Love story in Heaven part 5 continued

Hey guys ridhima here…. sry guys i was nt able to reply to ur comments as i m short of net…jst using for uploading chapters…
Bt seriously after reading ur comments i was blushing like anything…( nd mum was doubting me as to whom i m talking wid ??)…
Bt seriously thank u sooo much for ur love nd support….

Here we go…

Part 5

After tw’s answer all were soo much happy nd emotional….
A lady cme running nd hugged tw nd started crying..( bt tears were nt coming out as they r dead…so crying means being emotional…tears only came out of gods eyes nd it results in rain….?? bt for my ff only..)
Lady- u r soo good tw…i know u took good care of my husband….( nd she turns towards god…) plz god fulfill tw’s desire..i want to meet my husband….
God+ kunj–( thinks) oh no…hw can she think this….pehle kya isne apne pati ko dharti pe kam( less) torcher kiya now she want to do tat her also…..
Coming out of thoughts…
God- no this cant happen u know this….plz control urself….
Lady- bt my hubby also wants the same nd abhi tw ki umar hi kya hai…
Kunj-( thinks) yeh aunty ko bhagwan ne heaven mein kyun rakha….yeh toh meri love story ki waat lga ke rakh degi nd makes a pout….
God smiles nd goes in flashback
That man was shown lying on a bed he cant move his legs bt can move arms….
Man- hey bhagwan mujhe uthale …plz..mera yahan koi nhi hai bt meri biwi ke pass mat bhejna chahe hell mein bhej dena…??…..
Back to present…
God– ab main iss bechari ko kya samajao ki main iske pati ko kyun nhi uthata..huh??

Ria was getting frustated…she broke her silence…
Ria- aunty plz u know god cant go against rules so plz dont disturb in b/w the test nd let us finish this all first….mujhe touchup bhi karna hai….
Everyone sitting their started laughing hearing her….??
Ria – wat??? Hum actors ko apna dhayan rakhna padhta hai…
Now only tw strted laughing while everyone else were silent…
Kunj ( raises his one eyebrow.. ) – tw r u f9???
Tw- ya kunj i m totally f9 i was confused where i have seen her bt now i get to know…tat she was the one on valentines day party….
Kunj reminds smthing started laughing like hell….
****Now u guys must be confused tat what is going on for tat we have to go to earth nd past so wat r we w8ing for lets goooo…****
Gilli gilli chooo…????

****flashback****

A big party hall is shown beautifully decorated wid red, white nd black ballons
… all the people were busy in dancing nd some in drinking while a few were standing idle… all of a sudden lights gets off nd their is a entry of a girl( mrs.ria) nd a grp…they were wearing some traditional clothes…smthing like ramayana…
And then they started doing dialogue delivery of ramayan where ria was ravan’s sister…srupnakkha…( sry i dont know the original spellings)… everyone in the hall was like wat the hell is going on????
Then their comes a scene of lakshman cutting the nose of ria…bt mistakenly it gets cuttted eally means a cut on her nose….
Ria was jumping nd was running behind tat man seriously holding a sword in her hand……
ria- u mr. I will kill u…u took revenge from me today i will kill u…
man- sry jaan i m sry baby plz leave me hw can i do this intentionally it was jst a mistake sry baby….

nd everyone was laughing holding their stomach seeing this….hehe??
*****flashback ends*******

Twinj- hahahahahahahhahaha…nd ria ws all embarrased….

God- enough is enough ?….now stop now get ready for nxt round…this round is qualified by 3 of u as u all said truth……?
Nd truthfullness is the thing which can never be taught bt is always present in good souls….

Saying this he left the plac

Twinjia left the place nd goes towards the room provided to them….

While going tw was abt to slip nd kunj tries to hold her bt he passes by her….bt
smehow tw mnages herself nd doesnt fall…
Tw leaves the place while kunj again goes back to flashback….

****flashback****

Kunj enters the class nd was shocked to see tw thier in the same class….he was soo happy his heart started racing nd was dancing in excitement bt still he smehow managed himself….nd goes inside…
Tw stands up from her seat nd was moving towards kunj…..kunj wss all lost in her eyes nd was happy as she was coming towards him….. bt suddenly she slips….kunj was abt to hold her bt till thn smeone else holds her from her waist nd made her stand properly…
Man- tw tera dhyan kahan hai…haad hoti hai yaar agr tujhe kuch ho jata toh…
Tw( pulls his cheeks)- aww yuvi dont worry i m f9…tere hote hue mujhe kuch ho sakta hai kya…
(Twiraj r best friends nothing else…)
Bt our fumes in anger nd jealousy seeing this nd moreover uv’s hand on tw’s waist till now…
****flashback*****

Kunj- at tat tym also i was nt able to save tw nd now also…i m feeling very low… bt kunj u have to win this test along wid tw so tat u were nt able to live together on earth bt here can live peacefully widout any disturbance….

To be continued….

Sry guys for this extra bakwas part…i m really sry… nd for tat trouble too…

Love u all

Credit to: ridhima

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