Love story in Heaven part 6

Hey guys ridhima here…i know after reading my name u ppl will be hell angry…??…..
Bt as i have already informed u all tat i will be going on a short break….so i m going to take tat now…its only abt 25 days….then if i will be back i will be regular hopefully….
Nd ofcourse guys….as till now everyone of us is knowing tat our beloved sid is leaving tei….so we will nt be able to see twinj….bt guys dont loose hopes we will always remember them in our ff nd mmrys….hehe…? i know this is a serious topic bt still we cant do anything nd also i want a promise from u guys tat never stop loving twinj either we get them or nt…..
And i request to all ff writers that plz dont feel bad and stop ur ff… as now we r in gr8 need of them…. we cant watch twinj bt we can feel nd imagine them in ff…

And this part is credited to my friend krystal as i was out of ideas she only helped me…love u dr…??

Here we go

Part 5

The scene starts wen after break everyone comes back to the auditorium….
Again everyone takes their place nd start chit chatting nd make heaven equal to fish market….
Then the entry of god takes place…..
God was shocked to see his peaceful heaven transformed into fish market…
God- silence everyone….
All became silent…
Tw whispers to kunj- aah…he is same as our maths teacher kahdoos…( sry guys nd sry bhagwaan g maaf kr dena mujhe…??)
Kunj- abe thand rakh bhagwan hain woh…
Tw- i know i know…
Then god cme near them nd ask them to sit….on carpets placed before them… three of them sit on carpet….
God- now this is the test of ur patience, self control etc. Etc…
Tw thinks in mind- aye haye yeh kya keh rhe ho bhagwan g….yeh sab toh mujhmein hai hi nhi??….
God- u have to close ur eyes nd have nt to get up from the place at any cost…..
Three of them nods their head….
God- this will continue till 2 hours….
Ria- excuse me bhagwan g…. aap hum logo ka test le rhe ho ya torcher kr rhe hoo…
God- u toh shut up…make up queen…
Twinj giggles… while ria kept quiet…?
God- ur tym starts now….
The three of them were sitting quietly…nd was thinking abt their lovely moments…..

Kunj’s flashback….
Kunj ws seen holding smething his hand and wss hiding undr the bench….
While a girl was shouting at him…
Girl- u gadhe, fattu , idiot….mard ho ya nhi instead of saving me u r hiding under the bench…seriously…doob ke mar jao tum toh..huh…?
A goon came nd kept his hand on her shouldr nd the girl gave him a punch nd said…
Girl- arent u able to see i m talking to him nd u black buffalo sry black saand….u r troubling me..u dont knowe i m tw taneja…black belt in karate…hahaha…
Goon- aaaaahhhhhh ma……main toh daar gya bt haan tu mrti bahut zor ke hai…toh revenge toh banta hai…
Saying this he started moving closer to tw….while kunj ran away from their….leaving tw all alone and shocked…

Nd now tw was boiling in anger nd punched the goon hard…such taa0llt uske 3 daant nikal gye…..
bg for goon:- zor ka punch haye zor se laaga…iske haath se toh bangya main gadha…??…
then his other partners came nd was concerned for him nd was angry on tw…nd started moving towards tw….

********flashback ends*********
Kunj-( thinks) oye hoye iss siyappa queen ke siyappe toh shuru se hi mashoor hai….black belt in karate…hehehe…w8 w8 w8….noodles……omg omg….
then he opens his one eye nd was shocked to see noodles in the hands of god nd he was eating them wid all fun….which leads to watering in kunj’s mouth…( guys kissi ne apne garden mein paani dena hai kya????)
Bt this doesnt affect tw….
kunj jst wanted to run and snatch the bowl from his hands….bt before he can do anything….tw presses his hand indicating him to control himself…..
Then wid lot of pain he sacrificed them….to stay in heaven wid tw…
Tw- kunj bhi na bachon ki tarah karta hai….noodles aur yeh toh janmon janmon ke saathi hai…seriously… hw can smeone like them… he took seriously the saying… hindi chinni( chinese) bhai bhai…??..
then again they closed their eyes to concentrate…..

now tw’s flashback….

The goons were moving towards tw bt suddenly…. a police siren started…the goons run away being scared… tw was also abt to run bt stopped on hearing smething…
a voice- why the hell u r running…
tw turns and sees kunj their nd said tum…fattu tum yahan kya kr rhe hoo…
kunj- toh tumhe kya laga india ki police shi tym pe aa gyi…
then they heard a voice…
dekha bhai maine kaha tha na ki…yeh sab inki koi chal hogi…bahut purana tareeka hai….
the goons get angry nd started moving towards them… nd was abt to touch tw….wen they jst heard a sound…nd all dusty dusty….wen after sme tym dust gets cleared the rest of the ppl were shocked to see the goon lying down far away…from them nd was crying in pain…they see towards kunj angrily….
kunj- abb tum log usse hospital le ke jaoge ya tum sab ko hospital bhejne ka intazaam main karoon…..
the goons get scared and run away from their….
kunj turns towards tw nd said i m fattu….nd raised his one eyebrow…
tw- jab tum lad skte the then why u ran away…

Kunj-…………..

******flashback interupped by a loud shout*******

Ppl were shocked in the whole auditorium nd ran towards the sound….even including twinj…

wen they reached the place they were shocked to see a dog was crying sooo much nd was barking…..he was soo much upset…

Ppl over their were shocked nd was not understanding wat happened to the dog…bt kunj left smewhere….
after sme tymm…..
kunj came back to the place….wid a small puppy in his hands…..
he goes towards dog nd kept the puupy near her….dog gets happy nd caressed the puupy nd also licked kunj’s face….awwwww…….

all were soo much happy….
bt bt bt

god- wat ws tat???
Kunj- god woh she was crying as her baby get stuck b/w the bushes…nd their were thorns as it was near roses…nd she was crying as her baby get stuck b/w the bushes…nd their were thorns as it was near roses…nd she was nt able to reach their so i helped her…
Evryone present started clapping…bt stopped wen god shouted…
God- huh…have u lost it….i asked u a task bt u both….
Tw- god g aap hum logo ko beech mein latka dijiye…par apne hi humein insan banaya tha… toh hum mein insaaniyat hogi hi….
God- bt main tum logo ko beech mein kyun latkayonga…as the task was abt only 2 hrs nd now nearly 3 hrs are going to get completed….
Kunj to tw- le bhagwan ne bhi hamara popat kr diya…..

God- now u three are official members of heaven…nd can sty here peacefully…
Kunj- lekin sir mera ek doubt hai…
God cutting him offf…..haan haan tum ek doosre ko choo skte hoo….vaise tum chahte toh noodles bhi kha sakte the as tan tumhare 2 ghante ho chuke the….maine socha thoda maza hi le loon….
Kunj’s jaw dropped on hearing this…nd tw started laughing loud holding her stomach nd realisd tat she was able to stop kunj by holding him already…..
Kunj make faces….bt atlast twing hug eo….aftrr sooo much struggle atleast ek hug toh milli….
God- nw as u r official members of heaven so u have to get dressed accordingly….
Kunj- noooooooo…….

Plz i have a huge fanfollowing…..and thy love my looks.. i dont want to change them….
After soo much struggle nd emotional blackmailing they patao god nd god allowed them bt only for a week….

*****flashback******
Kunj- actually i have seen a kitten near bench…her foot was bleeding i ws treating her bt wen i felt it is nt possible for me to treat her i took her to nearby hospital..nd u r a blacj belt so i thought ki u will manage till i return back….
Tw was soo much happy on listening these words as he cares for bezubaan soo much…nd she thanked him on the behalf of kitten nd her….
Kunj- i will nt take ur thanks as u said me alot things nd pouts…
Tw – ok baba sry na tell wat i have to doo..

Kunj- ok y have to come on a coffee date wid me 2morow…done…
Tw- done…
Kunj in excitement kissed her cheeks…
******flashback*******

Kunj- wow tw we can live here wow….
Tw- yes kunj i was soo much tensed nd they both hugged eo nd soon left the place nd goes to their rooms nd dozes off…..

Precap–
Kunj on knees….- i love u tw…i love u soo much…
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Sry guys will nt be able to post soon…bt i will miss u all…
Bt will u guys remembr me or nt????.bhul gye toh fouble torcher karongii…..

And ya i snd messages to ppl who snd me their ids…nd sry if i missed anyone….

Nd after coming back i will be continuing my stories…
School love
Love story in heaven
Its all abt me….??
Regularly…..

Love u all??
Bye…will miss u all sooo much…

Credit to: ridhima

28 comments

  1. Vinnie

    Wow!!!ya i am angry that u didn’t post it but as u told in previous epiosde so I can understand…post after your break asap..

  2. Varshini

    Awesome episode…ridhima….I always rock…..can’t even have words…to comment

  3. Sayeeda

    kya yrr hasa hasa ke Marne ka plan hai kya? My stomach is paining till now as I laughed so hard.
    U know when I saw ur ff I was not angry at all in fact I was curious to read it ….r ye tumhara beech ke fillers toh aur bhi awesome hote hai…..loved it ..

    • ridhima

      Thank u sooo much dr…
      nd i dont hve any plans to kill u as i love yr comments..( u know na selfish duniya)….???… thanks u like them i was thinking to edit the fillers…
      nd thank god u were nt angry as i was expecting hell anger from u all due to my irregularity…

  4. tara

    25 days??? nd u call it a short break…?? lol…ab kya kar sakte hain… tum thehri admin…toh editor ki baaat kyun manigi?? 😛 😛
    btw epi was very good…hehe

    • ridhima

      Haha…ya it is a short break as i was thinking for 30 days bt reduced it to 25…??….
      nd haan u r my friend nd not this admin-editor type….if u will ssy i will write a epi for u …..
      nd haan
      thanks for the comment

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