“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Intro and Chapter 1)

“I love you” – A Twinj journey

Hello, this is my first ff. Please go through it and let me know how it is.

Introduction
Twinkle Taneja Sarna : The female protagonist and is married to Kunj Sarna. A bubbly, caring and kind-hearted girl. She loves her own family as well as her in-laws family equally.

Kunj Sarna: The male protagonist and is married to Twinkle Taneja. A happy go lucky guy, caring and a true gentleman. He loves his family a lot and, can sacrifice anything for them. He treats his in-laws as his own parents.

Supporting Characters
Sarna Family

Yuvraj Sarna: He is Kunj Sarna’s elder brother and is married to Mahi Taneja. He also loves his family a lot like his brother and his biggest priority is his wife.

Mahi Yuvraj Sarna: She is Twinkle’s elder sister and is married to Yuvraj Sarna. She loves Yuvraj a lot.

Usha Manohar Sarna: She is Kunj’s and Yuvraj’s mother. She loves her sons a lot and treats her daughters in laws like her own daughters. She is very supportive.

Manohar Sarna: He is Kunj’s and Yuvraj’s father. He loves his family a lot and is a businessman.

Bebe: She is the head of the family and Manohar Sarna’s elder sister. She didn’t marry to handle the family. She loves Kunj and Yuvraj like her own sons and is proud to have Mahi and Twinkle as her daughters in law.

Taneja Family

Leela Taneja: She is Twinkle’s and Mahi’s mother. She is a very loving and caring mother. She is a businesswoman but, handles both her business and house nicely.

Raminder Taneja: He is Twinkle’s and Mahi’s father. He is more attached to Mahi but, loves both her daughters equally. A reputed businessman.

Chapter 1

The story starts with two boys in black track suit jogging and entering a huge mansion. The door shows a name board which states “Sarna Mansion”. They enter the mansion and climb up the stairs and go to their respective rooms.

Room 1
One of the boys enters a room. The rooms has a combination of black and white paints. On the wall opposite to the door a huge photo frame is hung. It is a wedding photograph. He goes to the bed, pulls down the blanket from a girl’s face slightly, kisses her forehead and says, “Good Morning Love!”
“Good morning hubby”, she replies. She says, “Go have your bath. It’s just 6:30 now and we need to go down by 7:30. Everyone will be waiting for us.”
“You care about everybody except for your husband Mahi.”, says the husband. “Liar! Don’t lie so much Yuvraj.”, replies Mahi.
“Okay fine. I’m going to take a bath. Be ready by the time I come out.”, Yuvraj says.
“Sure Mr. Husband.”

Room 2
The other guy enters his room. The room is a combination of white and blue. He goes inside and says, “Where is this Siyappa Queen?” He looks at his watch and says, “It’s just 6:30. She doesn’t wake up so early.” Just then a girl enters and says, “YOU!” She is wearing a pink churidar with light make up and looking gorgeous.
The guy replies, “Ofcourse, it’s my room.” The girl corrects him and says, “OUR ROOM.” She adds “Oh god! Kyun Babaji kyun? (Why Babaji why?) I woke up so early so that I don’t have to see his ugly face but, still he came. I couldn’t sleep also properly and now, I had to see his face.” “Oh hello! First of all I’m not ugly and secondly, tera chehra dekhne ka koi shock mujhe bhi nahi hai (I also don’t want to see your face).” “Dekho Kunj, subah subah mera mood mat kharab karo.”, the girl replies. “Exactly Twinkle.”, Kunj replies.
Kunj goes to the cupboard and takes out his clothes and as he was about to go Twinkle murmurs to herself “Pata nahi maa ne bhi kiske palle baandh diya! Isse toh main akeli hi acchi thi.” Kunj says, “Sunna maine.” “Haan toh! Sunane ke liye hi bola”, replies Twinkle and walks out of the room. While going to the washroom Kunj says to himself “She’s a total gone case.”

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Kunj (POV)
She’s is so childish, so mad but, still I love her so much. God knows whether she loves me or not. I’m scared to confess my feelings. What if she doesn’t feel the same for me and I lose her forever. I LOVE YOU TWINKLE. I LOVE YOU A LOT. I need to find out whether she feels the same for me or not.
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Hall
Twinkle comes down to the hall. A lady in her mid 60s, a man in his mid 50s and another lady in her mid 50s were sitting there. She greets everyone good morning and sits with them. They were talking to each other when the door bell rang. Twinkle said, “I’ll see.” She goes to the door and opens it. She saw a girl standing at the door in her mid 20s. She wonders who she was when Usha, Kunj’s and Yuvraj’s mother, came and asked who’s there. She saw the girl and greeted her saying “Come in Maya.”
As Maya was about to sit, Kunj came down and gave her a bone crushing hug. He looked towards Twinkle who was looking at them with narrow eyes. Kunj broke the hug and said, “Twinkle, hamare liye kuch breakfast leke aayegi please?” Maya added “Yes, I’m so hungry. You understand me so well Kunj.” Usha replied, “I’ll bring breakfast for all of you. Twinkle you sit and talk to them.” As she was about to go, Twinkle stood up and said, “Maa, I’ll bring it. You sit here. Why will you work when I’m there!” Usha agreed and Twinkle went to the kitchen.

Kitchen
Twinkle enters the kitchen and starts taking the breakfast. She mimics Maya and says, “You understand me so well Kunj”.

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Twinkle (POV)
What does this Maya think of herself ! Doesn’t she feel ashamed of flirting with my husband in front of me and all the other family members! But, what should I tell her. Kunj thodi na kuch kam hai! Kaise aake usse hug kiya. Mujhe toh kabhi nahi kiya. Aur mujhe introduce bhi nahi karvaya. Hadh hai yaar. Vaise bhi Twinkle tujhe kya! He hugs whom ever he wants to. Why do you care! No, but why shouldn’t I! I’m his wife. I’ve full rights to. Iss Maya ka kuch toh karna padhega.
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Mahi entered the kitchen and patted on Twinkle’s shoulder making her come out of her dream world. She greeted her saying “Good morning! Kya haal?” Twinkle replied, “Good morning di! Kuch khaas nahi. Kunj’s friend Maya has come so just taking breakfast for them.” She adds on “Anyways di it’s time for our breakfast too. Will you help me out in laying down the table?” “Sure. Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai!”, says Mahi.

Dining Area
Twinkle and Mahi are laying down the breakfast when Yuvraj comes. Twinkle says, “Good morning jiju! Kuch chahiye?” Yuvraj murmurs, “Mahi.” He replies, “No nothing. I’m very hungry. Can we start having our breakfast?” “Let everybody come.”, says Mahi.
After sometime everybody comes to the table and sit down. Maya sits next to Kunj making Twinkle boil in anger. She starts serving juice to everybody and purposely pours down the juice on Maya’s dress making Maya shocked. She immediately gets up. Kunj turns to twinkle and says, “Lend her one dress of yours.” Twinkle being left with no option gives one of her churidars to her. She changes and comes down.
After breakfast, Maya leaves which makes Twinkle more than happy and everybody go to their own rooms.

Twinj room
Twinkle is sitting on the bed and thinking about Kunj and Maya when suddenly Kunj asks her, “What are you thinking Siyappa Queen?” Twinkle replies, “Nothing.Why?”
“Nahi tu zyada sochti hai toh darr lagta hai yaar… kahin phir koi siyappa na kar de”, says Kunj.
“Tumse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai.”
“Toh kar kyun rahi hai? Mat kar na. Mujhe bhi shanti milegi.”
“Ab toh sach mein nahi karoongi. Tum karo jo tumhe karna hai”, replies Twinkle and walks out of the room angrily.
•••
Hey guys, how was it?
Please comment below whether it was nice or bad. If you people like it I’ll continue otherwise I won’t.
And, if you people like it then, I’ll publish the episodes on Wednesdays and Sundays of every week.
Please please comment whether it’s positive or negative.

Credit to: Ria

48 comments

  1. I like it.
    Interesting. But I did not understand the Hindi lines as I’m not of the Indian religion.
    Please can u translate a bit?
    and why will your updates take so many days? I take it you have studies? Its ok.
    Good job.

    • Ria

      Hey RiaA, I’m sorry for not giving the English translations. So,basically in the early morning fight after kunj says that I’m not ugly and I don’t want to see your face too, that is the last translation twinkle says don’t make my mood go off. And, then when kunj was passing her she said god knows to whom maa got me married, I was better single. Kunj replies I heard it and twinkle then says so what? I told so that you can hear it.
      Twinkle POV
      Twinkle thinks that what should I complain about Maya. kunj is nevertheless. The way he came and hugged her. He never hugged me that way.
      Then next twinj fight
      After twinkle asks kunj why are you asking he replies saying that when you think a lot I get scared, you might create another problem. Twinkle says it’s waste talking to you. To this kunj replies that then why are you talking. Keep quiet. I’ll also get peace. Listening this twinkle says now surely I won’t talk. You do whatever you want to.
      And ,I’m seriously sorry but, I can’t give regular updates cuz I’m in 11th grade but, whenever I give I’ll try my best to make it lengthy so that you people don’t get unhappy.?

    • Ria

      Thanx a lot and, I’m really sorry for not giving the English translations.. I’ll write it up from the next time. Hope you like it.

  2. Shreya

    It was awesome dear…well I would ask y were twinj married…??.. I mean there must b a reason ri8…u going on a nice track… Loved it.

    • Ria

      It’s an arranged marriage..just like in the real show.. kunj has started loving Twinkle.. Twinkle also does but, she doesn’t understand so, first I’ll try to make her realise her love and, love confession.. Right now in the story there are no villains..it’s going to be a happy story.. maybe I’ll think about villains later.

  3. Krystal

    fab yaaar ria it was awwwsssuumm n yeah….. post asap m eagerly waiting ….. love uhh a lotttt

    • Ria

      I’ll try to post early but, I don’t think it’ll be possible before Sunday but, just in case if I’m able to I’ll.. sorry to disappoint you but, I can’t help it.. these schools and colleges give so much to study..and, love you too..

  4. Keerthana

    Fabulous epi….???????? Do give English translations in upcoming episodes….. Story line is awesome…..

  5. dreamer

    Hey ri sorry gor late comment
    But dare u stop iy…lol…bcoz v luv it…
    Dude very well written….do ctd soon

    • Ria

      Surely I’ll.. all of you give me positive thoughts about my ff.. I thought you all might not like the plot.

  6. Sayeeda

    A warm welcome to Ria …..our new ff writer…
    Where were u have been for so many days….itna accha ff writer ab samne aya pr chalo thanks to u that u finally came…
    What a excellent start… looking forward for next one .ALL THE BEST

    • Ria

      Thanx a lot Sayeeda.. I’m glad that you liked the episode.. hope I can meet upto your expectations. I’ll try continuing soon.

  7. Rashi

    Ria welcome to TU….ya the episode was really nice….awesome blossom… Loved it yaar….give the next part asap….

    • Ria

      Thanx a lot.. I’ll try posting it soon.. I didn’t expect you all will like it soo much.

  8. fiona

    it was written very well
    enjoyed it
    and please continue 🙂 🙂 🙂
    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ loved the intro and epi 1 ♥♥♥♥♥

    • Ria

      Thanx for this lovely comment.. I hope I can meet upto all of your expectations. And, I’m so happy that you came back and checked the comments and read the translation. I felt you wouldn’t have been able to understand the entire episode.

    • Ria

      I’ll surely continue.. you people encouraged me soo much. And, I’m so glad that you liked it.

    • Ria

      I don’t think I’ll be able to.. I wrote in my episode that I’ll post on Wednesdays and Sundays so, I’ll try posting before that.. I actually didn’t think that so many people will like it that’s why I thought to keep the number of days publishing less. But, I’ll rethink about my decision now.

  9. crazy

    Awsm ria..
    Make this Maya a villan after some days n add few more cute scenes
    Btwn its fantastic episode dear
    Stay Rocking …!

    • Ria

      First of all thanx a lot to you.. cuz you were the one who inspired me and, more importantly told me how to publish it.. I was wondering for the past one month to post one ff but, I didn’t know how to.. and, I would have surely taken up your suggestion but, I don’t want to make Maya a villain.. I mean har ff mein woh villain hi banti hain.. toh mujhe uspe thoda rehem khana hai.. I’m sorry. But, I hope you’ll enjoy with the on going plot.

  10. tara

    hey ria..awesome job… its good to see u writing..
    interesting plot..
    loved the scenes..
    waiting for the next episode..

    • Ria

      I’m so happy that you loved it.. and, I’ll posting it quicker because a lot of people want me to. I’ll try my best but, please don’t get disappointed if I can’t and continue reading cuz your comments are gonna give me my interest to write.

  11. Romaisah

    Wowww u rite with confidence yaar n i started enjoying during ur introduction
    Now i can’t wait on a wednesdays n Sundays n whenever u get time do post 🙂

    • Ria

      Thanx a lot.. You all make me feel soo good. I’ll try my best to write it quicker and, surprise all of you.

    • Ria

      It’s all right Hima.. If you like it, please read the other chapters too. I’ve uploaded two more.

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