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our love story started long ago (a raglak ff) (epi-1)

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Hello all , how r u . thanks a lot for all the comments , it encouraged me to write more , for those who have not read the intro and promo , here is the link
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a beautiful girl murmurs in her sleep ,she says no….and gets up wid a shock . another young girl sleeping near her gets up hurriedly and tries to calm the other girl . she says ragini di , calm down . yes the beautiful girl was indeed ragini , yeh lo pani ,and gives her water . ragini smiles and says I am fine now shona ,seeing her lil sister being so worried for her . swara asks , u got the same dream again . the two un-united hands , trying to unite. ragini says yes shona , I don’t know when this dream will stop troubling me . the hands never unite , they try to but the dream ends there and I get panicked every time. Ragini says u sleep now , or u will get late to school , tmrw also. Swara smiles and sleeps . ragini gets thinking , why do I always get this dream , do I have some connection wid the people who come in my dream , but the problem is I see only their hans , but not anybody’s face . mumma used to say that dreams r our thoughts only , but I have not seen anybody getting separated also and gets thinking why am I getting the same dream and this dream is haunting me like anything …….

the next morning ragini was getting ready in her usual saree , she always liked to be in traditional outfit though she was a very practical person wid modern mindset , she says swara come soon , I will drop u in ur school ,I am getting late for the recording . swara comes and hugs ragini from behind . don’t be in such a hurry . everybody will wait for u , because they know convincing u is tough . ragini says whatever , come fast now .
ragini drops swara in her school , she waves her a bye and goes off

swara is walking into her class when she bumps into a handsome boy . swara is about to fall when the boy holds her . (pehla nasha plays in bg) . swara says sanky leave me now , sanksar leaves her . swara says thank u for holding me or else my head would have broken . sanskar was not listening to anything . he was just lost inswara . swara says hello sanskar I am talking to u . sanskar comes back to his senses . he says I am sorry I was just lost some where and sees . swara was gone! Sanskar thinks , man this girl is superfast and super cute . will i ever be able to tell her that I like her so much

a courtroom….
A judge says so I consider all the evidences and proofs submitted by laksh maheshwari and release raj . raj is released , he looks quite old . he sees a handsome man standing there . he goes and hugs the man and says thank u beta , thank u so much for helping me . what is ur name beta . the man says laksh…laksh maheshwari . raj says I am too old and poor , nobody fought my case because I could not pay their fees . my wife struggled hard to prove me innocent but nobody came forward to help and u being such a renowed lawyer came to help me . laksh says no , who said I fought ur case without any fees , give me ur fees . bless me now and touches the old man’s feet . raj blesses him and says we cant find such positive people in this world now . god bless u beta , may u get married soon and live a happy life . laksh smiles and goes from there . so this was laksh maheshwari , he helped people lived fr his family and loved his bro sanskar a lot . he goes home and sees his mother Annapurna arranging the table for lunch . he goes and hugs her . she says aur ek case jit gaya hoga , vahi na , voh kisan raj ka .

laksh says yes mom , yes . same case .now I am very hungry , make halwa for me soon . ap says no lunch , lunch only at 12 sharp . dp was a army man and is very strict . he wants each and everything in house to go on time . let it be lunch , or watching tv or leaving for office . everything must be done wid punctuality in his house . dp loved laksh a lil more than sanskar . dp comes there , he sees laksh and hugs him . he says congrats laksh , u won another case right ? laksh asks , how did u know ? dp says seeing the satisfaction in ur eyes . laksh smiles .

Precap : swara to get hit by a car , will she survive or……..

Stay tuned and please leave ur precious comments

40 Comments
  1. Interesting episode

    1. thank u

  2. plzz give raglak moment soon next part soon and be regular

    1. thank u

  3. Awesome

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    1. thanks a lot

  4. Superb

    1. thanq

    1. thank u

  5. Cynthia

    It was fantabolous, I think the dream will haunt her until RagLak gets re united, Laksh has a very nice character, I know I m always late to cmnt its because the time zone of india doesn’t match it Englands.

    I think Ragini will collide with Laksh and will get a shock. (THIS IS MY GUESS FOR THE NEXT EPI)

    1. its ok dear , i am happy that u commented , and u r not late . keepguessing . thanks a lot

  6. nyc…

    1. thanq

  7. Ragz_teju

    awesome loved it

    1. thanks a lot

  8. Asra

    awesome dear…waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    1. thanks a lot di

  9. Jazzy

    superbb

    1. thank you

  10. Raglakholic

    Its fabulous starting
    Totally loved it
    Raglak introduction is marvellous
    Eagerly waiting to read more
    Please do continue soon

    1. thanks a lot .will update soon

  11. Varsha

    Fantastic loved it a lot dear

    1. thanks a lot di

  12. Dharani

    superb

    1. thank you

  13. Superb

    1. thanks

    1. thank u

  14. Jasminerahul

    ragini is haunted by the same dream again n again,is she herself the girl in her dreams?Sanskar holding swara n pehla nasha as bgm n sanskar getting lost in swara is so romantic.does swara too has crush on him?Laksh is so nice 2 take up the case of a poor man without fees.laksh n the old man’s scene was lovely.waiting 4 Raglak meeting.precap is shocking n painful.plz update ur other ffs too.
    plz comment on jeene laga n socha na tha

    1. thanks a lot , will update my other ffs soon

  15. CAsush

    Yeah varshu u rock dear

    1. thanks a ton

  16. Superb

    1. thank u

  17. A.xx

    Fab sorry for late comment xx

    1. its ok , thanks a lot xx

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