“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 45)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey

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Chapter 44

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Chapter 45 (The wedding day)

The wedding venue
Kunj and Yuvraj brought Rahul to the mandap who was wearing an off-white sherwani while Kunj was wearing a blue sherwani and Yuvraj a red one. Twinkle and Mahi brought Kritika from the other side who was wearing a deep pink lehenga with her hair tied up in a bun and the chunni covering her head. Mahi was wearing a red saree and her hair was left open while Twinkle was wearing a peacock blue coloured saree with silver embroidery work and her hair was left open. Kritika and Rahul smiled at each other while Kunj signalled Twinkle with his hands “beautiful”. Twinkle smiled at him. They made Rahul and Kritika sit down and stood behind them. Leela and RT gave Kritika’s hand into Rahul’s hand. Some time later, the priest told both of them to take rounds around the fire. They took the rounds and then, Rahul made her wear the mangalsutra and after that the sindoor. Around after half an hour the Sarnas left from there back to Sarna mansion after the Tanejas bid adieu to their daughters.

Sarna mansion
Usha and Bebe welcomed Kritika and Rahul inside the house. Rahul was walking inside when Yuvraj said, “Bhai mere, bahut maza uthaya tha mera. Chal ab tradition follow kar.” (My brother, you laughed a lot during our wedding. Now, follow the tradition.) Rahul smilingly picked up Kritika in his arms and walked towards his room. Everyone smiled when Bebe said, “You all must be tired. Go, sleep.” Everyone nodded their heads and walked towards their rooms.

Krihul room
Rahul entered the room and walked towards the bed. He gently placed Kritika on the bed and after locking the door walked towards her. Kritika clutched the bedsheet while Rahul whispered, “Don’t worry. Even I’m not ready fatso.” Kritika opened her eyes and said, “You! How dare you call me fatso? I’ll kill you.” Kritika climbed down the bed and chased Rahul around the room. Rahul climbed on the bed and picked up a pillow. “Kriti, see. Don’t come near me”, said Rahul trying to protect himself with the pillow. Kritika picked another pillow and both of them started having a pillow fight. After sometime the room was covered with feathers. Both of them burst out laughing and fell down on the bed. “Good night”, said Kritika resting her head on his arm. “Good night”, replied Rahul kissing her forehead and both of them slept hugging each other.

Twinj room
Kunj and Twinkle entered the room while Kunj locked the door. Twinkle took out her dress from the cupboard and said, “I’ll change and come then, you go.” Twinkle was about to go when Kunj held the pleaded part of her saree. He pulled her towards himself and hugged her from back. “What’s the hurry?”, asked Kunj. “You’re still in the mood to romance?”, asked Twinkle. “Ofcourse. When you’re so unromantic I only have to be the one romancing”, replied Kunj. Twinkle turned around to face him. She sensually moved her finger on his face and said, “So, I’m unromantic?” Kunj smiled and nodded his head in a yes. Twinkle slid her finger down his neck and unbuttoned his sherwani. She held her collar and kissed him pulling him closer. Kunj was shocked but, after sometime reciprocated and around 5 minutes later, they pulled back. Kunj smiled looking at Twinkle who was blushing. Twinkle was about to go when Kunj picked her up in his arms. He gently placed her on the bed and came on top of her. He switched off the lights and they again consummated their marriage.

(10 days later)
Sarna mansion
Twinj room
“Mmm Kunj.. no more. I’m already full”, said Twinkle. “Twinkle, you didn’t have anything. Have this”, said Kunj picking up another piece of fruit. “I can’t have anymore. I’m really full. Give me the juice and I’ll be done”, said Twinkle trying to take the glass from Kunj’s hand. Kunj moved his hand back and said, “First have this.” “No, give me the juice”, said Twinkle. “Have this first”, repeated Kunj. “Fine, I won’t have anything. You go”, said Twinkle. “Twinkle”, said Kunj widening his eyes. “Kunj, it has just been five days. The way you’re making me eat by the end of 9 months I’ll weigh more than 200kg”, said Twinkle. Kunj laughed and said, “It’s okay. We’ll have a healthy baby then. Have this now.” Twinkle came close to Kunj and said, “Please?” Kunj nodded his head in a no. Twinkle moved closer while Kunj closed his eyes. Twinkle smiled and took the glass of juice from his hand. “Twinkle, this isn’t fair”, said Kunj. “Everything is fair in love and war”, replied Twinkle. Kunj angrily looked at her while Twinkle laughed at him.
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A nite for the readers of SO A LION FELL IN LOVE WITH A LAMB by Shatakshi
Hello lovely people,
I know that some of u r very disappointed with my msg…n I m really very sorry for it…so I m continuing the ff…but guys just do one favour on me…please give me 2 weeks…I will coverup all my studies n then I will surely be back with the ff…n Thanks a lot Ria for giving me the best suggestion when I needed it…n thanks again for giving my msg…love u all❤❤
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Hey all! Thank you for all your comments and support. Thanks to my silent readers as well.

RiaA and Kinjal, I’m glad you both let me know your opinions. I wasn’t hurt at all in fact it made me very happy. Please don’t be sorry. I always tell you all to be frank in your comments so, it’s completely alright.

Did you all like this chapter? How was Krihul’s first night?😂 Did you like Twinj romance and how was the unexpected twist?

Well, I hope Shatakshi brought a smile on your faces. Yes, I know, she’s a kid.😂😂 Just kidding.

Lastly, please don’t forget to express your views on this chapter through your comments below whether it’s positive or negative.

33 comments

  1. SidVee

    Superb epi.. loved how kunj rook care of twinkle.. really loved the twist.. and yea am glad that shatakshi isn’t ending her ff.. she can take all the time she wants.. after all studies come first.. I completely understand.. do cont soon 😀😀

  2. Monica

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    whaaaatttt? Twinkle’s pregnant ? wow! what a brain 😂 well excited to read it. btw, where is that and track now? is he again going to come as a special entry? overall, it was amazing! rahul and kritika’s first night (feels weird saying kritika, you know it why 😂) was so cute and adorable 😍 Happy to know that sha changed her mind. Looking forward for the next episode. Continue soon x and love you 💕

    • Shatakshi

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      Monica did u see Rahul n Kritikas first night😂😂
      It was Awesome right😛😛
      All the time I was laughing
      😂😂
      Good choice of name ria😘

      • Monica

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        Sha shut up 😂 enough already 😂 and i agree as well, good choice of name ria cuz after all kritika is such a pretty name and why won’t it be 😉 not just you, even i was laughing reading all of this sha 😂

  3. kinjal

    Ria 1stly thq fr understanding the demand of twinj scenes and today i m on cloud 9 after reading the episode.. its amazing..u r fulfilling our left wishes which was nt completed in orignal TEI.. so big congratulation😃😍

  4. Aishwarya.twinjfan

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    Awesum epi Ria
    Do cont
    Nd dont forget Anand track
    Waiting for next epi
    Nd upload ur other ff’s also
    Lyk
    Is everything really lyk it seems to be?
    I want to knw hw tw will prove kunj wrong.
    Nd kunj falling for tw.
    Nd kunj’s manoa tw will happn
    Nd mahi’s recovery.
    Waiting for it.
    It has so much suspense.
    Pls upload tht fast. Otherwise my head will blast thinking abt it

  5. Thanmy

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    Awesome dii wow twinkle pregnant yeah!!! And 200 kg was too funny I just loved it and shatakshi I am glad to know that u r continuing I am very happy its OK if you take time studies important thanq both of u

  6. RiaA MendeZz

    Twinkle? pregnant? Wowwwwwwwwww…totally unexpected. As I was reading my eyes kept growing wider and wider but I’m so happy..
    Awesome chapter.

  7. Shatakshi

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    Ria ki bacchi😒😒
    Mujhe bacchi bola😂😂😂
    N the episode was like😱😱😱…kab kaha kaise

    But it was really too good
    N Rahul n KRITIKAS 😛 first night was Awesome😂😂…lolzzz u know what I mean
    Loved it to the core😘😘😘

  8. jasmin

    Super epi ria di…i loved the epi very much…plzz post next epi asap…n ur othernff too…love u loads…muah!!

  9. Chiku

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    😘 😘 rahul nd kritkas first nyt was awesome 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 indeed it was fun fr twinj…… Liked it

  10. Sayeeda

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    Amazing episode Ria… Too good…
    Twinj scene’s were superb… Happy to know that Twinkle is pregnant…
    Loved it…
    Love u 😆💕

  11. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Awesome… Twinkle pregnant…wow…. superb…
    Happy to hear shatakshi is gonna write her ff soon… take ur time shatakshi… good decision…

  12. Rashiverma2199

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    Lovely it was ria….awesome…..u took my suggestion that’s so sweet of u….
    Amazing….
    U can take ur own time…..
    I understand there’s a lot to study….

  13. SidMin

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    Ria Loved the episode and Rahul and Kritika’s first night was too good and Twinj ,Twinkle is pregnant
    I wanted to know more about ..
    Loved the episode waiting for the next Loved it 🙂

  14. Laddoo

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    Huff! Di…main naraaz hu…u didn’t even tell me that u wr gonna post this today…huhh…
    U want to know the feedback of today’s chap? Hmmmm….so it was….nice? No….good? No….hw was it?…..ya Supa Dupa good? Kinda. And the word is Mindfreakin’blowing! Bass i won’t say much…love u…gussa udan chhhoooo…

  15. TwinjSidMin

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    Awesome episode riya…twinj scenes were superb and twinkle is pregnant wowwww…200kg and healthy baby part was😂😂😂😂
    Riya I’m eagerly waiting for your 2nd ff is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? Please post this ff soon…

    Love you 😘😘😘

  16. Romaisha

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    Wow !! What an awesome twist!!! Loved it 👌👌
    And i love your twinj scenes alot .. They kinda remind me of them in tei 😭😭 sorry … I suddenly miss sidhant yaar
    Anyway… Hope you post soon .. Camt wait to keep reading..

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