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“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 19)

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“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 19

Evening (Around 7:30)
Delhi
Hotel Crown Plaza (Hotel room)
Kunj moved towards Twinkle while Twinkle was looking the other side. Kunj pulled her by her waist making her hands rest on his chest. Kunj went close to her ears. Twinkle said, “What are you doing?” “Come and drink the coffee”, whispered Kunj and pulled back. He added, “By the way, what did you think?” “I.. I thought that..”, said Twinkle while finding words when Kunj said, “Don’t be so dirty-minded.” Twinkle stared at him and both of them burst out laughing. They had the coffee and after sometime went to have dinner.

Amritsar
Sarna Mansion
Yuhi’s room
Mahi entered the room and found it empty. The room was beautifully decorated with rose petals on the bed and candles all over the room. She went inside and said to herself, “What is all this? And, where is Yuvraj?” Just then she saw a two piece red coloured nighty placed on the bed. She picked it up and went to try it out. She came out of the washroom and stood in front of the dressing table. She said, “This is quite short. Did Yuvraj buy this?” “Yes”, came a reply from near the door. Mahi looked at the door and found Yuvraj locking the door. “I won’t wear this. Why did you buy this?”, said Mahi. “Why? You look pretty in this”, replied Yuvraj while walking towards her. Mahi said, “Ya but.. Anyways, I’ll change and come.” She was about to go to change when Yuvraj held her hand. He pulled her back and said, “No excuses today sweetheart.” “Yuvraj, leave me”, replied Mahi. He turned her around and wrapped his arms around her waist. “What if I don’t?”, asked Yuvraj. “What are you thinking of doing at midnight Mr. Yuvraj Sarna?”, replied Mahi wrapping her hands around his neck. “Can’t you understand by the decoration? Well, then..”, replied Yuvraj and winked at her. Mahi started blushing while Yuvraj kissed her lips. She reciprocated and after sometime pulled back. Yuvraj picked her up in his arms and went to the bed. He placed her on the bed and came on top of her. He switched off the lights and pulled over the blanket. They made love and took their marriage to the next level.

Delhi
Hotel Crown Plaza (Hotel room)
Twinkle and Kunj entered the room. Twinkle closed the door, crossed her arms and stood at the doorstep. Kunj didn’t notice her. He was about to lay down when he saw Twinkle standing like that at the doorstep. “What happened? Don’t you feel tired?”, asked Kunj. “What were you doing at the reception? You went there just to tell her to book a car for tomorrow right!”, replied Twinkle. “Ya, she booked it. Now, come and sleep”, said Kunj. “Stop acting so innocent. What were you trying to do?”, replied Twinkle while moving towards the bed. “What did I do?”, said Kunj raising his one eyebrow. Twinkle picked up a pillow from the bed and started hitting Kunj. “How dare you flirt with her?”, said Twinkle. “What!”, replied a shocked Kunj but, understood that Twinkle was jealous. He said, “I mean ya so what! She was so cute and sweet.” Twinkle again hit him and said, “Sweet? Cute? I’ll kill you Kunj Sarna.” Kunj laughed and said, “With this pillow?” Twinkle threw the pillow on the bed and started hitting his chest. “How dare you Kunj Sarna?”, said Twinkle while hitting him. Kunj held her hands and asked, “Were you feeling jealous?” “Ye.. no”, replied Twinkle. “Well, no need to hide. I know you were. By the way, why should I flirt with her! I have someone more prettier, cuter and sweeter”, said Kunj. Twinkle narrowed her gaze and said, “Leave me. I don’t want to talk to you.” Twinkle struggled to free herself. Kunj moved his hands to her waist and tightened his grip. “You don’t want to know who’s that girl?”, said Kunj. “No”, Twinkle promptly replied looking the other side. Kunj went close to her and whispered, “Twinkle Taneja Sarna.” “I told I’m not inter..”, Twinkle was about to complete when Twinkle realised what Kunj had said. She smiled and said, “Okay, now stop flirting with me.” “Just now you had a problem because I was flirting with the receptionist. Now, when I’m flirting with you then also you’ve a problem”, replied Kunj. Twinkle pushed Kunj which made him to lose his balance and both of them fell on the bed with Twinkle on top of Kunj. Twinkle’s face was covered with her hair due to the sudden fall. Kunj moved her hair and tucked them behind her ears. He pulled her closer and was about to kiss her when Twinkle lifted her head. “No”, replied Twinkle. Kunj placed his hand on her head and bought her face closer. He kissed her cheeks and said, “Atleast for once?” She said, “Kunj, tomorrow is your convocation. Please sleep. Don’t do all this.” Kunj frowned and said, “That receptionist was bett..” He was about to complete but, Twinkle kissed his lips. He reciprocated and they pulled back after sometime. “Dare you talk about her in front of me”, said Twinkle. “I’ll speak about her thousand times because when I speak about her, you’ll feel jealous and kiss me so, I’ll be in a profit”, replied Kunj. Twinkle started blushing and pushed Kunj. She stood up and went to her side of bed. She laid down, pulled the blanket and said, “Good night!” “Good night love!”, replied Kunj smilingly and laid down.

Morning
Amritsar
Sarna Mansion
Yuhi’s room
Yuvraj woke up and saw themselves fully covered with the blanket. He smiled. He kissed Mahi’s forehead and she woke up. She looked at him and then looked away remembering about the previous night. Yuvraj made Mahi to face him and said, “Yesterday was the best day. Thank you for everything.” Mahi smiled and replied, “I should thank you. You completed my life Yuvraj.” Yuvraj was about to speak when someone knocked the door and said, “Puttar, are you both fine? It’s quite late and you both don’t sleep this late.” “Ya Bebe. Actually we forgot to set the alarm”, replied Yuvraj. “Okay fine. By the way tell Mahi to come down quickly”, said Bebe. “Ya”, shouted Yuvraj. Mahi wrapped the blanket around herself and was about to get down from the bed when Yuvraj picked her up and said, “We’re quite late. Let’s take the bath together.” “No, leave me”, replied Mahi. Yuvraj ignored her and went to the bathroom.

Delhi
Hotel Crown Plaza
Hotel room
Twinkle came out of the washroom after taking a shower. She was wearing a black jeans and pink top. She saw Kunj sleeping and said, “Look at him. Looks like I have a convocation.” She went to him and patted his cheek. She said, “Kunj, wake up.” But, Kunj was busy sleeping and didn’t react. Twinkle sat beside him and went close to his face. She moved her wet hair on his face and said, “Wake up Kunj.” Kunj wrapped his arms around her waist, “Such a beautiful morning. You know now everyday I’m going to wake up late.” Twinkle said, “You were awake?” “Yes baby. By the way I need something”, replied Kunj. “What?”, asked Twinkle giving a confused look. “Simple. My good morning kiss”, said Kunj. “Okay. I’ll give you. First, you get up and get ready. You’re getting late for your convocation”, replied Twinkle. Kunj was confused at her behaviour but, then got up and said, “I’ll be ready quickly then, you should give me my kiss.” Twinkle nodded her head while Kunj went to take a shower. After sometime Kunj came out of the washroom and saw Twinkle watching TV. Kunj came to her and said, “Twinkle, I’m ready. My kiss?” “What kiss? You wanted a ‘good morning kiss’ right! You would’ve got it if you would’ve just woken up. Now, you’re fully awake so, no kiss and all”, replied Twinkle. Kunj said, “This is not fair.” “Everything is fair in love and war patidev (husband).” Kunj frowned while Twinkle smiled. “You look so cute like this”, saying this Twinkle passed him a flying kiss. Kunj enacted to catch it and brought it near his heart. Twinkle laughed while Kunj smiled at her.
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Hey all! Thank you so much for the support, comments and all the love. Love you all loads. Also, thanks to all my silent readers.

Sayeeda, thank you so much for answering all my questions patiently. Love you too yaar.

Shatakshi and Lama, I’m glad you both could understand the descriptions.

I know, I’ve been very slow in today’s chapter and I’m really sorry for that. Actually, you all wanted Delhi romance that’s why. I hope you all liked today’s chapter. I hope you all like yuhi’s marriage consummation though I didn’t describe it.

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-chapter-18/

Okay, guys please be honest and tell me whether my fan fic is becoming boring.

I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow so, please stay tuned. I hope you all like it.

Lastly, please don’t forget to throw your comments below whether it’s positive or negative.
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Many of you have registered on Telly Updates so, if anyone feels like talking to me you can always message me. I might be a bit late in replying but, I’ll surely reply. Till now I’ve only talked with Shamz, Shatakshi and Misha.

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey

36 Comments
  1. Rashiverma2199

    Ria get that thought out of ur mind that ur ff is boring at all….its awesome….mind blowing… Superb….we all love it….

    1. Ria

      Thank you so Rashi! I’m really glad you like it.

  2. Kruti

    By no chance ur ff is boring ria …its just fab
    nd tdy’s epi was also as interesting as always

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Kruti! I’m really glad that you liked the chapter.

  3. Shatakshi

    Ria
    U r really an amazing writer
    N the episode was Awesome yaar
    Loved it????

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Shatakshi! I’m really glad you liked it.

  4. Shamz

    Hey Ria,
    The episode was awsm and not at all boring…. And yesterday’s episode was also awsm…..yah I know I didn’t comment on ur last episode as I read it today only….
    Be happy and keep smiling…..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Shamz. I’m happy you didn’t find it boring. Hope you like the upcoming tracks.

  5. It’s the best ff ria. Everyday I wait for your ff.

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Rutuja for giving it the tag of best ff. Hope you like it further too.

  6. Sayeeda

    Don’t dare to think that it’s boring…. ur ff always gives us the treat of romance nd that too not of Twinj but also of Yuhi ….
    I really loved the description of Yuhi consummation scene….
    Nd twinj romance is always on it’s peak..but today the romance with pinch of jealousy was marvelous….
    Loved it….

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Sayeeda! I’m really glad you liked the chapter. Your support always makes me feel good. You all support the ff writers so much. Love you loads.?

  7. Hey ria!!! Don’t even think that ur ff is boring.. Because it’s going very good.. Today’s chapter was really a cute one.. U’ve actually managed to pull out very little little cute scene between twinj and yuhi.. N that’s really cool.. Love u n ur ff loads..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Poorvi! I’m really glad you’re liking it. I hope I can entertain you further. Love you too dear.?

  8. Purnima.agrawal30

    It’s really nice…don’t think that your fanficton is boring…….It’s really nice…..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Purnima! I’m glad you’re liking it.

  9. Srija

    amazing dear???????
    and please don’t think that ur ff is boring
    continue soon

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Srija! I’m really glad you liked the chapter.

    2. Ria

      Thank you so much Purnima! I’m glad you like it.

  10. Awesomeness ki height…Romance on its peck…Ria can u pz tell me how to become registered member and yeah te me thos is also that is there any problem occuring because of registration actually again n again i m getting Aww Snap

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Lama! I’m glad you liked it. I’ll surely tell you. I’ve added up the process in the next chapter. Please go through it and in case if you can’t and you feel like you can always share your mail address.

  11. Dreamer...arundhati

    Ria men ur damn gud writer
    I m so sorry for late comments non the previous epis
    Loved it
    Its nota tall boriny
    Ctd soon

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Arundhati! I’m glad you liked it. Please don’t say sorry for being late. Even I’m busy these days that’s why it becomes late to reply to all your comments.

  12. SidMin

    Loved your fan fiction

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Sidmin! Hope you like the upcoming chapters too.

  13. Not boring its suprb awsme ur such an amazing writer yaar lov u

    1. Ria

      Thank you tons Cutie pie! I’m really glad you liked the chapter. Love you too dear.

  14. Na not at all boring bt ws osmmmmmmmm loved it
    Do cont asap…..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Zikra! I’m really glad you liked it and didn’t find it boring.

  15. Fan

    Super se upar wala epi..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Fan! I’m glad you liked it.

  16. SMC

    Ria…
    Awesome Episode..
    Romance was full on..
    ? U..

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much SMC! I’m glad you liked it. Love you too dear.

  17. osm ria wow how romantic it ws luvd it

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Baby!?

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