love story in heaven part 13

Heyy guys ridhima is back again….
Thank u all sooo much for wonderful comments….??…..

This part willl contain the entry of two psycho personalities along wid normal tei family…. i.e.
Crazy nd ridhima….. i hope we will nt bore u…. this is wat i m bound to my promise jo maine nashe ki halat mein kr dia…???….( are mazak hai…sachi nasha nhi kiya….??)…
Sorry in advance…..

Here we go

Part 13

The scene starts wid a sound…..aaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! Which can blast anyones ears….. then we can seee two girls lying on the floor…( or can say fallen…)… wid their faces covered wid hairs…. then finally they stood up settlling themselves nd on seeing each other…..they again shouted Uuuuuuuuuuu…..
Girl 1- are wat r u doing here..???? Hw u die???
Girl2 – huhhhh… tere chakar mein ridhi….
Ridhi- hainnn…??? Mana tera naam crazy hai bt why r u talking like this….mere chakar mein matlab…???
Crazy- huhhhhh… tujhe jump krne mein help ki… piche se police aa gyi…they thought i pushed u…. so i was left wid only 2 options ya toh to jump or going to police….
Ridhi- nd u chose first…
Crazy- naaaa…i was tensed nd was moving…suddenly slipped nd…here i m…
Ridhi- chl sun we r here….so lets have some fun….
Crazy- good idea…. w8 who is he…????
Ridhi- aaa…i think yamraj…
Crazy- oooo….chl lets go to himmm…..
Ridhi- na re already he is soo sad nd frustated….
Crazy- tu toh bore hai…yahin ruk main ja rhi hoon…
Saying this she went from their nd reached near yamraj…. she tapped his shoulder frm behind… he turned nd ws lost somewhere seeing her…??….. they both were lost in sme other world…of eyes….
Ridhima was seeing this frm far….
Ridhi- haye o mere rabba…!!! Isse bhi mil gya…ab main kya karoon…lets find smething…
Saying this ridhi..( guys i will write i instead of ridhi…this is sooo ajeeb to wwrite my name..??)…. goes from their….i reached a room…
Where a few ppl were sitting on seeing that my jaw dropped nd touched the ground….wannna know wat i saw…. okk
I saw arjun bijlani, varun kapoor, mohit sehgal, shahid kappor…. sitting on a sofa….??….
I was sooo happy that tym…not able to belive on my eyes… i was abt to faint wen someone holded me from my shoulders…( are waist mein tickling hoti hai…??)….
My eyes popped out seeing that….nd i left the room immediately…
Wiping my unshed tears….

B.g :-
Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah nikalti rhi..
Mujh ko saza di pyaar ki…ki aisa kya gunaah kiya ki lut gye…haan lut gye hum teri mohabat mein…

After sme tym…i saw crazy sitting their her situation was nt less then mee…she was also crying… ( widout tears…??)… i went near her…nd placed my hand over her shoulder…
I ( concerned)- kya hua…???
Crazy – bahut bura…i will tell u in flashback….
******flashback********
Wen yamraj ndcrazy were lost in each others eyes…
Yamraj- i love u..i love u sooo much… i jst wwanted to spend my rest of the life wid u…( crazy felt butterflies in her stomach nd was sooo happy)…mujhe nhi pta kab kaise kahan tujhse pyaar ho gya… bt i m sry meri jaan… plz that was jst a small mistake….
crazy- which mistake..???
Yamraj- seeing towards her…- aaaahhhhhh !!!! Who r u behn ji…..
Crazy-….BEHN JIIIII…..!!! KISS ANGEL SE MAIN TUJHE BEHN JII LAGTI HOON….
yamraj – sry didi g…..actually meri biwi gussa hoke apne mayke chli gyi…toh ussi ki rehersal kr rha tha….
crazy felt as if evrrything is snatched from her….
yamraj- vaise i made u my behn….sooo will u take care of the place in my absence….mujhe apni biwi ko manane jana hai……
crazy nods nd left the place….
********flashback******
I wass continously laughing….hearing all that..
crazy- chleab acha sa bg music de….
i- okkk….bhaiyaa toh band bajjayein…tan na nan
crazy- huhh….apni bari pe tadap tadap chala diya…mere saath dhoka…
i- acha gussa kyun krti hai ruk….
Crazy- aur todhi der ke liye screen bhi chod….
I- huhhh…
Bg :-Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dil Nashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee

Rukhi Rukhi Sii Yeh Hawa
Aur Sukhe Patte Ki Tarah
Shehar Ki,Sadko Pee Main
Lawaris, Udta Hua
Sau Raste
Par Teri Rah Nahi.Eeee

Sau Dard Hain,Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dilnashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee

While this crazy was remembering her flashback ……nd was crying sukha sukha….

After sme tym…
Crazy- acha wapis aa ja..
Ridhi-okkkk…..
Crazy- vaise madam u too look sad….tere saath kya hua…????
Ridhi- u will nt believe….pta hai mainr saare hot hot ladke ek saath dekhe…i was toh jst abt to faint…( haye yeh maine kya bol diya…)….
Crazy- faint …??? Seriously….she started laughing loudly….
Ridhi wss giving her death glares…
Crazy- acha ok ok…chl bta age kya hua…,???
Ridhi- wen i wss abt to faint… then smeone held me from my shoulder…
Crazy- sachi kaun?????
Ridhi- un sab ki biwiyan…( wives…)….crying….
Crazy started laughing loud…..
After 10 minutes…
Ridhi- acha bas kar ab…huhhh
Crazy- re sun…this is very boring….Hell hai…maza toh aa nhi rha…maine socha maza ayega…huhhh
Ridhi- sun na maza krtein hai…. u r incharge of hell…nd maine sun na anita nd uv are here….
Crazy-haww….aur tu mujhe ab bta rhi hai…chl wat r u w8ing for band bajatein hain…
Saying this both left to the place…..

On the other side….

Anita was checking her face everysecond if her make up is okay or nt… uv was cooking smething in his mind…( haan bichare ke pass dimag toh hai nhi…khali jagah ka use bhi toh krna hai…???..)
Twinj were lost in each others eyes…. everything wss silent until two devils have nt reached the place…..
Hawww…..u thought of us as devils…. nt we… two sachi mein devils…( think of jalad in bigg boss…)…
They were having wooden sticks nd swords in their hands….
Devil 1- wat u thought of his place….??? Ur home…no this is nt….do u get that…
Kunj- huhhhh….who will think of this place as home…. hamare ghar par jalad nhi rehte….
vaise i have seen u smewhere…..oo yes o yes….aap toh bigg boss mein ate hoo na…plz mera ko bhi jana hai…. koi jugaad lagaona…
tw hit him wid her elbow….
tw- u cheater…tum mujhe chod ke akele wapis earth pe jana chahte hoo…u r soooo bad…..jao i will nt talk to u….
kunj-( in mind)- siyappa queen toh pehle se hi thi….ab toh drama queen bhi ban gyi…..
that devil was sooo much frustatrd on the kunj was jst abt to hit him….wen the saviours reached the place….
crazy- excuse me….wat r u doing here..????
Devil- who r u to ask???
Crazy- yamrajs sister….nd new care taker…..
Devils left the place being frightened….

now toh i fainted…..seeing zain nd kunj both over their…..

tw- isse kya hua…????
Crazy- huhhh…fir faint ho gyi…leave her….iska toh roz ka hai…pagal hai puri…..
ridhi woke up hearing this…nd said -Silent ho ja..warna main violent ho jaongiiii…..
crazy- han shahid ka dialogue…jiski biwi abi dekhi tune….
i again felt heartbroken nd left the place….nd sat down on a big rock nearby leaving the rest to crazy…..and………….

to be continued……

so sry guys…??? Today very less twinj seens nd all…bt nxt tym pakka i will add themm….aaj ridhi aur crazy ko jhello….
nd also if anyone of u wanted to enter the hell…let me know….
one member can come…..i will choose the one whose comment we will like the most…..???
nd if u dont like this drama then let me know…i will end this soon…..

Love u all….??

35 comments

  1. ariya

    pls dont end this drama so soon okay and i want to enter in your (lovely funny cute awsm amazing mind blowing are ab mere paas toh words bhi nhi h) love story in heaven pls take me too with u…..love u too

  2. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Muaaaaah.. Kya epi tha…
    Loved yours and crazy Di’s entry..agar kaise hi epis do toh I don’t mind having less Twinj scenes…

    Vaise If I would have seen so many hot boys together then definitely main behosh ho jaati..(ye Maine kya bol…I mean likh diya..??)
    Loved the episode..
    Did you read my posts?
    Love you loads…
    Hahahaha… I am still reminiscing your funny parts and your tadap tadap..aye haye..muah

  3. Crazy

    |Registered Member

    Wohooooo
    Wt a episode…
    Mei tho chaa gayiii
    But seriously ridhhiii
    Me n pyar with yamraj…
    Okay…
    If so let yanrajs role b played by my NOx…
    Hahaha!

  4. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god ridhi was so extremely absolutely funny but don’t go to hell or heaven now you’re still young and we need you the most .episode was everything but sorry I can’t display in words and warning here ridhima promise kar tu ise jaldi end nei karegi.you know how special you and your ff is to me and the rest ,,you’re one of the best writer friend and everything.I’m not proposing but here is a ring and a rose will you please please be my friend and sister???love you

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thank u sooo much yr..
      Ok mam will nt gooo…. mujhe nhi pta tha…kissi ko mere hone ya na hone se itna farak padega….thanks sooo much…
      i cant promise nt to end bt will try to write……
      nd really thanks for yr ring nd rose…..
      Main toh sharma gyiiiii….???…
      nd madam wat is this plz nd alll i m ur friend nd sis bt telll me ur age na….so i can address u as dii or sooo…???….
      love a loads…….??

  5. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Wahhhhh….waahhhh….
    This episode was the best one…
    Hi …to new members entered in hell…Hi Ridhi nd Crazy….

    Kya yrr Riddhi tum kya chahti ho ?Batao tum chahti ho ke main din bhar library mein dictionary leke baithi raho r tumhe praise krne ke liye words search krun …as for now all the words in my vocabulary is emptied …..
    Sooooooooooooo ggggggooooooodddd……..amazing… yr …seriously u r born writer …
    Love u soooo much..

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thanks dr…
      nd hi..???.

      Tu pakka kissi din mujhe pitvayegiii….jab bhi tera comment padh rhi hoti hoon…mmy saaath mein hoti hai ..nd main blush kr rhi hoti hoon….???

      Haye itna bhi nhi…i m.nt tat good ki u will go to library for me…..
      love u tooooo??

  6. panchi

    Wooooooooooowwwww ridhi ……….. what an epi …….. m nt getting words yaar ………. u r jst superb,fantastic yaar…….. it was lyk super se upar ……. loved it ……

  7. Dreamer...arundhati

    |Registered Member

    Ridhs ..mai kuch nahi bolungi..
    Bcoz mai literally has has ke ro rahi hu..
    Seriously u r too gud..
    Dimaag hain ya ideas ki dukaan.
    Fab one dear
    Ctd soon
    Luv u dear

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehehe…..thank u sooooooo much re…..
      hai toh dimag hi…bichara chotu sa…???…bhagwan ne dene mein kanjoosi kr diii
      will try continuing soon…
      love u toooo….??

  8. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    hahaha….hahaha….aaj tho sach me cntrl nahi ho raha….mai deewano ki tara has rahi thi ….us din tho maine jhut bolke apne aap ko bachaliya tha lekin aaj tho mamma ne phn hi cheen liya mere haath se but mai bi unhi ki beti huna direct homescreen button press kiya…yaar kyun aisa mera saath har baar karti ho haan….mera mouth pain kar raha hai….ab iska ek hi ilaaj hai…jaldi se post kardo…plz…mai pagal hojaun gi seriously yaar …full day mere dimaag me tumhaara ff hi chaltha rehta hai…

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehehehe….wah yaar toh bhi ditto mere jaisi….home screen button….tumhare comments padhne ke baad mere yeh haal hotein hai..
      vaise meri itni tareef mat kiya karo ki main pagal hi jaon…..i became red like tomato….
      Haye….
      love u soooooo much

  9. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Ridhima….mera peet dukh raha hai …..I seriously am not able to stop laughing
    Crazy ki love story toh matlab twinj ki love story se bhi zyada awesome thi
    Loved d epi to d heights of infinity

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehehehe…..maine sabke peet mein dard jar diya…i m sooo bad….koi nhi…i will give u medicines tooo??…. le le u will be f9 soon…..( main sachi pagal ho gyi….)

      Nd see crazy toh famous ho gyi….wow….???…

      Love u a lot dr…???

  10. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hahaha…..Really The episode was so funny When I was reading it and laughing like hell people around me must be thinking that I am mad Thank you so much for this funny episode Loved it waiting for the next

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehhe……thank u sooo much dr….
      i cn understand ur condition…kyunki comments padh ke main blush kr rhi hoti hoon…toh log mujhe ghoor ghoor ke dekhte hain…as if i murdered smeone…??…….
      will try posting soon

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Haye re sorry…bt nxt tym pakka will add twinj more….mujhe issi baatt ka darr tha…nd really thanks for comment…

  11. Ritzi

    |Registered Member

    Accha sunn na …….ek reqst hai….accept karegi na…no no fb wali fend reqst nhi….voh…..tu na itni sari ff likthi hai…..sari dil par sidhe chootihai yaar…..mindblowing job….but ab tu jab apni next ff post karegi na tab pls all about me wali post karna na plsssssss I m dying to knw why twinkle married rohan

  12. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Ridhi tu kamal karti hai. Matalb sarein ff itne kamal ke. Luving it♥♥♥♥ mere pass words kamhai describe karne ke liye. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ aaj ka episode kamaaaal ka thain. Mijhe bhi hell experience karna hai ek baar bcz I know mmien marne ke baad heaven mien jaungi. Lolllllllll.
    Please add me also in hell.
    luv u muah!!!!♡♡

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Aye haye…..thank u soooooo much re….
      ??????….
      wah u r sooo sure heaven milega….saare ache kaam kiye kya..?????
      Bt think once more….mere saath ek baar hell enter kr gyi then…bhagwan bulayega hi nhi….. saare ache kaamon ki bharpai ho jayegiiii……
      acha sry sry….isse pehle u kill me…..i will try to give u a entry card….
      love u tooooooooooo????….
      muahhhhhh…..??

  13. baby

    hey ridhima di u r always amazing yr u nailed it i mean i luvd it n yah i wuld lyk 2 cm 2 hell 2 meet my sidmin bt dn pl take me 2 heaven wid sidmin ohkkk hahaha sry f being soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo late yr di u no y i m late no yr di amazing twinj scenes zaroor dena agle episode mein n yah di eagerly w8ing fr nxt episode 2 no who lll entr d hell

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