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Home»Fan Fiction»“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 18)
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“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 18)

RiaBy RiaJune 22, 201633 Comments8 Mins Read
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“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 18

Amritsar (Sarna Mansion) and Delhi (Hotel Crown Plaza)

Yuvraj picked up the call and casually said, “Ya Kunj tell. Did you reach safely?” “Ya Bhaiya. We did. But, what did you do?”, replied Kunj. “What did I do?”, asked Yuvraj. “Don’t act so innocent. You very well know what I’m talking about. Why did you book a honeymoon suite for us?”, said Kunj. “What do you mean by why?”, said Yuvraj. “Bhaiya, we’re here for my convocation”, replied Kunj. “Acha! Ab itna bhi bhola mat ban. Mujhe pata hai tere man mein toh laddu phoote honge ‘honeymoon suite’ sunkar”, (Seriously! Don’t act so innocent now. I very well know you would have been very happy listening that a ‘honeymoon suite’ is booked) replied Yuvraj. “See, Bhaiya we are still kids. You’re thinking everything in a bad way”, said Kunj.

“Bacche paida karne ki umar ho gayi hai. Kahan ke bacche?”, (You should become parents now. How can you be kids stupid?) replied Yuvraj. “Pehle khud ban jao phir mujhe bol na. Bade aaye”, (First you become then tell me) replied Kunj. Twinkle snatched the phone from Kunj and said, “Jiju, what is wrong with you?” “Twinkle, see now you also don’t start”, replied Yuvraj. “What should I start? You only started everything. We’re not here for honeymoon. You know na me and Kunj are just friends. Then?”, replied Twinkle while Kunj narrowed his gaze at her. “Friends nahi aur bhi kuch. Tujhse bada hoon. Sab samajhta hoon. Ab phone rakh aur Delhi ghoom”, (Ya, ya friends or something else. I’m elder than you. I understand everything. Now, disconnect the call and go roam around in Delhi) said Yuvraj and cut the call.

Delhi
Hotel Crown Plaza
Twinkle looked at the phone as Yuvraj cut the call. Kunj took the phone and threw it on the bed. He pulled her closer by her waist and said, “So what are we? Friends?” Twinkle said, “No, I mean yes. Ofcourse. We are friends first and then everything else na?” Kunj raised his one eyebrow and said, “But, you just told we’re just friends. So, what do you mean by everything else?” “Leave me. You won’t understand. Anyways I need to change. We’ll get late otherwise”, replied Twinkle. Kunj pulled her even more closer and said, “Explain then only I’ll understand na. What won’t I understand! Explain it I’ll understand. I’m a very good student.” “Kunj, stop pulling my leg. Let me go and change”, replied Twinkle while blushing. “I’m not pulling your leg. See, I just pulled you by your waist”, said Kunj. Twinkle pushed him back. She took her clothes and went to change. She came out wearing a jeans and a pink crop top. “Come, let’s go”, said Twinkle. Kunj nodded his head and they went.

India Gate
Twinkle and Kunj reached India Gate and went towards it. It was a gate with writings scripted on it. “See Kunj, there’s something scripted on the gate too”, said Twinkle. “Ya, I saw”, replied Kunj. “India Gate is actually a war memorial. What you see scripted on the gate are the names of freedom fighters. Inside you’ll be able to see a burning flame. It is called Amar Jawan Jyoti (Flame of the immortal soldier)”, said a guide. Twinkle and Kunj carefully looked at the Gate as well as at the flame. They roamed around there for sometime. Twinkle saw the numerous number of ice-cream sellers there and said, “Let’s have ice-cream. It’s so hot here.” “Not more than you”, replied Kunj. Twinkle started blushing while Kunj entwined his hand with hers and went to get ice-cream. They had ice-cream and went from there.

Doll Museum
Next, they went to Doll Museum. They bought the tickets and moved inside. They saw the notice stating “No pictures allowed”. They saw the museum. It had numerous small dolls displayed. At the entry there were dolls showing how to wear a saree like Bengalis. The museum had a collection of dolls from European countries as well as Asian countries. There were dolls showing various Indian dances and cultures, regional costumes, pairs of bride and grooms of various states and many more. Twinkle and Kunj liked the museum and after they finished they went for lunch.

After lunch (Around 2:30)
They went to the Lotus Temple. It took some time to reach. They reached there at around 4:15.

Lotus Temple
They went inside and removed their footwears as they weren’t allowed inside. It was a temple shaped in the form of lotus. It was white in colour and looked amazingly beautiful. They roamed around in front of it sometime and then went inside. They saw people sitting and meditating. It was a very peaceful area. Twinkle whispered, “Kunj, can we sit here for sometime?” “Sure”, replied Kunj and they sat down closing their eyes for sometime. They came out at around 5:30 and saw the lightning of the temple. It looked even more beautiful now. Kunj saw a photographer and said, “Can you click a picture of us with the temple as the background?” The photographer nodded his head. Kunj and Twinkle stood in front of the temple touching their foreheads with each other’s. They smiled at each other and looked into each other’s eyes. The photographer clicked the picture and gave it to them. Kunj and Twinkle started from there to come back to the hotel.

Hotel Crown Plaza
They came back to the hotel at around 7. They took the card from the reception and went to their room.

Hotel room
They entered the room and found it arranged like the day before. They went inside and sat down on the sofa. Twinkle said, “Do one thing. You go, freshen up. I’ll order coffee. It’ll come by the time we both will change.” Kunj took his clothes and went to change. Twinkle called the room service and ordered two coffees. Twinkle went to the washroom as Kunj came out. Twinkle entered and closed the door (didn’t lock). She screamed and shouted out for Kunj. Kunj came to the door and said, “What happened? Is everything alright Twinkle?” “Kunj, please come inside. There’s a cockroach inside”, replied Twinkle. Kunj started laughing and went in. He shooed away the cockroach and said, “It’s done.” He turned around and saw Twinkle wearing his shirt which came only up till half her thighs.

He walked towards her. Twinkle walked back and said, “Ku.. Ku.. Kunj, what a..a..are y..you tr..trying to do?” Kunj came to her and put his finger on her lips. He kissed his right cheek and then the left one. He was about to kiss her lips when Twinkle turned away her face in shyness. Kunj picked her up in his arms and went inside the room. He knelt down on the bed and placed her. He came on top of her and kissed her closed eyes. She opened her eyes and looked at Kunj lovingly. He kissed her lips while Twinkle reciprocated. They pulled back after sometime and Kunj kissed her neck. He was about to unbutton her shirt when the doorbell rang. They quickly got up and composed themselves. Twinkle ran to the washroom in shyness. Kunj opened the door and saw the room service. He murmured, “Iss room service ki toh main band baja doonga.” (I’ll kill the sh*t out of this room service.) Kunj said, “Ya, come in.” The room service boy came in and kept the tray on the table. Kunj said, “Thank you.”

He smiled and went away. Twinkle came out of the washroom wearing a white crop top and pink pleaded skirt till her knees. Kunj said, “I hate this room service. They spoiled such a beautiful moment.” Twinkle looked away in shyness while Kunj started walking towards her.
•••
Hey all! Thank you so much for all your lovely comments and so much love. They really make up my day. Love you all loads! Thanks to all my silent readers too.

I’m really glad that all of you found the previous chapter cute and liked it.

Shamz, thank you so much for replying to each and every question of mine.

Did you all like the bit of romance? Also, please let me know whether I was able to describe the places in a way that you all atleast have a faint idea. I mean when I was writing I was really not sure whether I described it atleast in a way that you all get a picture of the places.

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-chapter-17/

I hope you all liked today’s chapter. I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow so, please stay tuned.

Lastly, please don’t forget to throw your comments whether it’s positive or negative.

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    33 Comments

    1. Sayeeda on June 22, 2016 10:11 am

      A big applause nd hats off to u …..amazing …..bas pucho mat kitna Accha tha….
      Starting se batati hoon….
      • Thank u sooo much for a long update…
      • Kunj nd Uvi convo was much more than awesome..
      • The way u described each nd every place ; I was imagining as if I’m present in Delhi nd is doing sightseeing..
      • Twinj romance …..kya bolo ke kitna accha tha….

      Amazing…… loved it….too good …love u soo much Ria..

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:26 pm

        Thank you so much Sayeeda firstly for appreciating me and secondly for answering all my questions. Hope you love the upcoming chapters. Love you too.?

    2. rashiverma2199 on June 22, 2016 10:24 am

      Ria it was awesome loved it…..

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:15 pm

        Thank you so much Rashi!?

    3. ruhi on June 22, 2016 10:27 am

      your every episode is awesome and it is much better than the current track of tei

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:16 pm

        Thank you so much Ruhi! I’m glad you liked it.

    4. Jasmine wani on June 22, 2016 11:11 am

      Me silent readr thi ap k…i bt ap ki ff ne mje mjbur kra coment krne pr….oossssmmmmmm epi…HATS OFF 2 U RIA….

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:24 pm

        Thank you so much Jasmine wani! I’m really glad you liked it.

    5. kruti on June 22, 2016 11:16 am

      Amazing epi ria …..kunj and UV ka convo was the cake of d epi and twinj ka romance was the icing on it ……loves d epi keep smiling nd keep writing

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:23 pm

        Thank you so much Kruti! Really really glad you liked the chapter.?

    6. Shatakshi on June 22, 2016 12:22 pm

      Hey Ria
      Firstly u described everything so well
      I got a perfect image of twinj photograph near lotus temple…
      N the romance was too good yaar
      Really can’t wait long????????

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:23 pm

        Thank you so much Shatakshi! I’m glad you were able to imagine the picture clicked in front of lotus temple. I’ll be posting it quick.

    7. Lama on June 22, 2016 1:05 pm

      OMG…Brilliant episode…the way u described each n every place seems like i m there itself…n the last part of the episode was soooo Amazing…plz give more scenes like that

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:22 pm

        Thank you so much Lama! I’ll try giving scenes like that. Hope you like it.

    8. Poorvi on June 22, 2016 1:07 pm

      Current track is just so good.. Loving it..

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:20 pm

        Thank you so much Poorvi!?

    9. srija on June 22, 2016 2:48 pm

      amazing dear it’s splendid????????
      well i was also feeling like killing the room service boy ???????
      they spoilt the mood
      well continue soon

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:21 pm

        Haha lol Srija! I’m glad you liked it. I’ll upload it tomorrow itself. Please stay tuned.

    10. AYESHA KHANUM on June 22, 2016 3:15 pm

      ya ria it was amazing like always

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:19 pm

        Thank you so much Ayesha!?

    11. zayb_zikra on June 22, 2016 5:25 pm

      Ya ya amazinggggggggly osmmmmmmmm epi
      Loved it so much…..
      Do cont soon……
      Aww kunj is such a cutie……

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:18 pm

        Thank you so much Zikra! I’m really glad you liked the chapter. Hope you like the upcoming chapters.

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:20 pm

        Thank you so much Zikra! I’m glad you liked it.

    12. Cutie pie on June 22, 2016 6:11 pm

      Wooow yaar superb loved it tooo gud i want to huf u 4 writing such an awsme ff

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:17 pm

        Thank you so much Cutie pie. I’m glad you liked it.

    13. SMC on June 22, 2016 7:38 pm

      Ria..
      BRILLIANT EPISODE….
      A BIT ROMANCE…NAH…OT WAS FULL ON ROMANCE…LOVED IT TO THE CORE….
      LOVE YA….??????????????????????????

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:16 pm

        Thank you so much SMC! Glad you liked it.

      • Ria on June 22, 2016 11:17 pm

        Thank you so much Zikra! I’m really glad you liked the chapter. Hope you like the upcoming chapters.

    14. dreamer...arundhati on June 23, 2016 11:27 am

      Ria I m sorry 4 late arrival but the epi was mind blowing
      Lovely

      • Ria on June 23, 2016 5:05 pm

        Thank you so Arundhati! Glad you liked it.

    15. baby on June 25, 2016 10:19 am

      omg ria yr osm likd nhi luvd it n yh sry fr being so mch late

      • Ria on June 25, 2016 11:10 am

        It’s alright baby. I’m glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your lovely comment.

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