Love story in Heaven part 9

…Hey guys ridhima is back again….
I m really very sry for making u ppl w8 for soo long… ??… bt i was busy na…nd i love each nd every comment of urs….
Sry for nt replying it individually bt now i will try to reply from today onwards…??….

Amaya- thanks dr…nd i love to read ur comment…?
Ria- i loved ur cment soo much dr… nd thanks for giving rose…u r the first one??… wat can i do for u to return the favour…nd also..yar mujhe ek baat samaj nhi ayu u said u forget wat u was reading??? Sry i m lallu…??

Zikra,sam, twinjfan( tamana), varshini, aastha- thank u all of u for commenting guys…i love u all…muaaaahhhhh..??…
Shreya- thank u soo much dear…nd i love u too… i m glad u liked it…nd also… we r two who r sailing in same boat… i will give u rose…u give me…??
Sasmera- thank u dr….and thanks for bringing a 109 volt smile on my face bcz of ur lovely cmment ….nd i must say ur question was a inteligent one…i will reply it today in the epi…??…
Crazy- i m impressed of myself….maine crazy ko apna crazy fan bna liya…i m soo good…hahhaha….on a serious note thanks dr…. this was really a big achievement as i know tat u r soo much good writer…. love u…

Sayeeda- apko toh kya kahon….ur cmment make me blush everytym….haye…??…
I keep on searching ur cmment…??…. bt seriously… nd really thanks for the appreciation u gave me….nd also i will never be tired of reading ur long cmments infact i wud love to read them….( ab apni tareef toh sabko pasand hoti hai…)..
Fiona- thank u sooooooooo much dr…. i love u… and abt hardwok it gets payed off reading such a beautiful cmment…nd really sry i wss nt able to fulfilll ur demand of posting daily…nd i missd u too…
Panchi- diii mujhe bhi nhi pta aise ideas mere dimag mein ate kahan se hai…??… vaise thank u sooo much for such a lovely cmment…. love u

Dreamer- hehe…yaar dimag hi hai….??..nd really thanks for appreciation… i m glad u liked it…nd also
.Nd also thanks to my silent readers…( if any)..
GUYS VAISE WANTED TO SAY….MERI EK LINE NE MUJHE KITNE SAARE ROSES, CHOCOLATES, HUGS DI NA…I ENJOYED IT A LOT…. I WAS LITERALLY JUMPING READING UR COMMENTS…. THANK U ALL SOO MUCH…

Ab isse pta chl hi gya aap logo..ko ki main kitni badi chatter box hoon…??…
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I m really sry guys on the behalf of my dumbo friend…she posted my os widout my consent…i know i shud have nt posted it as it was nt mine idea…. really sry… even i shud nt hve witten it bt that song is soo magical..tat i was nt able to stop myself….bt my stupid friend got my phone smehow nd she posted it…really sry….??…

Vaise i m inviting u to her funeral…. 2morow…. aftr she cme back from her nani’s place…??..
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Part 9

Here we go…

The scene started where it ends…. after god entering the heaven…. twinj were amazed to see god nd themselves….
( god ka pta nhi…apne aap ko dekh ke zyada shocked the…??)

God- wat the hell is this wat u both have done????
Now twinj were shocked to see his anger….
Kunj- wo….wo…
God cuts him off….
God( dramatically)- shadi kr li aur bulaya bhi nhi..( done wid the marriage bt not called me)…
Twinj were abt to say smething bt on hearing word shadi( marriage)… boths mouth opens wide nd eyes almost popped out of sockets….
Twinj- shadi….????? Kisne ki shadi?????
God-… u both…
Twinj – we??? Wen ??? Where??? Hw???
Twinj see eo in utter shock…nd also like why are u repeating my words look..

God- haan u both… now …. here in heaven….( pauses)…
Nd angel from behind…
Angel- god the last questions answer is left that is how…
God looks angrily towards her…
God- do u know much more than me???

Angel nods no nd goes behind….
Tw- bt god g she is correct….
God- abe koi mujhe bhi bolne dooo.( are smeone plz let me speak)….
Kunj- speak speak….
God was abt to speak smething..bt tw
Tw- ab plz speak smething na…
God( shouts)- oye speaking na firstally u shut up…okk???
Tw jst nods nd kept quite…
God- this garland of rose is given by kunj to u???
Tw nods innocently…
God- u both accepted eo wid all ur will…
Twinj nods…
God- so ur clothes also get changed….
Twinj nod their heads vigrously as children….
Hehe…
God- so this is a sign tat u both are married now… jst think wat is most important in marriage tat pheras, sindoor., exchanging of rings, or signatures in court…. i will say nothing among them…. the most important thing is to find a soulmate… if u find a true soulmate…u may get a lot of troubles in ur life bt u will always gain energy, strength to overcome it….
Wen one is in the problem other one will be always their to handle me… according to me this is the real meaning of marriage… wat u ppl do is also a necessity as it shows tat u ppl are married otherwise itne serials mein itne saare mmry loss hote na toh pta hi na chale ki kaun kiska hai…??….
Jokes apart….it is a custom…so in heaven their is a custom of rose garland which u already did… nd these clothes changed na…it means u r nt the mates for this one or next birth.. it means u r partners in every life… nd marriage in heaven is the most pious one… as it is the place where u will find only good….
Twinj- r u nt angry wid us????

God- no my child.. hw can a father be angry wid his own children for long… he can be rude to make his children on right path… bt if they r on right path nd also are happy then i m no one to take away their happiness… i know i give pain to u ppl… bt widout getting pain hw will u know the importance of happiness… saying this god came in front of them d put his hands on their heads nd blesses them….
(GOD IS GREAT… ??)….

Twinj see eo in extreme happiness….nd then they hugged god….( Kya ?? Kya ?? Kya??… bt ab toh yeh ho gya….yaar vaise kitne daring hai yeh dono…)…

Then they took blessings of everyone in heaven all shower their love on them in the form of flowers…. our twinj were having a 100 V smile on their face…almost giving the ad of colgate…hehe..??…

Then all leaves from their… only twinj nd god are left…
God – so know u r married so next is tat…
Kunj cuts him off – honeymoon… ( he smiled ) while tw narrwed her eyes…
God- yeah honeymoon bt the honeymoon of heaven is quite different one…
Kunj-( not in senses)… – honeymoon mil rha hai na that is enough…..
God- ya bt ur honeymoon is to hell….
Kunj came back to earth….sry sry heeaven?…
Kunj- kya?????

God- haan…actually u both married so u have to pprove urself capable of eo…
Kunj- is it a test???
God – ya a sort of…
Kunj( making a crying face).- aap test lete thakte nhi…( dont u get tired of taking tests).. u behave like those teachers who enters the class wid surprise tst as a substitute to the absent teacher… hamesha khushi mein test ghusa dete ho….( almost crying..??)…
God – plz dont emotional blackmail me…u have to give the test means u have to….
Tw- okk baba g jaisi thohadi marzi( as ur wish)….

Then twinj left the place…
kunj was looking sad…
tw – its ok kunj… we will pass it nd also… we will be able to spend tym na so chill…
kunj- wat chill tw…u know in my life their is no romance….
tw- as if u r having life??? ??
kunj- okkk even my soul…see i thought of pre marriage romance bt meri shaadi ho gyi mujhe pta hi nhi chala.. nd honeymoon toh is unique to the hell…huh…( he pouts)…
Tw pecks his pouted lips…kunj gets shocked bt then happy nd forgets eveything…. they both went to their respective room nd dozes off thinking of eo…

@ Earth….

In the taneja mansion…
leela, usha nd yuvraj were sitting in the hall…
Yuvraj- aunty g yeh kaise ho gya..i mean kunj or tw…jab mujhe pta chala i came here…( nd cries)..
Leela- pta nhi puttar mere hasde khed de parivar nu kidhi nazar lg gyi….( dont know puttar.. whose black eye disturbed my house…?)..

Yuvraj- everything will be fine aunty..u dont worry i m here na ur child, ur son… both leela nd usha kept their hands on yuvi’s head nd blesses him….
They talk for smetym… later uv excuses himself for using washroom… he went to tw’s room…
He locked the room… nd went near her table…
He opened the drawer and take out dairy from their nd opened the diary… he took one photo out of it nd smiles evilly….

That picture was pf twinj…. he took out the lighter from his pants pocket… nd brought it near the pic…. the picture catch fire… nw kunj’s photo was burned… he tried to estinguish the fire bt it ws too late…tw’s photo also burned along…
Uv- see heree also i tried to burn him bt u get burned along wid baby… and in reality also… u know i cant see u wid him… i will make u minemmm i will cme to heaven to meet u bby…

( abe muli hai kya….i will cme to heaven ….mujhse permission li kya??? See i m incharge so i will think…..)….

To be continued…

So guys how was the epi??? Do u liked it ..???
Nd shud i give permission to uv to cme to heave??
Do leave ur valuable cmments…

Guys plz can u give a short intro of urself in the comment box…actually i love making friends… so i wanted to know abt my new family only if u r ok wid it..
nd also last tym plz give ur ids all who gve their ids before bt i didnt contacted them… sry guys i m very sry…. i was busy wid studies nd also i m a lazy head…toh hope u will understand it…
Nd also who wnted to give cn give…nd who are nt comfortable giving their ids bt still wantd to contact me then tke mine

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U guys mst be thinking ki yeh bandi mana kr ke fir bhi post kr deti hai….. bt wen i m in extreme tension then my hands automatically starts typing…so as a result a torcher cme dor u ppl….

Love u all??

31 comments

  1. fiona

    epi was muah!
    unuque marriage
    and intro
    my i am apoorwa daughter of a doctor and homemaker who resides in haryana.
    age nahi puchte par phir bhe, i am 13 yers old studying in 8 standard.
    your english is wah! wah!

  2. Shreya

    Hey ridhi…muuuuaaaah…at the point I am traveling in train …train Lucknow junction par ruki..I got network and tumhara epi sabse pehle padha…..u r really awesome… I was smiling endlessly reading ur post and all the other passengers sitting near me..are giving me weird looks… I mean..u r making me smile at heart and making me look stupid in front of all….hahaha?????…but koi no…love u..

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehe….sry for this trouble…bt really thanks for such a lovely cmment…vaise our situtation is same almost…. bt wen i read ur cmment i was in theatre wid my friends.. nd wass smiling endlessly nd also was nt replying them….they thought of me as mad nd almost booked a bed in mental asylum….hehe??

  3. Sasmerra

    Great god.thanks ridhi for introducing new type of marriage .hah u can make me fell as if I’m in earth and twinj married.likin mujhe lagra UV KO heaven nei likin hell jaana heh par twinj ka honeymoon pi hell me ho.kya chalra Teri dimag mein ridhi ? Episode was amazing.par mujhe maaf karto mein Teri dost ka funerel nei aa saktiu.

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thanks dr…i m glad u liked it re…
      vaise u r very intelligent mere dimag ki baat jaan li…. nd u will nt cme to funeral then who will support me….hehhe

  4. karishma

    Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww story bohat dhasu hai ridhi……. I just love ur style of writing nd thinking bohat Kamal ka hai………. Story padke to Maja agaya……….. Etne unique jo hai………… I m pleased to wait for the further parts of the story………. Love u ridhi ummmaaahhhhhhh

  5. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ridhima
    The was really Awesome as u..
    N plzzz don’t give UV the permission to enter heaven..
    But u can do one thing…that while twinj give their test in hell…there u can add up UV..becoz uski jagaha hell me he h…??
    N yeah don’t kill ur friend… Becoz to is was soo sweet????

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thanks dr…
      will fulfill ur request of not killing my friend …bcz i also love tat dumbo unfortunately….

      Nd i loved ur suggetion…

  6. panchi

    wooooooooowwwwwe ridhi ………. awesome yaar …….. unique marraige ……. u r rly superb yaar …….. and han dnt scold ur friend coz d os was awesome ……. love u ……

  7. Aastha

    |Registered Member

    Hi riddhi …i donot want uv plz …..honeymoon in hell seriously
    aisa tu hi soch sakti h..bechara kunj kiske ff ka lead ban gya jo usse hell m bhej rhi h 4 honeymoon…
    And u r registered so put a nice pic … i am waiting for nxt epi

  8. zikra

    Wooooa buddy superbbbbbbb ur jus unique yaar how can u handle 3 ffs in a day yaar hath hai ya machine hehehhe…???? bt ws jus osmmmmmmmm loved it n don’t scold ur frnds yaar it ws amazing n song too I too love d song n I can’t come to ur frnds funeral hehe bit busy hehe hope u understand lol biee luv u

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehe…shayad machine…??..aww….u r busy i will miss u …..hehe…
      Jokes apart… thank u soo much dr …. for locing it… really i m sooo much happy

  9. Sayeeda

    Haayyeee re has has ke kahi main pagal na ho jaun….. lolzzz …tum humesha planning krke ati ho ke aaj mere stomach mein pain kr wane ke liye… ROFL…
    OK jokes apart coming to ur epi ; it’s so so so much awesome . I’m loving ur ff like a insane too good…..nd yah don’t allow UV to enter in heaven… love u nd thanks for always making me feel so happy through ur ff…
    Nd don’t dare to say anything to ur friend she did a great job by posting it or else u would have never posted it…

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehe…sry yaar tere stomach mein pain ho gya meri vajah se.. yeh le dwaai kha…????…
      on a serious note…really thanks for been a insane abt my ff….love u ….muaaahhh…

      Nd now u r praising my friend…hawww…. am i sooo bad..?????…..

      Hehe…bt seriously thanks for loving my stupid os

  10. Ria

    |Registered Member

    It was amazing.. btw I would suggest you to let uv go to hell and create drama when twinj go there.
    My name is Debosmita. I stay in Bangalore.

  11. dreamer

    Ridhi tera ddimag hai ki craziness and imagination ka pitara…. Only u can think like this dear….
    Seriously luved it.
    Keep writing like this and making us addicted to u… Lol
    Osum episode
    Ctd asap

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehe…yaar dimag hi hai…bt tum logo ke comments padh kr pitare mein chnge ho jata hai…??…
      On a serious note….
      thank u sooo much dr….
      will try to continue asap…

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