hey guys.. I’m Shilpa.. i thought of writing few shots with love hate relationship of yuvani.. its nothing related to the serial.. totally my own story..
guys consider this as my diwali gift… and my treat to.. dont worry.. kkhh is coming up..
i just wnted to give intro to this story
guys i need ur comments pls..

so ill give a character sketch :

suhani shrivasthav : a cute , simple innocent and studious girl.. a victim of early marriage..

pankaj shrivasthav : was once a caring and loving father. but due to greed for money and power is even ready to sell his daughter now..

latha shrivasthav : a very caring, loving and responsible mother… has given her daaughter all the good values needed for a girl.. but can’t do anything to help her daughter achieve her dreams..
yuvraj birla : the son of a very well know business man and don… never harms poor or innocent people.. only jarms wrong doers and criminals.. has done lots of good things. in the people of his place..

prathima birl : a very loving Nd caring mother of yuvraj.. she was against yuvraj fighting and killing people. but is happy that her son never harms good people…

prakash birla : father of yuvraj birla.. same like yuvraj…. a great business man.. loves his family a lot… he never goes against yuvrajs words.. he trusts him completely….

so lets start..
a huge hall is shown fully decorated with red and white flowers.. in the centre of the hall there is a board in which it is written YUVRAJ BIRLA WEDS SUHANI SHRIVASTHAV

here in one room suhani is getting ready her eyes are brimmed with tears.. she doesn’t have the smile or shyness the usual brides have.. her face is dull and pale.. she is wearing a red lehanga… she looks damn gorgeous…she looked like a sweet rose flower with raindrops scattered on it with tears staining her face….

Suhani’s pov :
ohh god y r u doing this to me.. my dreams and aspirations.. everything is destroyed.. marrying at the age of seventeen is not a thing to be happy of..i have had many dreams of studying in a well reputed college hanging out with friends.. living a bachelorette life but now at the age to study and hang around with friends im gonna be the wife of a man .. i, like every girl, have dreams about marriage. but not at such a young age that too with a don like yuvraj birla.. im being a mere ‘thing’ sold for business..
i know that yuvraj is not that cruel although he is a don he only kills and punishes the wrong doers.. he never hurts the poor innocent people.. but still how can i live with a guy for whom killing a person is like playing a game..
pov ends

in another room yuvraj is shown dressing up..

he is happy but he is guilty as well.. he is wearing a cream and red sherwani.. he looks damn handsome…
yuvrajs pov :
i hv no idea how should i feel.. happy or sad.. i really feel sad for suhani..
i know im a don and i dont deserve to be loved by an innocent and charming girl like suhani.. but i cant stop my heart and mind from loving her and wanting her…
but i wanna save her from the greedy clutches of her father..
pov ends..
the marriage rituals starts both birla parivar and shrivasthav parivar are present their with uncountable number of guests..
suhani and yuvraj sit in their respective places.. the pandit chants some manthras ..

pankaj is really happy and is smirking victoriously.. while latha doesnt have the glow and charm that usual moms of brides do have..
she is feeling helpless.. she cant do anything to help her daughter.. only thing she can do is to pray god that her daughter’s sasural helps her achieve her dreams and provides her a bright future unlike her dad..

the pandit asks yuvraj to tie the mangal suthra.. he takes the mangal suthra in his hands and ties it around Suhani’s neck.. a lonely tear escapes her eyes which was noticed by yuvraj.. he never wanted to see her tears.. he wanted to wipe them out.. but he couldnt.. he knew he was gonna be a kind of villain in her life which he never wanted to be.. he hated himself for being the reason for her tears…

at last… all the rituals including Suhani’s bidai was over..
it was their so called suhag raat..

prathima took suhani to yuvrajs room..
suhani was totally dull.. her charm was missing .. she just wished to runaway from there.. but she couldn’t and she wouldn’t Bcas her mum had taught her that after her marriage she has to adjust with her sasural no matter how different or difficult it was.. her mom taught her to be a sanskari bahu..

yuvrajs pov :
god.. i don’t know wats her condition… i hope i can handle her emotions tonight..
i wish i can tell her the truth behind the marriage that i am actually helping her and not ruining her lifee..

so guys stay tuned for more updates…
and ill b updating all my ffs every monday, wednesday, and saturday…

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  1. Shilppy this is amazing, I loe how you are tackling a major problem- young marriages.
    I love Yuvraaj’s personality and how he eliminates the bad and helps the good- and suhani is a victim and is helping her- it’s pure genius ??❤️?
    I am literally giving you a standing ovation- it’s that amazing x
    And how you got Pankaj to be the perpetrator- how money has got the better of him, it’s realistic and I love that ✨???
    Shilppy I admire you for even having a writing schedule- so organised, and pleasurable to all the fans ❤️

    To end this, this one shot is going to be awesome and I absolutely can’t wait to read your magnific peice ??
    Love Aqsaah Di x

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks a lot aqsaah sis.. Ly. Umwahhh…

  2. shilpa it is mindblwing …….i like the story line of this ff it is really superb and very interesting also.i very excited about nxt epi .plz update asap.

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks a lot sri sis..

  3. Suhaniyuvrajbirla

    it’s really super shilapa di… continue pls… no words to say… keep going…

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks a lot dude..

  4. Wow!!! Very nice … Happy diwali and new year

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks alot avani sis.. Same to you too

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks alot.. Kushi sis


    Just. Wow. Wow. Wow. I am stunned to silence and cant find the words. What an interersting concept and what a beautiful intro, i love how it contrasts to the beginning of ssel where suhani loved Yuvraj while he thought hated her. And here he loves her and she thinks she hates him… i am on the edge of my seat… cant wait for your update! Plus thank you for the writing schedule! Now i now exactly when to come and enjoy your lovely ff’s x

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks a lot shreya sis.. Ly..

  6. Nice ff.Mazinf yar.

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks a lot.. Ci…

  7. Nithu

    Shilpa amazing dear never heard or read about such diff storyline too diffrent and lovely..upload evn ua kkhh

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Thnks a lot dude… I hv uploaded kkhh…

  8. how are u shilpa?this one was very fresh and interesting concept.ur characters and concept both are quitely different.first hatsoff for u for this amazing thought.when love starts from hatred it will be much more strong.keep going like this.all d best

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Im really fine radha sis.. Hope u too r doing well.. I hv always wanted to see such a realtion ship..

  9. Uniqueangel

    Yaar pls update it fast iam waiting plssssss

    1. Shilpa-Saraj

      Dud.. By tue morning ull get it..

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