai…? (comes close to her) show me… wat were uh showing… (with a naughty smile)

t: tumna…. tummm (takes a pause… and thinks something)
k: (cuts her) kya mein kya… huh… (leans at her by the sides and both are now sleeping in the hugging position, and twinkle holding twinkle’s hands and pulling her more close to him… they are still inside the blanket only)
t: uh…. uh na….. uh r a devil….
k: ya…. i m the devil…… i m the devil of my angel……
both smiles and touch their heads smiling…..

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hey lovely people…..…
i m the devil of my angel…
my nightmare… which i potryed to uh all in the form of this story…..
i m glad uh all loved it so much and supported me throughout with all your lovely comments… but i was not able to reply to uh all… even i tried to but lack behind of time… in one of my comment sombody mentioned once that, “i pray to god to give saby 25 hrs in place of 24 hrs of the day” i seriously need that now….
ohhh my god… uh know sooo many mysteries and twists and turns still cooking up in my mind, but i m not able to convey it to uh this time… but assure uh to comeback with those ideas in my next ff….
and my lovely friends…

1. do tell me how was the journey of “i m the devil of my angel” throughout?
2. and try and remember guys, uh are forgetting something…. which date is today? huhhh telll?
[note: zikruuuu i m missing ur comment] do comment… its my last post……

hum toh aaye the ff padhne….
jane kabhi dost ban gaye….
love uh alllll sooooo muchhh….

69 comments

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm kavina…..
      And don’t b sad… I will surely comeup with season 2 with sidmin…. Their part is remaining for a reason😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm kiara…😘
      And once again saying this…
      I just love ur name…. 😍😍
      Will miss uh too… And comeup with season 2 with sidmin😊💓

  1. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY SABY!!!!! Don’t think I forgot! This ff was hands down one of the best ffs i ever read. Idk how u do it, but u have some serious talent and creativity in u. Idk what to say right now. I am at a lack of words. I loved this ff to the core and i still love it from the bottom of my heart, and I will always love it. U ARE AMAZING!!!!! I will be eagerly waiting for ur comeback and how u bring life to Twinj once again through ur writing. And Happy Birthday once again!!!🎉😊 Ab dost bol liya, then u have to come back with a dhamakdhar ff!

    • Saby

      |Author

      Sara….. Sara sara…..💕💕💕
      Ya uh didn’t forgot….😊
      I m so happy…. 😊
      Tysm for liking the ff sooo much…😍😍
      I too love urs this way only… and today’s epi was a bday treat for me from uh… Twinj together again… Awww sho shweet😍😊
      And and and… Uh r not less meri jaan… Uh too write mindblowing…. 😘
      Tysm for bday wishes…. And surely I m comeback with a big bang… Of sidmin’s story…. The season 2….
      Loveuh shoooo much😍😍😘

  2. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Sabyyyyy dii!!! You’re backkkkkk yaay .. So happy you’re gonna be back with another ff !! 💓💓💓
    And ofc i enjoyed this story of ‘im the devil of my angel’ the entire concept was just fabb 👌👌👌 i dont have words yaar!! 😁😁😁😁
    Btw hmm..?? Is it ur bday? If so happyyy birthdayy diiiii
    I hope im right 😂🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 enjoyy to the max yaar may god fulfill ur every wish! 🙂 🙂 .. Haa i want cake 😄😄😄 👌😂😂
    Enjoy your day dear… Btw u on twitter?

    • Saby

      |Author

      Roma…. Darling….😘
      Tysm to love my crazy journey of kunj’s wildness…. 😈
      And I m glad uh loved it throughout….😊
      And dnt b so confused….ya its my bday…
      Tysm for ur wishes.. .😊😍😍
      Love uh dear😍😘😘

  3. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Awesome ending saby!!!..but i will miss this ff a lot😟..if possible plz try to come up with a new ff..n btw is it ur bday???i really didn’t know..happy birthday 🎉🎉..may this bday be ur best ever!

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm fan😘
      And dont wrry darling… I will soon comeup with season 2…. Damn excited for that…
      Waiting for vacations….
      And ya its my bday….😊
      Tysm for wishes though.😍
      And love uh dear😘😘😍

  4. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Saby,
    Though I wished you at 12 itself but, here you go once again. A very happy birthday to you! Hope you’ve a great day and an amazing year ahead. Stay blessed.
    Well, the episode was amazing. I was awestruck after reading it. Aww..jealous Kunj is so cute. I loved it.
    This entire journey was really a memorable one. It was one of my favourite ffs. Hope you get to come back soon.
    Loads of love and wishes.😘
    Your Riu.

    • Saby

      |Author

      Riuuuu meri chum…😊😊😊
      Firse wishing…😄
      Koi baat nahi…. Or ek baar… Wishes…
      Ty ty ty ty ty soooo much😍😍
      I m sooo happy…. Uh loved and enjoyed the ff throughout…. Loveuh soo much😍😍😘😘

  5. Ranabulbul

    |Registered Member

    Ummmmmmmmmm
    Aj jyada senti beaten nhi bolungi ok

    Pehle epi
    Its was a fan di I loved it to the core
    I loved ur description ur way of portraying romance all was a blast

    Ur journey in tu is so good and I am damn sure ke app use bhi aache ff ke sath wapis aaoge ya phir isika season 2 of jas and sid as their story is incomplete in this ff hopefully

    And all the best for ur future and I will be in contact with u

    • Saby

      |Author

      Bulbul…..😄😄
      Ya no-need of senti’s today😉
      Jaan…. So glad to hear such words… and uh enjoyed the journey throughout
      Very very very happy…..😊😍
      And ya I m surely coming with season 2 with sidmin… It was just a promo over here… As one actor does in chemio role to promote its upcoming serial… In DAT way… Their story is much big then twinj…
      Wait for season2 …. And love uh dear somuch😍
      Do stay in touch….😘😘😘

  6. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Many more happy returns of the day saby…I dint forget your birthday…may God bless you and fulfill all your wishes…have a blissful day dear 🎉🎊🎈🎁🎂🍫 The journey of I’m the devil of my angel was awesome mind blowing amazing fab flawless and what not…I loved each and everything of this ff the story characters your way of writing everything was just beyond heights of awesomeness…I’m very sad that you ended this ff one of my favorite ffs…but I’m happy that your coming back with a new ff…you will be missed like hell saby…come back soon with a bang…once again many more happy returns of the day dear…

    Take care…
    Have a nice day…
    Love you tons😍😘❤

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm dear….😍😍
      Ya… Uh didn’t forget…😊
      Thanks for wishes…😘
      And so many compliments…. Ufff me kahi praises se pagal na ho jau….💜💜
      I m on cloud9,,,,💓💓
      And don’t b sad… Soon coming back with a bang and season 2 with sidmin…. 😍😍
      Love uh soooo much nd lot and lot….😘😘

  7. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Didn’t forget di…happy happy happy happy birthday….well thanks for the treat yaar,,…..love you shooooo much, many many happy returns of the day..sorry can’t give long comment studying

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm Angita😍😍😍😍
      And I m glad uh loved this treat….
      See I m so shellfish… Extended and uploaded it today only that uh all cn wish me….😊😉
      Thanks for wishes… And atb dear….
      Loveuh so much😍😘

  8. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Happy birthday saby epi was asusual amazing awesome yaar
    Loved all the scenes love u also
    Amazing ending enjoyed ur journey alott
    Thanks for giving us this cute ff saby
    And I am soo much happy that u will come back with new ff just waiting for it yar
    Zyada time mat katana plshh
    Love u loads 😘😘😘😘😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Sam….
      Thank you sooo much…
      And I m glad uh loved this ff…
      And seriously uh find it cute? Ohh good…
      Actually I m seriously happy to see all ur wishes… And so sorry not able to comment on ur ff… And congratulate uh too… For completing 50 epi…
      Vese sam… 😉 can I tell uh sumthng
      I m jealous of uh… Uh completed 50 epi… I alshooo wannnted to dooo thattt….😭

      Just kidding… Don’t take me seriously…
      Love uh humesha…. And ur ff toh tumse bhi zyada… And jaan… Will miss uh…
      So will have to come as soon as possible
      And tysm for the wishes …😘😘😘

      • Sameera

        |Registered Member

        Hahaha yeah ur ff is so cutee saby n don’t get jealous next ff me golden jubilee poori kar dena 😘😘😘
        Love u too hamesha 😘😘

  9. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Happy birthday saby diiiii
    Throughout the journey of I devil of my angel ummmmm I enjoyed it a lot I miss you and will be waiting for your next ff I just loved this and yeah agar ho sakhe toh appko ek din mei 25 hours mil jaya
    I love u dii awesome

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm thanmy😘
      I m so happy to hear uh and enjoyed the journey…
      I will also miss uh and… Will soon come with season2… Plshhh wait…till my vacations and my comeback
      And sachi…. I want 25hrs yaar….
      Loveuh too….😘😘😘

  10. Rashiverma2199

    |Registered Member

    Hey Saby….happy birthday🎁🎁🎁🎁
    Ending was superb….
    Ur ff is one if the best…I so love it….its the best….awesomeness reloaded…..
    Treat toh banti hai🍻🍻🍺🍺🍰🍰🎂🎂

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm rashuuu😘😘
      I m toh so much happy to knw its ur fav one…. Bt also sad that I have to end it…
      But will cone soon with season 2 pakka …
      Bt in my vacations…
      And wat treat uh need huh… This was the only treat wch I cud giv uh on my bday

  11. Purnima.agrawal30

    |Registered Member

    Happy birthday saby……awesome amazing fabulous marvelous romantic cute epi…..loved it….Will miss you & your ff very much…..plzzzz agr ho sake toh come soon….

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm purnima😘
      I know uh gonna miss this ff…
      And I will surely do my best to come as soon as I cn…. In my vacations…

  12. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    How can we forget tdy’s date saby…..A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY SABY🎁🎂🍰💕

    Ur ff was probably d first one to show Kunj in a grey shade……each and every epi of ur ff was a masterpiece……ur ff was one amongst the best ones…..i throughly enjoyed reading each and every part of ur ff
    Hoping to see u back soooon
    Love u 💗💗😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Ty so much Kruti😘😘
      For the wishes. And liking the epi asusual

      I m glad uh remembr I was the first to shw a grey shade Kunj… And I knw… With Hw much hesitation I posted my 1st epi… And was glad uh all loved Kunj in grey shade too…..
      I will surely cone back soon….
      And love uh too😘

  13. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY SABY DI LOVE YOU 🙂
    Loved the episode
    Kunj jealousy Loved it and I have enjoyed the journey of I AM THE DEVIL OF MY ANGEL Love you Saby di
    waiting for you to comeback with a new ff
    Love you Di 🙂

  14. Shakti

    Happy Birthday..!Saby…
    And thanks for Such a beautiful piece of Word-Work which is no less than a Masterpiece..

  15. Srija

    |Registered Member

    amazing 👏👏👏👏👏
    what a superb ending 😘😘😍😍
    i used to read ur each and every updates
    but i know i haven’t commented every time
    and i’m really very sorry for that 😖😖😖😖😖😖
    but please come up with another ff soon we will miss u
    love u 💗💗💗😘😘😍😍😍😘😍😍💗💗💗💗😊😍😍😘😍😍😘😊😊😊😊💗💗💗😘😍😍

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm srija😘
      I was seriously in ahurry he to end… And I cameup with such idea…
      I m glad uh liked the end…
      Its ok dear… If uh haven’t commented… I undrstnd….
      I will come soon with season2…
      And will miss uh and love uh too😘😍😍

  16. Srija

    |Registered Member

    and sorry sorry i forgot to say
    A very happy birtday dear👏👏👏😍😍😍👏👏🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐

  17. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Saby meri jaaan…..what I’m going to convey to u now ; u will find it quite weird nd think that I’m telling a lie to u but trust me I’m each nd every single word is true….

    First of all once again a very very very HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U 💝😘😍💕💖💓💗💞💝💟👏🎈🎆🎀🎁🎂🎏🎇🎍🎉🎊🎋…… Though I wished u at 12 only but wo personally wish krna tha TU ka bhi toh wish krna banta hai na… Kyu sahi kaha na maine….. I know u r nodding ur head in agreement to this but u also have an idea that ur Sayoo is always right 😂😂😂😂😉😉…

    So now coming to next…. U don’t have any idea when today in the morning I saw ur ff first of all I felt very happy that today is her bday nd she is giving a treat to all of us…. But the very next moment I was feeling so sad that this gonna be the last episode of my fav ff….. U gifted us with a amazing ff…. Ff writer….. Frnd… Moreover a sis like u nd for this all pearls of universe are less to thank u…. How much hard I try but I can’t express my love to u…. I will always remain indebted to u for making me so happy with each episode of ur ff….. Gonna miss ur ff badly….

    Tujhe nai miss krungi main….kyuki bahut jaldi u will be back with a bang on TU nd we both r already in touch with eo through WhatsApp….

    Love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo….. Much…….

    Finally I will always pray to Allah to keep u happy nd blessed throughout ur life….. May u always keep smiling forever…..
    😊😆😄😘😍💕…..

    Coz this episode was the last one so I thought to give a long comment… Sorry for making u bore with my talks…
    Haaaannn haaas lo tum 😂😂😂… Ye soch ke Sayoo madam nain aaj tak kabhi chota comment kara hai…. But kara hai maine sacchi… Last Wale episode main bada krna chahti thi lekin u know na my Hitler boss was dancing on my head so I wasn’t able to do so but today I finally did it…..

    Once again love u……..

  18. Sidhanshi

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY Saby!!! May god gives u all the happiness in u’r life… Keep writting like this always… Nd about the journey of the ff was superb, amazing, awesome, mindblowing, dhamakedar, bindas…. Loved it… This is my most fav ff till now… I will always remember it nd u to obiously…. Nd 1 request, if u can plz make it’s season2 nd come back… I will be waiting for u… I will never forget u nd don’t u dare to forget me u’r jabra fan… Ha ha ha… Always keep smiling yaar… Love u… Take care… Your jabra fan, Sidhanshi(Atushi)…

  19. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    Happy birthday Saby..🎉🎊🎉🎊🎂🎂🎂
    May u get everything u want from life…

    Waise to we should’ve given you gift for ur bday..but u gave such an awesome gift to us by updating the last part…
    Was waiting for it from sooo long…
    Ur ff is one of the best ff here… I never ever in my wildest dream could thought of kunj to be a devil… And when I read ur first epi… I was like wow this is something really very different… I was soo curious to know the story…. And as I read it…. I fell more and more for it…..
    U know what…… U made me fall for a devil….😜😜….

    U are one of the bestest here….

    Gonna miss this….

    But yaaaay🎊🎉🎊🎉…..I am sooo happy that u are coming with a sidmin story ….
    Eagerly waiting for it….

    Luv u …❤😘
    Enjoy ur day

  20. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    first of all HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR SABY…may god giv u 25 hrs a day…lol…
    n abt d journey it ws fab strting frm d devil kunj to lovable kunj….i loved it alot..m gonna miss it badly…m waiting fr ur season 2 eagerly…hope dat wl b mr enjoyable dan dis…(hope kya m sure u hav a lot of treasures hidden)..plz cm bck soon…all d best fr ur studies…do well keep writing…

  21. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    I always feel y imaginative world always end. It may be movie stories or ffs. This tym also it happened nd i am feeling smeat bad bcz its one of my fav ff. I wish it never ended nd u know wat u want believe i am so imaginative dat half tym ill live in my own world only. I think about ffs nd think wat twist u may all can bring nd think different different ideas. I always get scolded fr it but still the same😜
    I will miss this ff alot i loved everything about this ff. Every single thing. I can’t explain how attached i was to it.
    I am waiting fr the day wen ull cm wid ur next ff wid the same magic nd I being living in my own world will think wat teinst ull bring😅🤔
    I love u jaan i am in contact wid u but ill miss u ur ff. I ll miss the way i used to disturb u to upload ur ff then used to ask 1000 srrys frm u. I used to disturb u , irritate u but u never got irritated. U always replied to me 😊 Thanks fr tolerating me always😀😄😀😄
    I loveeeeeeeeeeeeee u nd wait fr ur next ff. Hope u return back soon wid ur new ff
    Jaldi aana nahi toh naraaj ho jaaungi nd fir manana padega soch lo. I dont have an elder sister but i feel u r one one of my elder sister whom i can share things wid💕
    So plz return soon fr ur younger sis if u feel the same
    I can’t explain how emotional i am ryt , i am having tears in my eyes nd i feel like crying while writing this🙏🏻
    Plz do cm back soon
    Last but not the least its ur special day
    Happy birthday saby😘😘😘😘😘🎉🎉🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫
    Will wait fr u
    Last but not the least loveeeeeeeuuuuuuuuu💞💞

  22. Aamu

    |Registered Member

    saby..saby…sabyyy………hayee yaar tumne to kamaal kardiya…i was going to tell u to post ur epi but i thought dat today is ur bday…………..so u will definately post n my guesss is right u had posted…………
    ur ff was a journey from where i start to cmnt….i started cmnting on ur ff ……
    pehle epi se hi mera dill tujh par or tere ff par aagayaa thaaa……
    tussi great ho.. started writing cmnts…fanfiction…..
    n dis story was ur nightmare…aha muje to aisa kuch nightmare aata hi nahi….but is great dat u write from ur heart….woh kehte hai naa “d best teachers teaches from heart not from any book”simmply goes to u…meri jaan
    u r my teacher…my inspiration…..d best award of d ffs till w goes to”SABY” D BDAY GIRL BEAUTY WITH BRAIN N HEART….
    yaar will miss u shooo mucch…dat i cant speak
    I WILL MISS U D WAY
    U WRITE FANFICTION
    I WILL MISS U D WAY
    U COMMENT
    I WILL MISS UR
    SWEET SHI TALK
    I WILL MISS U
    UR FF
    SHOOOOOOOO MUCH
    jaldi see aaana …der naa lagana
    zara dhyaan me rakhna ki ham abh jee rahe hai meri jaan
    aha mene kuch zyaada nahi likh diya
    but koi ni aaj tumhara bday hai or tumhaara ff kaa last din
    ab me jo likhungi woh tumbhi jaanti ho or me b ki yeh lines google baba ki hai but from my heart….it means alot
    “tum jiyo hajaar saal
    or saal ke din ho hajaar”
    happy birthday again my dear sissy cum bestie
    sirf yehi lines google baba ki thi upar wali meri invention thi
    bahbye….aaj bohot bakbak kar liya 15 minutes to yahi nikal gayi

  23. fatima

    heyy saby dii
    it was just awesome
    I loved it so much..
    and yaa I m sad as my favorite ff ended today..
    but nevermind I will wait for ur next one..
    and yaa the whole journey of I M THE DEVIL OF MY ANGEL..
    was amazing..superb…mindblowing..best…
    no words to describe..
    love uh di..

  24. fatima

    and ya I m so sorry..
    I forgot to wish u..
    A VERY VERY HAPPYWALA BIRTHDAY TO U..
    MAY GOD BLESS U AND UR ALL WISHES COME TRUE

  25. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    happy birthday saby…may god bless u…ur ff was just an amazing one…loved it like mad…plz come soon with season 2..it was one of the best ff I hv ever read…ur amazing. .btw is it u in ur dp???..if its u then ur so cute…wish to meet u someday…love u n will miss u bad…

  26. Meeta

    Heyy, jaan.
    A very happy birthday to you.
    hows yaa?
    Aapka pata nhii but the episode was a sweet n sour soup.
    so tasty to drink more of it.
    i have 3 worlds- Normal world, Volleyball world n the TU world.
    The journey throughout was such blissful moment of the TU world.
    I like ur writing skills like heaven n hell together.
    thanks for being such a great friend.
    Love yaa.
    biee.

  27. ADINA

    first of all happy bday sabyy…….. and and and plz dont end it plz it was just suuuuuupppeeeerrrbbbb…caant tellu

  28. SidVee

    Superb ending.. loved it.. and many many happy returns of the day.. Happy Birthday 🎂.. though I wasn’t commenting from first, I’ve always loved ur ff and ur writing skills.. ur ff is one of the best I’ve rest.. will you come up with ” I am a devil of my angel season 2″?? If yes I will surely be waiting for it 🙂 and if that’s you in your dp then I must say that ur very beautiful 🙂

  29. dreamer..arundhati

    Happy b’day saby di…I was missing u like hell….the journey u took us on was truly incomparable….masterpiece. .unique
    Di luv u..may god bless u with all the happiness of the world….
    I m speechless. ?.I m gonna miss u badly..hope to see u soon…waiting for ur return. ?.luv u di

  30. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂
    HAPPIEST BIRTHDAY SABY!!!
    Bhagvan kare aap aase he aache aache ffs likhte rahi
    😘😘😘😘😘😘
    It was really Amazing …meli rasgulla🍨🍨🍨…
    Rasgulla nahi mila iss liye aap ISSI se kaam chala lo😂😂😂😂😂
    Love u shoooo much Saby
    Plzzz jaldi aana
    With a dhamakedar entry
    ❤❤❤❤❤
    Yaad rakh na mera dil aapne pass h
    Not make it wait❤😘😘😘😘

  31. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Saby di…meli pyali pyali Saby di
    Maine kal raat ko hi wish kr dia tha I kno
    Pr b’day toh aaj hai
    Toh wish toh aaj krna chahiye na?
    Isiliye baddaaaaa waallaaaaa HAPPPPPYYYYYYYY BIRTHDAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Uh are really an Angel….an angel more beautiful than Twinkle….and uh will have ur devil soon😉
    Bachhi bigad gayi na?😜
    Aur aapka status haye! Pehle Auntiyaan phir unke Bete!😂
    Achha abb aapke FF ki bhi thodi si tareef kar hi doon…
    Maine padhna shuru kiya tha episode 10 se…sach bol rhi hu…usske pehle maine chhua bhi nhi tha…sholly sholly…I was never very much into TwiNj…abb I’m cmpltly into TwiNj!!! And if uh remember….my first comment on ur 18th episode! Haye mera comment cute tha na😇
    Khud hi ki tareef kar rahi hu! Uh kno jab aapne mere OS pe comment kiya tha na…I was one of the happiest girls on the Earth! Imagine karo…ekk angel mere writing ki tareef ke rhi hai! Mko kitti khushi hui thi…
    Uff abb to ff ke baare mei bol du
    Aapke ff mei…
    Love, anger, passion, revenge, regret, care, pain, sadness, happiness, cuteness….
    Sabki bauchhar thi…
    Uff I loved every episode….abb mai kiske ff ke liye wait krungi? Kiske ff pe roz comment krne ke liye mari jaungi?😢
    Aur aaj ka episode…the last episode…haye…romance overloaded…jealousy…*ahem ahem*
    Ye batao di SidJas ka kya hua? Unka patchup kya aapka bhoot karwayega? Achha shuno shuno…b’day cake to meko nii mil raha…aap boooot doool ho na..
    Toh ekk kaam karo…treat mei isske Epilogue post kro…
    Arey mko pata hai ki aap bohooot busy ho…
    Tabhi toh keh rhi hu…jab free ho tab karo
    Aur khud ko zyada stress mat karao…uh seriously need some rest….grp mei bhi online nii aa rhe ho….pehle padhai karo…phir rest karo…
    Aur jldi se naya ff leke aao…
    Will misshhh uh n ur ff…once again lots of lovely b’day wishes aur badddiiiii waliiiii jhapppiiiiii with lots of kishies….muaahhh
    Love uh till eternity….even beyond eternity😘

  32. Shamz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Saby,
    Once again happy b’dae to you….
    Bar bar din yeh aaye
    Bar bar dil yeh gaaye
    Tum jiyo hazaaroo saal
    Hai meri yeh aarzooo
    Happy B’dae to you
    Happy b’dae to you
    He he!!
    Happy B’dae to you…..
    And about the epi it was fantastic… Sorry for not commenting on ur previous epis…but really loved it to the core.. Hope to see ur ff soon with a bang!!!!
    And I won’t miss u at all becoz we’re friends and friends don’t miss each other becoz they r in each others heart….and always be in touch wid each other…..
    Happppyyyyyyyyyyyy b’dae once again…..

  33. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Hey saby !!!!!!!!
    First of all sorry I know I’m late but BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙
    I KNOW U DON’T KNOW ME BUT I HAVE JUST STARTED COMMENTING ON TELLY UPDATES N I HAVE READ UR ALL EPI
    I REALLY WANTED TO APPRECIATE THAT U R A GREAT WRITER
    THE JOURNEY OF I’M A DEVIL OF MY ANGEL WAS AMAZING
    THE EMOTIONS
    THE HATRED
    THE LOVE
    THE CARE
    THE PAIN
    THE FRIENDSHIP
    ETC ETC ETC………………..WAS EXPRESSED SUPERBLY
    I JUST HOPE THAT U GET ALL HAPPINESS COZ THE HAPPINESS U GAVE US WAS WORDLESS CAN’T BE DESCRIBE 😙😙😙😙🙄😙🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
    I’M GONNA MISS U SO MUCH
    UR FF WAS THE FIRST ONE FOR WHICH I USED TO WAIT ALL THE TIME
    I USED TO CHECK TU N WISH THAT NOW IT WILL BE UPLOADED SHE MUST HAVE UPLOADED
    LOVE U😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙

  34. Baby

    |Registered Member

    hey saby di
    happpppppppppppppyyyyyyyyyy birthday to u
    di may god bless u n shower all d love n blessings on u
    di d episode
    oh my god so hell romantic n wild as well
    osm
    speechless
    fabulous marvalleous
    adorable
    love
    pain
    emotional
    care
    trust
    n evrything was dere in dis journey
    i really luvd d ff di
    it was jst fab
    i stilll remember d strting it ws lyk in d future n twinkle was crying bcz of d torture she hd 2 face by kunj on d first nyt
    i jst remember evry mnmnt n evrything of urr ff
    i luvd it 2 d core
    n ll b w8ing fr ur nxt stry didu eagerly w8ing
    luv u sooooooooo mch n a very very
    happy birthday to u di agn
    ii srsly to b said
    didu ur ff was always romantic wild n use to luve it hehehe

  35. sujina

    Saby, sry sry sry Happy Birthday 2 u….
    may all ur dream n wishes comes true…u get all d happiness…love u 2 d infinity 2 d power of infinity….n ur ff is blast…i m ur huge fan…n come wid new ff 4 sure…take ur tym n i’ll b w8in 4 it….

  36. Dolly

    Hey happy birthday dear
    I love ur ff alot
    U r ending it so soo
    Bt i hope u will cme with new one
    N srsly I love ur ff alot
    N I’ll miss u alot
    I’m big fan of urs
    Happy birthday

  37. Paavu

    |Registered Member

    Happy birthday saby sissy look beautiful I pic and I m just vry sad as my favourite no no most favourite no no more than taht ff is ending pls sissy change ur decision if possible or bring a new ff with story which would be beautiful like this

  38. Priya_

    |Registered Member

    Happy b’day saby…
    Episode hot hai boss..
    Really sad that u have to end it..
    Hoping that u come back with a bang..
    So sorry that I commented so lately

  39. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Saby,
    Happy birthday dear… god bless you with all happiness n good health…ur ff was fabulous, amazing…come back soon

  40. manu

    Saby diiiiiiiiiii the epi is amazing sry didn’t commented acutally family problem and ya what an epi yrrrrr but how can u do this last part yr it is my fav ff plz pplz plz di don’t do this and ya a very very very very belated happy birthday sry I am very late to wish u shoollyyyy and ya hope to see u soon lovely epi love u didu……

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