““LOVE U““ A SWASANLI OS

Hi everyone this is my first try to write an OS that too on the magical couple swasan….ok lets see how it will be *fingers crossed…..and ya my naughty drama queen di i m dedicating this os to u….ok lets start….

A mansion is shown it is named as GADODIA mansion..

In a room a girl is standing infront of a dressing table she is wearing a blue jeggings with red formal top and a light make up with a matching acessories…she was combing her hair …

ON ANOTHER ROOM :

A boy is also standing infront of a mirror he is wearing a blue formal dress by setting his hair style. After setting his hair he shout while descending stairs….

Boy – shona…. are u both are ready or not….

Then swara comes there and said….

Swara – sanky why r u shouting i m coming na..

Sanky – shona u came but where is she …this girl na offf she is going to clg or any other modeling shows …y is taking this much time to get ready…

Swara – sanky wait let her come na…..

Then a girl wearing light green salwar came downstairs while wearing her watch….while descending the stairs..

Girl – aree bhai i coming na…waise i m a girl not a boy like u…

Sanky – but shona is also girl na but why she is not like u…¿¿¿

Girl – haan i m in collage and shona is going to office ok….

Sanky – haan….( interrupted by a voice )

A man is sitting in a sofa with a newspaper in his hands….

Man – sanskar why u scolding kakali…she is a little girl…give her some time beta…waise i dont know that how many boys are waiting for her in clg…???

Sansakar was slightly laughing by hearing the man’s words…

Kakali – papa tum bi na…bilkul bhai thara….any time making fun of me..go i hate u both only shona is on my side. Hai na shona….

Swara – haan kaku haam sirf aapki side hai…

Sanskar passed a death glare to both then sanky said…

Sanky – oh hello miss.drama queen stop ur drama . Its getting late…shall we move.

Papa – but beta breakfast…

Sanskar – nahi papa we ll eat something in office and i ll give money to kaku she will eat in clg.its already late na….

Papa – tk beta but dont skip ur breakfast ok…

Sanskar – sure papa…

Then sanskar touches papa’s feet for blessing and he touched sanky’s head and said

Papa – jethe raho beta….

kakali touches his feet and he bless her also then swara bends and touches his feet and he bless her . ….then sanky said…

Sanky ( shouts ) – della aunty take care of papa make sure that he will ate his medicens properly….

Della was standing near the dining and nods for sanky’s orders…

Sanky – ok bye papa…bye aunty…

Kakali – bye papa…bye aunty…

Sanky- urghhhh..copy cat…

Swara – bye aunty…bye papa…
Swali leaves with sanky….

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SWARA GADODIA – beautiful girl..who had everything in her life…her mother is died many years before…and working in GM DESIGNING HOUSE as a MD . AGE: 22 years old

SANSKAR MAHESHWARI – handsome hunk of mumbai .lost his parents in his childhood…lives in gadodia mansion as this is his mother’s brother house….had everything in his life including parents care and love….working in GM DESIGNING HOUSE as a chairman..he calls shekar as papa as he considering him as his papa .Age : 24 years old…

KAKALI MAHESHWARI : sister of sanskar…a naughty drama queen…and studying 1st year FASHION DESIGNING in xxxx clg….and loves her papa,shona and her brother.Age: 17 years old.

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swasan drops kakali at her collage then they went to GM designing house they entered the office …some will praise swasan as they are looking like made for each other.some will burning in jealosy on sanky and some in swara.then swasan greets everyone and gets in to their respective cabins…

SWARA’S CABIN :

She was go throughing some designs and said

Swara – what the hell is this….how will we do our show with this designs….arghhhh this sanky he dont even care about what is going on in office anytime on his phone…omg why u made me here ….¿¿¿

By saying this she went to sanky’s cabin….

IN SANSKAR’S CABIN :

swara came in as a strom and she was fully irritated after seeing his doings…he was playing angry birds and shouting like a kid…

Sanky – hey piggy wala see this time i wont leave u…..ya i did it …i did it..

He starts to dance as won the level….then he saw swara was standing there he ran to her and held her shoulder and starts to twist her around….swara looking him with cold eyes….sanky then said

Sanky – swara i completed the 38th level ….yoooo i did it…..

Then notices that swara was glaring at him then sanky said with a innocent face….

Sanky – kya hua swara dont u feel proud of me

Swara – for what ?????

Sanky – swara i completed 38 th level …..

Swara – stop it sanky , dont act like a kid….there we going to lose our bussiness and u here playing angry birds…sach me sanskar kaku will also matured than u….

Sanky – oohhh shona tell me clearly….

Swara – sanky see this designs ( handing over the file to him ) see sanky how will we do our show with this designs….¿?¿¿

Sanky sees the file and smiles at her. Swara said

Swara – why u smiling….????

Sanky went near his desk and take some file .came near her and said…

Sanky – shona take a chill pill….see this ( gave her the file ).
Shona this the designs. That are the rejected desigins….

Swara – ohhhh then how that file….( interrupted )

Sanky – shona first take some rest ok…our show is after one week not 2mrw….ok

By saying this he made her sit on chair…then sanky continues….

Sanky – shona u na first understand then take an action….and keep this thing in ur mind our show is in next week not 2mrw ok…..

Swara just nods she gets up frm the chair and she was about getout before that sanky held her wrist and said…

Sanky – shona please dont leave na then i ll get bored….

Swara frees her hand frm his grip and hit him playfully and said….

Swara – for ur kind information mr.maheshwari we are here for doing work not for entertainment so do ur work first and haan do u know that u r the chairman of this company….¿¿¿

Sanky – yes ms.gadodia i know it very well ok ur wish my command…yesss madam….!!!!!!

He salutes her and swasan brust out into laughter…
Then swara went to her cabin sahil came inside…..

Sahil – hi sweety…!!!!

Swara – hi romeo….!!!!

Sahil – hey dear whats ap….ur face is glowing more today…

Swara – yes sanky na…(interrupted )

Sahil – ohhhh har vakth sanky sanky…sweety apki boyfriend me ya sanky….¿¿¿

Swara – ohhhh romeo he is my bestie frm childhood…and u , u r my boyfriend na sanky also know this and why are u feeling jealous of him….

Sahil – oi hello madam i m not feeling jealousy ok….waise now i want something frm u…..

By saying this he went near swara and hold her waist and pull her closer to him….he leaned closer to her…..but suddenly the door was bang opened….

Sanky – shona vo….. stopped by seeing their position…

Then swahil parted away and sahil was seeing him with a cold look and swara says…

Swara – come sanky…

Sanky – vo…shona…i..m..i m sry…..

Sahil – swara i m going i have some meeting bye sweety….

Swara nods and sahil leaves……
Then swara said…

Swara – sanky bolo na…kya hua….¿¿¿

Sanky – nahi swara kuch nahi….ham… i m leaving…i ll come later……

Sanky leaves and swara looks at him….

IN SANSKAR CABIN :

Sanky came inside his cabin and sits in his chair…..

Sanskar monologue – kya horaha mujhe… i know that they are in relationship even i m also with NIA then mujhe kya farak padutha hai…..when i saw them like that why i feel something in my heart….no sanky she is ur bestiee from childhood thats it…..

Then suddenly NIA enters his room and said…

Nia – sir i need ur signatures in this file and this u need to check this and also u need finalise this decorations for stage….!!!!

Sanky ( irritated ) – nia please stop it leave me alone for sometime…..!!!!!

Nia – (calmly ) sanky wha happened???? Are u ok na…¿¿¿

Sanky – nia…..i need to share something with u…..

Nia – yes sanky u can….first i m ur friend sanky…..

Sanky – that is the thing nia… i dont know that who is my frnd and whom did i love….????

Nia – sanky…what do u mean….????

Then suddenly sanky said…

Sanky – no nia nothing u go to ur table…i have some work….

Nia silently went frm there and goes to her table….

NIA ‘S TABLE.

nia sat on her chair and calls someone….

O.s – hellooooo

Nia – haan kaku…hmm nia…

Kaku – haan bolo na nia kya hua…¿¿¿

Nia – narrates the whole incident which is happened in sanky’s cabin….

Kaku – nia u dont worry dear i ll handle it….ok bye dear takecare….

Nia – bye kaku….

Nia cuts the call…

IN THE EVENING..

swasan left frm the office …they r in the car..wierdly sanky was silent today….

Swara – sanky kya hua….???

Sanky – kuch nahi…¿¿¿

Swara – ok then…..

Sanky – then……

Swara – then why u shouted on nia….

Sanky – how do u know that…???

Swara – vo…vo…i asked her…

Sanky – swara this is my personal….

Swara – ohhh personal that too between u and me….

Sanky – haan personal u r my frnd thats it na…then nothing is between us ok….

Swara was shocked by his answer and then whole way to the clg they were silent…then they reached clg and picks up kaku and then the whole kaku do her bak baks but alas no one is answering her…she notices that swasan are looking odd today…then all enters the house….sanky first gets in the house he greets,shekar and wents to his room and shekar ask swara…

Shekar – beta isko kya hua…¿¿

Swara – kuch nahi papa just work tension….

Shekar – tk beta app dono jao jakar fresh ho hojao….

Then swali went to their respective rooms…

AT NIGHT IN KAKALI ROOM

kakali was sitting in her bed…she was biting her nails….

Kakali monologue – ye bhai na he cant understand his feelings…and ye shona she said she is loving sahil…aree baba kya karun…they both are loving eachother but they cant understand yaar…kaku u need to do something to unite them….kya karun…kya karun….¿¿¿…haan idea…

Then she took her lappy and call nia on skype…they both speak sometime and then kaku closes her lappy and happily goes to her bhai’s room….

IN SANSKAR ROOM :

Sanky was doing something in his lappy…kaku get inside the room and sat beside him and said

Kaku – bhai i need to talk to u something….

Sanky looking at lappy screen

Sanky – bolo….

Then kaku snatches his lappy frm him and put it in bed and sanky….

Sanky – aree kaku vo designs…

Kaku – bhai i nned to talk about shona….

Sanky kept quite after hearing the word shona

Kaku – bhai y did u scold nia…

Sanky – kaku i dont know yaar what is happening….

Kaku – bhai tell me clearly…

Sanky – kaku vo today….he explain the whole scenes including his monologue….

Kaku – ohhh iska matlab…..

Sanky – matlab kya ….?????

Kaku – u love her bhai……

Sanky – no…no…kaku….i …i love nia….

Kaku – no u love shona…..

Sanky – kaku how u saying this…

Kaku – bhai i m ur sister i know and why feel bad when u see her with sahil….

Sanky – ok kaku let it be …if i love her then what to do she loves sahil na he is also a good person….

Kaku – iska matlab u accepted that u loves her….huhuuuu yhea…..yipeeeeeeeee..

By saying this she starts to jump on the bed….

Sanky – shhhhhhh kaku stop…papa will come….stop it….sit down

Kaku obeys his order like a kid and sits on the bed by placing her fingers on her lips….

Sanky – kaku then waht about shona…?¿

Kaku – chill bro i ll make her understand….

Sanky – but kaku….

Kaku – bhai shhh…stop i ll handle it and u sleep and dreams about ur future with shona….bye good night

Then she hugs his bhai and went frm there here sanky goes to bed with a bright smile in his face….

IN SWARA ROOM

She was standing near a window and remiscing the moring incidents….an unkown tears flows frm her eyes….
Then kaku enters her room and goes to her and tap her shoulders…swara hurridely wipes her tears and turns to kaku and said

Swara – haan kaku kya hua tum abhi yaha….????

Kaku – i need to talk something…

Swara – hmmm bolo….

Kaku – u loves sahil na….

Swara – haan kaku why are u asking like this suddenly…

Kaku – vo…nothing i thought u loves bhai….

Swara – whattttt?????

Kaku – first chill shona….come sit….

She makes her sit in bed and said

Kaku – shona close ur eyes….

She closes her eyes…..

Kaku – whom do u see first in ur heart….

Swara had some flashes she suddenly open her eyes…

Kaku – kya hua shona…whom did u see….sahil….???

Swara – nahi…

Kaku – phir…kon….¿¿¿

Swara – sanskar……

Kaku – i told u na swara u loves bhai not sahil….

Swara – but he is my bestiee na so it can happens…

Kaku – then y dont u got papa image…

Swara became silent….

Kaku – shona man jao na yaar….

Swara – but sahil…

Kaku – frm when did u love…sry like him…

Swara – frm our school….

Kaku – haan thats it attractions can happen in that age….

Swara – then y that attraction not came on sanky…???

Kaku – shona sam jao…bhai har vakth apki sath rehathi he frm ur childhood…then sahil ..i accept that he is good looking so thats y i can happen shona……

Swara – but….

Kaku – ok tell me if u see bhai with nia u dont feel something in ur heart….

Swara – thinks sometime time and said….hmmmm i can feel something…

Kaku – thats it then what are u waiting for call him…

Swara – whom…

Kaku – aree sahil yarr ….abhi une batao apki love ke barre me…???

Swara – but…kaku…

Kaku – offff

Kaku takes swara’s phone and calls sahil number and she talks sometime…..all the time swara looks at kaku with a widened eyes…..then kaku gives phone to swara…and swara kept it in her ears and sahil said…

Sahil – sweety…oops swara i m happy for u both…dont get confused….i dont have any prob…ok take care sweet dreams….

Swara – thank u sahil…..

And she cuts the call and hugs kaku and cried then after sometime kaku leaves…..

IN MORNING :

As same all went to their respective destinations…..

IN OFFICE SANSKAR CABIN :

Nia enters the cabin and said

Nia – sanky i need to ask u something…vo u loves shona rite….all the best for that…

Sanky – nia how do u know that….i mean who told u this…???

Nia – sanky kaku already told me everything….

Sanky – whatttt….???

Nia – haan sanskar dont think about anything and i ll be happy for see u both together forever……

Sanky – thanku so much nia …
Amd i m really sorry for doing this with u….

Nia – no sanskar dont be sry…u continue … i m leaving…..

Then nia leaves frm the cabin sanky’s happiness has no boundaries….he calls kaku and thanks her and then by frm the next one week our was doing offical talks only because they cant look into eo eyes and in this one week shekar asks about this to kaku she tells him everything and finally the day comes…today is fashion show by GM designing house…..the show got big succes and they also got a chance to do their show in paris….they organize a party to celebrate this….sahil also came there…the party was going on nicely then kaku goes to sanky and said…

Kaku – bhai if u decided to stay bechelor forever…

Sanky – no ..

Kaku – then go na ….go n propose her…

Sanky – vo kaku how can i propose her…???

Kaku – then whom can i propose her….?¿¿

Sanky – kaku….

Kaku – go na…goo……

Then sanky goes to swara…kaku signals something to musicians and they starts to play the violin…sanky sits on his knees infront of swara….and said

Sanky – shona…i know that u misses u mom’s love and i can fulfill all ur wishes…and i can give u ur mom’s love also….swara will u marry me…will u be with me forever…¿¿¿¿

Swara was silent here kaku in a silent tone

Kaku – aree baba…omg god will cheated my parents or they wrongly take any other baby frm hospital…how can my bhai be like this….dekho ye hai world ki sabse worst proposal….urghhhh how much tubelight he is…?

Suddenly she hears a voice…

Voice – haan kaku sach me he proposed me also like this only he dont know how to propose…u should teach him…

Kaku – haan nia see now she will accept…

Here swara gives her hand to sanky and said ..

Swara – i will sanky….

Kaku’s mouth became “O”
then the music starts “sab tera frm baaghi “-

Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

SANKY TAKES SWARA TO THE DANCE FLOOR . HE HOLD HER WAIST AND PUT HER HAND IN HIS CHEST…

Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujh me kuch nahi sab tera

HE TURNS HER AROUND AND THEY DANCES IN THE BEAT

Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, sab tera..Sab tera, sab tera..

Phir dil ke raaston pe
Teri aahat jo hui
Har dhadkan jashan mein hai
Yeh inaayat jo hui (x2)

Main toh tujhe milke jee uthi hoon
Teri dhadkan mein chhupi hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahin
Sab tera, sab tera..Sab tera, sab tera..

Hey… ha…

Jis pal tu saath mere
Uss pal mein zindagi hai
Tujhe paake paaya sab kuch
Koi khwahish ab nahi hai (x2)Mmm..

SWARA’S BACK WAS TOUCHING SANSKAR’S CHEST.THEY BOTH ARE LOOKING INTO EACH OTHERS EYES. SANKY’S GAZE FALL ON HER CHERRY LIPS KAKU ALSO NOTICES THIS SHE SIGNS NIA AND BOTH WENTS TO THE BACK OF THE STAGE AND THE SCREEN FALL ON SWASAN IT COVERS THEM ….MUSIC STOPS… SANKY CAPTURES HER LIPS.THEN AFTER A MINUTE KAKU REMOVE THE SCREEN THEN THEY PARTED AND MUSIC MUSIC STARTS AGAIN….

main toh bas tujhse hi bana hoon
Tere bin main bewajah hoon
Mera mujhe kuch bhi nahi
Sab tera, sab tera..Sab tera, sab tera..

Song finishes both lost in eachothers eyes they came sense by the clapping sound…here on the other side sahil proposes nia and she accepted and then the reporters came to swasan and one of them ask.

Rep – sir when will u going to get married…

Sanky – soon…

Rep – did u say somenthing to a anyone…

Swara – yes we need to say one thing ..

Swasan – we LOVE U KAKALI .

Sanky – only because of her we both are together here..

Then suddenly a voices came

Voice – we also LOVE U KAKALI.

they turn to side and see there whole collage frnds there…NAVI, NIVE, FAIRY, MANSVI, VARSHA , SREE, MICA , MIRNA , ASRA , SNY ,ASHNOOR , FEBI , TANU , AFRA , HEMANSHI , MALIKA , MIA , VK , DHARANI….

They all spent some quality time then they leaves…

Then swasan hugs kakali….and the party gotover…..

The screen freezes on swasanli ‘s happy face…..

**********THE END********

A/N

Ohhhh finally completed my first os and my kakali this is for u….di best of luck for ur exams and i wish u reach ur all dreams in ur life i dont know that if i will be here or not when u return so i m giving u wishes through this os….

And sry everyone if i wasted ur time….and thank u for reading….and LOVE U KAKALI DI……

And my frnds if u have time please read my ff

http://www.tellyupdates.com/page/1/?s=once+upon+a+time+we+were+friends+swaragini+

Guys actually i made this as os but this is update little only so i make it as 2shots…

48 comments

  1. chanu

    Sweet and cute os dr…
    lv it!!
    Im glad dat nia and sahil understand swasans lv 4 eo!!
    Hee heee… his proposal!!? 🙂 it ws nice.. and kakus wrds after dat!! Omg its hilarious!!!
    Bz f kaku nly swasan r 2gethr! Yipeeeee…. im soo hpy!!

    And thank umaha 4 writing dis cute os!!

    Kaku!!! 🙂
    See u bcm sis f sanskar!! Lols..
    Im laughing seeing ur condition. Hey tie rakhi in his hands… *run
    im gonna miss u dr!!
    All the best 4 ur exams!! Lv you!! ♥♥♥♥

    Keep writing maha..
    be happy always
    ♥♥

  2. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Wow awesome lovely superb cute fabulous os mahi thangachi… ummaahh..kalakita po.. great hug fir this suprb work of urs.. semma kakali nee sister aakitta…
    hahahaga hey kaku ur sis fir sanskar and im dancing nagun dance.. but ur godmother fir their love story kaku.. good wrk making thm realise their feeling…
    Ladt bt not least it superb work teddy 😀 and thnk u for including me…
    kakali best wishes from my side too..

  3. Simin

    |Registered Member

    Dear its rocking
    Kaku u are tooooo good meri jaan
    U are the cupid here omg omg
    Maha u described kaku’s character perfectly

  4. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Mahhhaaa !!! lemme breath 1st…..





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    uiiii maaa !!! gimme some time yooo !!!
    Haah !! 1st i was wondering who might be SWASANLI ?

    then i started n i read drama queen …
    i got a doubt on u !!
    then i started ….

    ohhhhh goshhhhhhh !!!
    Mahhhhhaaaaaaa*scream !!!!
    what was that !! ??
    huhhh i m blessed !!
    It was soooo soooooo cute OS with full of sweetness…
    Waaaa love it love it love it… !!!
    Thnk u soooo much dear for writing this!!!
    Thnk u sooo much for dedicating this to me n my TU family members…
    LIIIVE IT dear !!!
    *twist ur nose… !!
    haaa dun i’ll b back n we will enjoy together !! *party hard …
    LOVE U … *sob… 😀😀😀😀😀😀😊

    • Maha016

      |Author

      di….!!!! first take a chill pill * drink some water…and now say how was my surprise…..¿¿¿ and ya lets rock the party after ur comback and di where is ur ff….??? i m missing it….

      • Kakali

        Virak Kohli !!! My fav cricketer … hahhhhh !!! *peak his cheeks…

        Haa Maha m writing dear !!
        just reached home ….
        huhhhh exam then tuition … *tired !!!
        but i’ll update tomorrow afternoon fir sure… !!!
        Gd Ewng !!! 😊

      • Maha016

        |Author

        dharani dear i m studying 11 std in tamilnadu and sry i cant msg u in tu because my phone is not giving any symbol of message delivered i can only read the messages cant reply so if u have account in fb please send me ur id i will msg u in fb….take care…

  5. Hemanshi

    |Registered Member

    i didnt even knew that you have posted any ff……i didn’t even saw this…….justwhen u asked me to read at that moment only i went on your posts and found it right there…….it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee
    loved it………..

    kakkuuuuuuuu come back soon meri jaan……..we will miss you very badlyyyy
    alll the best for your exams…………muahhhh

    mahaaaa it was awesomeeeeeeeee……………lovedit……..i didnt know you are such an experienced writer………………wooowwwwww i means i have no words for it…….
    lots of kissing heartsssssss……………muahhhh………i want one more os asap……..

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