“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 4)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 4

Evening
Yuhi’s room
Mahi was getting ready when Yuvraj comes and hugs her from back. He rests his chin on her shoulder and says, “Let’s go!” “Sure Mr. Husband. But, first let me get ready”, replies Mahi while applying her lipstick. Yuvraj says, “I don’t care how you look. Mujhe tum har roop mein pasand ho (I love you in every form).” “I know but, I’m not getting ready to impress you na. May be I’ll find someone hotter and more dashing in the restaurant. That’s why!”, Mahi sarcastically replies. “Oh! I get it. I’ll also see how someone comes near you. You’re only mine forever”, Yuvraj replied. “Okay fine. I was just joking. Now, come let’s go. I’m done”, Mahi says and they leave.

Twinj room
Kunj comes in the room and is awestruck to see Twinkle. She was looking absolutely gorgeous. She had her normal attire but, something was different which made him more attracted to her. He said, “Wow Twinkle! You’re ready! I thought I’ve to come and tell you to make it up fast.” “Mrs. Twinkle Taneja Sarna is punctual when someone takes her to some place she loves to go to”, replied Twinkle. “So, basically you mean that you don’t like to leave our room. You find this place better than the hall. Hmm..”, replied Kunj. Twinkle said, “If you’re done talking rubbish then can we please leave?” “Yeah sure”, replied Kunj.
Kunj was riding the bike (as everyone took the cars when they went out) and Twinkle was sitting behind. Suddenly, Kunj applied brakes because of the traffic. Because of the sudden jerk Twinkle placed her hand on Kunj’s shoulder. Kunj looked in the side view mirror and smiled. He turned back and said, “You can keep your hand on my shoulder. I don’t mind.” Twinkle smiled and kept her hand on his shoulder.

Mall
Twinkle and Kunj entered the mall and went near the shops for women apparels. Twinkle said, “Let’s go to this shop. It has a good collection I guess.” Kunj agreed and said, “Okay”.

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Kunj (POV)
I don’t care which shop we go to. If it’s your choice it’ll be the best. And, I’m pretty sure Ragini will also like whatever you purchase.
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Twinkle shook him and asked, “How’s this?” She was holding a full sleeves blue gown which had white embroidery work all over it. Kunj shook his head in a no and said, “Something ethnic. She prefers ethnic over western dresses.” “Let’s go to another shop then, this one is good for western outfits”, replied Twinkle. They went to many shops and, finally they selected a black salwaar which had silver lining, three silver stripes on the sleeves from the end, a bit of embroidery work done with silver and a black dupatta with silver lining. Both of them decided to buy the salwaar. Kunj said, “You go, get the billing done. I’ll just come.” Twinkle nodded her head in a yes and went to the billing counter. Kunj quickly made a call and said, “Yes it’s done. It’s a combination of black and silver so match everything accordingly.” He disconnected the call and went to the billing counter. They purchased it and went out of the shop.
It was exactly 7 and Kunj said, “Twinkle, hurry up. We need to go to Starbucks. It’s already 7!” “Wait Kunj, Starbucks kahan kahin bhaga jaa raha hai? (Starbucks is not going to run away somewhere) We hardly get time to come out. Let me roam around peacefully”, replied Twinkle. “Haan toh yeh shops bhi nahi bhaagenge. Tu abhi chal mere saath”, (Ya so these shops also won’t run away somewhere. You come with me now) said Kunj and dragged her from there.

Starbucks
They entered the cafe. It was completely dark. Twinkle got scared and held Kunj’s arm tightly. She asked “What happened to the lights?” Just then the spotlight fell on both of them. The cafe was lightened up with small lights. Kunj had booked the entire cafe for the evening. The arrangement had a combination of blue and white colours. Blue coloured carpets were laid down. Blue and white flowers were placed everywhere making the place look more beautiful. There were blue and white coloured cloth hung on the walls in the form of twisted curtain. The place looked extremely beautiful. In the middle a round table was placed and two chairs opposite to each other. Two candle stands holding lit up candles were placed in the centre of the table with roses on either side. (Candle light dinner arrangement) There was soft music which filled the entire environment. The violinists were playing “Dekho Naa” (From Fanaa). “Wow Kunj! This is so beautiful. Did you do it?”, asked Twinkle. “No, the Starbucks people did it. I just told them to”, replied Kunj. “That’s what I meant”, said Twinkle.
Kunj entwined his hand with Twinkle’s and went towards the table. He pulled the chair for her and she sat down. He went to the other side and sat down. He asked, “Did you like it?” “No”, Twinkle promptly replied. Kunj was disappointed and asked, “Why?” “That’s because I loved it. When the arrangements are done so nicely how can someone only like it!”, Twinkle smilingly replied. Kunj was too happy with her reply. A waiter came to them and placed two cold coffees with extra cream. (Twinkle’s favourite) Twinkle was extremely pleased and said, “Thank you for the date. Now, I get it why your morning coffee was bothering you so much.” Kunj smiled and replied, “But, the coffee was seriously bad. Bhaiya disturbs bhabhi a lot.” “Kuch bhi bolo jiju hain bade romantic. I wish mera pati bhi hota”, (Whatever you say jiju is very romantic. I wish my husband was also like that.) said Twinkle. Kunj quickly placed his coffee on the table, lifted his one eyebrow up and asked, “What?”. Twinkle realised what she had said and replied, “What what? I was telling that jiju is very romantic.” Kunj smiled and said, “Okay if you say so.” They continued with their talks. Kunj looked at his watch, it was 9. He asked the waiter to bring their dinner. They had their dinner while talking and the entire time Kunj was busy staring Twinkle. The way she talked non-stop, the way she ate, he liked everything in her and today there was something really special which made him more attracted to her. He wondered what it was.

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Kunj (POV)
I don’t know there is something different today. Why do I feel more attracted to her! I’m again falling in love with her. Look the way she talks. She won’t even be knowing that I’m not even listening to her. I’m completely lost in her. Uff! She’s killing me. Control Kunj! Control! Sambhal khud ko. (Control yourself.) But, she’s driving me crazy. Uggh! Relax.
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They slowly finished their dinner with Kunj staring at Twinkle and Twinkle talking non-stop. It was 11 now. Twinkle looked at her watch and said, “Kunj, it’s 11. Let’s leave. Everybody will be worried at home.” “Shoot! I didn’t even notice the time. Come, let’s go”, saying this they left.
They went to the parking and drove back. Kunj glanced at Twinkle in between through the side view mirror. She was looking breathtakingly beautiful. Her loose hair was flying and they played with her cheeks.

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Twinkle (POV)
Did he really forget? Everybody forgot. This is so bad. Why is everybody so careless! I understand for everyone. But Kunj and Mahi di, how can they forget! By the way, I must say the surprise was amazing. I loved it. Kunj put it in so much efforts. But, why! Anyways, forget it na. I’m feeling too sleepy. And, here we are. Back home. The evening was amazing. But, my point is how can they do this!
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It was 11:55 now. Kunj parked his bike and as they were about to enter he said, “Twinkle close your eyes.” “What? Why? How will I walk if I close my eyes? And, anyways it’s 12 I’ll directly go and sleep and close my eyes. I don’t need any tutorials.”, replied Twinkle. “Please Twinkle. Please?”, pleaded Kunj. “Okay fine then”, replied Twinkle.
Twinkle shut her eyes and Kunj blindfolded her. They went inside and as soon as they went inside Kunj removed the cloth from her eyes and turned her around. The clock struck 12, the lights switched on and everybody shouted “Happy Birthday to you Twinkle!”. Twinkle was amazed, surprised, happy, and what not. She turned to look at Kunj and he said, “Happy Birthday Twinkle!”. She hugged him tightly and said, “Thank you Kunj. Thanx a lot. I thought you forgot..”. She was about to complete her sentence when Kunj pulled back and put his finger on her lips and said, “I never will. You’re my wife and your happiness is my priority.” Twinkle looked at him with teary eyes. Mahi came and stood beside her and said, “Subah bola tha na (I told in the morning right)whenever, wherever, no time sense.” Twinkle playfully punched Mahi and they shared a hug. She went to everybody and took their blessings. Bebe said, “Puttar, tomorrow we have arranged a party. You need to look fresh so please go and take rest for now.” “Ji Bebe”, replied Twinkle. Everybody went to their respective rooms. Kunj and Twinkle went to sleep with a broad, satisfied smile on their faces.
•••
Hello all! Did you all miss me? I missed all loads yesterday.
Anyways, thanx a lot for showering so much love and supporting me. Each of your comment means a lot to me. And, more importantly thanx a lot for understanding me.

Sayeeda, your comment makes me feel so nice. And, as I said I don’t mind your long comments. So, please write whatever you want to.

RiaA, thanx for such a lovely sorry two lovely comments. I’m really glad that you liked my ff.

Rashi, I hope you liked the coffee date and dinner.

I would like all of you to tell two things.
1) Was I able to describe the date arrangement properly? If not, then please do tell me. I will try to work upon it and describe the arrangements properly from next time.
2) Will you all like to read the next chapter tomorrow or day after? I thought many of you would like to read it tomorrow as it’s a birthday special and, as it’s birthday special the chapter is going to be a bit long. I hope you all don’t have a problem.

So, please stay tuned whether it’s tomorrow or day after.

And, please don’t forget to throw your comments whether it’s positive or negative.

Credit to: Ria

48 comments

  1. Tomorrow pleaseeeeeeee. I don’t want to wait any longer.
    The way u described the arrangements it seemed wonderful, honestly.
    I do not mind the long epi, in fact make it as long as possible ok?! cause I enjoy your writing.
    I’ve only read two ff’s before yours and that’s of sweetie and writer of “I love the way you lie” I kno her name but I don’t kno the spelling out of my head ? forgive me? . they are excellent writers and now, ria, I place you amoung those two. Your writing is simply beautiful.

    • Ria

      Thanx RiaA! Your comments always make me feel special. “I love the way you lie” is written by Shatakshi. Thanx a lot for giving me that special designation. I’m really glad that you liked my ff so much.And, the next chapter is almost done. I’ll update it tomorrow for sure.

  2. bulbul

    Hi ria it was just amazing the way you describe the arrangements were fantastic I was really imagining it BTW your episode was very good but…… Plzzzzzz make twinkle realize her feelings soon

    • Ria

      Thanx a lot Bulbul! I’m really glad that you liked the episode. And, just a bit more patience and you all will see the realisation. I promise. Just a bit more.

  3. Jisha

    Hi Ria,
    U describe arrangements beautifully..I am comfortable with any day u post.. that’s up to u.
    I don’t mind long episodes…

    • Ria

      Hey Jisha, first of all thanx a lot for answering all the questions. And, thank you so much for understanding. I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow. Stay tuned.

  4. crazy

    Its awsm riya..
    Sorry yar last time mood was not good so I din reply..
    But NVR a mind..
    Even if sometimes I don’t reply I do read ur ff
    Good luck…

    • Ria

      Crazy, please don’t say sorry so many times. I understand. It’s human nature. And, I’ll always remember this comment. Because I really want you to read all the chapters as you were the one who helped me post it. So, thanx for the assurance. And, thanx for the appreciation as well.

  5. dreamer

    It was mind blowing ria. U described it very well and ya plzz 2morro update. I m dieing 2 read further.
    Ctd asap

    • Ria

      Hey dreamer! Thanx for this appreciation. It really makes me feel so nice. The next chapter is almost done. I’ll post it tomorrow. I won’t make you people wait for long.

  6. Rashi

    Ria I really liked the episode…..
    And ya I really enjoyed the coffee date…..
    U perfectly described all the arrangements…. I loved it….superrr seeee uperrrr….
    Want the next part asap….????????

    • Ria

      Thanx a lot Rashi. I’m really glad that you liked the episode and especially the date. And, I’ll post the chapter tomorrow. I won’t make you all wait long.

  7. Shatakshi

    Hey the episode was Awesome as always
    N yeah I want to read it tomorrow
    Please please please
    N u described the date soo well
    I just loved it??

    • Ria

      Thanks a lot Shatakshi. You all are supporting me so much. Thanx a tons. How much ever I thank it would be less. Anyways, I’m happy you liked the date. And, I’ll update the next chapter tomorrow.

  8. Jaya

    It was fantastic Ria! I’m sorry if I don’t comment on all your episodes! It is because I am travelling now and internet connection is problematic. But great work 🙂

    • Ria

      It’s alright Jaya! Don’t worry so much. Thanx a lot for the appreciation and have a great and safe journey.

  9. tara

    wow ur descriptions are mind blowing…. i always lack in descriptive topics.. 😛 anyways i just love ur ff.. i mean its becoming a sensation day by day…. i m becoming addicted to it.. bt m sad as when my school will open i will not be able to visit TU frequently so my request is plzz post the link of ur episodes so that if i miss it i can read further. one more thing do u belong to ICSE school??

    • Ria

      Tara, thanx a lot for the comment and so much appreciation. If you’re ready to, let me know your email address I’ll send it to you. I have the copies of all the chapters I’ve written till now. And, no dear I don’t study in an ICSE school. But, can do you want to know?

      • tara

        ok i will post my email adress in my next episode as many wants it… btw didnt get ur last line..

      • Ria

        Yeah sorry. That was because of the autocorrect. I meant can I get to know why you wanted to know that!

  10. fiona

    date was described brilliantly , this symbolises that u are very nice in english
    epi was breath taking wonderful
    loved it
    post next epi tomorow if u can
    sorry i comment very very very very late in your previous epi but it was awesome

    • Ria

      Hey Fiona! I’m not at all great in English I just used plain English. By the way thanx for the love and support. I’m glad you liked the date and the episode. And, Fiona it’s alright. I don’t mind a late comment. It’s always welcome. I’ve replied to your comment. I feel happy that you took out the time to comment on the previous chapter yesterday even though it had went to the 3rd page or something.

      • fiona

        i saw that u have replied in previous epi and was really happy
        and ya u are great in english
        i liked your writing style
        it doesn’t confuse and in some ff i got confuse between flashbacks povs
        but not got confuse in yours

  11. Shamz

    Hey Riya you’re going amazing…. I must say u r one of the best writer and I’m glad that you told me to read ur ff otherwise I won’t be able to read is CH a good story…..and yah date description was beautiful…… 🙂 🙂

    • Ria

      Thanx for such a big compliment. But, I don’t write so well also. There are many who are writing much much better. And, moreover look who’s talking. You’re telling me this! I don’t believe it. You write thousand times better than me. Anyways, stay tuned for the next chapter. Lastly, why didn’t you upload today??

      • Shamz

        Sorry actually I was very tired last night that is why I was unable to upload but I’ll definitely upload it tomorrow….. And whatever I told I mean it….. 🙂

      • Ria

        Thank you Shamz.. Loads of love. I really feel glad that you complimented me as one of the best writers cuz to be frank I like your ff more than anyone’s. And, I’m too happy you assured you’ll upload tomorrow as I started thinking about the comment of yours.

  12. Sayeeda

    Tomorrow means tomorrow …..as I can’t wait for 1 whole day for ur special episode….
    Ria yrr I just can’t compliment u with my words coz they r less in terms of ur praise…..my goodness the way u gave the description of dress nd decorations I was awestruck… how some one can beautify those things through words….
    U know I read ur ff in the morning only but commented late as I was findings words to appreciate u ..U also don’t know how much special day u make for me through ur ff…reading ur ff means poora din accha jane ka assurance…. love u to the core….. muahhh

    • Ria

      Sayeeda, I was just completing my next chapter when I just remembered about you. I was just wondering what happened! I thought maybe you didn’t like it.
      Thanx for the comment. I read it twice just to see whether I read it wrong or not. And, loads of thanx for telling me that you understood the descriptions because I thought I’m not so good at describing things.

      • Ria

        One more thing. Command accepted. I promise you’ll get to read the next chapter tomorrow.

    • Sayeeda

      Oh!!!! yrr after reading ur reply I felt so happy …right now my joy nd happiness has no boundaries… u were thinking of me nd that while writing ur ff ….love u yr nd never ever think I don’t like ur ff as this is impossible ..sometimes it happens I get busy wid official stuff ..so I comment late but I assure u will always find my comment..

  13. Cutie pie

    Offcourse i want it 2morrow parso tak wait nai hoga dis epi was awsme i was miling while reading i was rembering deir date whn dilwale team had cme soo good it was plzzz kal hi post kardo

    • Ria

      Hey cutie pie! Thanx for commenting and the appreciation. I promise main zyada wait nahi karvaungi. Next chapter almost ready hai. Main kal post mar dungi. And, i read somewhere that you stay in Karnataka. Even I do.??

  14. FataraJo

    Hey Ria sorry for the super late comment was super busy today but I did read ur ff it’s just mindblowing dear bless u love u and thanks for such a lovely ff

    • Ria

      Hey Fatajaro! Thanx a lot for such a lovely comment. It’s okay, please don’t say sorry. I do understand. And, stay tuned I’ll publish another chapter tomorrow.

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