OUR LOVE STORY-Twinj (Five Shots) Tiktik1

OUR LOVE STORY-Twinj(Five shots)Tiktik1

Hellooo guys!!! Mein phir se aa gayi!!!!i am overwhelmed by your comments….i am soo glad u liked it….guys…again! It means a lot!!

N i am changing the title to ‘Hamari kahani-Twinj’ due to some unforseen mistakes….of course by myself….sorry shreyu dear😅

N u guys have been such great sports!! All the rocking ladies n gurls(hain na sanju😉) n ladka,if any…u guys were awesome!! I am sooo glad to meet all of u…if u have noticed…we are the world in miniature❤️ sab duniya ke kisi kone mein hai…yet we r a family…n thank u for ur warm welcome😘
N all of u guys who have been so kind to me….tamatar vagaira nahin pheka…thank u😅

U guys know ki bole bina mera mann nahin bharega so iss shot ke baad…phir se milenge…kyunki picture abhi baaki hai mere dost…😉

Toh…..

❤️_________ready set go_________❤️

Twinkle entered the room and took kunj’s pic in her hands. She lovingly looked at it.

T-argh!!! Kunj ur soo mean!! Phirse uss stupid UV ke vajah se mujhe chod kar chale gaye na?? Mere baare mein bilkul nahin socha? Tumhein pata hai ki tumhari siyappa queen siyappe karti rehti hai na?? Then? Agar har baar aise mujhe rote hue chale jaaoge to kaise chalega? Buddhu kahika! Tumhare vajah se mera make up bhi kharab ho gaya…

She wiped her tears and took her phone…
Msg: kunj kahan ho? Gussa ho? Pleash gussa mat karo…ghar nahin aaoge? I am missing you aur dekho naaa mera master petu bhi khaa nahin paa raha hai…mr.cadbury table par udaas baithe hai….stars ne bhi twinkle karna band kar diya…i am sorry na babu…pls maan jaao❤️

Twinkle kept her phone n stared at his teddy bear(agar raat ko ek hi insaan ko hug karegi to teddy bear hi hoga na kunj😉)

Twinkle sat on the couch and looked at the sky through the window. She felt the cool weather on her face and she closed her eyes n all of those beautiful moments flashed in front of her…..

~Magical Flashback~

A bada sa room is shown. Everything is soo perfect…pinkish walls…sooo many teddys(u know why😝) n at the corner a chotu sa table filled with a small cadbury family n laddoos. A huge round bed is just at the centre of the room and on top of it,on the wall it seems that the universe has been painted in miniature…with all the beautiful stars and constellations. And in the othe side, ther…
‘Driiiiiiing Driiinnngg!!!!’

‘Twinkle puttar! Aur kinna der lagayegi? Aaj college ka pehla din hai…der nahin honi chahiye…bechari pallavi kinni der se tera wait kar rahi hai….uth jaa varna tere saare chocolate gali wale bacche nu de dungi. Phir rone mat aana’

Suddenly there is a big boom heard from twinkle’s room!! Pallavi and leela(u know😁) rushed to her room n they both burst out laughing……they found twinkle on the floor…with haggard hairs, her eyes are still half closed, she is yawning at the same time n having a cute little pout on her face. She is rubbing her butt n she sat down on the floor itself and was looking around as if nothing had happened…

L- puttar! Ki halat bana ditta kamre da? Chal jaldi tayar ho jaa….
N she started cleaning the mess

P(teasingly)- main kuch madad karun ya tumhara imaginary sid ghore par tujhe washroom tak le jaayega??

T-sacchi? Kahan?
N twinki started looking around…

P-tumhara sacchi kuch nahin ho sakta…chal bhaag varna der ho jaayegi!

Twinkle ran to the washroom.

Next scene❤️

L- haye rabba main iss kudi da ki karun? Yeh sudharne se rahi!!

Then only twinkle came down wearing a beautiful thigh-length kurti, jeans and a scarf…with silver jhumke and sandals.

P-aap kaun hai ji? Asli twinkle kaha. Hai?
T-haww pallu…tumne mujhe nahin pehchana?
P-ohh to tum hi ho meri bestie cum behen? Itna make up lagaya hai ki pehchaan hi nahin payi😂😂😂
T-how mean!!! Pallu ki bacchi abhi dikhati hun!!
N they started chasing each other all around the living room.

Suddenly twinkle bumped into leela who applied a tape on her mouth😱😱
T-ummunmmmm
Pallavi burst out laughing.
P-dekha tu apni baaton se kitna pakati hai! Leela maa bhi tang aa gayi…😂

L-pallavi puttar ye teri zimmedari hai ki ye din bhar kuch na bole. Gurudware wale baba ne ek hafte tak isse maun vrat rakhne ko kaha hai….. N she started doing twinkle’s aarti.

Twinkle’s POV
iss baba ki to main!!! Jabse ye meri life mein aaya hai na…tabse chain nahin hai….maa bhi iske bhakti stuff mein pad chuki hai…jaise apne paitre aazmaane ke liye sirf punjabi pataka TWINKLE hi bani hai….lekin maa ke liye kuch bhi….chahe jaan hi kyun na chali jaye….wo bhi qubool hai mujhe….

Leela removed the tape n said
‘Samjhi naa?’

Twinkle gave a small peck on her cheeks n rushed out of the house…late hai na….

Next scene❤️

The college campus is shown…
It is full of activities….a banner.welcoming the freshers, are hung almost everywhere n on a table there is group of people shouting and hooting. (Chalo dekhte hain na?? Mazaa ayega)

Two persons were hand wrestling.
P1- aaj mera din hai….
P2- never…KUNJ SARNA ke hote huye koi nahin jeet sakta
That guy is none other than kunj,jo hum sabki heartbeat badata hai😍😍)
He has a tashan wala smile on his face.
Another guy says-are kunj aaj birthday hai uska. Chal jaane de….
N boom…kunj lost the battle…
K-ab bol…kya chahiye?

(Uske friends Rahul aur Karan hai. Kunj Rahul se hara hai…)

R-hmmm…chal aaj dekhte hai ki Sarna Empire Ke laadle mein kitne guts hai….gate ki taraf dekh…jo sabse pehli ladki aayegi…tu usse propose kar….agar usne reply kiya ya thappad maara to tu jeeta…agar bina kahe chali gayi…..toh MR KUNJ SARNA KI DOUBLE HAAR!!
Bolo hai itna dum?

K-yaar bas itna hi…yeh to mere daaye haath ki choti unglee ka khel hai…😉

Ka-kahin khel uske haath ki naa ho jaaye….tere gaal pe…
N the crowd burst out laughing…

K-u just wait and watch….
N he put on his jacket with full tashan❤️

Then only hamari punjabi pataka n pallavi entered the college…
P-kya nazara hai…kaafi saare bakre hai…jo katne ko tayar baithe hai
She said with a giggle looking at the guys who were staring at them….

Suddenly they saw someone at their knees….guess whom? Hamara handsome hunk.
K-waah kya aankhein hai…mann to karta hai inmein dub jaaoon…kya smile hai…isspe fida ho jaane ko jii chahta hai….permission hai??
He said looking at twinkle

Twinkle’s POV
Mere sandal nahin dekhe? Mann karta hai tumhare sar par patka doon…aagya hai? Loocha lafanga kahika!!

Twinkle was about to say something when she saw Pallavi giving her death glares. She quietly bent down her hand,glanced at kunj and walked away….

Kunj was shocked seeing that his words n charm had no effect on that girl….

Kunj’s POV
Yaar ye bandi special hai…mujhe bhaao bhi nahin diya….lekin kunj sarna haar nahin maan ta hai….tum jo bhi ho…ek din mere proposal ko accept karogi aur khud mujhse baat karegi….ye mera vaada hai…

The crowd was also in a shock because no girl had refused to him before….they all started teasing him…while kunj was continuously thinking about that mysterious girl…

Precap: hum saath saath hain…socho socho😉

❤️____________end____________❤️
Now mera bak bak time…thank u all the commentors..n haan ye epi thoda lamba hai kyunki main 2-3 days tak post nahin kar paoungi..i’ll be busy….

So kisi ne complain kiya tha that maine apne baare mein kuch nahin kaha..so
My name is Ayushi
Mein jald hi 16 ki hone waali hoon
I am from Mauritius
N mere dimaag mein hamesha ek nayi fantast paida hoti hai…soo…main choose to nahin kar sakti..but one of them is to definitely meet sid par agar vo mujhe mil gaya to main usse hug nahin karungi…pehle kuch aur karungi😇

Once again thank u guys for ur comments….love ya all

45 comments

  1. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Hey,
    I just loved this. Really liking the plot. The precap seems really interesting. Also, we both are of the same age. Anyway, you post the next one soon. Love you x

  2. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Hey ayu. I am of 15 and from mumbai and jaldi se mein bhi 16 ho jaungi.
    I loved the episode. Will it be a sad ending. Loved it.
    Can u plz change the do of ur ff.plzzzzz 🙏🏻

  3. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Allle…aap toh Didi Nikli..but koi ni ..Maine toh apko Ayu hi bulana hai..
    Ayu ek baat main actually batana bhool gyi thi I.e. since many readers like Ria miandezz don’t understand Hindi..toh English translations kar Dena agar time ho toh…

    Vaise etoh meri jaan…mera favorite vo msg to Kunj by Twinkle tha…soooooo cute yaar..
    Muaah..
    Ab naa mujhe ninni bhi karni hai toh last time ki tarah long comment nahi kar sakti …kya karu…😴😴😴😴..late night jaagne ki aadat nahi hai naa..

    I am falling for your fs and cont when u get time.. Muaah..love u..😘😘

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Aww tum actually chotu nikli…but pls call me Ayu only…Ayu di bhi chalega n pls TUM kehna…mauritius mein meri kuch cousins hai..we do not meet often but becuz they are younger than me they call me’aap’ which irritates me a lot. I am the elder par main bhi young houn…i am always telling them not to do that..but they still do it…
      Haan as from the next epi i will post it with its translations to make it easier for some reader…i am really sorry…excitement mein bhul gayi.
      Anyways shreyu…glad u liked it😘

  4. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved the episode It was so sweet the flashback was awesome Twinkle did not reply because of her Maun rat Loved it awesome Please try posting soon 🙂 Love you 🙂 Hope we are friends already 😉

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Hey Shruti! Glad u enjoyed it. Are yaar hum kabse dost hain…abhi pata chala hai tumhein?
      Of course dear we are dosts😘

  5. Baby

    |Registered Member

    ayushi amazing
    yr luvd it 2 d core
    aw.sooo bad bechara kunj ab punjabi pattaka hai itni asani se milti toh to sab aise hi le jate
    ab thoda bhot toh mehnat krni pdegi
    yr osm dear luvd it u r fabulous post nxt asap m w8ing n wen is ur bday?
    post asap luvd it srsly osm
    i hp in present kunj vapas aa jaye jldhi
    hehe luvd it

  6. SidVee

    Wow Ayu u r such a talented writer.. I fell in love with ur writing skills.. the epi was mind blowing.. loved that cute twinkle.. and poor kunj😂😂 twinkle ne bhave nei mara😂😂.. loving the flashback part.. eagerly waiting for the next 💕

  7. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Wow!!!!! Like seriously its damn goof diii I just loved it especially twinkle she is amazing n kunj this is awesome agar free ho tho plz plz jaldi post kar do na plssss I can’t wait this is marvelous

  8. Sidhanshi

    Superb epi.. Loved it.. Nd sorry for the late comment.. Actually i was little busy… Hope u will understand..

  9. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    hi…ayu its amazing…u wrote it so well n the present message wala dailouge was so cute…u know ayu Hamare English text me ek lesson hai jiska name Mauritius hai aur usme lika hai ki wo ek chota island hai aur wahan ke log bohot friendly hai…is it true??? I guess its true kyunki iski example toh tum ho…love u…plz post asap…

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Aww thats so sweet of you tamanna. N haan vo maine hi post kiya tha…mera island chota hai par it is the perfect tourist destination n it is simply gorgeous. Thank u sooo much for ur comment…abhi tuition par jaana hai n with this comment u made my evening. Love you too Tamanna😘😘

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