swasan ff: lusty don


hi, guyss im sara im new here i was a silent reader but now i’ll try to comment on all stories… i hope u will like my concept

Sanskar Meshwari: age 29…. a very cruel don.. but not only kills ppl but alsoo he kidnaps the girls and use them for their lust… in other words he is a bad man overall..having a family but they lives in abroad… and they dont know about his this side.. they only thinks him a s a business man but in real he is a cruel don who kills other business man..

Swara gadodia:- age 18.. clg going student from a middle class family… loves her family alot but at a same time a very shy and scared kitten type girl… she dont like who kills innocent ppl… she dont like ppl who dont have heart…

the one the speaks only in the language of bullets how will he be able to speak by using his tongue to whom who will become his life butt after satisfying his cruel lust??…

the one only only knows how to speak sweetly how will she be able to talk to the person in his own language??

swara becomes don’s victim accidentally…

but its not like other stories in which don become mesmerized after seeing the girl… it is only and only lust… of using girls like a tissue ppr..

a sweet only 18 yrs old girl faces the cruel world.. when she only knows the sweet side of the world…

cruel man will fall on the feet of that person whose soul is killed by only him….

its not a simple story in which a don will like a girl and kidnaps her..

it is not a simple story in which girl will fall in don’s love and change him…

the major part of the story is depends on only lust of a person…

what will happened when his family comes to know about his this deeds??

who will pay for whom deeds??

soo guys tell me that u like the concept or not?? shall i continue or not?? i know im new here i just hope u all will welcome me warmly

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  1. Deeksha

    Interesting dear…..!!!!!!! Continue soon

  2. Sanswa

    M sooo glad dat u broke ur silency shell??…n wat a concept depicted tag line ‘Lusty don’…woaah?…just loved it…nw post nxt update soon..eagerly w8ing..?

  3. Waiting

  4. Interesting

  5. Jannatul.Nayma09

    Awesome n interesting
    Update soon

  6. Rosey

    amazing story yaar i cant wait to read it

  7. Rabia

    Interesting concept but i cant say that i will be able to read or not soo beat of luckk for future epis also andd welcome to tu ???

  8. Deeksha gupta

    Nyc …

  9. SNY

    Awesome dr…
    Plz continue …

  10. awesome…!!

  11. Srusti

    Very interesting concept and the title lusty don superb yaar firstly I surprised silent reader become a writer not bad yaar so good and about ur ff there is no doubt u should continue this one

  12. Swarmayi

    Awww.. what a lovely nd interesting concept dear.. mind blowing. I just loved it.. n ur title.. Goshhh.. It killed me yarr.. Lusty Don.. wowww.. keep it up.. I’ll pray fr ur successful episodes as u r new in tu.. best luck

  13. Abirsha

    Another don ff…. Nice dr…. Hope its different from others…. Continue it….

  14. Soujanya


  15. Wow..awsm…

  16. Pooja26


  17. IQRA222

    interesting concept
    and continue
    welcome in this ff’s paradice

  18. Arshaanya

    Continue soon

  19. SwaSanFan.Goldie

    Nyc..interesting..continue soon

  20. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Welcome to the tu as a writer dear…About storyline, it’s interesting dear…Plz continue..All the best for the further parts..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

  21. awesome intro,. continue

  22. NDSG


  23. interesting..

  24. Vyshu10

    interesting…..and welcome!

  25. Hi Sara……I’m Ritwika…..I’m was also a silent reader….BT after reading ur prologue i fill to leave a comment.
    I just love ur concept…….. Its very different…….. n i love different things…..so plz plz plz post soooooooon………plzzzzzzz…tack care…

  26. Interesting..

  27. omg Awsome prologue…amazing concept…would love to read further

  28. Awesome Sara Dr.. . Interesting concept m really eagerly waiting for he further updates…. and unique tittle i must say

  29. Anniya

    Ummm wow what an concept….
    And about title what say…
    Its totally unique……
    You can become amazing writer, you have all qualities…
    Plz pst first part as soon as possible can’t wait for seeing lusty don

  30. Chinna

    Interesting continue soon

  31. First of all welcome to tu….tu get a new family member……whhhooo..our family is increasing day by day??

    About concept must say….its nt only different bt also an interesting one…….continue it…..no doubt everyone will love it…….??

  32. Maryum

    Very intresting concept plz contnue

  33. Sweeta

    Not interesting it vv much interesting nd exciting. …waiting for nxt update

  34. Nice…

  35. Hadi

    Interesting concept post soon n be regular

  36. Go ahead

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