Love story in Heaven part 4

s Hey guys ridhima here…
I know i m late wid the update bt their was a reason… i know it is very wierd bt its true…haha lol

Actually i saw a dream which was having a test in it tat ws sooo funny…bt wen i woke up i didnt remember anything…i wanted to add tat so for thinking abt it took me tym bt still no use….( bt i remember tat i saw noddy in it..??)
I know i tested ur patience , soo sorry….

And thanku soo much ananya for posting this on behalf of me…love u soo much…

Here we go…

Part 4

The god enters
God- ur test will begin after 1 hr….cme to the auditorium after tym…

And he leaves….

After this tat ria took kunj away from their nd acts to prepare for test…
Leaving tw all alone…
Tw( in mind) – yr see this chipkali…uske upar hi chad ja…leave it tw dont think much abt him..see how happy he is leave all tat…i have to forget him nd u know na u r dead now so stop being a insaan…( Lol?) bt i am still burning seeing him wid her…i think my family must be burning my body..? bt its ok… i loved u kunj from the very first tym i sw u…..

*** flashback***
The scene is shown wen kunj was standing in a awkward situation wid tw’s brother nd whole college was laughing at them…bt tw was busy in adoring our kunj… his style, personality, eyes nd wat not…haha…
Then she went neat them and asked her brother abt if he is fine or nt nd also thanked kunj…
*** flashback***

Tw- yaar at tat tym i thought i ws so wrong…their is more handsome man than virat kohli nd also a common one…..u know kunj i was cursing bhai tat why he is at tat position… where i wantedd to be bt mentally haan not originally….. bt i really felt jealous of my bhai..nd i remain upset wid him fr abt 2 days bechara he tried his best to manao me nd even was nt getting tat why i m angry on him….

Kunj came near nd disturbed her from her thoughts…
Kunj- oye siyapa queen chl we have to reach their on tym otherwise hum beech mein latak jayenge… u know na dhobi ka kutta na ghar ka na ghat ka…?…

Saying this they left for the place nd reached their…

The auditorium (smthng like cricket ground) was soo large…almost every member of heaven was sitting inside it….
So beautifully arranged…
God was standing in middle of the stage on a podium…nd three podiums were set before him nd he signalled them three to go their….
Tw whispers to kunj- mr. Sarna kya hum yahan cricket khelne walen hai nd is virat also coming….
Kunj-( in mind ) after death also this virat is becoming my sautan yaar he is sohail khan in my love story….( to tw) abe tu dimag se paidal hai…are u nt able to see podiums kaunse cricket match mein yeh hota hai…

And after tat they went towards podium nd took their places…
God- this is first round…it is question answer round…u have to answer them truthfully….

All the three nodes…

God – question 1_ wat u thought after being dead means how u felt…???
Before letting him speak further…kunj interupts…
kunj( extra dramatically)- ya i felt soo gud u know ws flying in sky due to happiness i jst wanted tat only…har insan yehi sochta aur chahta hai ki woh kab marre…apne toh meri love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatam kr di…ab main usse saath hokr bhi usse cho nhi sakta…wow….i m soo happy…

After completing this he looks around nd found tat everyone was string him..nd then he realised wat he did…
Tw was shocked to hear the words love story nd then thought ki if kunj also loves her…she got a doubt…( finally is ne apna dimag tym pe chalaya??)

God – enough i know u r sad nd angry on me bt still i m god give sme respect…

Kunj feels guilty- sooo sorrry…?

Then god continues- i will chnge question..now as i feel its nt good to ask to any one else….( seeing towards tw…)

God – if u r given chance then wid whom u will change ur life means ????

Ria- mtlb??? ( guys bichari kab se khadi hai ek do dialogue toh bante hain??))

God hits his own head wid hand…
God – saaf saaf shabdo mein tum kis ki zindgi kaam krke apni bhadna chaht hoo…means tat person will be dead nd u will be given another chance to live???? Ab samaj aya intelligent person..
Twinjia- yaaa ?

God – so first mrs. Ria will tell us….
Omg omg mrs.ria on listening this both twinj eyes started sparkling…wow finally kuch toh acha hua…

Ria- my dog…as no one will care abt him widout me nd she started crying….bt tears were nt cming out of her eyes as she is dead…lolz..?

god- next kunj

kunj- i dont want nyone to replace me as this is my destiny and i cant change my destiny nd dont want to trouble anyone bcz of me…
( aww.. kunj is soo good)

god- impressive nd nxt tw….

Tw- naresh unkle…our neighbour…
All were shocked to hear this..omg even me how can tw think like this.. nd kunj was jst seeing her widout blinking her eyes nd wid wide open mouth…?
Bt god was smiling…
tw continues – ya unkle i he is very close to me….he is paralysed cnt move anypart of his body… jst always praying god to kill him either give him place even in hell bt if he will replace me then atleast he can stay in heaven… nd their is also no one to take care of her as his wife is already dead nd his children didnt care abt him much….
All were amazed listening this md kunj wss thinking wah meri siyappa queen is soo good tats the most important think i love of her…..

To be continued…

Hws this??? Plz do comment…
I wil nt be able to post soon bt will try if possible…i m very sry to dissapoint u all..

Love u all?

Credit to: ridhima

23 comments

  1. Afa

    awesome amazing fantastic ……I love it…..Please try to update soon as possible.
    .love you dea…keep writing…take care…keep smiling…I love your ff

  2. Sayeeda

    Ridhima firstly a big apologize from my side coz I never commented on ur ff infact I read ur both ffs and both r awesome.
    U know my sir assigned me the task of auditing the accounts and it is very urgent..bt I was busy reading ur ff and laughing like a mad that I don’t even realize my sir came and stood there..and he scolded me so much that instead of work I’m doing time pass…bt today I felt so good infact I was controlling my laugh at the time he was scolding me…
    Finally loved ur episode..

    • ridhima

      Hehe…wow i was nt knowing tat i is this much effective bt seriously ur commrnt made me blush like anything…. 😛 …nd no need of apologies bcz even i ws a silent reader first bt i m happy tatvu broke ur silence…
      Nd thank uvfor commenting…

    • Sun yaar Sanju tune vo kahawat Suni h ya ni ki Laton ke bhut baton se ni mante jb tk tujhe 3-4 galiyaan ni doongi tu toh chup hone wali h ni tujhe challenge kiya toh tujhe Teri nani yaad aa gayi Mtlb tu chahti kya h tujhe apni bezatii khud hi karwni h kya beta tu agar fb pr h toh apna Id de wohi tujhe me apni language me smjhati hoon

  3. Shatakshi

    Yaar ridhima kitna wait karvaya…but anyways the episode… Maar dala aapne writing se…its very unique as always☺☺

  4. Shreya

    Aaawwwww shooooo cuuuuuteeeeeee and sweet or u to write this I just love ur ff and yar ridhi get well soooooooooon.??????????

  5. crazy

    U idiot ..damboooo
    Koi itni deer let’s hai kya to upload d ff
    I was waiting like hell
    Warning u madam
    If u don’t post next one asap
    Teri future mails like dungiii
    N shadi ki chat yaddd hai na?

  6. rupam

    It was awesm yrr….waiting 4 ur next upate …keep it up….i was 2 thinking abt d test of twinj bt litterly saying it was nthing before urs……u hd stolen my heart …..plzz try 2 update soon…

  7. panchi

    wooooooowwwww….. awesome one ……loved it ……. wtng fr d nxt one ……i jst love ur ff ridhi …….

  8. Aastha

    fir s dream tu nhi aayega na…. aur agar aayega toh u will think agn that what happened in my dream and u will try to portray ur dream in nxt epi and agn it will result in dely
    but its ok i can manage delay u write so gud nd sry if i hurted u.

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