Love story in Heaven part 7

Hey guys missed me?????…
I missed u all soo much…. i m soo sorry for being late…??
So already i m late so widout wasting any further minute lets start wid next chapter….
Plz read wat i wanted to say after the chapter…??

Here we go

Part 8

Next day….

A fresh mrng in heaven…..
Twinj woke up nd started folding thier blankets thinking hw fastly their lifes changed..they even didnt get tym to think wat all happened in last few days….

Tw sits on the bed…-(cries)..- i have never left my mum, my family alone…i m missing them soo much..i m on that door where i can neither move forward not backward… i m missing u soo much maa…. happy birthday maa…i know i was always wid u…bt this year….( nd cried hard)….

Kunj wss passing thru her room nd saw her crying…he felt immense pain in his heart seeing her life crying like this…bt still he was nt able to ddo anything as he is well aware ttat wt her mom meant to her….he had nt only seen bt felt their bonding…..

Aur vaise bhii…..for a child nothing is more than a mom in this or tat world….

He also had tears in his eyes…so he started moving towards her…

# on the earth…

A large magnificant room is shown….a lady is shown holding a pic in her hand sitting on the edge of bed…wid teary eyes…
Lady- haye baba g….meri beti ne ki gunah lita c…jo tusi isnu edi vadi sajah de diti…( o god!!! Which sin has been done by my daughter tat u punished her till this extent)…
Slowly caressing tw’s photo…
Tw tu ta apni maa toh ek pal v dur nhi reh sakdi c te hun tenu meri yaad nhi aandii(
Tw u were nt able to stay a single monute away from me bt now dont u remeber me…)
Plz baba g meri beti nu mainu wapas kr dio…( she also cries)…

Another women came nd placed her hand on her shoulder…
Another women- leela g shambaliye apne aap ko( control urself)… after seeing u in this state do u think our kids can be happy…we have nt to make them sad… we have to prove them tat it doesnt effect us if they r wid us or nt….( teary eyes)
Leela- usha g… i m feeling very lonely..i m nt enough strong as u…i know wat pain u r going thru bt still u r making me feel better…. saying this she hugged her nd both cried…
After sme tym they departed…usha wiped the tears of leela…nd
Usha- leela g…get ready we have to go to orphange…
Leela- nahi usha g ess saal mera maan nhi hai…
Usha- leela g..tw ke liye chaliye….as this is tw’s wish na tat we have to do smthng good for poor children..

Then both ladies left for orphanage nd reached their….
As soon as the ladies entered orphanage….a chain of flashbacks started croosing leelas mind..

*****flashback******
A girl abt 7 ( think of pihu from yhm) was running in the park adjacent to the gate of orphanage wid balloons in her small hands nd kids were chasing her…
After smetym she stopped being tired…a boy of abt 4 came forward nd
Boy- tw didi…give me balloons plz….
Bt tw is tw…she again started runnnningg leaving all shocked nd everyone started chasing her again

********flashback *******

Leela wss thinking this nd wss having tears in her eyes…..she always came to this place wid her daughter bt today tat daughter is nt wid her nd will never be wid her….

along wid leela usha also have tears in her eyes…
last yr….on the same day…
twinj brought both their mothers ovr here….nd enjoyed..

*****flashback*****
Now kunj is shown running in the park wid balloons in his hand nd tw following herr along wid other kids…..

******flashback******

Welcome back to heaven…??

Tw was stilll crying in the room nd kunj was moving towards her….finally he reached to her nd kept his hand on her shoulder….
Tw turns nd on seeing kunj she hugs him tightly nd cried( bt tears were nt cming out as now they r nt more alive?)….only voice was heard….
Kunj started rubbing his hands on her hairs to calm her down….
Nd after smetym he found her quiet..they bth parted away…
Kunj- i know tw wat u r thinking bt plz dont spoil ur mood….u know it is leela aunty’s bday today nd we shud be happy nd is this the present u r giving her…u know na she cant see tears in ur eyes…
Tw- bt tears were nt cming( innocently blinking her eyes)…
Kunj( confused)- haan i mean …like this…crying..ummm..mmmm ya making noises…..
Tw gave her a confused look on which he jst smiles idiotically……
Nd on this both started laughing….????
( the best way to calm the person is to diverts anyones mind?)…
After sme tym…

Kunj- see tw bcz of u i m late for workout…
Tw gave him are-you-serious look….
Tw- wen spirits workout…..?????
Kunj- hehe…very funny….u know after being a spirit i have to maintain myself bcz still i m having a lot of fanfollowing…..( hehe..u r soo correct kunj…??)
Tw – ooooo plz…u nd fanfollowing…( haww….tw dont be jealous re..he is saying truth….)
Kunj- yeh i m having now stop i have to leave….
Saying this kunj went away…leaving tw….??

@ gym in heaven…..( re main mahan hoon…kuch bhi likhti hoon…???)

Kunj ws doing pushups…( jst imagine girls??)….
Sme angels came their nd started staring him…
Nd kunj also started overacting….
He straightened himself…nd strted stretching his arms upwards….( i m toh dead….tum logo ka pata nhi??)…
Angels conversation….
Kalpana- yaar see him carefully…are u able to see wat i m seeing…..
Krystal- yes…see him his six pack abs…haye looking sooo hot…??
Kalpana- no re….
Jerly- ok i understood…see his biceps….
Kalpana- u r close bt not tat much….
Panchi- guys plz…stop it…sharam karo…he is hot it doesnt mean u will say abt this like..All three join hands nd bow down…
All together- hey meri maa…mujhe maaf krde…shareef devi….
Panchi- hahahaha…i was jst kidding….vaise see na his face cut is also cool….
All three’s mouth wide open nd started beating her….
Kalpana- u all r lallu…let me tell u….
Rest three- ok madam
u only tell…..
kalpana- before dieing he did waxing in his underarms….( hehehe…..???..sry guys let me laugh first…????)
All three gave her weird reactions…nd strted laughing holding their stomach giving her unbelievabe look…???…

(((vaise meri deviyon plz mujhe maaf kr dena…..)))

Tw was seeing this nd fuming in anger as she was nt able to hear anything bt was able to see tat thy r staring kunj…..huh…

tw goes towards kunj nd drags her out from thier…
kunj- wat…???
Tw doesnt reply nd left from their…nd while walking collides wid smeone…..nd falls…
Tw immedialtely stands up…
tw- god g r u going smewhere…..
god- ya…going for world tour….
tw- wow..i will also cme….
god- no i m going on important work….
tw- god g plz dont go na….
kunj also reaches their at tat tymmm…..
god- why ny child will u miss me….???

Tw- no na…..actually wen ever u go…mahabharat happens so was trying to stop it…( hey bhagwan plz mujhe bacchi samaj ke maaf kr dena…nd plz guys this is jst for fun….so dont take it on religion and all…))
tw- bt if u wanted to go then take me along wid u then i will manage everything….
god- soo tat along wid kauravk….pandas also dies….
kunj- hehe…very good god g…bcz of her uselsss talks they will commit suicide…
god- exactly…..
( awwww…..my poor twinkle…)

Tw- ok ok i will nt cme bt i have one request…
kunj- now wat u want makeup box or chocolates…tw- will u plz shut up…nd gave him a attitude wala look….kunj gulps nd keeps mum….
god- wat u want my child…????
Tw- woh actually….plz dont kill karan nd arjun both….plz….
kunj- kyun u wanted to say mere karan arjun ayenge…ayenge mere karan arjun……..
Tw hits him on hus foot nd he winces in pain…
tw- woh actually god g ……i like both shaheer nd gautam…u can understand na….
reallity hits kunj nd he felt jealous.. he was abt to speak( bechara adat se majboor)
Kunj-( in mind) kunj beta think in mind only otherwise ur foot….
haan haan sare ke sare bande isse hi psand hai….( yes ys..she like all man…)…

God- nw if ur requests nd interrogations are over then shall i leave…
Tw- no one last question….
God- shoot….
Tw- woh..actually…woh…
God- plz speak fast…( in mind)- yaar whom i have allowed in my heaven…my head is spinning….??…( lekin bhagwan g yeh sample aapne hi banaye the…??)…
Tw- woh actually i wanted to know which god u r?????
God – huh????
Tw – woh actually wen their were our exams we both went to different mandirs, churches, gurudwara…nd all..bt still we failed….so wanted to know where u listen…..
( haye meri innocent twinkle…)
God – close ur eyes….
Twinj- why????
God- re do as i say???
Then both twinj closed their eyes….nd
God- nw open ur eyes nd telle wat r u able to see…
Twinj opens thier eyes…
Twinkle- u r looking lord krishan….
Kunj – abe tw have u gone mad….he is looking like jesus i m sure….
God- close ur eyes again nd open them..nd tell me wat r u able to see…..
They did soo..and then opened their eyes…
tw- baba g…..
kunj- lord shiva…..
twinj- bt hw is this possible….?????
God- see my child…this all depends upon tat hw u see or feel me…i m the sme nd only one…in different forms….worship my any form…ur prayers will reach me….
nd ofcourse for ur prayers to reach me…u need nt to go to different places…..jst close ur eyes nd remember me wid ur pure heart…it will directly reach my heart……
saying this he left for world tour……..

to be continued……
sry guys for this chapter as i think this is nt a good one…as i have written it in 5 days…??….

so guys poll tym…
wat u ppl wanted to see first…
1.. Proposal…
2.. A trip to hell….
Choice is all urs…bt i promise i will make it good nt bore…

*****ON A SERIOUS NOTE******

Guys i wss busy nt having tym to write smething nd nt having brain to think…..bt i was gorced to wrire it….so tat i can request u guys…
plz..guys i hve given u my id..so tat we can be in contact wid eo…i love to make new friends..bt sme one of u started abusing me..in mails..

See i hve never said u guys to cmment only good things as both bad nd good cmments are most welcome….and ofcourse bad cmments tell u tat where we r lacking…bt to abuse smeone is seriously nt done….aftrr reading tat mail u guys cant even imagine wat i was going thru…i hurted few of my friends bcz of it as i was very rude wid everyone during tat day….i ws seriously nt able to beleive tat wat jst happened…. so here is the request to every supporter nd hater of mine tat do watever u want to dooo….like in comments abt my ff nd all…bt dont abuse me nd dont get personal to me…as i m very bad then…..sry if i m being rude….bt after reading tat i cnt jst tell u ppl wat i was going thru in words…..
nd haan i m nt bad wid those who love me….

sry guys for this extra passage bt i was nt able to control myself….

Love u all???
will miss u as still 10 days are left acc.to my leave……

Credit to: ananya

14 comments

  1. bulbul

    First proposal plzzz because then they will have a intense bond so plzz update soon if you can and all the best for your exams

  2. panchi

    We missed u too ridhi ……… awesome and so funny epi ……. loved it …… first proposal …….. love u ??????

  3. dreamer

    Ananya loved the episode. Funniness overloaded, social mesaage, love overloaded… Lol. . Loved it
    First proposal.

  4. Sasmerra

    No pls can I have a trip to hell(as I am alive)?funny and fantastic .sorry to ask but what is your I’d?I missed you .

  5. tara

    hey ridhs superb yaar.. hahaha funny..
    pehle proposal..
    phir hell jahanum jaha ki trip karwani hain karwa lo.. 😛

  6. Sayeeda

    Ridhima…….woooowwwwww yrr just wooowww.
    I really loved the emotional scene of Leela nd Usha..
    ROFL…. ur comedy scenes is much more than the perfect…. nd tumhare beech ke beech ke fillers …toh pucho hi na …today u made me remember Sid’s hottness…. “EMPRESS OF FILLERS” …if I start to tell my fav dialouge whole page would get filled nd u would become tired of reading it…nd yes I want proposal first..love u…

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