I LOVE U! PR 1

guys tell me if u like it? in the comments….

IN GOA
EVERYONE IS READY TO GO TO THE BAR
SUMO IS WEARING A TIGHT BLACK PENCIL SKIRT AND A STRAPLESS BRALETTE AND BLACK STRAP HEELS….
SHRAVAN IS WEARING REGULAR BLUE JEAN SWEATS WITH RED TANK AND WHITE VANS
PUSHKAR IS WEARING BLACK SWEATS WHITE T-SHIRT AND BLACK VANS
PRETTI IS WEARING A FLORAL ROMPER WITH FLORAL WEDGES
THEY GO TO THE PARTY….
they all dance while sumo dances with other guys and shriven looks on in a jealous way and they finish dancing
pushkar brings them to the bar…. they decide to have a drinking contest
sumo drink 6 shots pushkar drink 7
pretti drinks 2 and shravan drink 3
preti takes pushkar to their hotel room and shravan feels worried for sumo and takes her to his hotel room…

this is all because i need to know if u guys want me to continue….

10 comments

  1. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Hello……It’s wonderful. Post next part soon. If the starting it like this…then…. just kidding. Gonna control my ‘romantic thoughts’. Keep writing. u r doing a great job.
    Love,
    Ariana

  2. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hey Maya! New writer??? Well, please please continue writng this one. It seems really good. Lots of love. Post ur next update abt this soon. Keep writing.
    Nandini

  3. pretty preeti

    Hlo Maya nice to read ur ff
    It was a gud one
    Continue it
    I give u permission
    No prob
    BTW ur age
    Di ki chotu
    Tell me
    Byeee

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