“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 14 continuation)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 14 (Part II)

Twinkle and Kunj came down to the hall and saw Rahul and Kritika having a water fight. “You, I’ll not leave you today. What do you think of yourself huh”, said Kritika. “I am Rahul Singh. But, what do you think of yourself? You’re some Queen or something that everyone has to stand still and move aside when you’re walking”, replied Rahul. “I swear I’ll kill you. You better not talk about me. First look at yourself you, shameless creature”, said Kritika while splashing one more glass of water. Rahul took the water jar and threw it on Kritika making her completely drenched. Kritika brought a bottle from the kitchen and was about to throw when Kunj and Twinkle together shouted, “Stop!” They went to them and Twinkle said, “You both are fighting like cats and dogs. Don’t you have any discipline? Anyways, now that you don’t want to listen to me, you both are going to stay in the store room for the entire evening and no one is helping you out.” Kunj held Rahul’s hand while Twinkle held Kritika’s and dragged them to the store room. They opened the store room and were about to push both of them inside when Rahul and Kritika pushed Twinkle and Kunj inside and closed the door quickly. “You shameless have some brains too”, said Kritika. Rahul faked a smile and said, “I’m not interested to talk to you.” “As if I am”, replied Kritika. “Open the door the two of you”, shouted Twinkle from inside. “Di, now you both have to stay there for the entire evening and night. So enjoy and good night. And, if anyone asks about the two of you, I’ll tell you both went to some friend’s house. So, bye and good night”, said Kritika and walked away. “Rahul, open the door. The result won’t be good”, shouted Kunj from inside. “First you both come out then there’ll be a result no. So, good night and bye. Take care”, saying this Rahul went back to his room.

Store room
Twinkle was coughing because of the dust in the room. Kunj took out his handkerchief and handed it to her. She placed it on her mouth and said, “These two. I’ll kill them. But, Kunj think of something no please. I can’t stay here.” Kunj nodded his head. He tried opening the door but it was of no use. He came back and said, “They’ve put a proper lock. Somebody needs to open it otherwise we can’t get out.” Twinkle started banging the door but, it wasn’t audible to anyone in the house as it was completely isolated. Twinkle sat down on the floor and again stood up. She ran to Kunj and hugged him tightly. Kunj wasn’t able to understand what happened suddenly. Twinkle said, “There’s a rat over there.” Kunj hugged her back and said, “It isn’t there now. Relax.” He rubbed her back to calm her down. After some time Twinkle was relieved and pulled back. Kunj said, “Vaise Rahul aur Kritika ne jeevan mein aj pehli baar kuch acha kiya.” (By the way, Rahul and Kritika have done a good work today for the first time.) Twinkle stood there confused. Kunj came close to her and pulled her by her waist. He said, “Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho aur chaabi kho jaaye. Andar kya ho raha hai bahar kisi ko pata na chalein aur bahar kya ho raha hai andar kisi ko na pata chalein.” (We’re closed in one room and the key gets lost. People outside will not get to know what’s happening inside and people inside won’t get to know what’s happening outside.) Twinkle said, “What are you talking? Find out a way to get o..” She was about to complete when Kunj lightly kissed her lips and said, “Why do you speak so much? Stay quiet. Don’t spoil the moment.” Twinkle kept quiet and quickly covered her lips with Kunj’s handkerchief. Kunj kissed her cheeks and whispered, “Remove the handkerchief.” Twinkle nodded her head in a no while blushing. He kissed her forehead and said, “Please?” Twinkle again nodded her head in a no. Kunj kissed her cheeks again and Twinkle closed her eyes. He kissed her eyes and took away the handkerchief from her hand. “I don’t like sharing my things”, said Kunj. “But, this is not fair. I want the handkerchief otherwise I’ll start coughing”, replied Twinkle. “Don’t worry. You won’t”, said Kunj and moved closer to her. She pushed him away and said, “Please maintain distance and find out a way to get out.” Kunj started moving towards and Twinkle moved back. She was stuck by the wall as Kunj came closer. He put his hands on the wall from preventing her to escape and said, “Today, there’s no one to save you. You can’t run away anywhere my sweetheart.”
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Hey all! I know you all are a bit shocked to see my post again but, I posted it as I thought all of you were a bit disappointed with the short post. So, here I finish my 14th chapter and I hope you all like it.

Here is the link to the first part of the chapter:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-chapter-14/
I’ll post CHAPTER 15 tomorrow so, please stay tuned and it’ll be of the usual length. The evening isn’t yet over so some more romance to go and of course Rahul and Kritika’s fights also. I hope you all will like it.

Please don’t forget to throw your comments below whether it’s positive or negative.

26 comments

  1. Keerthana

    Wow Ria… I never expected this continuation epi…. U r simply amazing and superb dear…. ??????? Rahul and Krithika rocked this epi……What is the name of the os which u wrote??

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Keerthana! Actually even I never expected this continuation chapter. I’m glad you liked Rahul and Kritika in this chapter. I’ll let you know the OS name tomorrow.

  2. zikra

    Woooooaaah buddy wht a surprise
    N superbbbbbbb wala epi yaar loved it so much
    Do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz………
    Luv u for this surprise…???????????

  3. Sayeeda

    Whhhhoooaaaa……what a good idea …twinj locked in store room …amazing…
    What a treat dear…
    double dip of ur ff in a single day…itni …itni khushi mujhe aaj tak kabhi nai hui …khushi se aakhon mein pani agaya ( lolllzz zayada filmy hogaya )…
    Love u …can’t wait for upcoming romance…

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Sayeeda! I’m really glad you liked it. Vaise I’m really sorry tumhe rulane ke liye.. anyways, it wasn’t that filmy also. Love you too darling.?

  4. RiaA MendeZz

    Great episode ria. Wowwwwww. That’s all I can say.
    You never seize to amaze me with your writing.. Beautifully written ☺

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Baby, I’m glad you liked it but, can I’m so sorry I didn’t understand your comment completely.

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