“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 27)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 26

Sarna Mansion
“Kunj, now since you’re done with your MBA degree I want you to join in the business”, said Manohar. “But, papa which business will he handle?”, asked Yuvraj. “Yes, I’m coming to that. I’ve started an event management business and I’m not getting the time to manage it and neither does Yuvraj so, I would like you to manage it Kunj”, said Manohar. Kunj smiled and said, “That’s alright papa. But, how will I alone manage the entire business? I’ve never done all this.” “Who said you’re alone? Twinkle is there no”, replied Manohar casually. “Papa, me? I don’t know anything about business. What will I handle?”, said Twinkle. “Who told you’ll manage. You’re an event manager so, you’re going to manage the events and Kunj is going to look after the financial issues”, said Manohar. “But still”, replied Twinkle worriedly. “I know you can do it and I’m not listening to anything”, said Manohar. “And, by the way Mahi it’s been a long time you also haven’t come to the office. There is a lot of work pressure so, will you join back from tomorrow?”, added Manohar. Mahi nodded his head while Yuvraj’s mood lightened up. “Oye Siyappa Queen, now come we need to see how to manage business”, said Kunj. “Don’t order me”, replied Twinkle. “I will. I’m the boss”, said Kunj. “Who said you’re the boss? If you talk more I’ll make Twinkle the boss. Nobody is boss. You both are partners”, said Manohar interrupting. Twinkle showed her tongue to Kunj while he frowned.

College fest
The college was overcrowded with the students from all the years. Loud music surrounded the entire environment along with the sounds of people talking. At the gate of college it was written “Punjab University – 15th year Fest”. Kritika and Akshat entered the college talking with each other while Rahul followed them alone. He came to Kritika and said, “Do you remember that I’m with the two of you?” “We never told you not to get involved. You’re not talking that’s completely your own problem”, replied Kritika in a cold tone. Rahul felt irritated by her behaviour but, controlled himself. Kritika saw her group of friends standing and talking and went to them. “Hey all!”, said Kritika greeting them. “Why are you so late?”, asked one of her friends. “Baby doll was being made drink coffee by .. what’s your name? Kriti, won’t you introduce us to him?”, said Akshat. “What shall I introduce? He’s my di’s brother in law and we are childhood friends. His name is Rahul. And, Akshat it’s not about coffee or something but, it’s because you were late and there was traffic. Idiot”, replied Kritika. Rahul was disappointed with the way Kritika introduced him to her friends but suddenly Akshat said, “Rahul. Hey! Baby doll, then you both must be sharing a great bond right?” Rahul was about to reply when Kritika said, “Just as friends do. Nothing special.” Listening to her reply Rahul was frustrated and walked away from there.

Kritika (POV)
Atleast now I hope he stays away from me. I can’t behave so rudely to him but, still I have to because I don’t want whatever happened in the past to repeat again.

Sarna Mansion
Twinkle was placing the coffee mugs on a tray when Kunj came and hugged her from behind resting his hands on her stomach. “Oh you came down. Take your coffee”, said Twinkle while lifting up a cup. “Let’s go out somewhere. I’m too bored”, replied Kunj. “No Kunj, we need to see how should we handle everything in the business. We’ll go out some other day”, replied Twinkle handing Kunj the cup. He took it and sipped the coffee. He said, “Why did you make it so dark. I don’t like dark coffee you know na!” “I made it like everyday. Give me the cup, I’ll taste”, replied Twinkle taking the cup from his hand. She sipped the coffee and said, “It’s alright. It isn’t dark at all.” Kunj took the cup from her hand and sipped the coffee. “Now, it’s fine. After you sipped it with so much sweetness it’s fine now”, said Kunj winking at Twinkle. “Kuch bhi”, (Rubbish) replied Twinkle. Kunj placed the mug on the slab and moved closer to her. He pulled her towards himself by her waist and said, “You think I’m joking?” “Yes”, replied Twinkle. Kunj picked her up and made her sit on the slab. “Now, it’s easier to talk to you”, said Kunj. “What do you want to talk?”, asked Twinkle wrapping her arms around his neck. “Jaake bedroom mein romance karo. Kabhi toh sharam kiya karo”, (Go romance in your bedroom. Have some shame sometimes) said Mahi from behind. Kunj quickly turned around while Twinkle looked at Mahi sitting on the slab. “Ab aapko special invitation dekhe utarvaana padhega kya Twinkle princess?”, (Should I give you special invitation to get down from there Twinkle princess?) asked Mahi. Twinkle got down from the slab while Kunj said, “Bhabhi, firstly Queen and secondly, kya yaar iss ghar mein sab ki timing itni kharab kyun hai! (why is everyone’s timing so bad in this house!) Mahi walked towards Kunj and folded her hands. She said, “Abhi batati hoon. Woh kya hai na timing kisi ki kharab nahi hai. Aap logo ka placement hi kharab hai. Ab jao room mein”, (I’ll tell you now only. Actually the fact is no one has a bad timing. You people are always at the wrong place. Now, go to your room) said Mahi. Kunj took his coffee mug and went to the room while Twinkle went to the cupboard to take out biscuits and said, “Di, did you think anything about yesterday’s discussion?” “What discussion?”, replied Mahi. “About adding a new member to this family”, said Twinkle giggling. Mahi lifted the coffee mugs’ tray and said, “The way you too are romancing na, you both will become parents even before us.” Twinkle served the biscuits on a plate and realised what Mahi said. She quickly turned around but saw that Mahi had left. She said, “Di is also speaking rubbish now.” She took the biscuits and went to the hall.

College fest
The fest had come to an end and all the functions got over. Suddenly the lights went off and the spotlight fell on a boy stading on the stage. He spoke into the mike, “Hey guys, Akshat here. I guess you all know me. Kritika can you please come up on the stage?” Kritika was blank about his behaviour but, walked up to the stage. She climbed on the stage and stood next to Akshat. Akshat knelt down on his knees and took out a ring. He said, “Will you like to spend the entire of your life with me? Would you like to become my better half?” Rahul who was witnessing all this clenched his fist in anger and walked up to the stage. Kritika stood shocked on the stage trying to figure out what happened. Rahul climbed the stage and slapped Akshat making Kritika come out of her thoughts. “How dare you ask her out?”, asked Rahul. “Why? We’re very good friends and I love her. What is your problem?”, replied Akshat. He added, “And, by the way how dare you slap me?” “I’ll kill you if the next time you say that”, replied Rahul. Akshat was about to reply when Kritika ran away from there. “If something happens to her, I swear I’ll not leave you”, said Rahul and went behind her. He cleared his way through the crowd and saw Kritika run into the college building. He followed her.

College Building
Kritika entered the building and ran towards the washroom. She went inside the washroom and stood in front of the wash basin. She opened the water tap and started splashing water on her face. She looked into the mirror and cried. She said, “Not again. I know how much it hurts to break someone’s heart. Please Babaji don’t make me do this.”
Hey all! Thank you so much for all your beautiful comments and well wishes. Also, for the love and support. Love you all to another galaxy and back. ?? Also, thanx to all my silent readers.

Sayeeda, what should I tell you? You’ve always supported me and encouraged me. Love you loads dear. ?? You want me to complete 100 chapters? God! The number seems so extremely huge. I’ll try my best but, I need your support rather everyone’s support for that.

Ayesha, if you all continue supporting me like this I would surely continue.

RiaA, thank you for such a lovely comment. You know there are some commentators of mine for whose comments I eagerly wait and you’re one of them. I really don’t care if you comment late but, I just wish to see your comment. Let’s see if Mahi becomes pregnant or not. I saw you felt really hurt by Kritika’s behaviour but, just a bit more. It’ll be all fine in a couple of days. Thank you for that golden award sweetheart. Love you loads.?? Also, thanks a lot for telling me that I was able to portray the emotions properly.

Did you all like today’s chapter? It was very long and I’m sorry for that. I thought of making it shorter but, it was becoming too abrupt. I know today’s chapter was a bit emotional but, the next chapter is going to be even more emotional. By the way, tell me did you like the bond between Kunj and Mahi? Is it like a brother-sister bond? Are you all liking Twinkle’s romantic attire? Why did Rahul become angry when Akshat proposed Kritika? Will Kritika eventually accept to Akshat? My god! So many questions. But, a bit more of patience for the answers. Please?

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:


The winner for the memory refresher as well as all the answers will be published in a while. Sorry to make you all wait. Hope you all enjoyed the surprise.

I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow so, please stay tuned. I hope you all will like it as it will reveal the past.

Lastly, please don’t forget to express your opinions about this chapter through your comments below whether it’s positive or negative.

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  1. Jiya_Ani

    Super epi….Now I will try commenting every time…well I think you know that I am Shreya only…

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Lovely! I’m glad you liked it.
      Yes sweetheart I know you’re Shreya.?

  2. Angita

    Beggining part was very funny and nice but akshat rahul kritika part was quite confusing,eagerly waiting for your next episode .perfect.…

    1. Ria

      Hey Angita,
      I’m glad you liked it. Some of the confusions will be sorted out in the next chapter. Stay tuned.

  3. Lama

    Woooow Amazingggggggggly Awesooooooome episode…loved the bond between Kunj – Mahi…liking the Twinkle’s Romantic Attire…thanks for it…love u lots

    1. Ria

      Hey Lama, I’m glad you’re liking this fan fic. Thank you so much for your compliments. Love you too dear.

  4. Dreamer...arundhati

    Ria itbwas simply fabulous
    I luved it to the core
    ratika story is becoming more n more impressive and interesting
    ctd soon

    1. Ria

      Hey Arundhati, thank you so much. I’m glad you’re liking the fan fic and moreover Kritika and Rahul’s track. The next chapter is on It’s way.

  5. Sayeeda

    I’m just loving this jealously track a lot nd Rahul’s character also …kitna chidha hua hai bechara …
    Amazing ….day by day u r making me more crazy for ur ff ….ab kya pagal banane ka irada hai ….lolzz..
    OK now let me give answers for ur ques…usse pehle let me warn u not to say sorry for giving long updates as how much long u give my thirst of reading will increase more …

    • I just love the bond between Mahi nd kunj …sooo cute it made me remind of my jiju …as we both share a cute bro sis bond..
    • I’m loving Twinkle’s romantic attire a lot…
    • Bcoz he loves her …ab itna to pata hi hoga na mujhe …but he is so stupid that he didn’t realized his feelings for her …haan na ?
    • Whether she will accept or not completely depends on u …that what u have planned ….

    Love u soooooo much dear ….

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Sayeeda! I’m glad you’re liking this fan fic. To my surprise, you all are liking the current track and that’s why I’m putting more of twists and turns in their relationship. I hope you all will like it further. Okay baba, main nahi bolungi ab se sorry. Also, thanks a lot for answering all my questions.?
      Love to another galaxy and back Sayeeda??

  6. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing epi….loved that kitchen scene….

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Purnima!?

  7. Kruti

    Awesome epi ria
    Loved the kunj and mahi bond
    Twinkle ke romantic attire ka toh matlab main kya bolun….I have no words
    And coming to Kritika Rahul and akshat im waiting eagerly for the past to unfold
    Jaldi se nxt epi post karo wait nahi ho raha hai

    1. Ria

      Hey Kruti, thank you so much. I’m glad you’re liking the current track related to each couple. Also, a big thanx for answering most of my questions. The next chapter is on It’s way. Please stay tuned.

  8. RANdomfANCreationz

    Hey ria it’s fab I had no idea that u wrote this ff I just saw it a while ago and it’s awesome dear keep writing and I m reading episode 24-25 too 🙂

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Fatarajo! I’m glad you liked it. I’ll surely continue writing if you all keep supporting. Hope you all will. Also, let me know whether you liked chapters 24 and 25.?

  9. SidMin


    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Sidmin! I’m glad you liked it. The next chapter is on its way.?


    hey ria lajawaab episode aapka

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Ayesha! I’m glad you liked it.?

  11. lovely epi ….I really enjoy today’s epi & specially twinj cute moments ….eagerly waiting for next…

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Sonali! I’m glad you liked it. The next chapter is on it’s way.?

    1. Ria

      Thank you Dolly!?

  12. Saby

    ria dear… its was awesome as always….
    twinj and mavi scenes are just like a cake
    and krtika and rahul scenes are like the cherry on the cake….
    loving it so so much…..
    uh should really extent ur ff till 100…..
    uh can do that… as ur ff is just awesome

    1. Ria

      Hey Saby, thank you so much. I’m really glad you’re liking this fan fic. This 100 seems to be a huge number but, if you all keep supporting I’ll surely try my best.

  13. Shatakshi

    Wow ria
    It was too good yaar
    N in eagerly waiting to know kritikas POV
    Loved it to the core❤❤❤

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Shatakshi! I’m glad you liked it. A bit of patience as the next chapter is on It’s way. It’ll be uploaded soon.

  14. Ria how is it possible? You’re wondering what I’m asking yes? I wanna know how is it possible for one person to continuously amaze their fans like u do everyday. U never fail at amazing me. You’re what? Age 14-16? I’m so proud of u. I can tell your future will be as bright as the sun.maybe not by being a writer but seeing your writing skills it says more than enough about what will happen in your future. Evey thing was beautifully portrayed in today’s epi just like the previous and just like the previous I loved it. I probably need to visit India soon na?!!! Lot of creative minds resides there and u happen to be at the very top of tht list… Excellent job.

    1. Ria

      Hey RiaA, I’m glad you liked it. Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment and the appreciation. I’m 16 years old. It makes me feel really happy to know that you love my writing so much. I hope I can continue to entertain you all further too and I hope you all will continue to support me similarly.
      Love you loads dear??

  15. Rashiverma2199

    Wow ….awesome track….

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Rashi! I’m glad you liked it.?

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