She loved me? || EkDujeKeVaaste || 2-shot By Nikita part 2

Hey guys !! Thank you for the love and support.. So here’s part 2.. I hope you understood that this shot is in Shravan’s POV
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Why does she do that? Why does she think that my father’s bad? Last time also this happened… She blamed my father saying, that it wasn’t that Nirmala Ahuja, but my dad who was wrong !!

I wiped my tears and drove home..

I went into Dad’s room..

“Aapne sumo se kuch kaha hai kya?” I asked with hope of the answer NO..

He did not respond.. Why did I feel that he was searching for answers? Why did I feel that he’s trying to make a fake story in mind?

I repeated my question..

The reply was NO… I was happy.. I went into my room.. Why I felt that he lied? Why do I feel that my Sumo can never do that??

With that question I slept…

Next day, I woke up due to sunlight falling on my face..

The question was still in my mind.. “Was Sumo right? Is it really my dad?” …

No, it can’t be my dad, he always supported me… But so did Sumo.. She was there with me since childhood.. She did insult me, but I did the same at the reunion.. And we both were really sorry for it.. Who is wrong?

I went to TiwariKilla.. Not to meet Sumo, but Preeti.. I had to deliever Pushkar’s words.. Love Birds they are!! the moment “Love Birds” came to my mind, Sumo’s face flashed in front of me.. I dismissed it and reached Tiwari Killa

I rang the doorbell and masi opened it. I greeted her and entered… I saw Preeti shouting “Suman di”

Everyone kept asking “Kya hua” but she firmly said that she’d only talk to Sumo…

Just then Sumo entered..

“Kya hai..? Kyu chilla rahi ho” she exclaimed.. She never noticed me.. That’s what happens everytime.. The only GUY she notices is Aditya.. But she cleared that yesterday…

(Yea, in this shravan did not break all bonds)

“Di.. Aapki shaadi ho rahi hai” she exclaimed..

I was shocked so was she…

“What??” Sumo exclaimed

“Aapki shadi nai ho rahi hai na! Toh phir aap itna tension kyu le rahe ho? Relax” she said

I gave a sigh of relief… So did she.. Love Birds u both are, my heart said…

“Meri Pretty Preeti .. Tension to lena padega na.. Tere baad kiski shaadi karaungi mei??”
She said chubbily..

“Bohot log hai di.. Umm..” She looked at me and exclaimed “Shravan ki! Aap..Shravan ki shaadi karwaoge naaa??”

Sumo noticed me finally… Sumo will get me married? No !

She looked at me, then walked back to her room.. Everyone got back to their work.. I told Pushkar’s words to Preeti and then went up to see Nanu…

“Arre.. Shravan.. Aao..” He said sitting straight.. I helped him and kept a pillow near his head…

“Kaise hai aap? ” I asked him..

” Kaise thik ho sakta hu? Jab woh puri raat ro rahi thi” he replied sadly..

“Kaun ro raha tha nanaji?” I asked hoping it wasn’t her..( I hope you know who’s HER here)

“Suman..” He said…

“Kyu??” I asksed

He told me that she wanted to tell me the truth but I left..

What truth? What promise was she talking about? I got up, and went to her room… She was talking to someone on the phone…

I went in…

“Shravan” were the first words that came out of her mouth…

I asked her about what she wanted to say.. She said nevermind, and added that I won’t accept it even if it was the truth..

“Tell me the truth god damn it!’ I exclaimed.. I could not take it any further..

She told me the truth of Nirmala Ahuja..

I stood there in shock… I was in tears.. The woman I hated my whole life, was correct..
The dad, I thought who was correct, was wrong…

She kept shouting “Shravan” but I just stood there numb.. I had lost words.. I had lost everything.. It wasn’t MOM, it was my dad..

I just hugged Sumo.. She did not… I asked her what’s wrong.. She told me, there was one more thing that was important for me to know…

She then told me the reason why she was ignoring me.. She told me about the promise she had made to dad.. I joined the pieces together.. That’s when I realized.. Dad used to b***c about Sumo to me.. But it wasn’t him, it was Sumo who was correct… And when I told her I loved her, he was stunned.. He gave me the permission to confess, but made Sumo stand in a position where she had the only option to ignore me..

I was angry, not at him, but at her…

“If you knew that he was so bad, then why did you not just break the promise?” I asked her..

“Because I knew, no matter what he had done, he was a great dad to you.. He brought you up after Nirmala aunty, and he gave you the best values he could, and he educated you, fed you, took care of you..No matter what he did, he was a great father to you Shravan! And no matter what I try, I nor you could ever deny this fact!” She said..

It was like heaven, this girl, who sacrificed her love, her self-respect, her best friend, just for a man who took care of me?
I fell in love with her all the way more now..I hugged her, and this time, she hugged me back…
“One more thing!” She exclaimed..

She showed the “S” and said that the “S” does not stand for Suman or Sumo..

I said it stands for Shravan

She denied the fact..

She said that it stood for Shravan ki Sumo and Sumo ka Shravan…

I took her hand and kissed the “S”

I hugged her and she hugged me back..

———THE END—–

Okay,so my next part that is part 26 will be posted on Sunday or Monday! Till then keep waiting, and do share your reviews about it!

34 comments

  1. Smile

    Mind blowing Nikita … Ur are greatttt …… Keep continuing ur off writting … I will be waiting

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Oh hello? Aisa kuch nhi hone wala..
      Aisa kisi ne kiya na toh uske muh pe mukka..
      Okay??
      So chill.. You were and are a great writer!
      Thank you so much!

  2. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Just way too amazingggggg Nikki…!!
    Loved it so so much….!!!
    U just nailed it…!
    Luv u so so much…!!😊😊
    One more thing…is ur name really Nikita…or u hve just kept it?

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Aww di..
      thank you so much…
      i’m sorrry.. my phone’s not well, so i’m not receiving your private msgs… so sorry.. try again though
      And thank you so much.
      well my real name is not Nikita.. i liked this same so..
      Love you too
      -Niikkki

  3. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Yr nikki kya karti hai !!! Itna acha I was again imagining it n finally it was a happy ending……
    Wow yr u r just amazing….!!!
    Hahahah ye ep padh ne ke baad I was like koi CV’s ko ye ep Parhwa do plzzzz πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    Really loved it !!
    Amazing
    Fantastic
    MiNdBlOwINg
    Epic…!!!!! N many more great compliments fr this…!!
    Acha nikko wat do u mean by prt. 26…? I mean ur ff which u r writing or this one…..
    N is this ended…? I knw it’s only two shots but is it really end cause I don’t want it to End either….!!
    Plzzzz post ur nxt ep ASAP ASAP !!! Waiting…!
    Love u so much se Bhi bht ziada ….!!
    Take care…….!!

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Thannk you yaar di..
      rula doge aap toh ek din…
      Thank you!!
      CV’s… ab kya kar sakte hai..
      but let’s hope for the best
      Thank you.. so much!
      prt.26 of my ff…
      not this.. ye 2-shot .. 2-shot hi rahega di…
      I will post soon.. chill baba
      love you too di!
      _nikita

  4. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    *Bow down*
    *Standing ovation*
    *A li’l dance*
    *Running towards you*
    *Shouting in your ears*
    *Giving you a bone crushing tighty tighty hug*

    Nikku…I guess my actions say it all, beuatiful indeed that is. I have absolutely no words to say. One of the most beautiful pieces of work I ever read. Love u re😘

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Arre baapre…
      hugging you back with more force..
      thank you so much laddoooo….
      Thank you so much..!
      Thank you..
      it means a lot…!!
      Love you too
      -nikku

  5. Kaya

    Wow………. lovely ending………….just awesome………………….. really loved it…………you wrote so beautifully
    ……………… I loved it………….

  6. Naina

    Wow it was really nice i wish jaisa yahan hua ha aisa hi kuch dramy ma ho jaye aur hamary “love birds” mil jaen

  7. Shiny

    After the too sad story runninh currently…it feels great to imagine them like dis with ur ff….only thinh running in mind is …kaash serial mein bhi aisa ho jata…i loved it

  8. Neeti

    wow kitna accha tha
    wish show me ye hota..
    bt end nahi baki jo hua wo hota
    I’m going to sleep so sry
    and late ho ne ke liye bhi sry
    love you – Neeti

  9. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    oh my god… dis is soooo cute, I mean AGR Shravan itna mature hota to baat hi kya thi..
    loved it nikster! finger crossed .. something like this happens in d show.. 😍😍

  10. Nandini aka Nandu

    Long its seriously mind blowing Nikki. Just awesme😘😘😘. Keep writing dear. Waiting for next part. Keep writing such 2 shots and I must say u gave emerged as a writer- see it itself ur previous writings and now this one.keep going dear.

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you so much Nandu….
      Thank you!!
      i will keep writing for sure!!
      Yep.. i guess i have, but it’s even the different people who write here,
      and give me inspirations for better writings.. thank you so much!

  11. Tiara

    |Registered Member

    Its really great episode… Loved it… Hope this happens actually in d serial…
    Keep writing.. Waiting for your next episode

  12. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Nikita !!!! Mind blowing dear !!! Just just awwwwesome .. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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