MY LOVELY BIWI…AND HER LOVE STORY!!!- swasan FF(EPISODE-31)

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Hii everyone…!! How are you all??!!! Asusual…I am soon illegally…ready to get a punch from kakali 😛 !! Thank you…thank you…thank you soo much friends…for your lovely comments…!! I am soo soo sooo happy seeing your interest in my ff…!! Your comments always blow me up like anything…!!

Here is a long chapter…!! I hope it reaches your expectations…!! Fingers crossed…!! Criticism is most welcome…so that I would clarify and put up in next episode…!!

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Link to all episodes: Here
Link to previous episode: Episode 30

RECAP: Swara’s explaination about ragini’s marriage…!! Swara’s feelings about her marriage with sanskar…!! Swara coming to know about ragini’s love…and backing out…for a meet with laksh…!! Sanskar confronting swara…!!

SWARA’S POV:

“Should I answer her…that the person with whom she is in love with…is the same person for whom I had once developed my feelings??!!!” I shouted at the top of my lungs.
OOOH NOO!!! Did I just blurt out??!! Shit!! I myself am making situations awkward…!! I turned aside and as expected… found sanskar with enlarged eyes and O shaped open mouth…standing still…!!

“Sanskar!!” I tapped while calling him…and he came out of shock…!!

“What did you just say??!!” He asked…!!

I am confused…!! What should I do now??!! Should I let out my buried down secret past which I never shared with anyone??!! What if it worsens the existing conditions??!! I don’t know…!! May be I shouldn’t…!!

But… my heart wants to…!! It wants me to share it with sanskar…!! Yess!!! I want to tell him…but why??!! I myself don’t know…!! I don’t know what magic he does on me every time…due to which I share all my feelings…with him…!! He has almost become my personal diary in which I pen out all my things…!!

May be sharing with him…relieves all my stress waves out of my brain…which are currently roaming violently…!!

Letting out a deep sigh…I turned back Facing River…!! Closing my eyes…slowly I stated recollecting my past…!! Memories of 16 years old swara…in her boyish attire and bobbed hair cut…came to my mind…unknowingly making my lips curl into smile…!!

Flashback:

“BHARATIYA PROUDYOGIKI SAMSTHAAN DILLI (in hindi)
INDIAN INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY DELHI”

I read out proudly several times…standing at entrance…!!

“Swara…come fast…!!” called my father… who already crossed me and went inside…his eyes reflecting happiness…!!

Why wouldn’t he??!! After all… I am the first one among my relatives…no no…whole bhadi…who topped and got admission into best institute…for engineering…!! I can’t believe that I am now an IITAN…!!

But…the thing is… instead of such a big achievement…I have received funny unbelievable responses from bhadi people…!!

Half of them don’t know what IIT is…and some of them misinterpreted it as IIIT…!! But most idiotic response is people suggesting that there is no point of higher education for a girl…!!

Well!!! Keeping aside all these thoughts… I entered inside…with an excitement about my future…along with high hopes and lot of dreams…!!!

Only thing that didn’t reach my expectations is ragging!!! HELL with the movies…which showed ragging as a scary shit!!! There was nothing much pressure from seniors other than asking our introduction…!! May be there is a bit more intense ragging…for boys!!!

Being good at guitar and acting…I was inducted directly into music society, along with dramatics society…!! Within a short span I joined into cultural fest working team too…!!

By the end of first semester… three-fourth of our batch girls got paired up…!! Few with seniors…few with our batch mates…!!

Second semester started…and it’s when I started noticing him…!!

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“It’s really stupid!!! We just joined…and why the hell is he teaching difficult ones instead of starting basics to us??” I shouted loudly after reaching to my room…!!

I along with my room-mate Priya decided to attend early morning yoga sessions for our betterment giving up our precious sleeps…!!

“It’s 2nd semester buddy…!!We are not V.I.P’s over there to have a special session from the start…!!” she said coolly..!!

“Such a nonsense and boring sessions..!! The only thing that amazed me was our senior Amit doing mind blowing asana stunts at the end…bending his whole body like an elastic…!!” I said falling on my bed with a thud…!!

Yaah…he was good…!! Even our senior Laksh too did his aasanas perfectly…eventhough they were not thrilling…!!” she said gazing her phone…!!

“Who??!!” I asked…!!

“Our senior, Laksh bhaiyya…!!” She tried to clarify…!!

“Never heard of him…!! Who is he??!!” I asked…!!

“You don’t know him??!!!!” she jumped horrified and landed on my bed…!!

“You are talking as if he is president of America…!!” I spoke amused seeing her reaction…!!

Priya:“He has been there in robotics and entrepreneurship societies…!!”

Me: “But I am not there in robotics…and entrepreneurship inductions are not yet done…!! How will I know??!!”

Priya: “He is soo calm and silent reyy…never speaks much…and concentrates only on his work…!!”

Me(pissed off): “I am not interested in knowing about his bio-data…!! Just tell me who the hell he is…!!”

“Ok…ok..!!” she said…settling herself in a comfortable position.

Priya: “Do you remember the guy…who was positioned next to our Amit bhaiyya today??!!”

Me(blankly): “No!!”

Priya: “Areyy…yaar!! Try to remember…!! Try!! Try!! He wore green shirt today!!!

Me(holding my head..and trying to remember): “Ummm….umm… Haa!!! I remember…!!”

Priya(excited): “Haa…haa…he is the one…!!”

“But I don’t remember his face reyy…!!” I added immediately…bring her excitement level and hard work to zero level…!! But still she didn’t give up..!!

Priya: “Areyy…yaar!!! Try !! Try!! He mostly wears that green shirt only…!!”

Me(joking): “Why??!! Doesn’t he have any more shirts??!!!”

Priya(still not giving up): “Uhh..idiot!!! Stop joking and try to remember him…!!”

Me(smiling): “It’s ok madam…!! I will see him in tomorrow session…!! Now hurry up…!! We need to attend our classes…!!”

It might be the end of that day’s talk about him…!! But it’s the base that got created for my stupid actions and thoughts further…!!

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“What are you doing??” Priya asked me….finding me looking for something…!!

“Searching for green shirt guy…!! You only told yesterday about some senior…Laksh…!!” I said still looking for him…!!

“Ohh…Laksh Bhaiyya??!!! Today he didn’t wear green shirt madam!!! He wore red!! There…There he is…near Amit bhaiyya…!!” She said pointing her hand towards a thin figure…!!

As priya told…I am able to guess him as a calm guy…with lot of patience…from his features. There is no attitude…of being a senior which I generally figure out from many of our
senior’s faces…!! This might be reason why I couldn’t distinguish him from our batch mates yesterday…!!

“Well..!! That’s fine…!! I came to know about one more senior…!!” I said completing my judging analysis in first look…!!

“He is very good Bhaiyya…unlike others…!!! He studies well too…!!” she started bio-data once again…!!

“Why are you calling him bhaiyya??!! I think seniors had warned us right from the start…that no one should call them as Brother/Bhaiyya/bhai/Bhayna/Annaya/Anna etc..etc.. right??!!” I raised a point noticing her words…!!

She chuckled and replied… “Now no one will mind me calling them bhaiyya…because everyone knows I am committed…!!”

I gave a mean look to her silly reply…and started my practice…!! There are many things that I never understand…!! One of them is this…!! My friends…who hardly completed 5 months of college…gets into relationships…!! They didn’t even have right to vote…as they are not mature enough to decide our ruler until 18…!! But… they are mature enough to decide their soul mates…and fall in love…!! Stupidity in peaks!!!! 😛

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“I am done with these patience sessions…!!” I murmured myself determined…while wearing my chappals…after completion of yoga class…!! Seriously…I myself couldn’t believe that I had successfully completed a month yoga classes…!!

Priya…who was more excited than me for this thing…gave up last week itself…as she was hardly getting sleep after having late night chats and talks with her boyfriend…!! And here I am…still managing it…along with music, dramatics and cultural festival…!! But not anymore…further…!!

“Hi..!!” I heard voice…!! I turned back…and got surprised…!! For a moment…I checked my surroundings…to make sure…Laksh…my senior is calling me only…!! As far as Priya told…he is someone…who minds his own work…and what he has to do with me??!!!

“You are swara right??!!” He asked…giving me conformation…that I am the one…whom he is talking to…!!

Me(hiding surprise): “Yeah??!!”

Laksh: “Umm…Wooh…I just called to inform you…that you got selected in entrepreneurship cell…!! Congratulations!!The list is not yet out…but it will be…by evening…!!! I just thought to tell you…as I see you daily in yoga class…!!”

If it would have been someone…my reply would have been confident…!! But…his voice…I could sense shyness in it…!! Shit!! Why is he shying and moreover it’s making me feel embarrassed…!!

“Ok…!! Thank you…!!”I said…trying myself not to disclose my awkwardness…!!

“Tomorrow is your first meeting..!! See you there..!! Bye…!!” He said and went away quickly…before I could reply a bye to him…!!

‘He is different’…I thought…!! I wish I should have just drawn only this conclusion from his behaviour…!! I wish…I shouldn’t have thought more than this…!! But I did!!!

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I completed my first year…and so his 2nd year…!! We never talked much…and even we did… it’s only about work…!!

Loneliness started to eat me…whenever my friends get busy their boyfriends…!! I do have boys as friends…but it’s limited up to class or work…or facebook…!! Neither our batchmate boys are interested in a girl who is boyish, short tempered and egoistic…nor I am interested in making them more close to me…who feels that… generally girls always wants boys…to bear them…!!

That’s when I found him interesting…!! I found him different…!! Different from most of the boys…!! My friend’s love stories too had their impact on me…!! I started liking him…from when, how and why…I don’t know…!! I began to fantasize our small meets right from the start of 1st year… as destiny…and my feelings towards him as Love…!!

I couldn’t believe myself that I am in love…but filmy dialogues of Love…used to revolve in my brain…shutting my thoughts…!!

Third year of my college…a different swara entered…!! A swara who no longer had a bobbed hair-cut…!! This swara even started keeping kajal to her eyes…!! My sister and friends were surprised while my mother was happy…!!

They started teasing me…but I never care…!! They guessed about my interest on some senior…but couldn’t find out who he was… and I never shared about him to anyone…!!

I got unnecessary attention from some of the boys…but I showed them right position with my actions…!! First time…I wore a saree…with matching accessories…and increased intensity of kajal to my eyes…along with light makeup on Diwali day…!! I just wished only his attention on me…!! But it never happened…!!

I felt happy…finding out looks never had impact on him…!! Day by day…I find him becoming more handsome…!! I thought of chatting with him…tried to talk with him…!! But I am unable to..!! I am shy…at the same time scared…of what he will think about me…!!

By the end of academic year…I realized he won’t be visible to me…from next year…as it was his last year…!! That’s when I did a most annoying thing…!!

I decided to express my feelings to him…before he leaves and proposed him during farewell party time…!!

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“I love you Laksh!!!” I said to him…offering him a rose…!!

Finding him alone I went straight to him and spilled out the matter…!! We both stared at each other for few moments…!! Sounds of disco where party has been going on…is audible to us…!!

“Are you in senses swara??!!” He asked in serious tone…!!

“Y..e..s!!” I spoke in a low tone…getting little scared…of his question…!! I don’t know…why…I lost my confidence…!! I suddenly started feeling like I have done a mistake…!! I thought to propose…but I didn’t think of his reactions after that…!!

Few times…he opened his mouth to speak something…but closed again…not knowing what to tell…!!

“What do you know about me??” He shot up finally…!!

Me: “You are my senior…”

Laksh(serious): “And??”

Me: “You are in robotics, entrepreneurship societies…!!”

Laksh: “And??”

I have nothing else to say…!!! Such a stupid answer I have given…!! I never talked to him…and how I will know about him??!!

He chuckled and said… “Many of them know this…!! I don’t know what made you think that you love me…but I understood very well…you are not…!! The feelings which you got on me were nothing but of attraction…!!

You are a talented, hardworking girl, deterministic girl unlike many of them here. You are one among 100 girls… who breaks boy’s delusion about girls…!! Eventhough…we are seniors…we know little bit about you…and we like and respect the way you are… unlike other girls…!!

Your earlier bobbed hair cut, your fights with your batch mates…always reminds me of my deceased sister…!! She died at 12 in an accident…!! As a brother…I suggest you…never let these things disturb your mind…!! They would object you from reaching heights…!! And best of luck for your future…!!”

I cried…!! I cried that night silently…feeling idiotic of myself…!! He felt me as his sister…while I felt him different…!!

But with time…I realized about my feelings towards him…!! He was right…!! It’s not at all love…!! I do know nothing much about him…!! It’s just an over thinking of my excitement seeing our similarities…in few matters…!! While I never care about others…he even minds his own work…!! While I restrict boy’s friendship to a certain level…he shies to talk with girls…and befriend them…!!

It’s not only me who found him becoming more handsome day by day in my 3rd year…but many of my friends…!! It’s because…he started working out…going to gyms…!! It’s just that I found him like a wowww…and got attracted to him…but nothing more than that…!!

He passed out…and I upgraded to final year…!! Little uneasiness…which I used to feel whenever we both face each other…is gone…!! Whenever I remind him…my stupid proposal comes to my mind…making me face palm myself due to embarrassment…!!

But…I am glad…that I did something which I was never expected of…and it became one of my memories…my cute crush story…which no one knows…!!

My interest in the field of archaeology…had become a passion for me…when I did an online part time internship under ASI, India…in my fourth year…!! My father strongly objected my further studies of doing M.S…And I left with no choice other than accepting a job in Mumbai offered during campus placement…!! He was reluctant first…but huge package and my stubbornness made him agree finally…!!

Flashback ends…!!!

My friends…who once were committed and dreamed of marrying their partners…had their breakups in upcoming years…adding strength to my views about teenage and youth love…!!There are hardly 1-2% of teen love stories reaching destination of marriage…!!

Gone are the days of pure love where Shah Jahan built Taj Mahal for his beloved wife…!!! These are the days…where in some cases…blood relations are even lack of love and bonding…!! These are the days where you can’t differentiate what is love and attraction…!! These are the days…people getting cheated up in the name of love…!!

Mumbai’s life…brought much more maturity to my views… about relationships and love…!! I found myself content and enjoying life…with freedom and chasing out my interest…and I want to be like this forever…!! Laksh was right…!! I am different from many of the girls…!! And I am happy being different…!!

POV ENDS…!!

RECAP: Swara’s problem of facing laksh…!! Swalak’s face-off…!!

I just wanted to ask two things…!!

1) Do you want raglak love story too??!! It adds up one more episode…!!

2) Is anyone interested to know 3 things swara wished to do at least once in her life??!! I need to cut out that whole story track episodes…for ending it quick…!! I will think of a quick way to reveal them…if you are interested…!! I am not sure about it…!!

Once I would like to thank each and every one of them… Sweeta, Balaji, Swarna, Mica, Rekha, Simin, Soujanya,Mariyajap, Vyshu, Swasan, vidhi, simi, yashu, s, astra, kakali, SNY, Mumpi, sneha, pramudi, ishu, shan, tani, arshi, shifa, shreeyu,ameera, milestone and chanu twin… thank you soo much guys…!! 😀 😀

Swasan, s, SNY, milestone… I want to know your real names…if you are interested in telling me…!! 😀

Ameera…if you are same writer ameera ‘My incomplete Love story’ please…!!

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80 Comments
    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you anu…!! 😀 😀

  1. Simin

    Finally u posted
    Now i think i m understanding swara a
    little u know
    Swalak face off will be bang on
    i want to know her wishes

    1. G.Chandu

      I am afraid…that you bang your head in future…unable to understand swara once again…!! 😉 Swalak’s faceoff will definitely bang on…!! More over… think about ragini’s reaction …knowing swalak’s story…!! 😛
      I am not getting ideas..how to reveal wishes in a quick way…but I will surely find some way for it…!!
      Thank you soo much simin..!! 😀 😀

      1. Simin

        U know i wont bang my head instead i will bang ur head
        are i want to read na so i need my head to be alright

  2. cute crush story nice epi

    1. G.Chandu

      Aww…!! Really??!! Thank you soo much parul…!! 😀 😀 It’s my real story you know…cutting out the proposal part…!! 🙂

  3. Simi

    Awesome dear..
    Yeah i want to konw Swara’s 3 wishes..

    1. Simi

      *know

    2. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much simi…!! 😀 😀
      If I get any idea…I will definitely add it up…!! 🙂

  4. Awesome 😊😊and yes yes I want to know her wishes ..pls reveal them and pls pls post next part soon 🙏🙏

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you soo much buddy…!!! 😀 😀 I will try…!! And next part…I don’t know…!! 😉

  5. Doesn’t matter whether kakali will beat u oe not…but u e definitely going to get a punch from me right on your nose……..such a late update(angry pout)

    Just kidding…..

    Nice epi….

    But update soon

    1. G.Chandu

      I am ready with my helmet…!! 😛 I hope it would withstand to both of your punches…!!
      Thank you soo much shivangi…!! 😀 😀 I will definitely try…to update soon…!! 😀

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you soo much buddy…!! 😀 😀
      I loved your thought of keeping independent as telly name…!! It’s cool!! 😀

  6. Astra

    I always love swara in your ff. It is because of her i became fan of this ff. I love her thoughts and she is correct always..!!! It’s trrue..! People in teenage youth think that they r in love but they don’t realize it is just attraction. That’s why they have breakups after coming into facts. And, i also loved laksh today. So, swara is matured now and she can decide what is true love. I think, swara has already started loving sanskar and that’s why he became her dairy. Cmng to raglak scenes, this is however swasan ff right… adding raglak scenes will just drag the story… however as I’m raglak fan, i will enjoy thier scens but… it’s ur wish… and of course im curious to know the 3rd wish of swara..!!
    Lastly…. i love the pictures you keep for every episode. I was thinking to tell this, and I’m forgetting. Those pics are related to the episode and makes ease to imagine easily. I like ur selection and editing. What software u use for it..??
    Hmmm,,,,and precap I know swara will face laksh she is a strong girl..!!! And yaa,… I’m expecting comedy during their face off…haha….
    even waiting for sanky reaction about her fb…..,

    Bye..bye…. take care…

    1. G.Chandu

      Astraaaa….!!!! I am fainting…!! Fire crackers are burning in my whole body with excitement…!! Thank you…thank you..thank you soooooooo much buddy…!! 😀 😀 😀
      In story I mean…she has got clear views and clarity about current generation love and her pessimistic thoughts on marriage…!! She has answers of what is not true love… but she doesn’t have answers of what is true love…!! Lets see if she could find answer for it too in future…!! 😉

      You are the master in writing humour scenes…!! I don’t know..I could make it funny…!! I didn’t think still ..!! But I will try you suggestion once… of bringing comedy…!! 😀 😀

      And lastly… of your last compliment…I am soo glad that you liked my pics…!! I spend little time in making them…but I never wished of compliment in return…!! I am soo sooo happy that you observed that…!! I use photoshop…!! 😀 😀

  7. Lovely reethi

    Awesome. I missed ur ff aloooooot. N this part is fantastic. Loved it.

    N about that doubt. Ur wish dear. Do wt ur comfortable with.

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you soo much for your lovely comment reethi…!! 😀 😀
      Ok…!! I will try!!! 😀

  8. Yes please give some Raglak scenes.Even if its little.Please.

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much riya!!! 😀 😀
      I will pen down…if I get a beautiful story in mind…!! 😀

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much buddy!!! 😀 😀

  9. no not much raglak it will slow down the story

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you soo much ria…!! 😀 😀
      Anyways it’s a matter of one more episode…!! If I am free…I will extend and write…!! 🙂

  10. Praju

    Nice

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much praju!!! 😀 😀

  11. Plz add raglak love story and that would make ur ff more interesting than now

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you soo much vyshnavi!!!! 😀 😀
      I will add their story…as soon as I get idea…in further episodes…!! 🙂

  12. Sweeta

    Hlw…….Finally u posted. ……missed ur ff very much…. fantastic dear… loved it
    Waiting to see swalak face off nd know it ll be very exciting. …..nd want to know Sanskar s pov about swara s fb……..
    Nd about ur suggestions or options u write according to u ……i m just waiting to read nxt one…..
    👌👌💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
    Waiting dear

    1. G.Chandu

      Definite you will get sanky’s pov…!! After all…most of the story will be from his context only…!! 😉

      Thank you sooo much sweeta!!! 😀 😀

  13. Shreeyu

    U know chandu m really Angry with u today not because u updated late but because of some other reason… I would seriously not comment on this one… Huh… Don’t talk to me … M very angry nd m serious

    1. G.Chandu

      100 sit ups from my side…!! I am sill waiting for your reply…!! 🙁 I mentioned your taj mahal in the epi… and still you don’t want to comment…!! 🙁

  14. amazing update
    i have read ur ff till now but today i am commenting

    1. G.Chandu

      Woww…!!! Thank you sooo much buddy…!! 😀 😀
      I am soo glad…!! 😀

  15. finally u posted..loved it..u can add raglak story..
    bt i want to knw swara’s 3 wishes..continue soon..
    my name is kumu..tc..

    1. G.Chandu

      Hii kumu…!! 😀 😀

      Thank you soo soo much for your each and every comment right from the start of this ff…!! 😀 😀
      And thank you soo much for telling your name too…!! 😀

  16. Seebu_s

    finally u posted…episode is gud….want to see swasan love story…n waiting for swara’s 3 wishes

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much seebu…!! 😀 😀
      I will find out some way for it…!! 😀 😀

  17. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo soo much soujanya…!!! 😀 😀

  18. Swarna01

    Thank god. 4 a second i thought serious issue hoga bt dat was a really healthy relation. Bt i want to know sanky opinion n action. I know sanky will help her bt wat abt swara’s thoght towards him. Amazing. Pls pst regularly

    1. G.Chandu

      Hehe…!! I am very good in making a simple light ending…showing up a serious start…!! 😛
      Yaahh…!! You will get sanky’s reaction… in next epi…!! After all this story is mostly from his perspective…!! 😀

      Thank you soo much swarna!!! 😀 😀

  19. Rekha

    Finally u posted…….
    Awesome as always……..
    Waiting for ur next update……
    Update ASAP……

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much rekha…!! 😀 😀
      I will try to post soon this time…!! 🙂

  20. AnuAnn

    Awesome dear..want to know swara’s wish,… And not much interested in raglak story becpz it well drag the story, and u r alrdy planning to end this soon.. So no more dragging

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much buddy…!! 😀 😀
      Hmm..you are right…!! I just have some ideas popping to give about ragini’s view on her love…and about swara…!! If I am not clear about it…I won’t include…and move ahead…!! 😀
      Take care…!! 🙂

  21. Mica

    Chanduuuuuuuuu…… whoooaaaahhh Swara’s past….it’s obviously describing my own experience, the differences was, it was myself who lost interest on him finally..hehehe
    and yeah you are rite, about you write on Swara POV…..
    don’t ask me about other pair instead Swasan…. ahem ahem…

    1. G.Chandu

      Micaaa..!!! Same pinch buddy…!! 😀 😀
      It’s somewhat my crush story… only difference…swara is bold..she proposed…!! And I waited until my crush left college…!! 😉 😛
      By the way I still have small interest on him…unlike you..!!! 😛

  22. Kakali

    *Sit beside Chandu
    *Carry a huge stone
    *close my eyes
    *join my both hands
    now let’s talk about my 3 wishs
    1.People should know MY SwaSan as the 8th wonder of Earth as well as 1st wonder my Pluto…
    2. MY SwaSan to have a baby Pikachuuuuu.. u know kinda happy family..
    3.To take a selfie with u all MY TU SwaSan mini family……
    yohoooo Chanduu*hug.. finally u gave me the platform to convey my hidden shameless wishes.. thnkxxx for the great chance.. <——– Don't u dare to smile now.. :D..

    Let's not take about Swara's 3 wishes.. coz i have a slight hint about those…
    Chanduuuuuu It was a Dhamal episode.. Enjoyed reading..
    –*If u can wrap up Raglak story in a epi or more than an epi.. m definitely interested… Continue soon buddy.. it's tooo rocking.. loved it.. !! Thnk u.. *pinch u, n land on my roof with my private rocket… ;-*

    1. G.Chandu

      Kakuuu…don’t open your eyes yet…!!! Noo…!!
      *tiptoeing towards you…now near to you…Yeaahhh…!! I got the stoneee…..!!! 😀 😀
      *Splashhh!! Threw it in river…!! Ufff!!! I am safe now!!! 😛 😛 😀
      You have choosen wrong person for telling wishes…so I can’t fullfill them..but lets talk possibilty of them…!!
      1) Swasan is our’s too…!! If we fans construct a big monument like taj mahal in name of swasan…definitely it will become 8th wonder!!! 😛 😛
      And as soon as pluto completely stops it’s mad revolution around some other star…it will be considered back as a planet…making it a first wonder…!! 😛 😛
      2) I can’t provide a baby pikachuu… but I can a baby ritchu (a big son) in my ff for swasan…!! 😛
      3) Your 3rd wish…I think it did happen……………..in few ff’s… at the end…!! 😉 😛 We all met at swasan’s weddings forgot??!! We all had selfies too…!! Most recent one is in anniya’s ff…!! 😛 😛

      I am very bad in controlling my mad smile while reading you comment…!! Sooo that’s why…I won’t restrict you from smiling while reading this reply…!! 😉 😀
      Throwing a big bomb..on to your private rocket..before you fly away out of my reach…!! 😛 😛

      Love you buddy!!! 😀

  23. Srijah

    its awesome chanuuu….. im visiting TU rarely but i never close it without checking whether u post next part or not….. we enjoy ur work alot. i love swaras character soo much. im really feeling sad becoz u want to end story quickly…. i mean i dont want it in hurry and loose its charm. i personally want u to continue it though u give late updates. really love it to core. u r such a fantastic writer and this concept of story will add more beauty to it……

    1. thank you soo soo much srijah!!!! 😀 😀 Your comment means a lotttt to me!!!! Don’t think I am ending it soon…!! I still have 6-7 episodes in my hand!! 😛 😛 and epilogue too…!! I just cut out 5 episodes…!! 😉
      I will make sure…that it won’t look like hurry…even though I am in hurry!!! I thought to show increasing love between swasan and their chemistry…slowly with further episodes…without making swara realize that…!! Even I am trying to show it now too…just with rabbit speed instead of tortoise speed..!! 😀

      Thank you sooo much once again for your lovely comment…!! 😀 😀

  24. awesome loved it a lot

    1. Thank you sooo much sneha…!! 😀 😀

  25. no need of raglak story…
    plz concentrate on swasan yaar
    bcz
    u post tooo late so dnt waste ur time by showing raglak..instead show only swasan
    .
    if u update regularly i dnt hav any problem in showing little bit of raglak stry..but ur case is different u postin btw looooonnnnnnnggggg gaaaappppsssss sssoooooo looooong…sooo NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO RAAAAAAGGGLAAKKK STRY..PLZZZZ ITZ A REQUEST…plz dnt waste ur time
    yeah i want to knw abt swaraz 3 wish
    remember noo raglak
    just show swalak face off, swasan scenes..nothing else not even nagini

    1. G.Chandu

      Hehehe…!!! I will definitely…try for swara’s wishes…!! 😀 😀
      Sooo, you are 100% swasan fan!!! 😀
      I will think about raglak!!! It’s my promise to you…I will post one more episode for you within this weekend….to reduce your small anger due to my late updates…!! 😀
      Thank you soo much buddy…!! 😀 😀
      with lots of love…!! 😀

  26. Fnly u posted…..
    Awesome epi..loved it…
    My name s yaz😊😊😊😊😊

    1. G.Chandu

      Sooo ‘y’ in your name represents yaz!!! 😀
      Hiii Yaz!!! 😀 😀

      Thank you soo much for your cute comment…and telling your name!! 😀

  27. Abirsha

    Awesome dr and don’t cut short ur stories…. I love it a lot and yes i want swara’s 3 wishes….😍

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you soo sooo much shan!!! 😀 😀
      Hehe…!! Don’t worry… there are still 6-7 eoisodes and epilogue left even after cutting out…!!! Which means…I am not going to end soo soon!!! 😉 😀
      I will try to find out a way to reveal them…!! 😀 😀

  28. Awesome
    Finally u updated
    I want raglak story as well as swara’ wishes to be completed

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much shagun…!! 😀 😀
      Sorry for making you wait…!! I will try a way to show them up…!! 😀 😀

  29. hi this is the first time i comment in any of swasan ff as i am a raglakian but still this is one of my favourite ff and the only swasan ff i read. i just love ur way of exptessing the povs. today’s episode was just mindblowing.i just loved the way laksh made her understand and obviously it was the cutest crush stories. if possible you could add raglak. sorry for such a long comment. thanks

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo soo soo much gayu!!!! 😀 😀 Your comment means a lottt to me…!!! 😀 😀 I am soo glad that you read this ff…!! And why to say sorry??!!…your long cute comment made me joyous…!! 😀 😀 How can I say no to you?!!! For you…I will definitely come up with raglak…!! I would never mind in making one more episode…when there are people who are interested in reading it…!! 😀 😀

      Thank you soo much once again…!! With lots of love…!! 😀 😀

  30. Awesome dear…….He he he teanage crush…………nice……..N I want little raglak love story also ………

  31. N swara’s wishes also……….Make it a little funny……………My name is Archana……. What’s your name?😁

    1. G.Chandu

      Hi archana…!! 😀 😀

      My name is chandrika…offcourse you can call me as chandu…!! 😀
      Thank you sooo much buddy…for your comment and telling your name…!! 😀 😀
      And haa…I decided to keep a small story…of raglak…!! 🙂

  32. Superbbbb
    Swalak faceoff will b dhamaka
    M sure u gonna bang
    N I wanna know swara’s 3wishes also raglak love story

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you soo soo much tani…!!! 😀 😀
      Hehe…I hope it to be a dhamaka…!! 🙂 I will try…!! 😀
      I am including raglak story…!! 😀 😀

  33. Vyshu10

    superb….thanks for updating…..no raglak story plz

    1. G.Chandu

      Hiii vyshu…!! 😀 😀
      Hehe…!! I should thank you all for your patience to my irregular updates…!!
      I am returning back your thank you… adding one more thank you… from my side…for your compliment on my epi…!! 😀 😀
      There will be a small story… of raglak…!! Nothing much…!! Don’t worry…!! 😀
      With lots of love…!! 😀 😀

  34. Shifa96

    Awesome..I want to know 3 wishes of swara and don’t end it soon because I just love this ff

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo sooo much shifa…!! 😀 😀
      I have a small doubt…!! Are you and ‘afra96’ same??!! Don’t mind..if you both are different…!! I just have this intuition and thought to clarify myself…!! 😀 😀

      1. Shifa96

        Yes, it’s me only..

  35. Mumpi

    i know im late bt its a fantabulos epi…. no raglak story plz.. and i want d story as u wanna wrte widout cutting…:-)

    1. G.Chandu

      Thank you sooo much Mumpi…!! 😀 😀 About raglak…it will be small one…!! 🙂 and for story…I am soo irregular naa…so I can’t help out…!! But it’s ok..there might be still 7 episodes…even after cutting…!! Soo no worries..!! 😀
      Thank you soo much for your lovely comment once again…!! 😀 😀

  36. It’s amazing. Loved the way u describe swaras feeling and emotions. It was just wow!!!!! Ur a fantastic writer.
    And yeah same Ameera!!! Sorry yaar am sick and unable to type plus have loads of school works so…. But will try my best to post it this month and will give a long chap. Be sure to read.
    Love you keep smiling. 🙂

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