“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 13)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 13

The person at the doorstep shouted back and said, “You? What are you doing here you shameless creature?” He was about to speak when Kunj and Twinkle came and Kunj asked, “Who’s there?” Kunj looked at the person and said, “Kritika, why are you standing out? Come in.” “You know her?”, asked a confused Rahul. Twinkle replied, “Ofcourse. But, how do you know her? You both haven’t ever met. In di’s wedding Kriti wasn’t there and in my wedding Rahul you weren’t there.” “Wait, put a full stop. Who is he?”, said Kritika. “He’s Kunj’s maternal brother. You remember I told you. He stays with us because..”, Twinkle was about to complete when Kritika said, “Oh yes I do. But, Kunj jiju and Yuvraj jiju are so nice why is he so shameless?” “Oh excuse me Ms. Whatever you are. Please, I’m not shameless. I was just trying to help you out. But, I think it would have been better if I would’ve let you fall”, said Rahul. “Ya, so why did you help! Who told you to? I could’ve just managed myself”, replied Kritika.

“Stop it”, shouted Twinkle. She added, “What is this going on? Kriti, you hold on. Rahul is not at all shameless. He is very much decent. Can any one of you tell me where did you both meet and what exactly happened?”, said Twinkle. “Actually”, Rahul and Kritika said together and looked at each other and said, “I’ll say.” “Don’t fight. Rahul you say”, said Twinkle. Rahul told the entire incident and how Kritika misunderstood him. “Don’t lie. You are shameless. I saw you staring at me. Also, you were the one who wasn’t careful. And, Twinkle di you obviously would support this shameless just like Mahi di always supports Kunj jiju. Anyways, I’m going to sleep”, saying this Kritika went to her room. Twinkle signalled Rahul that Kritika is mad. They laughed and got in. Kunj said, “I’ll go and check where are others.” “No need puttar. We’re here. We just met Mr. and Mrs. Kapoor so that’s why we came in a bit late”, said Bebe. “Okay, let’s have dinner then”, said Twinkle. Usha said, “We all already had. Even Yuvraj and Mahi had it outside only. You both go eat. Rahul, have you eaten?” “Yaa mami”, replied Rahul. “Okay then. Twinkle and Kunj you both have dinner. We’ll talk to Rahul in the mean time. By the way where is Kritika?”, said Usha. “She went to her room. Actually, Rahul and Kriti met in the market in the morning and bumped into each other. Then, they got involved in a fight. So, that’s why. But, it’s alright. It’ll take some time but, everything will be fine between them”, said Twinkle. Everyone nodded their head and talked with Rahul while Kunj and Twinkle went to have dinner.

After around 1 hour
Yuhi’s room
Yuvraj entered the room and found Mahi making the bed. He came to her and said, “Hey sweetheart!” She turned to him and said, “Yes?” “You’re so boring. I’m trying to be so romantic and you’re spoiling my mood”, said Yuvraj. Mahi put her hands around Yuvraj’s neck and said, “Oh really?” He pulled her closer by her waist and said, “Yes. You’re damn unrom..”, Yuvraj was interrupted as Mahi kissed his lips and started caressing his hair. He pulled her closer and they shared a passionate kiss. Mahi pulled back and said, “I hope you won’t say that the next time. Anyways, lets sleep now.” “Nights are not only for sleeping”, said Yuvraj. Mahi widened her eyes and said, “Nights are only for sleeping. Now, let me sleep and you also sleep.” She quickly went to the bed and laid down and pulled the blanket over her face. Yuvraj smilingly went to sleep thinking about Mahi’s behaviour.

Twinj room
Twinkle entered the room and saw Kunj working on the laptop. “Project?”, asked Twinkle. “Yeah. Why?”, said Kunj. “No, nothing. I’m going to change and then I’ll sleep. Will you be working late?”, said Twinkle. “No, I’m almost done. Just 2 more minutes”, replied back Kunj. Twinkle went to the cupboard and took her clothes. She turned around to go to the bathroom but was stuck. “Kunj, leave my dupatta”, said Twinkle. Kunj looked at her and said, “I’m sitting here Twinkle. Turn around, your dupatta is stuck in the cupboard.” She turned around and took her dupatta out. She turned around and was about to go when again her dupatta was stuck. She turned around and saw Kunj holding her dupatta. Kunj walked towards her.

Twinkle freed her dupatta and moved back. She was stuck by the wall. She tried to run away but Kunj put his hands on the wall preventing her from escaping. He kissed her right cheek and said, “Now, where will you run?” Twinkle replied, “Kunj, move away.” Kunj kissed her left cheek and said, “What if I don’t?” “Kunj, see you know me. Just move away”, said Twinkle. “No, I don’t. That’s why I’m trying hard. But, you aren’t allowing me”, replied Kunj. “Okay, you don’t right! So, you don’t need to”, said Twinkle. She bent down and escaped from under Kunj’s hand. Kunj turned around and held her hand. “Mrs. Twinkle Kunj Sarna, don’t even try to escape. I’m not leaving you”, said Kunj. “You’ll leave me Kunj Sarna. You can’t hold on me”, said Twinkle. “I can”, said Kunj. She turned around and kissed Kunj’s lips. Kunj loosened his grip and Twinkle pushed him back. “I told you. Now, go sleep”, said Twinkle and went to change. Kunj said, “Haaye! Ye ladki jaan le legi ek din.” (God! This girl will kill me one day.)

Twinj room
Twinkle was folding the blanket when Kunj shouted from the bathroom, “Twinkle, can you give me a towel?” “Ya, giving”, replied Twinkle. She took a towel from the cupboard and knocked the bathroom door. Kunj opened the door and she stretched her hand to hand him the towel. Kunj held her hand and pulled her inside. Twinkle was shocked for sometime to understand what happened but, soon she closed her eyes. Twinkle slightly opened her eyes and said, “You told you didnt take the towel. Then?” Kunj took the towel from her hand and wrapped themselves in it. He pulled her closer. “Kunj, see I’ve a lot of work”, said Twinkle. “It’ll hardly take 10 minutes for a kiss darling”, replied Kunj. “What kiss! No kiss and all. I’m leaving”, said Twinkle. Kunj stood there smiling and said, “You can’t do anything because the control is in my hand.” He came close to her and was about to kiss when they heard someone shouting in the hall. They quickly separated themselves and Twinkle went out of the bathroom.
Hey all! Thank you so much for all your lovely comments and all the love you people are showering. Also, thanx to all my silent readers.

Sayeeda, you’re telling me not to make you blush. So, what should I say? In school, my friends pull my cheeks and make it red and at home you’re comments do.

Loveleen and Apoorwa, your guess was correct. See, it was Kritika at the doorstep.

Arundhati, thank you for giving me that title. I didn’t take it seriously so please don’t worry.

Keerthana, I won’t mind hiring you as my assistant. Thanx for such a fabulous comment. It really made my day.

RiaA, thank you so much for the comment. I’m really glad you liked it and also sorry for making your vocabulary dull.

I hope you all liked today’s chapter. I know it didn’t have so much of romance so, you might have got bored. I’m really sorry about that. By the way, can you people guess who’s shouting in Sarna Mansion’s hall? If not, then please don’t worry. I’ll surely let you all know.

In case if someone missed the previous chapter, here is the link below:


I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow so, please stay tuned. I hope you all will like it.

Lastly, please don’t forget to throw your comments below whether it’s positive or negative.


  1. Sayeeda

    Now I just want to do one thing…. to bow down in front of u to express my respect nd gratitude towards such a phenomenal writer…..
    U urself don’t know what impact ur ff creates on me….the contention I feel reading it is indefinable….
    I know darling if u gonna step ur foot in world of novels u will surely beat the best novel writer’s till date nd u will be one of the most accomplished among all of them….love u …..

    • Ria


      Thank you so much Sayeeda for such a sweet and lovely comment. I’m in love with your comments. I’m really really glad that you like all my chapters. Hope I can entertain you all further. And, about writing novels.. hehe.. I can never do that. Love you too sweetheart.?

  2. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria
    R u kidding me???
    U told that it was not romantic… U know what…it was damn romantic…
    Really loved it.
    I think kritika was shouting…n that too becoz of Rahul…just a guess

    • Ria


      Thank you so much Shatakshi! I’m really glad you found it romantic. Stay tuned to know whether your guess was right or not.

  3. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    ohhh girl u r mistaken u gave enough of romnc m nt at all dissappointed…..m so happy…strting frm d frst episd u always manage to giv a smile on my face in each episd…m really loving it…keep writing…?????

  4. Shamz

    |Registered Member

    Amazing episode……..
    Keep going to the sky……
    Sky is just the beginning many more is there above that…..may u cross all of it……
    I think KriRa must be fighting…..

    • Ria


      Thank you so much Shamz! I’m really glad that you liked it. Stay tuned to see whether your guess was correct or not.


    very good ria awsome tremendous beautiful but dont stop ur ff like all did pls pls pls thank you so much for writing


    very good ria awsome tremendous beautiful but dont stop ur ff like all did pls pls pls thank you so much for writing thank you

    • Ria


      Thank you so much Ayesha! I’m really glad that you liked it. Till the time you all support me I won’t stop writing until and unless I’ve a lot of study pressure.

  7. Keerthana

    When ever I get a reply for the comment which I posted it really makes me feel happy… ????? next coming to the epi it was again a rocking one…??? I just have a small request.. If u r free in the weekend try to write an OS on twinj… I would be happy to the core if u publish it… It is just a request Ria.. I am not compelling u dear…??

    • Ria


      Hey Keerthana, you all comment so sweetly that I have to write your names. I’m really happy you liked this chapter. I’ll try writing but, I can’t make any promises.

  8. Lama

    Hey Ria…ur episode was Awesome, Fantastic, Amazing, Fabulous, Superbbb and what not…Seriously yaar u r a brilliant writer

  9. Cutie pie

    Awsme yaar its suprb kal tak wait nai horaha actually i ll be late reading ur ff as i hav a function at home 2morrow

  10. RiaA MendeZz

    Reading your fanfiction always makes my day & sometimes my nights. The romance, the cute fights. Its all just so perfect. Its an honour to read your ff you know. Please update soon na. Awesome epi.

    • Ria


      Thank you so much RiaA! I’m really glad that you’re liking the fan fiction. I hope I can continue to entertain you all further too. I’ll post it tomorrow morning.

  11. Romaisah

    haa haa i no i have a lot to make up 4 as i wasn’t commenting lately maybe u haven’t even noticed me gone hw cud u yaar ria ?? (fake cry) :v im kidding im kidding
    anyway i loved ur confession !! like srsly i didn’t see it coming .. n these endless amts of kisses tht kunj wants haha naughty kunj na
    sorry for not commenting u no naa school and exams n so i srsly hate skl god i have to cheer up my mood with u ppl ffs im thankful TEI FFS are alive like literally
    So sorry once again n hope to see ur next epi online and if i don’t comment no im always readinggg 🙂 :* Love you Ria !! ( I love ur name <3<3)

    • Ria


      Hey Romaisah, I haven’t forgotten you at all. So, don’t cry. I understand. Even I’m not able to comment on half of the ffs. I’m just reading them. By the way, thank you so much. I’m really glad you liked the chapters. And, also thank you because telling me that you like my name.

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