“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 27 Part 2)


“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 27

NOTE : The caption tells it’s 2nd part of the 27th chapter as the caption and my chapter numbers aren’t matching. That’s why. So, please don’t worry. You all haven’t missed anything.
College Building

Kritika kept splashing water on her face trying to clear her face and control her emotions but, she wasn’t able to. She shouted, “Not again” and sat down on the floor resting by the wall.

Kritika (POV)
Why does this always happen to me? I don’t want to break anyone’s heart. I know it hurts a lot and I don’t want to hurt anyone. Why did you come back? I had moved on from the past but, again you reminded me of everything.

Flashback (Kritika’s POV doesn’t end)
I came to my class and found the entire class empty. One of my friends Srija came to me and said, “Why are you here? Come with me.” She held my hand and dragged me with herself. I asked, “Where are we going?” She didn’t reply and finally we entered the rehearsal hall. I saw Rahul with folded hands waiting inside. He said, “Have you seen the time?” “I’m on time”, I replied. “Forget it. It’s waste telling you. Now, come here”, said Rahul. He brought me to centre of the hall. He knelt down on his knees and said, “Thank you for coming into my life. I love you a lot.” My eyes were filled with tears while Rahul stood up. I quickly hugged him and said, “I love you too.” He hugged me and pulled back when everyone started hooting and clapping around. “See, I told you all that Kritika will do it the best. After all she’s my baby doll”, said Rahul. “Hehe.. it looked so real man. Well done Kriti”, replied Arnav. I stood there confused and said, “What’s happening?” “Oh! We forgot to tell you. Actually what happened was Rahul is playing the male lead role in the play and we weren’t able to find anyone for the female lead role. So, that’s why we were trying it out”, replied Arnav breaking my heart into a million pieces. I stood there blank not knowing what to do and how to react. Rahul patted my back and said, “Well done Baby Doll.” I faked a smile at Rahul and excused myself. I ran out of the hall and went to the classroom which was completely empty. I closed the door and broke down into tears.

The reality was too harsh but, it wasn’t in my hands. After that year, I told Dad to change my school and after that I didn’t have contact with any of my friends from that school. I know Rahul wasn’t at fault and he can never be mine but, I can’t be of anybody else except his.

Kritika wiped her tears and splashed water on her face as someone banged the door. Kritika composed herself and opened the door of the washroom. Rahul stood at the doorstep and said, “Were you crying?” Kritika ignored him and looked away. “Kritika, answer me”, said Rahul frustrated. Kritika ignored him and was about to walk away when Rahul held her by her shoulders and pinned her to the wall. He said, “Kritika, enough is enough. Stop ignoring me. I’ve been asking you a number of times what’s wrong but you don’t seem to be affected. Now, just answer me. What happened? Why were you crying?”, said Rahul. Kritika looked the other side and said, “Rahul, leave me. It’s hurting.” Rahul tightened his grip and angrily said, “First answer my question.” Kritika pushed him back hard and said, “Rahul, behave yourself. I have told you before also and again I’m telling you that I’m not answerable to you.” Kritika walked out of the washroom while Rahul blankly looked at her. He followed her as she went to the parking plot. Kritika’s friends were waiting for her and waved at her as soon as she they saw her. Kritika silently unlocked the car and said, “Akshat, it’s quite late. I need to go home. Are you coming?”

“No, he’s not”, said Rahul interrupting and snatched away the keys from Kritika’s hands. He got into the car and settled down on the driver’s seat. He looked out of the window and sweetly said, “Baby Doll, come quick. Everyone must be waiting at home.” “Rahul, get out of the driver’s seat and you’re not the one telling me who all are coming in this car”, said Kritika. Rahul started the car and said, “Fine, if you don’t want to come it’s okay but, atleast tell me an excuse that I should tell everyone at home.” “Rahul, see”, said Kritika and was about to complete when Rahul said, “Fine you really don’t want to come so, bye.” Rahul accelerated the car and moved a bit ahead. He stopped and peeped out of the window. “Baby doll sure na?”, asked Rahul. Kritika walked to the car and sat behind. “I’m not your driver baby doll. Come and sit in front”, said Rahul. “Rahul, drive or..”, said Kritika when Rahul interrupted, “Come in front or we’re staying here for the entire night.” Kritika gave a disgusted face and sat in the front seat next to Rahul. Rahul smilingly started driving while Kritika with an annoyed face looked out of the window. After about half an hour, they reached home. Rahul parked the car and they both got down. Rahul was about to talk to Kritika but, she ignored him and went inside.

Rahul (POV)
Kab tak ignore karegi tu mujhe? Baat toh tujhe karna padhega baby doll. Tujhe toh main manake hi chodunga.
(Till when will you ignore me? You will have to talk to me. I’ll not end the matter without convincing you.)

Sarna Mansion
Twinj room
Kunj came inside the room and saw Twinkle sleeping on the couch resting her head on a bunch of papers. He carefully made her arms wrap around his neck and picked her up. “Mr. Sarna, I must say you love your wife a lot”, said a voice. Kunj looked here and there to figure out who was talking. “What are you looking here and there for? Are you expecting someone else in our room at 10 in the night? Look down baby”, said Twinkle. Kunj looked down being astonished and said, “You didn’t fall asleep?” “I did”, replied Twinkle and tightened the grip of her hands around his neck. “Then?”, asked Kunj. “Do you think I’m Kumbhakaran (character in Mahabharat who used to sleep 6 months in a year) that you’ll pick me up in your arms and I won’t realise?”, replied Twinkle. “I’m sorry to disturb your sleep”, said Kunj. “I feel glad you spoilt my sleep otherwise how would I’ve got to know that my husband loves me so much!”, replied Twinkle smilingly. “Mrs. Sarna is becoming romantic. After all, sangati ka asar hai (effects of romantic company)”, said Kunj. Twinkle smiled while he placed her on the bed and caressed her hair. “I love you Kunj”, said Twinkle.

“I love you too”, replied Kunj. “I love you more”, said a voice from the doorstep. Twinkle and Kunj turned to look at the door. Kritika stood smiling there while her eyes were swollen up and reflected the pain she was going through. “Kriti, so late? Why are you standing there? Come inside”, said Twinkle. “No di, I’ll come in the morning. I feel too tired today. Good night!”, replied Kritika and walked to her room. Twinkle and Kunj looked at each other while Twinkle signalled Kunj with her eyes ‘what happened to her?’ “We’ll talk to her in the morning. Now, you sleep. Good night”, said Kunj and pulled the blanket on Twinkle and went to close the door. He switched off the lights, went to his side of the bed and laid down. Twinkle hugged him while Kunj placed his hand on her waist and both of them fell sleep.
Hey all! Thank you for all your lovely comments, appreciation, support and most importantly the love. Love you all to another galaxy and back. Also, thanks to all my silent readers.

Sayeeda, I don’t know what to tell you. The only thing I want to say is I LOVE YOU LOADS. Thank you for such a beautiful comment yaar and also, for answering all my questions patiently.

Fatarajo, I’m glad you liked my fan fic. Hope you like it further too.

Saby, I never mentioned your name in my fan fic because by the time you comment I would have always submitted my chapter. Anyways, thanks for such a sweet comment. I feel happy that you’re liking my writing. Love you loads.

RiaA, your comment just brought a million dollar smile on my face. It made my day or better say night. Love you loads. It sounds good. Ria loves RiaA. By the way, I’m 16 years old. Hehe.

Did you all like the past? So, it was an unknown heart break. I guess the past revelation wasn’t that good. Please let me know. Okay, so what do you think Rahul is planning to do? Ready for some friendly and cute moments? Did you like Twinkle and Kunj’s scene? Why did Kritika come to their room? Does she want to tell everything to Twinkle? Let’s see. Everything will be answered in some time.

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:


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I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow so, please stay tuned. I hope you all will like it.

Lastly, please don’t forget to express your opinions about this chapter through your comments below whether it’s positive or negative.

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  1. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….ria dear it was fab….awesome….

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Rashi! I’m glad you liked it.?

  2. Dheemahee

    It was awesome one keep it up post next one soon

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Dheemahee! I’m happy you liked it. The next update is on it’s way.

  3. Kruti

    Nice epi ria…….heart breaking flashback ya bechari kritika
    Loved the twinj scenes……..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Kruti! I’m glad you liked it.?

  4. Lama

    Hey Ria, what an Awesome episode…i like that past revelation of kriti…nd Twinj scene was Superbbb…eagerly waiting for the next part…plz post asap…love u ????

    1. Ria

      Hey Lama, thank you so much. I’m really glad that you liked the chapter. The next update will be posted soon. Love you back dear.

  5. Jiya_Ani

    Nice and a cute chapter…. Muaaah

    1. Ria

      Hey Shreya, thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it.

  6. m loving it mr n mr day by day….????

    1. Ria

      Hehe..thank you so much Loveleen. I’m really glad that you’re liking the fan fic.

  7. Angita

    I’m happy as my confusion now has been removed.between I think you should add some nok jhoks between rahul and kritika.has akshat chapter ended .does rahul love kritika .SORRY to many questions anyways verryy verryy nice episode .somehow when it comes to flashback I get more excited it was a total treat to see your episode.

    1. Ria

      Hey Angita,
      Thank you so much. I’m really glad that you liked the chapter. I know several questions are popping up in your head but, just a little bit of patience. Everything will be answered pretty fast.

  8. Mahi

    The episode is great like always there is a a little mistake kubhkaran is from Ramayana not Mahabharata

    1. Ria

      Hey Mahi,
      Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked the chapter.
      Now, that you tell me I realise that Kumbhakaran is from Ramayan.?

  9. Purnima.agrawal30

    Nice epi….twinj scene was good…

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Purnima! I’m glad that you liked the chapter as well as the twinj scene.

  10. Saby

    Hey ria???
    Again a nic epi I m just loving
    Rahul kritika track….
    Keep it up….
    And I don’t mind if uh mention my name or not….. Its all ok?
    Bas post ur epi regularly like this only….
    Love uh lots more??

    1. Ria

      Hey Saby,
      Thank you so much. I’m really glad that you liked the chapter. Love you back dear?

  11. Shatakshi

    Hey Ria
    Tu to rehne he de…yaar itna aacha koi likhta h????
    U know…I never liked any other couples story…but its the first ff in which ur description is attracting me….seriously… Its too good yaar
    I eagerly want to see rahul n kritis love story
    N twinj scenes were soooo cute…
    Loved it❤❤❤❤❤❤

    1. Ria

      Hey Shatakshi,
      Chal koi nahi.. but mat maan..kal se ganda likhungi dungi..ab itna atyachaar saha nahi jaata.
      Back to the comment, I’m really glad that you’re liking Rahul and Kritika’s love track and also, it made me real happy to know that because of my writing you’re liking another couple’s love story when you didn’t like it before. It really means a lot.
      Loads of love?

  12. SidMin

    Loved the episode Ria Felling sad for Kriti Hope Rahul understands his feelings for her
    waiting for the next episode

    1. Ria

      Hey Sidmin, thank you so much. I’m glad you liked the chapter. Rahul will soon understand his feelings for Kritika, don’t worry.
      The next chapter is on It’s way

  13. Shonaa...

    Ria…. dear… it was amazing… awsm as always…. tooooo goooood….. ????

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Shona! I’m glad you liked it.??

  14. Srija

    as usual it’s wonderful ?????????
    i liked that u mentioned my name
    continue soon as can’t wait for long

    1. Ria

      Hey Srija,
      I’m glad you liked it. Hehe yeah looks like you’re Kritika’s friend. The next chapter is on it’s way.?


    awsome par bahut chota yaar

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Ayesha. But, sorry dear I can’t make it longer.

  16. Sayeeda

    Amazing….. through ur words I was able to sense the pain Kritiks is suffering with ….so well written …
    I really loved the revelation of past nd who told u it’s not good …yr ab itna underestimate mat kiya kro apne aap ko plzzz …
    Twinj scenes like always super duper hit ….I’m so excited for cute scenes coming up next..
    Nd don’t thanks me for beautiful comment as ur ff is worth praising …main toh sirf comment krti hoo but u made us to read such a wonderful ff….
    Love u too dear….

    1. Ria

      Hey Sayeeda,
      Thank you so much for the lovely comment and appreciation. I’m glad you liked the chapter as well as the flashback. I hope you like the upcoming scenes between Rahul and Kritika.

  17. Dreamer...arundhati

    Ria im totally addicted to this ff.
    It was superfabulous.
    Im in luv with ratika story to.
    Ctd soon

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Arundhati! I’m glad you’re liking Rahul and Kritika’s love track and also, my fan fic. Hope I can continue to entertain you all further too.
      The next chapter is on it’s way.?

  18. Shamz

    Amazing as always dear….
    Loved it to the core….
    Sorry for not commenting on ur previous epi but I read it and that was equally awsm..
    Keep going…..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Shamz. I’m really glad that you liked the chapter as well as the previous ones. And, please don’t say sorry. I know you have a busy month going on and on top of that you’re busy with your admissions. So, it’s alright.?
      Love you loads.

  19. silent reader

    wow awesome so swt luvd rahul n kritika pairing do cont soon

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much silent reader. I’m glad you’re liking the current track. The next chapter is on it’s way.?

  20. RiaA MendeZz

    It does sound good. Ria loves RiaA but u know na, my name is not RiaA its Ahria 🙂
    And about the past, I totally understand now what was wrong with kriti. I understand her heartbreak her every pain. But she was a bit childish. Don’t get me wrong but had rahul known about her love I think there would’ve been less pain because its clear that he too loves her but tht couldnt b known to her cause she chose the weak way out.Sometimes its better for women to stand up & deal than to hide behind walls & cry & play victim & look pitiful. So that’s tht. I’m ready for cute friendly moments & romance.. Yes, lots & lots of romance. Oh and twinkle is slowly turning into a romantic. Hehe. I love it. Lovely epi. Can wait for the next epi.

    1. Ria

      Hey RiaA, I guess I disappointed you with the flashback. I know you’ve a point and, it’s pretty much true. But, this is just fictitious so I would suggest you to not mix reality with it. Anyways, I’m glad you liked the chapter. The next chapter is uploaded. Do have a look.

  21. Short part plzz post ling one 2morrow plzzz wid twinj romance n kritika n rahul clr deir misunderstanding nyc part

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Cutie pie! But, the misunderstandings between Rahul and Kritika won’t sort out so soon. But, I’ll try my best to clear it up early.

  22. Osm ria dear hmm nyc past n sidmin momnt ws also nyc☺??

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.?

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