love between swasan (part-19)

Guys this not done I wrote an OS after thinking a lot for many days with different concept but what I got in return?? Such a low response?? Forget about new readers but even my regular readers didn’t comment on it I think u all ppl only want love story which contain obsession, possession, lust, revenge, familial, tragedy, romance etc or in short there must be a love story isn’t it? then sorry I don’t know how to create or portrait romantic or lust etc scenes and I never add these scene ever in my stories and if u all are thinking that I will add romantic love scenes in this story then sorry for disappointing u but I don’t know how to write them… and from now I not going to right any OS again… and ya this story will also going to end soon…

if I demand comments then it is my right because I know from where I started there was a time when I got only 5 to 6 comments if I am getting huge comments now then it means my work is getting better I never demand comments before never ever in my previous stories like this but now if no comments then no OS no ff from my side sorry for being rude but I am also a human being I felt bad when my regular readers didn’t commented on my OS and I am not going to give any link of that OS because I don’t want to beg it’s your choice of reading or not and if u want u can google it ( swasan os secret of a musical tune ) and if not then ignore it and this not for those who commented I am very thankful to them for commenting and understanding the concept beyond a love story thankuu soo much guys

Author note teaser

Swara is now perfectly fit and fine… and is going to clg.. regularly…

Sanskar is being bzy with kunal and others for the search operation of Dr. John soo he gives very less time to swara but swara didn’t complaint because she knows that it is only for her…. She feels very blessed that God gave her such a caring and loving husband who is trying to do anything to save his wife….

But in heart swara is feeling scared that what if he fails.. she is not thinking about herself she is thinking about her polar bear… she thinks what will happen if something happened to her… she don’t want to go from his life.. she don’t want that her polar bear again go through with pain and this time the pain of losing his love….

One day swara is sitting in clg that day neha is absent because she is gone to meet her sister mica….

Kiran came to her

Kiran; sweety

Swara who was bzy in reading book saw towards kiran and frowned because kiran is looking very tense

Swara: kd what happened why r u looking so much tensed??

Kiran: actually swaraa

Swara: what??

Kiran: kunal bhai called me and he said that those culprits released from jail

Swara: what????? But how?? They sentenced for 15 yrs na but now only 8 yrs have passed

Kiran; actually the old judge which is actually neha’s grandfather was retired and now the new judge who came instead of neha’s grandfather was the relative of second boy suraj

Swara: bl**dy cheapster… sitting on the seat of justice the judge is doing injustice

Kiran: yaa u r right but now I am very tensed about sanky bhai what if he came to know about them?? He may be seems strong from outside but I know what he was when the incident happened.. I know I was small that time but I remember 10 months swara he took 10 months to come out from that trauma may be he don’t know what happened but I think it is good that they gave him drug because if he was in his senses then he must do something to himself

Swara is having tears after listening kiran but she composed herself and wipes her tears…

Swara: no kiran my sanky will go through from that pain once again.. those culprits only taste the jail till now na but from today there bad days will going to start again… I think God also wanted us to punish those culprits with our hands…

Kiran: what r u trying to do??? If sanky bhai got to know na he will surely kill me or u

Swara : nothing will happens I am not that much weak and infact one thing even my parents don’t know about me

Kiran : and what is that??

Swara : I am black belt in taekwondo and also having a special training of bullet firing

Kiran: whatttttttt???

Swara : yup actually my parents always pampered me a lot and always treat like a princess but I always wants to do something new so whenever I go to my grandparents’ house there I got this training

Kiran: wow amazing I didn’t know that my dwarf plant can do these type of things

Swara : shut up giraffe

Kiran: okay okay but what u want now??

Swara: first u take out all the detail related to them

Kiran : okay bosss and goes

Swara : so mis kavita, mr arjun,mis kirti and mr suraj u all destroyed my sanky’s life na now u just wait and watch what I am going to do with u all that u will regret that why u came out from jail earlier…

Swara smirks evilly….

To be continued….

Precap: swara makes a plan to trap the culprits again…

Guys as I am going to give u a long update on Saturday so that’s why I only managed to give u this short updates because I am not in a mood to right any long or detailed update I will write when I feel like writing it may be not on Saturday but whenever I feel to write…

81 comments

  1. Hemanshi

    |Registered Member

    Rabia😍😍 I just love ur ffs
    Pls don’t end it N yaa don’t bother about people who didn’t comment ur os was just awesome😘😘

  2. Nagamanasa

    |Registered Member

    Nice di..So now our Swara is in action..waiting for nxt part.It’s ok update when u r free…But pls don’t be angry with ur sissys di…Love u😘😘😘😍😍

  3. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Diii !! don’t feel bad … why r u thinking like that ? i can understand ur problem… but one thing let me tell u .. n that is i have marked some names who didn’t comment on ur OS … actually they also didn’t comment on others ff too… as m a regular reader of all ff based on SWASAN so i can easily say that… may be they r busy … soo don’t worry okkk !!!

    If u’ll disappoint like this ,how will i get confident… ¿

    n yeah one more thing in one day one chappy is enough… don’t part them or give us 2 2 chappies… m saying this after noticing comments … 1 chappy matlab huge response …
    2 chappies matlab half response…

    *No Comments… waiting for d next … *evil smirk…
    Thnk u di… 😀

    • Rabia

      |Author

      ooo my cutie news reporter u now in Pakistan there was a show on news channel that (koi dekhay na dekhay shabbir tou dekhay ga) but now i can say that koi dekhay na dekhay Kakali to dekhay ge 😉

      and dear i was talking about OS because for writing that OS i even have to go out of mind for writing this ff and when i didn’t get much response then i felt bad otherwise related to this ff response im happy infact more than happy 🙂

      and ya i also thought about giving 2 chappys mean response will be divided so from now i only give one update but with a big one 🙂

      • Kakali

        |Registered Member

        Looo diii muhh mitha karoo…

        new name cutie News Reporter … huuaahh haaaaa hhhaaaahhha !!!! sooo many names ….

        orr haa i was talking about d OS only … jin logo ne appke os par comment nahi kiya ,, unhone dusto ke ff par bhi comment nahi kiya us din… *hufffff tired… 😀

      • Rabia

        |Author

        hahahahaha thanku thankuu rosey u should know na about this show?? 😀

        and Kakali now take a break because more work is coming soon for u 😛

  4. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Rabi buddy dont stress urself. ur os ws superb and its supernaturnal thing i liked it so much nd awesime too.. i like thing likes this so i hsd no doubts. Thn u post nct chapie whn ur free.. this part ws nyc..

  5. Simin

    Rabia di plz dont do anything in anger
    I understand u r disheartened but plz dont do this plz continue plz plz plz
    And this chappy is amazing waiting to see those idiots getting punished by swara and her gang hehehehe

    • Rabia

      |Author

      hahahahah simin now everything i fine dear don’t worry and how can i end that ff which is very dear to me don’t worry im not ending it soon
      and yess next epi will be thrilling 😉

  6. Alia

    |Registered Member

    Hi…first time commenting on your ff…..n I feel it is awesome….couldn’t comment earlier as i had problem in my phone n today i m using my ipad so i m able to comment sorry…I hope u understand…i read some previous episodes also…its is amzing but yeah pls don’t end it that too so soon…

    • Rabia

      |Author

      thankuu soo much aliaa and no problem dear u comment on it its enough and don’t worry many much more is remaining in this one 😉

  7. Simin

    Shukar hai i was scared like what happened with u all of a sudden u became jhansi ki rani
    Really waiting to see them getting tortured hahahaha swara’s devil mind is going in correct direction *evil smirk

    • Rabia

      |Author

      hehehehehe simin actually i ammmm a jhansi ki rani and most pampered child of my house being the youngest one but i never showed my pampering outside because i know that nobody gives and tolerate your tantrums accept your loved oness butt ya my temper was very much famous in between the class fellows;)

  8. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    😱😱😱 itna gussa? Calm down. I m sorry i didn’t read ur OS….its bcoz i run away from horror genre. Whenever i try watching horror mvs along with my friends, i can’t sleep for 2-3 days. Plz maaf kar do

    And ep is awesome….swara in action mode, yay!

  9. Sanjanaagrawal

    |Registered Member

    Response on ur os in wattapad
    15 reads
    4 likes
    8 comments [including mine ]

    Don’t think that If likes are less then people doesn’t liked ur work … only see the reads its 15 na … and don’t worry everyday READS increase …. I will keep updating u ….

    And episode was awesome …. and plz continue … don’t stop in btw …

    • Rabia

      |Author

      sanjana don’t worry dear i was not depressed it was just k mostly ppl liked that type of stories more soo thats why i say that other wise tou i amm very happy after giving the dhambki 😉 (just kidding)
      and why should i stop i am not going to stop it 😉

  10. s

    nice one..u said dat u wont write os any more..plz dont do dat..i love reading horror and supernatural stories..and ur ending was really amazing..its a request..tc..

  11. Kristen

    |Registered Member

    Awesome rabia n i read ur os today bcoz today was my exam in morning so i had to do lots of prepeartion ur os awesome but i m confused in last sceane that if joseph is demon than he easily gain his power from that tune n what happened with josheph he die or once again bcome demon

    • Rabia

      |Author

      actually kristen as u read that mic punished jo before soo now jo can’t be released without the death of mic soo he planned like this that when mic killed by swasan then jo the real demon king will be released again…
      end shows that the war between evil and truth has began again 🙂 this is not the end this the just the beginning of the end

  12. Gorima

    Hey rabia,ur bth os and ff were just awesome….!!!!so chill girl and donot be a angry bird ok,!!!!!:-):-)

  13. Afra96

    |Registered Member

    Nice..and coming to the os, sorry I was not able to read it yesterday due to some reason but will read it later today.

  14. Niku

    |Registered Member

    Awesome chp….
    N yeah I read ur os n also comment on it check it out…..
    U must be thinking ki phle ku nhi kiya.
    Actually dear I hardly get tym to read my fav. One ff so I never I try to read os….
    But from now I will little more attentive bcz I don’t want ki my dear author get this of angry…..now pls. Smile n that must be ur best one….pls. ☺☺☺☺☺

    • Rabia

      |Author

      hahahaha thankuuu soo much nikuu and don’t very when ever i’ll post my next OS i will definitely tell 😉 and don’t worry after seeing the very first comment on this post my anger vanished 😉

  15. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Hey Rabia dr ….. M toh commenting😊 always na i guess may b one or two episodes i forgot ….. And coming to os m not reading any new ff,ss or os nowadays m not getting tym just maintaning track of the ones whivh i started ….. Sorry from my side dr

  16. Pramudi

    Awesome rabia.. Loved it..
    And dear sorry for not commenting in your os.. Not only your os.. There are some other stories too to comment but couldn’t do it because of network problems.. Once again sorry..
    Post the nxt part soon dear..

  17. Aliya khan

    sry sry fr late comment bt its cheating na apne sat ka keh kar thur ko update kar diya thats nt fair
    omg swara knws taekondo even i knw it so swara nd gang is going to do some masti nice
    nd api see no read i am younger than u na so i can demand anything from u ( sry bt i am very demanding u have to bear me )

    so, my demand – ap na wo happy happy funny ache lagte ho gussa mat kiya karo warna apke readers dar jayenge meri tarah

    • Rabia

      |Author

      hahahahahaa okay okay sorryy jii im not going to angry anymore and its just uploaded suddenly 😉 no problem dear and maybe today will also u got a surprise otherwise tomorrow is confirmed 😉

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  19. Mica

    |Registered Member

    Rabiiaaaaa!!!!! sorry late comment and late to read ..
    this Neha didn’t allow me to do so… huhuhuhu*fake crying
    O.o… there is swara the karate master ??? better i run..

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