She loved me? || EkDujeKeVaaste || 2-shot By Nikita


She loved me ??

Hey guys !!
Its me Nikita here with a two-shot… Please read and tell your reviews !!

“What” I said as I woke up in the middle of the night.. I wore my slippers, grabbed my keys , took my car and directly drove to the hospital.. I was mad at her, I did not wanna talk to her, but the news she gave, made me hurry my way to her.

I reached the hospital.. I saw Manju mami there, wiping and consoling Preeti..

I went to her, sat on my knees.

“Sab kuch theek ho jayega..” I said..

“Kaise Shravan? Udhar Anuj bimaar hai, yaha babuji, aur upar se Preeti ki shaadi.. Kaise theek hoga sab kuch?” She replied wiping her tears..

“Mei karunga sab theek,Sumo karegi sab kuch theek” Shravan said with confidence in her eyes..

“Suman? Woh toh khud ro rahi hai andar.. Hum sab ko kaise sambhalegi?? Tum millo usse beta..” Manju said.

I went in.. Hesitantly… I was mad at her, she had changed..!! She accepted PCT from that Aditya.. There were many reasonss..

I looked at her.. No matter how I was mad at her, I broke that time.. Those thick tears that dropped from those innocent eyes… I sat beside her..
She looked into my eyes and then continued crying.. Those tears.. I hated those..

“Sumo..please mat ro” I said assuring her..

“Shravan…..” She said crying..

I hugged her… I could not see her like that.. No matter what she did, I can never resist staying angry with her when she’s crying..

Next morning..

I woke up to find my self in the hospital, sitting in Nanu’s room.. I looked around and saw Sumo sleeping by resting her head on my shoulder… I smiled at her.. The tears had frozen on her face… It was like she cried all night.. I wiped her cheeks with my thumb

“Why’s she so different when she’s awake? Why does she ignore me and give that extra attention to Aditya? Why’s she ignoring me?
I did notice, it’s not the marriage tension, nor its Nanu, cause whenever she’s been mad, or frustrated, she always came to me.. So the marriage frustration is not the thing, nor its Nanu, because Nanu was perfectly fine that time.. Something took place the night that I called her to confess my love.. She’s been different since then.. This is NOT MY SUMO.. And I know it.. I’ve seen those innocent eyes of her’s searching for me..I’ve seen the pain in her eyes when she tries to ignore me.. I don’t know, but somewhere deep down, I believe that “S” that’s craved in her hand , I heard her saying that the “S” is for Sumo, but I think that its for Shravan.. I don’t know”

I was interrupted by my thoughts when she woke up.. The doctor entered, and said that Nanu could be discharged.

We took Nanu home..

A few days later…

I went to Tiwari Killa, I saw her working and shouting at everyone to work properly.. That stupid Aditya followed her like a tail everywhere..

She came to me asked if I wanted mind said “YOU” but my words clearly justified that I came to meet Nanu..
I went upstairs.. He was resting there.. Sumo came up with two cups of tea, and like I said, that Aditya followed.. Sumo served me and Nanu tea.. She noticed Aditya, and she excused herself to get a cup of tea for Aditya.. I excused myself.. I could not control it.. I had to ask her why was she behaving weirdly.. I had to ask her why she accepted PCT from Aditya..

I moved out.. I saw her, her hair tied in a messy bun, with a few hairs coming on her face.. Those eyes, that face.. The simplicity, the charm she carried in herself, that’s her.. That’s my SUMO.. I held her hand, turned off the gas, pulled her inside her room and latched the door.. She wanted to ask me, but the looks I gave her, she stood shut.. She knew that I never liked to hear anything, but just speak and get replies when I gave those looks..

“What’s wrong with you?” These were the first words that uttered out of my mouth..

“What’s wrong with me? What’s wrong with you? Ye kya kar rahe ho?” She replies with equal confidence..

“Ye ab kyu kar rahi ho? Why are you ignoring me?”

“Shravan.. Tumhare sawalon ke koi jawab nahi hai mere paass”

“Jawab nahi hai, ya dena nahi chahti?”

“Nahi dena chahti bas? Ab khush??”

“Kyu? Uss Aditya ke lie chai banani hai?” I said, motioning towards her, she kept going back, and finally stopped when she couldn’t move anymore backward, as there was a wall.. I was happy.. Cause now she couldn’t run away.. And I wanted my answers..

“Kyu kar rahi ho tum aisa? Why did you accept the PCT from him? I asked you a hundred times, leave alone ask, I almost begged you to accept PCT.. But you did not take it from me..then why him? Yahi rishta reh gaya hai hamara?

She took a deep breath closing her eyes.. Preparing an answer…

“Shravan.. What you did was throw money and PCT papers on my face.. And Aditya ne mujhe business deal dilwayi hai.. Woh mujhe sirf investors se mila raha hai.. Woh mujhe tumhari tarah mere muh pe paise nahi fek raha hai”

“Okay.. Then what about me? Why are you ignoring me?”

She hugged me tight…. Her arms wrapped around my back.. I was surprised at this action of her’s.. Without thinking my arms were wrapped around her body.. I loved her.. And I couldn’t take it anymore..

I asked her, without breaking the hug..”Why were you ignoring me?”

She replied sadly
“There’s a reason Shravan.. And woh reason mei tumhe batana chahti hu, but mei bataungi toh tum mujhe chodke chale jaoge…”

“Tell me the reason !! ”

“Its your dad”

I was shocked, I removed my hands, looked at her…. I looked at her in anger and left that spot… I could feel her sitting, her hand wrapped around her knees and crying…


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  1. hey niki …read ur first shot…its awsm …I really wish something like this to happen in edkv …write the second shot soon pls dear…can’t wait much… πŸ˜‰

    1. Nikita

      thank you so much anjali !!
      i hope so too, that’s why i wrote this..
      I’ll post ASAP..
      thank you !!

  2. Neeti

    thank you di koi to accha likh raha he warna sab Sumo aur Shravan ka separation dikha rahe hai
    agar real track aisa hota to kitna accha hota…
    and I agree edkv ko bura kaha toh dishoom aur uske sath…
    Shraman ko alag kia toh dishoom,
    Sumo ne Shravu ko kiss nai kia toh dishoom…
    edkv ka ff likhna band kia toh dishoom,
    Adiman ki shaadi hui toh dishoon
    aur yeh sab edkv ke writers ke liye tha ap ke liye
    mil jaane de dil jo bane e.d.k.v.
    love you di

    1. Nikita

      Hii meri pyaari neeti..
      Thank you so much..
      have faith in the cv’s , they’ll obviously have a track they want to get in, so thoda toh hoga naa.. afterall, the show’s name is “EK DUJE KE VAASTE” so chill okay??
      thank you!!
      #tohDishoom ka gaana was epic !!
      thank you so much..
      love you too!!

      1. phir bhi dono heartbroken the na dono ro rahe the and I hate tears
        jante he main puri rat edkv title track sunte sunte ro rai thi, I was so sad uper se ganna sunke aur bhi zyada sad thi
        di himmat kaise hui thank you bolne ki apki
        ab jati hu mera teacher a raha he so by- Neeti

  3. WeirdSister

    Nikki…I really wish..this happens in show…u wrote it so well…amazing usage of words…!!!???
    Loved it….nd luv u!!???

    1. Nikita

      Aww.. thank you so much niya di!
      i wish this to happen, so i posted it !!
      Thank you for the wonderful compliment!
      love you too di !!

  4. Nikki..its so cool
    Shravu serial pey bhi yesa sochta ki there smethng fishy ..beside her weird behaviour.??

    1. Nikita

      Thanks Sona !!
      i wish… something like this happens in the show!
      thank you so much !!

  5. IME

    Ek dum aap jaisa mast

    1. Nikita

      Thank you Ime so much!!

  6. Sumo

    loved it Nikster..
    kash asa hi hota.. but Shravan is acting so immature in d show… ❀❀

    1. Nikita

      thank you so much sumo di!!
      i know.. he’s been kinda stupid.. koi nai.. its “EK DUJE KE VAASTE” after all, kuch toh accha ho hi jayega!
      thank you !!

  7. This was awesome.. Really loved it.. waiting for the next part πŸ™‚

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much zainab !!

  8. Hayyeeee yar agar yeh serial mn hojae to kya kehna……

    Post soon

    but still abt serial i hv some hope like cvs are gng to give us some suprise by ending this crap…..

    1. Nikita

      i know angel di!
      i want this to happen so bad !!
      i know, they are gonna surprise us.. they always do!
      thank you so much..
      i will post ASAP

  9. Sharmansangel

    Kua baat hai di

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much shramansangel

  10. Marie

    Omg OMG OMG !!!! Nikko kya kamal ka likha hai yr tune….!!! KAASH serial Mai aaisa ho jai…!!!! Hai nikko tune toh dil Khush kardia…!!!
    Ye padh kar I felt like I was watching the nxt ep of serial n everything got normal again…!!
    Thank u
    Thank u so much fr posting it yr….!!!!
    Plz plz plz nxt prt Bhi jaldi se upload karde behen….!!! I can’t wait…!!
    By by
    Love u so much se Bhi ziada !!
    Take care

    1. Nikita

      Aww di !!
      thank you so much..
      i want this to happen in the show too!!
      thank you !!
      i’ll post it ASAP..
      love you too!!

  11. pretty preeti

    It was really nice start
    Ur 2 shots is amazing
    Shravo so cute
    Sumo so sweet
    Loved it
    U r really a great and impressive writer my dear nikky
    Loved it
    Post next part soon
    Love u

    1. Nikita

      Thank you pretty preeti…
      Thank you!
      Shravan is sweet though..
      Thank you..
      me, and and impressive writer? don’t joke plss..
      thank you
      thank you
      i’ll post ASAP..
      love you too !!

  12. Its fab!!! I really hope smthng like dis should hapen in the show…

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much Shiny !!

  13. Nikku…AWW EMMM GEEE! Whoa! No wonders u r such an amazing writer! Beautifully penned down, the flair of words is really enchanting! M like in a tranxe as to what I just read! This was beyond words! And afterall, whose friend are you!?
    Ok, Ok, Jokes apart, you were breathtakingly outstanding! And I expect the second shot by tomorrow, only if you will be able to! And ya, dyu have any idea as to where Khushi di is? I mean is she having her exams or something? Do tell me. Keep up. Love ya??

    1. Trance*

    2. Nikita

      Aww.. Thank you so much laddoo!!
      it means a lot..
      man, those words are big! too big to describe me!!
      of course, i’m your friend so that had to happen…..
      Thank you !!
      Breathtakingly Outstanding? Please, that’s just to big !!
      The second shot would be out soon, so please wait !!
      yea, Khushi di reads all the ff’s but not able to comment..
      she’ll be here soon with the next part..
      Love you too!!

  14. Really amazing….Hope EDKV follows the same track…. They should see and take ideas from amazing writers like you

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much Anushika..
      I’m not that great writer though !!

  15. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hey Nikki. Pls pls continue. Lots of love. Keep writing.

    1. Nikita

      Hey Nandu!
      Sure I’ll continue !
      Love you too!

  16. Ruchi

    Hey Nikki.. hope u dnt mind me calling u Nikki..
    How r u dear?
    it was Amazing..
    u nailed it..
    Hope that in the serial something like this happen.
    try to post next shot soon..
    take care..
    Lots of love
    Ruchi.. πŸ™‚

    1. Nikita

      Hey Ruchi di !
      Oh why would I mind! Infact, I would be glad if you call me nikki..
      I’m great.. How are you??
      Thank you so much!
      I wish that this happens in the shw too!
      Well I have posted the next part
      It will be up by tmr..
      Love you too!

      1. Ruchi

        m also fine dear…:)
        hope for the best…

  17. Wow…. lovely…. awesome…….it is better than the ongoing track……… please post soon………………………………….
    eagerly waiting for the next update…..

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much Kaya !!
      Thank you!
      Yes I will post soon
      Till then, keep waiting!

  18. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hey Nikita !!! What a story dear .. fab ,,, agr serial me b esa ho jaye to maza hi a jye .. anyway I just luv it ..
    Post soon ..

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much Fatima di!
      Oh I too wish the same!
      Thank you for loving it..
      I would post soon, infact I have posted it!

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