LUCKY CHARM (two shots by angel_pari) (Part-1)

Its a morning…..the fresh bright and new morning with a slight rain and chirping of birds and in that peaceful atmosphere a voice echos in the college of mumbai ”THE MOUNT COLLEGE”

Tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

(boy was sitting in garden large crowd has gathered around him,,,, his head was down but he slowly raise his eyes)

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

(and he caught the veiw of girl…. A girl in pink top and white tights..she was hugging her books and was looking at him only with a sweet smile….and when wind plays with her open hairs that veiw was enough for boy…most mesmerizing veiw…
Then he walks towards her

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

(and he stops just in front of her and stare at her with full right )

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde ishara

(and he sits on his knees before her )
(whole atmosphere has turned very smooth and romantic,,,so every one was dancing and that girl dance with another guy as that boy was holding guitar and standing in center…but their eyes were locked at each other)

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushbu se takraun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu..

(and when other guy spins the girl she just came infront of that boy so he give the guitar to boy and turn his hand around her waist and by other hand he holds her hand and sing)

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu..

(both were lost in each other now… deep eyes of eachother)

then whole crowd cheer for the most adorable couple of their clg who has just got engaged last night…..

And by the clap of crowd both came into sences and get apart then both got surrounded by their frnds… Girls surround suman and boys surround sharvan…but their eyes secretely look at each other
suman gestured sharvan to go with his frnds we will meet latter
so sharvan leaves with his frnds enjoying
so does suman leaves with girls…….
half day passed both were busy in their classess it was last class suman was free as her teacher was absent but sharvan was hving class so she thoughtt to wait for him in canteen and on her way she cross sharvan,s class and sharvan caught her as he was sitting in front suman smiles and gives him a flying kiss..sharvan,s eyes got widened and he smiles shaking his head…..
suman is sitting in canteen now holding a cup of coffee with both hands lost in thoughts……
Suman,s pov
it has been two years that sharvan has joined this clg…i never thought that we will be together as a couple…but destiny has written our names together…so we were supposed to be together no matter what….
That day changed my life when i was giving my presentation in auditorium hall and my eyes caught a veiw of a tall handsome guy standing at very last i had never saw him in our clg before. I wanted to look at him for long but then i avoid him and focuse on my presentation……and after presentation when i came out of hall some one called me from back ”suman”
i turned with confusing eyes our principal called me and that same guy was standing with him i walk towards them
”good morning sir” i said
”good morning” sir replied
and he introduce me with that guy meet him.. He is sharvan malhothra….he has studied in london but will continue his course here now he is 2 years senior to u and sharvan meet suman she is one of our intelligent and bright student of our clg…
I smiled and forwarded my hand towards him for hand shake he wrap his fingers around my hand”hello mr,sharvan welcome to our clg u can ask me whatever help u need.. my line was continue when period bell rang…
But after class as i,m getting late i wave my hand and rushed for class but dont know what make me look back at him and when i turned he was still looking at me with slight smile……
That was the first time when i meet a boy who was too calm and quite….

To be continue………..

Sooo how was it????? Arey arey relax i,m not gng to put pause on it as it is short story it will got complete in next shot……
And now the purpose of this story is
that my result of 12th standard are declared and i hv got 96% few marks less thn 1st ahhhhh ๐Ÿ™
but still i,m happy….and as my all frnds ask for treat then how can i forget my TU FRNDS so this is a small treat for my TU frnds ๐Ÿ™‚
and next part will be a eid gift till then tata ๐Ÿ™‚

but i really miss u all ๐Ÿ™


  1. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Wow!! Amazing!! Eagerly waiting for the next update!! Post it soon! And yeah congratulations… Can we be friends?โ˜บ

  2. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Di..!! Wow..
    I mean it was so beautiful..
    ‘Tere Sang Yaara’ hayye..
    Amazing one..
    Post soon..
    And 96% are not that bad.. Hum toh utne 8th mei bhi nahi la pate, you brought in 12th.. Congatulations..!!
    Post soon
    Love you !!
    Nikita ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Zainab

    Okay so first of all I can’t get over this sweetest thing I’ve read so far. This shot was truly amazing. I loved it to every bit of it. And then there was tere sang yaara… Ahh I love that song. Really enjoyed reading this. Waiting anxiously for the next shot. ๐Ÿ’œ
    Secondly congrats for such an amazing result ๐Ÿ˜˜ And thank you for the sweetest treat ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Btw where are you from and what’s your age (if you don’t mind telling that)??
    Loads of love. Take care and please post soon ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  4. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey pari api !!!!
    Well first of all many many manyyyyy Congratulations for ur success ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‡๐ŸŽ‡โœจโœจ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰โœจ๐ŸŽ‡๐ŸŽ‡โœจ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰โœจ๐ŸŽ‡โœจ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‡๐ŸŽ‡โœจโœจโœจ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠโœจ๐ŸŽ‡ May Almighty Allah grant u success in the yrs to
    come ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š ..
    Anddddd the shot … it was ammmmaaazzzzzzzziiiiiiinnnnnnngggggggggg ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Don’t hv enough words for ur praise .. seriously !!! Short of words .. I mean how can u .. not only u bt all the writers .. how can u all guyzz write sooooooo well .. if I intend to write this kind of story .. then it will take one year to think nd write such stories .. Seriously !!! m not joking at all … u guyzzzzzz r just amazinggggg .. Hats off to u guyzzzzzz … huge round of applause for u all ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Ooops I think mera comment zyada lamba ho gyaa ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ ..
    So in short u r jusssst amazing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Love you ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Post next shot soon ..
    Take care ..
    Nd best of luck for ur tests r exams that u r giving ..

    • Angel_pari


      Awwwwww my sweetoooo

      missed u yar!!!!

      And firstly sorry as i could not reply to ur cmnt on pre post..,,,.,,,

      thanku soooooo muchhhhh ur cmnt has taken me to cloud 9 (ahahaha i know now u will say that there is no cloud 9 but some how i manage to reach there ๐Ÿ˜› )

      and thanku sooo much for wishes stay blessed ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    First of all to congrats for ur result pari btw 96% is very excellent u r such a genious yarr and the ff was epic too good i really like it

  6. sona

    Lo… ki khushi mey..treat meru taraf sey bhi..๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽˆ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‡๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‡๐ŸŽ‡๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽˆ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽญ๐ŸŽญ๐ŸŽญ๐ŸŽญ๐ŸŽญ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽผ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽผ๐ŸŽถ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿง๐Ÿจ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿช๐Ÿช๐Ÿผ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿต๐Ÿต๐Ÿน๐Ÿท๐Ÿป๐Ÿป๐Ÿป๐Ÿญ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿณ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿฏ๐ŸŸ๐Ÿฑ๐Ÿฑ๐ŸŸ๐Ÿ๐Ÿž๐Ÿœ๐Ÿœ๐Ÿ•๐Ÿœ๐Ÿœ๐Ÿœ๐Ÿ•๐Ÿœ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿš๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ›๐Ÿฒ๐Ÿฃ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿก๐Ÿข๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿฅ
    And ha..tof fees bhi..๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿฌ
    ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šachi lagi..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    And about..the part of two shot… nice..simple and sweet like you๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  7. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww…Sooooo cute shot. The starting till ending was amiable. Just loved it beyond words….Sooo romantic…The guitar nd flying kiss were extra masala to spice the environment up. UHHHH it was fabulous. Wonderful…..Waiting for next part.
    Now, come to reality away from fiction. Congo girl!!! U Made it. 96%!!! See u r sooooooo smart nd awesome. Bight girl keep rocking hard. Stay blessed forever nd keep treating us like this. Keep partying nd enjoy!
    Love u alllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooottttttttttttt
    Huggies nd kissies
    Take care

    • Angel_pari


      A big huggy to u too sweet heart!!!!!!!!!!

      Awwwwwwwww thanku soooooooo much i,m glad u like my small treat!!!!!
      I,ll post soon ๐Ÿ™‚

      and thanks alot for wishes lov u loads and loads ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Pari di!!!
    This was beautiful….and my fav song!!!
    I loved this so much!
    And congratulations…96%!!!๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ
    No worries di…if u get less than 1st rank…rank is not imp…u worked hard is imp…
    And now u will go to college๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„
    Dnt wry…u will top in ur entrance test…
    I loved it
    I loved it
    I loved it so much…..
    Love uuuuu….๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Angel_pari


      Doll such a sweet suprise ๐Ÿ™‚

      and thanku sooooo much for wishes..ahhh yeah i hv to top in entrance… and i,m glad u like the part ๐Ÿ™‚

      lov u loads take care ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. pretty preeti

    Di it was. Supzrbbbb
    I loved it
    It ws took nice di lekin how r u
    Song tooooo gooooood
    96 % wow superb Congo di
    Itna nice gift thnx
    Hme bule nhi very giood
    Lenin aglA itni der bad
    Chal koyi na
    Love u
    Ur gift
    Love uuuuuuuuuuuuu

  10. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Wow…congratulations angel….!!!
    96%…that’s too good…
    U had worked so this was surely bound to happen…all d best for d upcoming exams…luv uuuu!!
    Coming to d epi..
    It was very sweet nd romantic…
    Loved it..
    Eagerly waiting..
    Plz plz post soon…
    Hugs nd kisses..
    Best wishes..
    Love u loads nd loads..

    • Angel_pari


      Awwwww thanku sooooooooooo much ws for such a sweet wishes a tight huggy from my side too…love u ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      and i,m sooo glad u like the part i,ll post soon ๐Ÿ™‚

      take care ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. Angel_pari


    Me fyn preeto!!! How r u….

    Awwwwww thanku sooo much for such a sweet gifts loved thm…. And love u loads my sissy ๐Ÿ™‚

    i,m glad u like the part ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. LogaMegan

    |Registered Member

    Hey pari awesome ep dr loved it
    Eagerly waiting for the next part so pls post soon
    And also pls post ur ff’s next part waiting for it
    Love u

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