“I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Chapter 10)

“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
Chapter 10

Evening (Around 7)
Hall
Everyone was sitting in the hall and talking to each other. Twinkle was sitting on the arm rest next to Kunj. Kunj turned to look at Twinkle. Twinkle smiled at him. Kunj gave her a flying kiss. Twinkle hit him lightly and said, “What is wrong with you?” “What to do! You’re not kissing me so, I thought I’ll only give you a kiss”, replied Kunj. Twinkle shied and was about to reply when Kritika said, “What have all of you come here for? We could’ve stayed at home and talked. Why did we come out?” Mahi replied, “Actually, it’s boring.” “Let’s play something”, said Twinkle. “You all play. We all are fine here itself. Right?”, said Bebe. Everyone nodded their heads in agreement. “No, this is not at all acceptable. We’re watching movie that too with everyone. All of you come to the theatre room within half an hour and you four get up and come with me”, said Yuvraj. He added, “Also, papa please order the food. Order pizza, it’ll come quickly.” Manohar nodded his head in a yes. All of them got up and were walking together. Kunj pinched Twinkle and said, “Walk slow.” “Why?”, asked Twinkle while rubbing her hand. “I’ll tell you later. You walk slow for the time being”, replied Kunj. Everyone went ahead leaving Twinkle and Kunj alone. Kunj dragged Twinkle behind a pillar.

Behind the pillar
“Kunj, don’t start your drama again over here”, said Twinkle. Kunj pulled her by her waist and said, “What drama? I’m in a mood to romance. Any problem?” “Yes, a bunch of problems”, replied Twinkle. “Why do you have a problem? I’m romancing with my wife”, saying this he kissed Twinkle’s right cheek. Kunj pulled her closer and was about to kiss her lips when Twinkle bent down and said, “Not so easily Mr. Sarna.” She freed herself and went to the theatre room. Kunj followed her.

Theatre room
Twinkle and Kunj entered together with their hands entwined. “Hogaya romance? Ab kuch haath bhi bata do yaar”, (Are you done romancing? Now, please come and help us) said Yuvraj. Twinkle started blushing and looked down. Kunj said, “Bhaiya, aap jaisa soch rahe ho vaisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Haan, aur batao kya help chahiye.” (Bhaiya, the way you’re thinking it’s nothing like that. Ya, tell what help you need.) Everyone started arranging everything.
Everyone came about half an hour later. Twinkle and Mahi served the food and sat to watch the movie. After around 3 hours, everyone got up and went to their rooms while Twinkle took the plates and went to the kitchen.

Kitchen
Twinkle cleaned the plates and was drinking water when Kunj entered and hugged her from back. “Kunj?”, asked Twinkle. “Who else will it be!”, said a romantic Kunj. “True. Now, what happened? Why did you come here? I was just coming”, said Twinkle and turned around to face Kunj. She added, “Come, let’s go.” Kunj started moving towards Twinkle and she started moving backwards. Finally, Twinkle was stuck by the slab. Kunj lifted up Twinkle and made her sit on the slab. “What are you doing?”, asked a nervous Twinkle. He kissed her cheek and said, “Romance.” Twinkle replied, “In kitchen? Seriously?” Kunj kissed her other cheek and said, “It’s the best place for romance. Watch movies.” He moved towards her and was about to kiss her lips when Kritika called, “Di?” Twinkle and Kunj quickly composed themselves while Kritika came in. “Did I disturb you both?”, Kritika teasingly asked. “No, what disturb! Tell what you wanted to”, replied Twinkle. “Can you come with me once? I need your help”, said Kritika. “Sure Kriti”, replied Twinkle and left with her.

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Kunj (POV)
God! My fate is so bad yaar. From afternoon I’ve been trying to kiss Twinkle. Sometimes she’ll start her drama and sometimes someone else will come and interrupt. Kunj think of something the day is going to get over. Wait, yes I know what to do. Now, see Twinkle Kunj Sarna you’ve to kiss me.
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Yuhi’s room
“The movie was so nice right!”, said Mahi. “Yes, after all it was a romantic movie. Romance is always good, you know”, replied Yuvraj and walked towards Mahi. She started moving back but was eventually stuck by the wall. Yuvraj put both his hands on the wall to prevent her from escaping. He came close to her and tucked her hair behind her ear. Mahi closed her eyes with his touch. He came closer and kissed her cheeks. He was about to kiss her lips but, she pushed him and was about to go away when Yuvraj held her dupatta. He kept coming closer to her folding her dupatta. He left the dupatta and moved her hair to one side. He kissed her neck. He slid down her salwaar a bit and kissed her shoulder. “Yuvraj.” He came in front of her and said, “Shh.. Don’t spoil the moment.” Mahi replied, “I feel way too sleepy. So, don’t create a moment that I need to spoil it”, saying this she quickly went to the bed and laid down. She covered herself with the blanket letting a disappointed Yuvraj frown. He said, “Good night!” He went beside her and slept.

Twinj room
Twinkle entered the room and found Kunj sleeping. She went and sat beside him. She said, “Kunj, today was the best day. I love you so much.” She went close to him and was about to kiss his cheek when Kunj turned his face. She accidentally kissed his lips and stood up. She turned to go away when Kunj held her hand. “Twinkle I told you na you’ll kiss me”, said Kunj. Twinkle turned around to look at Kunj and said, “You didn’t sleep?” Kunj pulled her hand and she fell on Kunj. Twinkle tried to get up but Kunj held her tightly by her waist and said, “If I would’ve fallen asleep then how could I have got the kiss!” Twinkle replied, “So, this was your plan?” “Yes darling”, replied Kunj. “Leave me. This isn’t fair at…”, Twinkle was about to complete when Kunj interrupted by kissing her lips. Twinkle remained shocked when Kunj pulled back. “Balanced now”, said Kunj. Twinkle started blushing and pushed Kunj. She quickly stood up and went to her side of bed. She laid down and covered her face with the blanket. Kunj smiled and said, “Twinkle.” “Hmm”, Twinkle replied from under the blanket. “It was really the best day”, said Kunj. Twinkle blushed and said, “Good night!” “Good night darling”, replied Kunj.
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Hey all! Thank you so much for commenting and showering so much love. Also, thanx to all the silent readers. I’m really glad that you all liked the previous chapter as I thought it was too simple and many of you won’t like it.

Sayeeda, thanx for such a lovely comment and I’m really happy that you’re able to relive the memories of TEI through this ff.

Shamz, your comment was way too special. I loved those lines so much. It was so sweet.

RiaA, I’m really happy that you’re able to connect with the story and also, it brings a smile on your face.

Shatakshi, your comment was seriously so nice. Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Also, I’m really glad that you’re able to relive the memories of TEI.

I hope you all liked the chapter and twinj and yuhi romance. Did you all like the way in which Kunj made Twinkle to kiss him?

In case, if someone missed the previous chapter here is the link below:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-chapter-9/

I’ll upload the next chapter tomorrow. I hope you all will like it. Please stay tuned.
Also, was the length alright? I’m asking this because I shortened them a bit.

Lastly, please don’t forget to throw your comments whether it’s positive or negative.

38 comments

  1. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria
    That was soooo cute???????
    Wow yaar loved the episode to the core
    Plzzz one more episode today….plzzzz

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Shatakshi! Thank you so much. I’m glad that you liked it. I don’t know whether I’ll be able to cuz I’m still thinking of what to come up with. But, just in case I’m done working on it, I’ll surely post it??

  2. Keerthana

    Beautiful episode…..???. Enjoyed to the core…. ????? finally Kunj made it!!!!! I wish u were the director of tashan e ishq… If u directed the show it would top in the TRP chart… ???? waiting for next one..

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Keerthana! Thank you so much. That was a bunch full of appreciation. Thanx a tons for that. I’m really glad you liked it. And, I’ll try posting it quick.

  3. Rashiverma2199

    |Registered Member

    Ria really enjoyed it ……ur ff is way too nice….can’t get over it…..I read it thrice in a day…..good work…..keep it up…????
    Lots of luv….???
    Muahhh????

  4. loveleen

    hey ria ur ff is so awesm yaar…truly i love it a lot….n yeah d kiss part ws gud too….plz update nxt part asap..m eagerly waiting fr it..

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Loveleen! Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked the kiss idea. Yes, I’ll try my best to post quicker.

  5. Sayeeda

    Don’t have words to express how romantic the episode is …..amazing….
    Itna romance….. my goodness…. throughout the whole episode their was a cute smile on my face nd eagerness to know what will happen next…..
    Ur idea of kunj getting kiss…..is muaahhhh….matlab pucho hi na kitna accha tha …..it is so different… seriously I’m in love with ur ff …love u ….

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sayeeda! Thank you so much. I’m happy you’re liking the story. Also, I’m glad that you liked the idea of kunj’s getting a kiss. Love you too..?

  6. zikra

    ??????????????wht a superbbbbbbb yaar jus loved it so much do cont asap n finally kunj got his kiss m I love with ur ff

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Zikra! I’m really glad that you liked the chapter. I’ll try continuing quicker.

  7. RiaA MendeZz

    I read your fanfiction 3 times since the morning began. When I woke up, on my way to work & in my office. I couldn’t get enough of the romance. The romance of both couple but mainly twinj. Kunj is so cute.
    Felt as if I was watching an epi rather than reading it. I wish we could’ve seen it on video, oh god!!
    Hey, ria, do u know u deserve an award? Hehe.

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey RiaA, I’m really glad that you liked the chapter. And, thanx for such a big compliment. To be honest, I’m really happy that you all are liking the ff. And, about that award. I don’t know and I don’t think I write so great too.

  8. Cutie pie

    Awsme yaar suprb lively i was jus imagining how kunj was asking twinkle for d kiss n she denied i really relived d tei twinj moment thnks to u bt i really miss bunny on show n cnt see tears in twinkles eyes bt i hav stopped watching tei coz of ramazan den latr also i feeli lyk stop watcjing bt hav to see 4 jass n zain

    • Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much Cutie pie. Actually, I don’t watch TEI these days. I find it boring without Sidhant.

  9. AYESHA KHANUM

    amazing ria dont have words to explain ur ff awsome faboulus tremendous and what not

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