love between swasan (part-5)

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Part 4


Swara after changing her dress and put some make up to hide her swollen eyes… goes out and saw sanky is sitting in the hall..

Sanky saw her descending stairs and said: better now go and have your breakfast

Swara with low tone: im not hungry

Sanskar: im not requesting u im ordering u go and have your breakfast and one thing remember very clearly that next time don’t you dare to ignore my order understand???

Swara nodes and silently settle down on table and starts eating breakfast..

Sanskar saw her for few minutes and goes out towards his office…

In college:-

Swara is very silent…

Kiran and neha notice thiss soo they both decided to confront her in break time….

In break time trio is sitting in canteen.. neha signals kiran to ask her…

Kiran: sweety what happened??

Swara didn’t reply

Kiran again but more louder: sweeety????

Swara: haaannn?? What happened??

Kiran: exactly what happened to u?? why r u silent today???

Swara: nothing kirann

Kiran with ‘O’ face: who is kiran??? To which neha smiles

Swara: u who else???

Kiran: but im not kiran

Swara irritated: kiran whats wrong with u??

Kiran: arrayyy imm kd naaa u only put my this name than why r u calling me kiran??

Swara smiles a little on hearing this and said: nothing kd

Neha: please swara don’t hide anything from me and kj please tell us na what happened???

Swara : nothing yarrr

But both pressurizes her soo swara burst into crying to which kiran and neha panicks..

Nehaa: swara swara what happened dear why r u crying?? Please tell us na??

Kiran: yes sweety please tell me?? Did anyone said something to uu

Swara while sobbing going too tell them about sanskar but remembered his warning soo she compose herself and said: it is just that I was missing my maa papaa a lot

Kiran: louuuu khoda pahar aur nikal chohaa… sweety u scared uss… why r u missing your maa papa neha is here naa your maaaa

On listening this neha gave him an angry glare and said while gritting teethss: if imm maaa than u r her papa

Kiran with wide eye: paaapaaaaa???

From which angle I look alike a papa??? U know what im in my sweet sixteens…. And winks

Neha: sweet sixteen my foottt and kj this dailouge is for girls not for boys and from which angle I look like a maa??

Kiran murmurs: from every angle

Neha: I heard that

Kiran: acha sorry darlinggg

Neha: u goo too hell

Kiran: u also come with me naaa

Nehaa: youuuuuu but stops on listening laughing sound

Yess swara is laughing on seeing theire cute fight

Kiran and nehaa smiles in relief

Kiran: thank god u smiled otherwise I was thinking to take u in the water tank soo that u can fill the tank from your tears..

Swara: kddd just shut upp and to nehaa

Swara: nehaa please say to your kj that shut his mouth otherwise I will tell to whole clg about him being a kiran di…

Kiran: oooo oooo acha achaa sorry mairi maa

Trio some quality time… and left to their respective homes after the clg…

Swara was going towards home she is sitting in the car when car stops on the signals.. she is seeing outside suddenly her attention caught something…

The scene:

A girl is slapping a boy for misbehaving with me..

Girl to boy: what u thought I will tolerate all your nonsense?? No never im seeing from many days that u r troubling me but now its enough..

Before boy say anything ppl around all start beating him…

Swara saw this scene and think something…

At home..

Swara is in her room when servant came and said dinner is ready sir is calling u..

Swara: Im not hungry

Servant nodes and goes out

After few minutes servant came again and said the same… to which swara’s reply the same…

After few minutes her door knocks again..

Swara this time shouts: I said n aim not hungry go and tell your sir don’t trouble me again and again…

But the door knocked continuously to which swara becomes irritated and open the door..

Swara shouting while opening: I said naaa…. But stops and said ss….aaa..nnns.kaaa…rrrr

Yes sanskar is standing on the door..

He came forward and swara starts going backward.. sanskar close the door behind and stands on the spot..

Sanskar: why u didn’t came??

Swara after composing: Im not hungry

Sanskar: I already told u don’t u dare to ignore my orders..

Swara gaining courage: listen mr. sanskar im not your slave…

Sanskar raise his eyebrow: oo to madam got tongue?? Not bad.. but I doesn’t work on mee.. soo come and have your dinner.. he said while turning

Swara with loud tone: Iam not cominggg

Sanskar: did u said something???

Swara: r u deaf??

Sanskar starts walking towards her.. but dis time swara remains on her spot.. but in heart she is shivering..

Sanskar: don’t test my patience…

Swara: how wants the patience of a womanizer

Sanskar loudly: swaraaaaaaa

Swara jumps in fear

Sanskar hold her wrist tightly and starts dragging her towards the dining hall

Swara: leave meeeee

Sanskar is silent

Swara: with much difficulty takes out her hand from his grip and turns him towards her and gave him a tight slapppppppp

Sanskar become numb after getting the slap

While swara put hand on her mouth being in shock.. because she also don’t know when her hand lands on his cheek…

To be continued…..

Soo guys what will happened next with swara?? After slapping sanskar?? 😛 think think

Precap: blackmailing pakka…


  1. navi

    oh my god u posted 3 parts i din read… sorrie rabia, i dint know 🙁 🙁 🙁
    all the chapie was superb.. beasty sanskar and his blackmail. plz make swara lil brave. then i feel sad for swara. finally kirand d and neha made my swara lil better.. love them.. wow grt slap at end, he deserved it. post nxt part whn ur free rabi..

  2. Sakshi

    Why hero should be a womanizer and a heroine should change him too good if same with heroine will hero accept?? Just kidding nice episode

    • Rabia


      Hehehehehe becauseeeee sakshi in our society everybody accepts boy like the way he is but girls were not because they call them characterless even if she is talking to any boy 😊 and thankuuuu 😊

  3. xavia

    Osmmmmn dear… ohh God she slapped him….now GOD plz help her don’t know wt he gonna do wid her….bt he deserved dat…..

  4. Mica

    |Registered Member

    Huh! what happen to Swara ? Being womanizer, Did Sanskar ever bother her ? Did Sanskar ever touch her before ? Sanskar rude to her mostly because she don’t want to eat or do something that bothered Sanskar a lot since Sanskar think that Swara is his responsibility..
    somehow, Swara, herself tried to poke her nose on Sanskar matter…
    Rabia!!!!! how could you ask me to THINK ??? i never use my brain to think, and i don’t want to star it now !!!! 😛

    • Rabia


      Hehehehehhee micaa sanskar cares for swara but how can swara accepts this when she knows about his reality it is very difficult for her and plz start thinking may bee u also come to the world of writing 😉😉😉😉😊😆 who knowsss 😛😛😛

  5. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Ufffff !!! Sanskar u hold her wrist soo tightly n her bone was crushing… sooo due to doing it straight, her hand touched ur cheeks…it’s not a slap okkk… **m soo great**

    Thnk u Rabia dii… chappy was hilarious…. take care.

    • Rabia


      hahahahaha and u r also hilarious the way u always describe the scenes its brilliant i think u should also start writing 😉 i want u and mica to wirte 😉

  6. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Plzzz dii don’t say like that…*blushing*…
    There r lots of people who loves to read n write…. choo i can’t takee riskk …. they r surely gonna unregistered….
    then what will i read??

    • Rabia


      hahahahhaa kakali i was totally a silent reader i start commenting when i start writing maybe 2,3 months before and believe me my starting stories were really a bakwas 😀 i didn’t got much response on them 😛 but after getting this type of response i can freely say that i am a writer 😉 i dnot know my wall is open or not warna u may go to my wall and click on posts u came to know about my previous ones

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  8. Pramudi

    I read your story today dear.. For previous parts, have commented on previous part.
    Coming to this part..
    This was awesome..👍 Sanskaar deserves that slap for misbehaving with swara.. But now i’m afraid for sanskaar’s reaction.. Loved kd neha & swara scene.. It was hilarious. 😆
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt part dear..

  9. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Rabia fabulous….. U r amazing…… Loved it….. Karan and Neha making swara laugh is awesome…. Swara slapped sanskar without her knowledge…. Amazing….. Post next soon dr waiting for it…. 😃

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