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A love story OS by ArpitaKrish

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Hi…
I hope in teaser you got to know abt me….
Who did not read Please read my Intro there….

So Now I’m jumping to my story……..

A girl was shown in a car wearing pink anarkali with matching earrings and simple make up. She was going somewhere….

Girl POV:

I cant believe it. Today I’m going to propose him.
Kabir, Sanchi is coming.
*that girl is none other than Sanchi*
Its 5 years I’m waiting for you. You are my 1st
and last love. I still thought that How can I fell in
love with you.
I was 17 years old when we met.

Fb shown:

Sanchi was walking on road. A car came with
speed and mud fall on her. Car stops and a man of 22 years came out from Car.

*that man is none other than Kabir.*

Sanchi faints.

Kabir pick her up, make sit in his Car and .
sprinkles water on her face.
Sanchi get consious.

“Are you fine miss?”asked Kabir.
“Hmmm” said Sanchi.”What happened to you?” asked Kabir putting the bottle.

After thinking for while.

Sanchi: Can you please drop me for my head is aching.
Kabir:Okay….Your address?
Sanchi:XYZ road.

In whole journey there was a pindrop silence. He is Kabir of course.

XYZ road:

Kabir: where are your house.
Sanchi:I will go myself. Thankyou.

Kabir went.

Sanchi: What is this? How rude he is?? No smile. I hope I will not meet him again.

She went inside her home.

Time skipped. In night, Everyone was doing
dinner at Sanchi’s home.

*In Sanchi Family There is 4 members. Sanchi’s father Sunil Mishra, Owner of SDCH. Jaya Mishra, Sanchi’s mother. Pragya Sanchi’s classmate and cousin, Her parents are no more
so she leaves with them*

B/w dinner:

Sunil: Tomarrow A tutor is coming to teach you both biology for your Neet. Its your 12th. I’m busy so I cant teach. He is best intern of SDCH Dr. Kabir Kapoor.

Prasha nodes.

Next day passes like this. In evening, both PraSan are waiting for KK.

He came and Sanchi become shocked to see him.

“Aap?”
“You did not tell me that you are Sanchi Mishra daughter of Sunil Mishra”

Pragya was watching them showing her big
eyes.

“Do you know each other”
“Yes we met yesterday. He dropped me” said Sanchi.

Then All starts studying.

Time skipped to night. After dinner Prasha was in their Room. Both are studying cockroach.

Sanchi:He is handsome.

Pragya: who? Cockroach? Oh god she starts liking cockroach now. So my jiju will be cockroach.

Sanchi hits her.

Sanchi: I talked about KK sir. I think I like him.
Pragya: What??? He is older than you and you are his student.
Sanchi:I said ‘I like him’ not ‘I love him’.
Pragya:Ohh…..

Time passes. Its 3 month now Sanchi starts growing her feeling towards Kabir. Her exam
came near her. Its only 1week for her exam.

Kabir was going to Sanchi’s home to teach her.
Accident happens.

Scene shifts to hospital. Everyone was there
PraSan, Kusum, Jaya and other intern and staff member of SDCH are praying for them. Jaya was consoling Kusum and Pragya was
consoling Sanchi.

Sunil was doing operation.

He came out. Sanchi went to him.

” What happened to Kabir Sir” asked Sanchi weeping.

Sunil: I cant say anything. He has bad injury in his head. Pray that he get consious otherwise He will go in coma.

He was aldo emotional. He went to do some other formalities. Kusum and Jaya are sitting
outside and Pragya was there. Sanchi went inside. She is weeping.

Inside OT:

She sits beside him holding his hand.

“Get up Kabir. I cant see you like this. Why are you not understanding I love you. Please open
your eyes. See everyone is crying. Get up.”

Her tears drop on Kabeer cheeks. His hand
starts moving. He came in consious.
Everyone become happy. Sunil checks him. He discharged after someday.

Time passed Its PraSan exam next day. Sanchi decides that after exam she will propose him.

Sanchi’s almost exam was finished. Only her last exam remain. She calls Kabir.

Sanchi: My last exam was tomarrow. Can you come with me for icecream. That is treat for you for teaching me. Please dont deny.
Kabir: Okay.

Sanchi drop the call.

“Tomarrow I will tell him that I love him.”

Soon Sanchi slept…..

Its other fine day. After exam Kabir came to pick Sanchi from her school. Pragya went alone.

In Dessort Shop:

Both are seated.

Kabir: So….How was your exam?
Sanchi: fine. (In mind – How to say? I will say
after conversation)
Kabir: Do you have any boyfriend?
Sanchi:No. Do you?
Kabir: No. I dont believe all that. I want to focus on my carrier. Most of girl proposed me I rejected them. Its time to make carrier. I hate those girl who fall in love at this stage. Till
graduation you should only focus on study.

Sanchi become sad.

Thay finished their desert. Kabir dropped her.
At house pragya was waiting for her. Sanchi was sad.

Pragya:Did you proposed? What he said?

Sanchi said everything to her. Pragya consoles her.

Sanchi then decided to go to abroad for her MBBS. PraSan went to USA for their studies. Ka ir completed his internship and join SDCH as a doctor bcoz Suni does not want to lose him.

Fb ends.

(In Sanchi POV)
I came 2 days ago with pragya to do internship. I got to know He is our menter. He will guide us. We didnot talk much with each other.
I decided to propose him today because on the day of today I met him 1st time 5 years ago so I called him for dinner at my fav restaurant. Mom, Dad everyone know now. Everyone is waiting for his reply.

Sanchi POV ends.

Restaurant come. Sanchi went directly upstair. She booked whole floor So there was noone. She has a Rose flower. Kabir came. She become happy and hides rose behind her.

“What is this? Why this decoration? Why noone is here?

Sanchi kneals down on her knee. Kabir become surprised. She was holding rose in her hand.

Sanchi: I know its awkward. Boys always propose 1st like this. Here I’m proposing. I waited from 5 years I cant wait now. I want to say that I want my day to start from you and end on you. I dont know How I fell in love with you? But Its true Dr. Kabeer Kapoor I fall in love with you. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I’m loving you from past 5 years unconditionly. See I also become doctor now. You want that girl should focus on study I did that. I topped. Now I’m equal to you. Please accept my proposal.

Kabir was still shocked. He shakes by her word.

She said shouting ‘I LOVE YOU. WILL YOU MARRY ME?’

He too reaspond. He accept her Rose and hugs her tightly.

Kabir: You know what I never believe in love but after you went I starts missing you and realised my love. Today everthing happened so suddenly but I too want to Say that ‘I LOVE YOU TOO MISS SANCHI MISHRA. I ACCEPT YOU AS GOING TO BE MRS. SANCHI KABEER KAPOOR’

they hugs each other. ‘Humko tumse Pyaar Hain m’ played in bg.

After someday their engagement happen. They decided to marry after Sanchi Internship.
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The End……..

This story belong to my close one.

How is it guys???
I know its rushing but its a OS.
Dont forgetvto give your reviews.
Do comment.
Bbye Take care……

45 Comments
  1. ArpitaKrish

    Sorry guys I wrote rushly so there is some spelling mistake but I’m holding my ears now please forgive me.

  2. Dhruti

    superb dear with happy ending……………. i love this os…………come soon with next ff/os……………..keep writing………..and kash this will happen in real serial and kanchi will be main pair but god know what happen on monday ?…………………btw how are you?…………..tc

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyou…..
      I’ll come back with soon with next OS…….
      Leave about serial. They are not going to show. They only know to make us fool. 1st they gave us hope but next breakes……..
      I’m fine…..
      You say??

      1. Dhruti

        all well…… yaa they are just fool us…i hope for kanchi from 1st when sanchi fell down and kabir save her, 2nd she fell on kabir and their eyelock was so awesome……. i just mesmerised with kanchi’s chemistry………..

      2. ArpitaKrish

        Hmmm……..me too felt

  3. Niyaaa

    Awsome simply amaz nd sweet os AK.. Came back with new one tc

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyou dear…. I’ll come back soon…

  4. It was so awesome…….. Loved it

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyou dear Amnaa……

  5. Riyarocks

    Its ok Arpita dear……….we don’t mind coz afterall its an os……I really enjoyed reading this…….I’ve a wish…..can u give another os regarding what happened next….I mean after marriage…..if u r free….else its ok….luv u loads dear……..

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Hmmmm…..okkk…..Next sunday My test is going to happen. So till Sunday you have to wait…….Dont worry I will give…..
      Btw thankyou

  6. Nahi kan pakadne ki koi zarrorat nahi hai….wo hum pakdenge agar waapis nayi aayi agle OS lekar…..Hehe….About OS u rocked it sweetie…..love it sooo much & u too…..take care & a big hug to u….Back with another OS soon.

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyou yar…….I will come soon with next one…….till then you wait….. I too respond your hug…..love you too😍

  7. Great can u extend this as ff

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thanks…..
      Oops sorry

      1. ArpitaKrish

        Okay I will give another OS of after their mrg. You have to wait till next sunday.

  8. Riyarocks

    Arpita….this message I’m giving u on behalf of my frnd Anuradha(an amazing writer of this TU)…….Awesome dear… Darwazatod episode… U r amazing dear… Fabulous writing…

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thanks to her and thanks to you dear

  9. Sajnana900

    Speechless!!!!!
    Cant say anything
    How u setup every thing cant say in words

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Hey thanks yar

  10. Aafiya

    Superb and awesome

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thanks dear

  11. Awesome and amazing story

  12. Super dear lovely and happy ending

  13. Miss-Golgappa

    Its just awesome dearie…… confessing part was superb…. I just love it….. Please please dear i want more writings from you

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thank you……. I will come with another one asap

  14. Moonlight25

    It was a really amazing OS just loved it dear…..great job…keep up the good work…do come up with an another OS soon..❤❤

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyou dear…….
      I will come asap with another one

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thanks alia

  15. Rajnandini

    Hey Arpi dear(sorry my bff’s name is too arpita so got habit to say arpi..hope u dont mind) the os was superb dear….and the concept was hit…u rocked it!!! Eager to read more from u….love u loads…

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Hey thankyou dear……
      Its okay you can call me that

  16. Firstly sorry for late. Cuming to this it’s so amazing outstanding marvelous fabulous mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more.

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Its okay……..
      Thanks to you all……….

  17. RuCh23

    Hey Arpita 😀😀😀 amazing dear 😍😍😍 just loved the whole os 😍😍😍

  18. Khamoshi

    Hey ArpitaKrish.. Congratulations for ur 1st episode dear..it was superb. U nailed it. Loved it..plz update soon

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyou so much dear

  19. Abhilasha

    Really beautiful story…… Something fresh and unique….loved it so much…u nailed it!! and u r in which class?

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyou so much dear……..
      Actually I did 12th early and I cant do graduation untill I be of 17 so now a days I’m revising my 11th-12th syllabus and preparing for entrance exams……
      And U????

  20. ArpitaKrish

    thankyou so much dear……….
    Actually I did 12th early and I cant do graduation until I be 17 so now a days I’m revising my 11th-12th syllabus and preparing for entrance exams………
    And U?????

  21. Jessicca

    Such a beautiful concept… Story was truly amazing… Loved it to the core… You nailed it… Superb

    1. ArpitaKrish

      Thankyousomuch

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