“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 39)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 39 (Yet another guest)

Sarna Mansion
Yuhi’s room
Mahi entered the room and saw Yuvraj working on the laptop. He looked at her and quickly turned his face away. Mahi went and sat on the bed. She placed her hand on her stomach and said, “See Baby papa is so bad. He’s not even talking to me. After you come no we both will together ignore papa and irritate him.” Yuvraj walked up to her and placed his hand on her stomach. “No Baby don’t pay attention to what mamma says. She’s bad that’s why she finds good people also bad”, said Yuvraj. “Don’t make my baby against me”, complained Mahi. “What were you doing a few minutes ago?”, asked Yuvraj and was about to go when she held his wrist. She got up from the bed and stood before Yuvraj. “I’m sorry na”, said Mahi. Yuvraj turned his face away. “Okay fine give me any punishment you wish to”, said Mahi wrapping her arms around Yuvraj’s neck. Yuvraj smirked and looked at Mahi. “You’ll do anything I tell?”, asked Yuvraj. Mahi nodded her head in a childish way saying yes. Yuvraj smiled and removed Mahi’s hands away. He turned around and walked towards the door while Mahi said, “I’m sorry Yuvraj.” Yuvraj closed the door and walked towards Mahi. “Why did you close the door?”, asked Mahi. “You wanted a punishment na”, said Yuvraj and stood before her. He sensually moved his finger on her face and said, “Your punishment.” Mahi raised her eyebrows asking what. Yuvraj pulled Mahi closer by her waist and pointed towards his lips. Mahi shied and said, “That’s not a punishment.” “It is”, replied Yuvraj and pulled Mahi even more closer. “Someone will come”, replied Mahi. “The door is closed”, said Yuvraj rubbed his nose with Mahi’s. “No”, said Mahi. “Fine then”, said Yuvraj and loosened his grip. Mahi moved closer to him and softly kissed his lips. She was about to pull back when Yuvraj pulled her closer by tightening his grip around her waist and deepened the kiss. After around 10 minutes they pulled back being out of breath while Mahi shied and hugged Yuvraj. He rubbed her back and after sometime both of them went to sleep.

Twinj room
Twinkle arranged her cupboard and as she was about to go Kunj came before her making her stand by the cupboard. “Move away”, said Twinkle faking anger. “Stop doing this drama”, replied Kunj. “Wh..what drama?”, asked Twinkle. “I know you aren’t angry with me. I heard you talking to Bhabhi”, replied Kunj. Twinkle was about to go when Kunj placed his hands on the cupboard preventing her from going away. “You know I was so upset because I thought I hurt you but, you were just pulling my leg. But, obviously why will you care about me and my..”, said Kunj but was interrupted as Twinkle softly kissed his lips. She pulled back and said, “How much do you talk?” Kunj stood there shocked while Twinkle snapped her fingers in front of his eyes. He came back to his senses and said, “What did you just do?” “What?”, replied Twinkle raising her eyebrows. “Why did you kiss me?”, asked Kunj. “I wanted you to stop. You were talking non-stop”, replied Twinkle. “You could’ve kept your hand on my mouth also”, said Kunj naughtily. Twinkle started blushing and played with her fingers. She tried going away when Kunj held her wrist and pulled her back. He wrapped his arms around her waist and said, “Mrs. Kunj Sarna.” Twinkle looked down in shyness and continued playing with her fingers. Kunj pulled her closer and said, “Answer my question sweetheart.” “That was the only thing that struck my mind at the moment”, replied Twinkle. “No, you wanted to kiss me”, said Kunj and leaned towards her. “Good night”, replied a shy Twinkle and pushed Kunj away. She walked towards the bed, laid down and quickly pulled the blanket over herself. Kunj smiled at her behaviour and went to sleep after switching off the lights.

Everyone was sitting in the hall and talking when Kritika entered. “Mamu, look your baby doll”, said Kavya. “Kavya”, said Nikita and widened her eyes. “What maa? Baby doll only na”, replied Kavya. Kritika started blushing and went to Kavya who was sitting next to Rahul. “No, you’re wrong. You’re the baby doll my sweetheart”, said Kritika. Kavya smiled and kissed Kritika’s cheek. “Aww”, exclaimed Kritika and was about to kiss Kavya’s cheek when she moved away and Kritika accidentally kissed Rahul’s cheek. Rahul placed his hand on his cheek while Kritika started blushing. Rahul whispered, “Kavya is so essential na.” Kritika playfully hit his shoulder. “My princess forgot me?”, asked someone from the doorstep. Everyone turned around while Kavya ran to the door. “I missed you Daddy”, said Kavya. “I missed you too princess”, replied the person. “Come inside Anand”, said Manohar. Everyone started talking to him while Yuvraj whispered to Kunj, “God! He’s back.I hope he doesn’t do something this time also.”
Kunj looked at Yuvraj and said, “We need to be careful.” “Kunj, Yuvraj what are you both doing standing there? Come here”, said Usha. Kunj and Yuvraj walked over there and started talking to everyone.
New supporting character

Anand Kapoor: He’s a lawyer by profession and married to Nikita Singh.
Hey all! Thank you so much for all your comments, appreciation, support and most importantly the love. I was so happy reading all your comments as you all are liking my fan fic and none of you want me to end it. Love you all loads. Also, thanks to all my silent readers.

I’m so sorry for uploading the chapter this late but, I seriously didn’t have any time to write it. Please forgive me. I’m sorry to make you all wait. Also, please tell me if it’s okay with you all to read the fan fic with gaps as I can’t upload it regularly. If you all aren’t okay with it then I might end this fan fic.

Did you all like today’s chapter? Did you like Kavya’s mischief? Why do Kunj and Yuvraj need to be careful from Anand?

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:


Also, the name of my other fan fic is – IS EVERYTHING REALLY SO PERFECT AS IT SEEMS TO BE? If you all get time please read it and let me know whether you like it or not.

I won’t promise you all any date or day as to when I’ll post as I myself don’t know when I’ll be able to. But, I’ll try not making you all wait for long.

Lastly, please don’t forget to express your views on this chapter through your comments whether it’s positive or negative.


  1. RiaA MendeZz

    I was waiting on ur ff since so many days ria. I thought you were upset.. Please stop saying you’ll end ur ff. I’ll b angry on u if u do…I loved this chapter. Yuvi is so cute and I enjoyed twinkles childish behavior. Also, kavya!!!she’s a cute handful.
    I enjoy ur writing. You’ve always amazed and impress me right from the first chapter till the present. You’re doing a super amazing job.. Tho I understand your motivation comes from the comments u get, I want u to understand tht we all appreciate u even if some does not say it. Especially me..I appreciate u..n I’ll continue supporting u.

  2. Cutie pie

    I was waiting r nxt part kavya helps only in krti n rahuls romance not in twinj romance some more twinj romance plzzzzzz nyx part try to post soon

  3. Queen

    It was great loved it and I do read your other ff waiting for the next epi of that and pls post both ff s next epi asap

  4. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it Ria waiting for the next part ……….
    There is nothing much to talk because we have already talked a lot 🙂
    Love you Ria 🙂

  5. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Loved it ria……….
    its awesome
    Its ok if u cant upload it regularly. . Noproproblem but plzzz dnt end it…..♥♥♥♥♥♥

  6. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Finally u posted ur ff ria..i was eagerly waiting 4 it..btw the epi was super..plz post the nxt part soon..

  7. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Thanks u sooo much Allah ….for giving such a great start for my day …coz Ria has posted her ff ….
    U made me waited for so long ….but it’s ok …I know why u didn’t posted ur ff …
    Coming to ur episode…..OMG…romance is blooming all way around….. So cute scenes of Twinj nd loved the punishment Yuvi gave to Mahi..
    Krihul’s scenes was so lovely ….this time Kavya acted as a Cupid in their love story …
    But this new entry is looking quite suspicious to me ….hope he don’t create any havoc in our twinj life..
    love u …

  8. Angita

    |Registered Member

    You know how long I was waiting for you….acha its OK I’m not angry
    Loved today’s episode loved kavya mischief, twinj mischief and yuhis too.why do they have 2be careful in front of Anand?

  9. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Wow ria romance he romance everywhere……lovely epi
    Eagerly waiting for the mystery of anand to b revealed

  10. Saby

    |Registered Member

    Like seriously at least uh posted today….
    I missed ur ff so much….
    Specially the romance of our three cute couples…..??
    Uh nailed it as usual….
    Keep posting daily…. Plshhhh

  11. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Thank god you finally uploaded this ff. I am so glad i cant even express my words. One more request … please upload your second ff soon too. anyways back to today’s chapter , it was just so amazing and fabulous as usual. Waiting for the next chapter.

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