Love story in Heaven part 8

So guys welcome back to heaven….??…
Me ridhima once again to torcher to all….as per ur requests i will show the proposal first then the trip…
Thanks for ur comments nd motivations….nd keep supporting me…..

Here we go

Part 8

Leela nd usha are still in the orphanage distributing clothes nd blankets to the children nd the ppl staying their….
Still having tears in their eyes….
****flashback*****
@ taneja mansion…
Tw- maa today is ur bday we have to go to orphanage…so get ready….
Leela- puttar i m nt well today…i will snd things wid driver…
Tw- maaa…this is nt done…u know atleast a day we can spend wid tem….they nt only need the things bt also our love nd attention…hve u seen their eyes wen we go their…hw much hapoy they look…so i want to see their happiness as if we will keep smeone happy then baba g surely will keep us happy….
Leela was shocked to see her daughters sincerity…( even i m shocked…??)…
Tw- and haan maa after today we will go their everytym widout miss….okkkk is tat clear….???
Leelq- haan meri maa main samaj gyi..( yes my mom i understand…)…
Leela hugged tw nd caressed her hairs nd was having tears of happiness in her eyes…..

*****flashback******

Suddenly a smeone came nd blindfolds leela from behind…..

Leela- yuvraj….

## heaven…

After question session wid god…..twinj wss going towards their room… suddenly a boy came nd clashes wid tw…. tw was abt to fall bt that man holds her by her waist in his arms….tw’s eyes were closed due to fear bt the boy ws lost in tw’s beauty…..
Tw opens her eyes nd finds herself safe….
She straighten up herself nd saw the person who saved her….
He was indeed very smart, cute one….( think of karan wahi…??)..
Tw- Thank u….
Man cmes back to his senses nd passed a smile to tw….
Man- no problem…bt be careful nxt tym…it can hurt u….
Tw- ya…i will be carefull….nd i m tw…tw taneja…
Man- i m karan….nd new here….
( hehe…??..looking like they came to colllege nd giving introduction…..)
Tw- u ppassed the test???( sachi mein ladkiyon ko sirf tests ki padi hoti hai)…
Karan- yeah…tats why i m here…
Tw- ooo yes….
( now u ppl must be thinking ki why tw is talking to a stranger like this….the answer is kunj is still standing their nd witnessing the whole scene…nd moreover now his face is red due to anger…??)….
Kunj left the place….asap kunj left…tw also bids bie to him…
Tw( while going to herself)- wat a chipku type of personality he was….huh??? ( hey tw plz dnt say anything to him…..?? apne wale ko bol na jo bolna hai…)….

Kunj came nd sit on a bench in the park…( ab guys yeh mat puchna ki heaven mein park hota hai kya??? Bcz agar gym ho skta hai than park is nthing….)…
Kunj( to himself) – tat chipku…(???)… hw was he seeing my tw??? I wish to break his face..nd tat tw ws also soo much busy talking to him…even she didnt notice me….is he better than me??????��?
….nd also tat karan varan…he holded my tw….
smeone came nd tapped his shoulder nd said….- My Twinkle seriously…..
kunj was all shocked to see the person standing in front of him…..
he ws soul of a spirit….???….
Means another kunj standing in front of kunj…
soul- wen she became urs…mr.sarna…
kunj- she is mine from alwys….
soul- urs….r u kidding me..nd why…???
Kunj- bcz i love her….
soul- does she loves u???
Kunj- yeah she do..i have seen in her eyes…
soul- aankhen dhokha bhi deti hai…( eyes fool us)
Kunj- bt my tw’s eyes are pure as her heart…..
soul- bt her heart is in her body….??
kunj- ??- yeah..i..know….i mean to say that like her ……her…soul .yeah like her soul…
soul- yaa….bt her soul is free….
kunj- bt not anymore….i will make her mine…today..( determinedly)….

At night….in heaven…
( wat happend at earth i will show in nxt epi maybe…)

( i have a request to u ppl…kindly keep sandals, tomates, eggs wid u…… u will need after reading this??)….

Smeone knocked on twinkles room door nd then ran from their….tw gets up from bed nd goes towards door nd opened it…. nd on finding no one she gets frustated nd a bit tensed bcz the whole surroundings were completely dark…nothing to be seen…. she was nt afraid bt was worried….
Tw( in mind)- yaar heaven was nt enough tat i came to hell…atleast heaven wss beautiful wid different lights bt this hell…huh…??

Then she started moving forward…..in the search of light bt everywhere only darkness wss found….she became more sad nd worried…

Bt she stopped on hearing sme voice…
Voice- If u will search the light wid the frown it will never cme to u…bt if u will search it wid smile then the light will try to reach to being jealous…to show off itself….

On listening this tw smiles a bit….then suddenly light came only on a single place spotting kunj…..
Then kunj started moving towards tw nd now he was very close to her…they were under a same spotlight…
Kunj- see this light itself came to u..bt being wid me….see tw i dont know much filmy lines…( even me too??)… so i will directly cme to point…..
Tw was like yeh banda karne kya wala hai( wat is this man upto)….
Kunj- tw i wanted to make ur life full of lights wid differnt colors….. want to make u smile always…so tat this light can get jealous nd feel insecuritues from ur glowing face….wanted to take away all ur worries…nd wanted to give u a happy life…..
( yaar iss insaan ne sab bol diya bt main cheez nhi boli…lallu??)….

Tw ws now very sure wat is coming up nxt nd feeling very happy bt kunj turned her tw to otherside such tat her back was facing his front…nd know kunj lifted her chin upwards a bit wid his hand…nd then holded her hand in his
nd lifted her hand pointing towards the sky….
Then suddenly wen he pointed it to the sky….then the most breathtaking view was their…. this is the wish of everyone bt no lover can ever fulfill it…either it is shah jahan, majnu, romieo, akbar…or wat ever….
Twinkle was all surprised nd was nt able to believe her eyes…she was in shock to see the sight….
( a moon was seen their on which stars were present…in the shape…I♥U…..they were twinkling…like first i then ♥…nd then u nd after tat all together …nd also a lot of lanterns were seen in the sky wid moon making it much more beautiful …..{ guys i know it is very difficult to understand things like that bt plz try if possiblee….if u r nt able then tell me in cmment box}})….

Tw was having tears of happiness in her eyes….nd was nt able to believe this…as ofcourse this is not less then any wonder….nd also nt expectable….

Then kunj hugged tw from behind nd rested his chin on her shoulder …..
Kunj- I love i tw…i really love u…..i wnted to spend my whole life wid u…only nd only u…will u give me the pleasure of saying u as mine…..
Tw immediately turned nd hugged him tightly….
Tw- i love u too kunj..i love u soo much….i wud love to spend my whole life wid u….nd only u have the right to call me as urs….
Kunj was also soo much happy to hear her…nd hugged her back tightly……
They both were lost in eo’s embrace….it seems like they get sme sort of relaxation wid this….

Which seemed to be a long tym they broke their hug….
Tw wss still shedding happy tears….
Kunj wid his thumb wiped her tears…nd kissed her forhead…
Kunj- i cant seee tears in ur eyes…either happy or sad…get that…
Tw immediately wiped her remaining tears nd gave a broad smile to him….
Bt bt bt…
Tw- kunj u brought moon here…is their a lunar eclipse on earth….
Kunj – no re….
Tw- hawwww…..then this is nt good u know…
Kunj cutting her off….
Kunj- abe meri ( my) express trainn….stop nd breathe first……tw does sooo…then again kunj continues….
Kunj- actually this moon is nt from earth….i brought it from saturn..u know na that planet have moons in stock…nd also their are no ladies who will open their fasts by seeing it….??….
Tw – ooooooo……vaise do u brought this stars from milky way….???( dramatically)….
Kunj- ooo u r soo smart siyappa queen….i brought them from their only….
( hehe…??….kunj sachi u r tooo much..)
Tw was shocked wid his reply nd was happy also….( han han khush kyun na ho….chand taare jo mile isse….here i m burning of jealousy….koi simple rose bhi nhi deta…??)…

Tw hugged him tightly….kunj reciprocated it….
Then kunj depart her from him….nd then he put a chain of roses nd garnished her nech wid it…( it was a small roses mala like tat of platinum….kya kare heaven mein platinum nhi park tha..??)…
Tw was sooo happpy to see that mala…as it was looking soo decent yet beautiful….
She smiled seeing kunj… bt kunj wss smiling naughtily..i tell u his intentions are nt good…??….
Kunj- so tw do u like it…????
Tw- no….i jst loved it….
Kunj- ok…then where is my gift….
Tw- gift????
Kunj- haan actually now we both r in relationship… i gave u ur gift now its turn for mine….saying this he points towards his lips…..
tw gets to know abt his naughty intentions…. bt she was ready for this….as she loved him more then anything nd also the latest surprise make her feel sooo special….
so widout wasting tym…she placed her lips on his….kunj was taken back by her sudden action bt then gets involved in the kiss….
while they were busy kissing eo…their something strange takes place….sme sort of sparkling lights surrounded them….nd their clothes changed …tw’s into a white beautiful gown…nd kunj in the white pants, shirt nd white blazer….

Bt they were uneffected of all this nd were busy kissing eo till they hear sme noise….
Wat is all this??? Said the voice from behind…..
twinj parted their ways to look who was disturbing them they were shocked to see God their nd also their clothes…..

To be continued….

Now u guys r free to bash me…..i know this epi must nt be tat much good as this is second tym i m typing this….first tym i forgot to save…??….

Nd really thanks for bearing me…nd guys ur every comment make me smile like anything….nd i really wnt silent readers if any to cmment…plz………

Nd wat will happen nxt guys…keep thinking…we will meet nxt tym after 16…
Miss me..okkk???

Love u all??

Credit to: ridhima

14 comments

  1. Ria

    Ridhima, the ff was amazing okay?! I mean the episode.. kya halat bana di hai.. bhul hi gayi kya padh rahi thi.. I loved your brackets.. and, specially that rose wala.. aww.. but ruko..??

  2. Shreya

    It was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssoooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeee……..
    Spectacular…..u r an amazing writer…..Esperanza the I?U….yaar I love u ….and same here …mujhe bhi koi rose nahi deta….hahahaahaha???????????

  3. Sasmerra

    Haha I’m not going to throw chappal tomato or eggs here instead I’m going to give you chocolates and a simple rose for creating a very wide smile for me. I don’t want to hurt god but seriously in this ff he seems like a comedy entering . instead of bashing I’m giving you lots of hugs.your humuor is something that I have to appreciate .?????????.wonderful treat(I mean your episode).the god seems like a villian at times to me.are they going to get married in the church!?!?!?

  4. crazy

    Omg ridhi mei Teri crazy fan ban gayi
    Crazy Teri crazy fan
    Love u lots dear
    Kaha se utha lati ho so many ideas

  5. Sayeeda

    U r telling to throw tomatoes nd slippers ……yes I will throw……….
    but rose petals ….kya likha hai yrr maza agaya Wowww…….kya yrr ur dialouge r so killing….I thoroughly enjoy ur each nd every episodes…nd hats off for such unique idea…

  6. fiona

    ridhima HATS OF U YAAR!
    how much hardwork u do to post episodes
    sometimes u have to double hardwork sometimes triple and sometimes more than this
    i love u yaar
    if possible please post one epi per day
    always miss you
    this epi was masterpieca 🙂 🙂 🙂
    infact u are unique love your all ffs os and u also ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
    would miss u very badly 🙁 🙁 🙁

  7. panchi

    Ridhi lyk seriously kya likha hei yaar ………. m nt getting words to describe ……… u r jst superb yaar ………… kahan se lati hai ese ideas yaar …… hats off to u ………. rly totally unique yaar …….. loved it so much ……… ????????

  8. dreamer

    Rhidhima dimaag he ya imagination ka pitara…. Osum, supern, lovely
    No chappals but ? chocolate and sweets and whatever u like
    U always bring a smile on our face.
    Luv u and ur ff dear
    Ctd asap

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