“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 16)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 16

Hall
Everyone came down and Twinkle and Kunj told everyone about Rahul and Kritika’s punishment. Bebe said, “If they aren’t talking to anybody else then they should stay together in one room. In that case, they won’t be able to interact with us through sign language also.” Twinkle signed Kritika and Rahul to listen. Kritika made a ‘have some pity on me’ face but, Twinkle and Kunj were least bothered. Twinkle said, “Go to the guest room on the ground floor right now or else 7 days.” Rahul and Kritika ran to the room while everyone burst out laughing in the hall.

Guest room
Rahul and Kritika entered the room and sat down. Rahul settled down on the couch while Kritika sat down on the bed. Kritika looked at Rahul and said, “See, for the entire day stay over there. Don’t come near me.” “Why should I come near you? You’re Deepika Padukone or what! You’re just a makeup ki dukaan (makeup store)”, replied Rahul. “How dare you call me that? You shameless. What do you think of yourself? You’re some Ranveer Singh?”, said Kritika. “Atleast I’m better than you. Anyways, thousands of girls die for the dashing, hot and handsome Rahul”, replied back Rahul. Kritika started laughing and said, “Hot. Handsome. Dashing and that too you. Do you even know what these words mean? The girls who die behind you also don’t have a class just like you.” Rahul was about to reply when Twinkle stood at the doorstep and said, “Any problem?” Rahul and Kritika turned to look at the door and were shocked to see Twinkle. “No problem Bhabhi. We were just talking”, replied Rahul. “If you’re talking then your voice isn’t supposed to come up till the hall so, please stop fighting or else you both have to suffer for 7 days. This was the last warning”, said Twinkle and walked away. “See, let’s not fight. None of us are interested to drag this punishment so, please let’s just stay normal”, said Rahul. He added, “By the way what’s your name?” “You don’t know my name?”, replied a shocked Kritika. “Actually since the time we met we’ve only been fighting so I didn’t get the chance to ask you your name”, replied Rahul. “You’re right. I’m Kritika Taneja. You’re Rahul Singh right?”, said Kritika. “Yes”, replied Rahul. Kritika took filled a glass of water and was drinking when Rahul said, “Baby doll, this wasn’t fair at all. We met after so many years and the only thing you did was fight with me.” Kritika looked at him in confusion. “You forgot me? Your prince charming?”, asked Rahul. Kritika quickly gulped in the water and shouted, “Rahul.” She ran to him and gave him a bone crushing hug. “Baby doll, leave me. Apne best friend ka khoon karna hai kya?”, (Do you want to kill your best friend?) said Rahul. Kritika pulled back and hit him. “You idiot. Couldn’t you tell me before? I fought with you so much. But, you’re literally shameless man. You started fighting with a stranger?”, said Kritika. “I missed you so much baby doll. We almost met after 10 years. The last day was the farewell in school”, said Rahul. “I missed you too”, replied Kritika. Everyone came down because of Kritika’s shouting. “What is going on?”, asked everyone in a chorus. Kritika and Rahul together said, “Ma, this is Rahul/Kritika from my school. Remember I always used to tell about him/her?” Leela and Usha nodded their heads. “Can someone tell me what’s going on?”, asked Twinkle. “Offo di! Rahul Singh. My so-called prince charming”, replied Kritika. Twinkle smiled and said, “Okay, now get back to your rooms.” “Yes di. We will. Let us talk for sometime then we’ll go”, replied Kritika. Everyone smiled and went back to their rooms while Rahul and Kritika stayed back in the room.

Twinj room
“Ya, okay. I’ll talk to you later. Ya, I’ll be there. Don’t worry”, replied Kunj and cut the call. He entered the room and saw Twinkle folding clothes. He went and hugged her from back. “What happened?”, Twinkle asked. “Pack your bag, we’re going to Delhi tomorrow. I have my convocation”, said Kunj. “It’s your convocation right! So why will I pack my bag?”, said Twinkle. “Offo! We’re going together. That’s why”, replied Kunj. “But, what will I do going there? I won’t have anybody to talk to, to pass time”, said Twinkle. “I know. That’s why I’m coming with you”, said Kunj and took the clothes from her hand. He added, “Get ready. We’ve a flight in the night.” “I can’t make it up so early. You go ahead”, saying this she sat down on the bed crossing her legs and took the TV remote. Kunj took the TV remote from her hand and threw it on the bed. “See Twinkle it’s just 11 in the morning. The flight is at 10. That means 11 hours. We’ll start at 6:30 so, you’ve plenty time to get ready. I’ll pack the bags. Go, get ready”, said Kunj. “So, you mean I should get ready for 7 and a half hours so that I look good . That’s so mean of you Kunj. I don’t want to talk to you”, said Twinkle. “When did I even say that?”, said Kunj raising his one eyebrow. “No, it’s okay Kunj. You need not give any explanations. I don’t want to talk to you”, saying this Twinkle got up from the bed and was about to go when Kunj held her hand and pulled her back. He moved her hair to one side and kissed her neck. “Kunj, leave me. I don’t want to listen to anything”, said Twinkle. Kunj kissed her right cheek and said, “You don’t need any make-up sweetheart. You anyways look pretty.” “Makhan mat lagao”, (Don’t butter me) said Twinkle. “I’m telling you the truth. You think I’m buttering you?”, asked Kunj turning Twinkle towards him and pulling her closer making her hands rest on his chest. “I’m not thinking. You’re doing that only”, replied Twinkle. Kunj kissed her left cheek and said, “No, I’m not.” “Prove it then”, said Twinkle. He bent down and picked her up in his arms. “What are you doing? The door is wide open”, said Twinkle. “You told me to prove that I’m not buttering you right!”, replied Kunj. “Yes, so what are you doing this way?”, asked Twinkle. Kunj made her stand and said, “Turn around and you’ll be able to see the prettiest girl present on this earth.” Twinkle turned around and saw her image on the mirror. Kunj wrapped his arms around her. “Isn’t she the prettiest in the world?”, asked Kunj. Twinkle started blushing. “She looks even more prettier when she blushes”, said Kunj making Twinkle blush even more. “You know what! The girl there right! I love her more than my life”, said Kunj. Twinkle smiled while Kunj rubbed his cheek with Twinkle’s. “I love you too Kunj”, replied Twinkle. She turned around and kissed his left cheek and ran out of the room leaving Kunj smiling.

Evening
Hall
“Twinkle, come down. We’ll miss the flight if there’s traffic”, shouted Kunj. Twinkle came running down the stairs and said, “Ya, ya let’s go. By the way where’s everyone?” “Everyone’s outside to shoo us off. Now, come”, saying this Kunj dragged her out of the house. Everyone told them to enjoy and have fun. Everybody wished Kunj luck. Twinkle and Kunj boarded the car. Everyone waved at them and went inside except Yuvraj. He said, “You’ll have lots of fun in Delhi. I swear. It’s going to be the best trip for the two of you.”

Twinj car
Kunj placed his hand above Twinkle’s hand and smiled at her. Twinkle smiled back and said, “Have you ever been to Delhi?” “No, this is the first time. I know you also haven’t. So, we’re staying there till Sunday. Even though the convocation gets over day after tomorrow, that’s Friday. We’ll have fun there.” “That’s so nice of you. By the way Kunj we’ll try out the street foods. I’ve heard Delhi has the world’s best street foods. Also, since we’ll be there for the weekend we’ll go to the famous tourist places”, said Twinkle. “Let us first reach. Then we’ll decide”, replied Kunj smiling. Twinkle kept on planning about their trip while Kunj was busy staring at her. At around 8 they reached the airport and went inside.
•••
Hey all! Thank you for all your lovely comments and so much love. Also, thanks to all my silent reader.

Keerthana, thank you for such a lovely comment. I’m really glad that you’re able to reduce your stress reading the fan fic.

Sayeeda di, firstly as I mentioned in the comment sorry for calling you by your name. I didn’t know you’re so many years elder than me. Now, back to the comment. As usual it was a lovely comment. Love you too.?

RiaA, thanx for such a big compliment of the fan fic being perfect. It made me reach on cloud nine, no wait, cloud number infinity. Also, I’m really for not adding any Yuhi scenes for the past 3-4 days. I’ll add some of them from tomorrow. I promise.

Shatakshi, I hope your admissions are over. I’m dying to read your fan fic.

Shamz, I hope you’re alright now. Please take care of yourself.

Did you all like the sudden twist of Kritika and Rahul being best friends in school?Also, did you all like the bit of romance in this chapter? Do you think Yuvraj has planned something evil to trouble his brother and sister-in-law?

Yes, as I replied to RiaA, I am sorry for not adding any Yuhi scenes. I’ll add some of them from tomorrow.

Okay, so the whole of next week we’re going to be in Delhi. Maybe, sometime in between we’ll come back to Amritsar and have a look of what all is going in Sarna Mansion. I hope you all will like. Also, you can suggest me places where you would like to see Twinkle and Kunj roaming around. I chose Delhi for this time because I’ve stayed over there for quite a long time so, I know the places pretty well. But, please let me know the places you all might be wanting me to add.

I told all of you that I wrote an OS but, it wasn’t displayed on the page. I wrote another one yesterday. If you all get time, please go through it and let me know your views about it. It’s called “WHAT IS TRUE LOVE ALL ABOUT?”

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-chapter-15/

I hope you all liked today’s chapter. I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow so, please stay tuned.

Lastly, please don’t forget to throw your comments whether it’s positive or negative.

39 comments

  1. Keerthana

    Beautiful twist…… ??? I never expected that Rahul and Krithika will be school friends… ??? awesome epi….. Again Ria I have no words to comment ur ff… I am lacking words to appreciate u… ☺️☺️☺️ All beautiful words of appreciation is dedicated by Keerthana to Ria for the beautiful epi….

  2. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria
    I just loved the episode
    N no yaar aabhi tak nahi hua h…but no worries I will try to post it today itself…
    N I m a Mumbaikar so I really have no idea regarding Delhi…sorry
    N u know ria…u have got a talent to bleand romance with ur ff so perfectly…
    I m just loving it…
    I yeah I read ur os…its so Beautifully written
    Buss aab zyada nahi bolungi….as I have to comment on ur is too…
    Love u????

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Shatakshi! I’m really glad you liked it.
      Aur don’t worry. I’m pretty sure you’ll get into a good college.
      Love you loads.??

  3. Sayeeda

    Nooooooo……..don’t call me Di….I beg u …noooooo….aisa sitam nai …plzzz…
    I know I’m elder than u but if u see me in front of u won’t be able to believe that I’m 20 yrs old ; bcom 3 yr student nd a aspiring CA ….as everyone says me that I look like a girl of 10 class just bcoz of my physique…. lollzzz.

    Nd I love u as my frnd …I love when u call me by my name …I love that Ria…not dis one….And waise bhi frndship mein age don’t matters ; what matters is our bond nd we both share a good bond of love ..so plzzz call me by my name …
    Coming to episode it was fab….the best part was kritika nd Rahul scene …what a twist baby doll….can’t wait for next one…love u nd hannn no di .

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much. I’m really glad that you’re liking the chapters and the twists. I hope I’m able to entertain you all further. I’m really glad that you consider me such a great friend of yours. Love you loads.

  4. RiaA MendeZz

    Yayyyy romance is on its ways. I’m excited as I can’t wait. Beautiful epi but ria, I’m worried. What will yuvi do?oh god! Please, he’s so hot when he’s good, naughty and MAHI’S husband. & their is a reason y I put mahi in all caps. but what ever it is you’ve got planned I trust it’ll b mind blowing. I’ll support your every idea.

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey RiaA, thank you so much for such a beautiful comment. I hope I can give a fruitful result to your excitement. Let’s see what yuvi does.

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Poorvi! I’m glad you like it. Your support is my strength. Till the time you all support me I’ll try my best to entertain all of you.

  5. Lama

    OMG…What a sudden twist…Kritika & Rahul frnds…Yaar u r really a Great no no wait Greatest Writer…I m glad that i m a Fan of ur fanfiction…Ur Fanfiction is No. 1….Perfect story line…Coming bavk to the episode it was Fab…Awesome…Amazing….love u ?????

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Lama! It really means a lot. I’m really glad that you’re liking my fan fic. Love you loads.?

  6. Rashiverma2199

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode ria…..romance coming soon….excited….actually I’m from Delhi so I guess I am gonna enjoy a lot…and actually Delhi street food is fab…specially south Delhi….

    Ria are u from Delhi?????

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Rashi,
      Thank you so much. I know na Delhi street food. Yaar sunte hi mooh mein pani aa jata hai.
      No dear, I’m not from Delhi. I stayed in Delhi NCR for 12 years. I just love the place.

  7. Shamz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Riya,
    The episode was mind blowing… Yaaar saari been ek hi ghar me rehengi lol…but I really enjoyed to the core…. And plz don’t show UV as villain for longer time becoz I like ur UV….. If u don’t mind plz show some good bond btwn those bro….give some challenge to them and how the trio overcome it together with love and trust….

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Shamz,
      Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment. And, dekhte hain. Mere dimaag ka Baroda nahi. Ho vaisa bhi sakta hai ki teeno ek ghar mein na rahein..
      Vaise haha my Yuvi.. sounded funny. Anyways, stay tuned to know what yuvi has done. I just hope you all like it.

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Cutie pie! I’m glad you liked the chapter. I’ll surely take up your suggestion. Hope you like it. I’ll try posting quick.

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