“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 9)


“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 9

Outside Sarna Mansion
Kunj and Yuvraj were busy loading all the things inside the cars. Kritika came and asked, “All set?” “Yes, you remember na what you have to do Kritika?”, asked Kunj. “Ofcourse jiju. You’ve given the work to Ms. Kritika Taneja. How can you even think of worrying about it?”, replied Kritika. He pulled her cheeks and smiled at her. Bebe, Usha, Leela, RT and Manohar came. Bebe asked, “Where are Twinkle and Mahi?” Yuvraj said, “They aren’t yet ready. You all start, we’ll get along. Anyways, you all are going to be in the same car, me and Mahi in one and Kunj and Twinkle in another.” “That’s okay. We’ll start together”, said Manohar. Kunj signalled Kritika. Kritika said, “No, we’ll leave. Driver kaka has been waiting for a long time.” “Ya actually, come on”, said Bebe. They all leave while Mahi and Twinkle come down talking to each other. “Where is everyone?”, asked Mahi. “Actually you both made it up so quick that they left. Now, Mahi you sit inside. We all need to leave too”, said Yuvraj. “Only di, not me! How mean jiju!”, said Twinkle teasingly. “Ya, you’re coming with Kunj in the other car na”, said Yuvraj. “No, I’m not”, replied Twinkle. Kunj gave a ‘what the hell’ look and murmured, “Toh kya padosi ke saath jana hai?” (Then what! You want to go with the neighbour?) She was about to get inside yuhi’s car when Yuvraj said, “Twinkle, please? Let me spend some quality time with my wife yaar.” Twinkle giggled listening to this and said, “Okay. Oh yes, tell everyone that I’m not coming.” Yuvraj asked, “What? Why?” He was about to tell her to come in their car when Kunj hit him with his elbow and whispered, “Go, do your own work. Don’t think about my wife.” Yuvraj giggled listening to this and went to their car. He started the car and drove off. Twinkle murmured, “How mean!” She went back to the door and was about to open the door when suddenly Kunj picked her up in his arms. “What are you doing? Leave me right now”, said Twinkle. Kunj ignored her and went to their car. The door was open. He made Twinkle sit inside and closed the door. “I don’t want to go with you. Open the door”, said Twinkle. He opened the other door and got into the car. He started driving. There was complete silence in the car.

Twinkle (POV)
Look at him. Kaisa pati mila hai yaar! (What type of husband I’ve got!) He’s the one at fault but, look how much attitude he’s giving. He didn’t even try to apologise to me. Let it be. This time I also won’t talk. He can go, talk to his Maya if he wants to.
Kunj suddenly stopped the car in the middle of a road. “Why did you stop the car? I want to reach there quickly”, said Twinkle. Kunj ignored her and went out of the car. Twinkle came out of the car and followed him. He stood in the middle of the road and spread out his arms. He shouted, “TWINKLE” “Why are you shouting? I’m here only, right next to you”, said Twinkle. “I LOVE YOU”, he shouted out hard leaving Twinkle shocked, amazed, happy, surprised and what not! He looked at her and smiled. She hugged him tightly and whispered, “I LOVE YOU TOO SADU SARNA!” He hugged her back tightly. They stood over there for about 5 minutes until everyone started staring at them. They separated themselves and got into the car.

They reached the farmhouse at around 1 pm. Everyone had reached there and had gone inside. Twinkle came out of the car and was about to go in when Kunj held her hand and pulled her to himself.
He shifted his hands to her waist and held her tightly. Twinkle tried to free herself but, it was all waste. “What are you trying to do?”, asked Twinkle blushing. “What? You don’t know! Okay, I’ll tell you. This is called romance with wife.”, said Kunj. Twinkle started blushing more and said, “I know that. But, someone might come.” “That’s all right. It’s all allowed. After all you’re my legally wedded wife”, said Kunj. Twinkle smiled and said, “Leave me.” “Yes, ofcourse I will. Just a kiss and you’re free”, replied Kunj. Twinkle promptly replied, “NO!” “Okay, we can stay like this then. Anyways, I don’t mind”, said Kunj. Twinkle came close to him and Kunj closed his eyes. She kissed him on his left cheek and pushed him back. “I asked for a kiss”, said Kunj. “So, what do you think I just did?”, asked Twinkle blinking her eyes in an innocent manner and went inside. “Where will you run away? You’ve to give me a kiss”, said Kunj and followed her inside.

Twinkle and Kunj entered and found the hall completely empty. They wondered what happened when Kritika came and said, “Everyone is in their room. They’re freshening up. You all also go.” “But,..”, Twinkle was about to say when Kunj interrupted, “Ya, I am also very tired after driving this long. Let’s go Twinkle.” Twinkle said, “You go. I’ll come after sometime. Anyways, there’s only one washroom so, you freshen up then I’ll go.” “No, I need to talk to you. Come with me”, saying this he dragged Twinkle to the room. Kritika giggled looking at them.

Kritika (POV)
Thank you Babaji! Thank you so much. I’m so happy that everything is sorted out between di and jiju.
Twinj room
Kunj and Twinkle entered the room. Kunj locked the door. “Why are you locking the door?”, asked Twinkle. “You won’t understand. By the way my kiss Twinkle!”, replied Kunj. Twinkle started blushing and said, “I gave na. What do you want again?” “You very well know what I asked for and what you gave me is not the same”, replied Kunj. “No, I don’t”, said Twinkle blushing. “Okay, why are you blushing then?”, asked Kunj. “Me and blushing? No, no, not at all”, replied Twinkle trying to control herself but she started blushing even more. “How much ever you try, you won’t be able to control so, just give me what I asked for”, said Kunj. Twinkle turned around and started taking her clothes from the suitcase. Kunj came and hugged her from back sending shivers down Twinkle’s body. “Okay fine. We’ll think about that later. Let’s freshen up”, said Kunj. Twinkle replied, “Ya, I’ll go. You wait for 15 minutes then you can go.” “Why to wait! We’ll go together”, said Kunj. Twinkle widened her eyes and said, “No, stop being shameless.” She pushed Kunj and quickly went to the washroom leaving Kunj smiling endlessly.

Everyone came to the hall after freshening up. Bebe said, “You four reached quite early. Otherwise the way you all planned one car for each couple, I thought it would take the entire day.” Kunj murmured, “Lag jata toh acha hi hota. Aj hi pyaar ka izhaar kiya aur biwi ke saath waqt bitaane ki fursat tak nahi.” (I wish it did. Today itself I confessed my love and I don’t even get the chance to spend time with my wife.) Twinkle said, “Bebe, I’ll make pasta for lunch right now. We’ll think about dinner later. We’ll order it.” “Okay puttar, tell us if you need any help”, replied Usha.

Kitchen (after lunch)
Twinkle was cleaning the kitchen when Kunj came and hugged her from back resting his chin on her shoulder. “Hi pretty”, said Kunj. “Leave me Kunj. Someone will come”, replied Twinkle. “I promise I’ll leave you. Just fulfill my wish”, said Kunj. “Kunj, I told you na your wish is fulfilled now, leave me”, replied Twinkle. “I also told what you gave and what I asked for is different”, said Kunj. “Mahi di”, exclaimed Twinkle. Kunj quickly left her and moved away. He looked at the door and found no one. Twinkle turned around, showed her tongue to Kunj and walked out of the kitchen. She came back to the doorstep and said, “Better luck next time patidev! (husband!)” and went running to the hall.

Kunj (POV)
Kab tak bhaagegi Twinkle! Kiss toh main leke rahunga woh bhi aj ke aj chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Main bhi dekhta hoon meri Siyappa Queen kitne bahane banati hai.
(Till when will you run Twinkle! You’ll kiss me today whatever happens. I’ll also see how many excuses my Siyappa Queen can make.)
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At the top-right corner of the page you’ll find three lines next to MENU. Click on them you’ll find a drop-down list. Click on ‘registration’ from the list. They’ll direct you to a page where they’ll ask for ‘username’, ’email id’, ‘password’. Enter all of them. Don’t forget to click on the check box ‘ I’m not a robot ‘. A window will open where in they’ll ask you to differentiate between some things. After all that, click ‘registration’. You’ll receive an email with a page URL. Click on that and proceed further.
Hello all! Firstly, thanx a lot for commenting and showering so much love. Also, thanx to all the silent readers.

Sayeeda, your comment! It was the best again. Those lines were really nice and it did make my day.

RiaA, I’m really glad that you’re liking the ff. Your comment really meant a lot. Thank you for such a lovely and sweet comment.

Shatakshi, I’m really glad that you liked the previous chapter. Your comment brought a smile on my face. I was really happy that you’re able to think of TEI through my ff.

How was the love confession? Did you all like it? I guess it was too ordinary. I’m really sorry for that.

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:


Okay, I’ll publish the next chapter tomorrow. Actually, I’m able to manage to write a chapter everyday between my regular schedule so I’ll post one. I hope you guys don’t mind. And, in case I’m not able to some day, please don’t be disappointed.

Lastly, please don’t forget to throw your comments whether it’s positive or negative.

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  1. Much awaited confession……. ?????? lovely episode….. ????

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Keerthana!?

  2. Rashiverma2199

    Ria its amazing…. Loved the love confession….. Superb…..waiting for tomorrow’s episode..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Rashi! I’m glad you liked it.

  3. Let me first thank u for making me relive the memories of tei …..in the same manner kunj was desperate to have a kiss from twinkle after confession but she was showing off her attitude making kunj to crave more for it…seriously ur ff always acts as a ointment on our bruise of quitting tei …love u sooooooo much for this gesture..
    Amazing ; marvelous ; fab; fantastic ; aweosme; splendid …..these all words r very small to praise this ff nd ff writer too…..
    What a beautiful confession…. can’t wait for next one to see how our kunj will get kiss from twinkle….

    1. Ria

      Hey Sayeeda, I’m really glad that you’re able to relive the memories of TEI. Even I left watching the show after Sidhant Gupta left. Anyways, I’m really glad that you liked the confession as well as the chapter.
      I hope you like the next chapter. Stay tuned. I’ll not making you all wait long.

  4. I’m silent reader of ur ff but dis episode forced me to comment such a lovely episode n cute confession waiting for next episode

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Riya! I’m glad you commented. I hope you like the next chapter. Stay tuned.

  5. Shamz

    Oh Riya Riya Riya….
    Tune dil mera liya…..
    Confession was super cool yo…
    The way you express simplicity yo…
    Hey hey hey hey….
    Yo yo yo yo….

    Tried to do express in different way hope you like it….

    1. Ria

      Shamz, I’m so happy that you liked the confession. And, those lines especially the second one brought a broad smile on my face. And, yes I did like all the lines. Don’t worry.

  6. Dreamer...arundhati

    Ria u r a fabulous writer….osum epi
    Keep writing

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Dreamer rather say Arundhati! Thanx for such a big compliment. I’m glad you liked the chapter.

  7. Yea ria ria ria……wat a cute confession yaar loved it ur d an amazing wrter I must say yaar do cont asap

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much for the compliment Zikra. I’m really glad that you liked the chapter and the confession. I’ll post the next chapter tomorrow. Stay tuned.

  8. Kruti

    Awesome epi ria….luved d confession

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Kruti! I’m glad you liked it.

  9. Was reading your fanfiction on my way to work and let me tell u, it was the only reason for my smile. Thanks to u my day will b perfect. This was the best epi for me. I was so lost in d epi that I went on reading till to the “Fiona” part not realizing the epi ended. OMG! Lol.
    Please update next epi soon as I’m anxious.

    1. Ria

      Hey RiaA, I’m really glad you liked the confession and the chapter. I’m really happy that I could make you smile. Yes, I’ll post it tomorrow. Stay tuned.

  10. Omggggggg I can’t tell you how happy I am loved soso much the confession was simple but heart touching and that legally weeded line of kunj made me learn of sid but loved it so so much

    1. Ria

      I’m really glad Bulbul that you liked the love confession. Yes, actually while writing this I always wonder sidmin and when I wrote that line I remembered Sidhant so much, that sequence too.

  11. Shatakshi

    That was sooooo sweet
    N yeah really I.can imagine tei through ur ff
    This is really amazing????

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Shatakshi! I’m really glad you’re liking the ff and able to relive the memories of TEI.

  12. Wooow yaar i seriously wanna hug u suprb

    1. Ria

      Hey cutie pie I’m really glad you liked it. Even I want to hug you all but, can’t help. We all are helpless.

  13. Fan

    I loved the epi…cant wait for the next one plz post soon…

    1. Ria

      Hey Fan! I’m really glad you liked the chapter. I’ll post the next chapter tomorrow. Stay tuned.

  14. Tara

    hey ria awsm epi.. loved ur status..

    1. Ria

      Tha k you so much Tara! I’m glad you liked the episode. Also, thanx for telling me about the status. Your dp is too good.

  15. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    wow loved the simple confession. …its was really a cute episode. ..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Twinjfan-(tamanna)

  16. awesome loved it post soon

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Sam!

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