love story in heaven part 12

Hey gey uys ridhima here…..
Thanks for ur love nd support…i m overhelmed seeing ur love towards this ff….??…
Nd guys tum log toh mujhse bhi funny nikale…. comedy queen nd me…seriously…??… best joke….

Here we go

Part 12

The scene starts wid twinjraj meeting each other…. kunj wss burning seeing him there..
Kunj-( in mind)- huhhhh….hadd hai…yeh namoona yahan bhi…like seriously…wah god wah…!!! Kis bure tym mein baith ke meri kismat likhi hai…shani rahu ketu sab ek saath….( nd cries fakely…)…..
Uv-( in mind) – ohhh….so he is also here wid my tw…( huh.. my tw bolne se pehle soch leta….ab tera kya hoga uviya…??)….no worries i will see himm….( abhi kya kissi ne ankhein band ki hai….ache se dekh le….baad mein he will be busy in jdj..??)….
Tw(in mind)- o god thank u for sending uv here….nw it will be fun seeing kunj…yipppeeee….. mujhe jala rha tha un angels ke saath…huhhhh…

Thinking all this thet started to move inside the hell wen a car came nd stopped in front of them…..
( any guesses who is inside the car…..no guesses hawwww….. ok ok i will only telll…..
So the person who was sitting inside was yamraj….??….. along wid….chalo lets go to flashback….)
*****flashback******
Yamraj was seen w8ing for smeone in the car…nd he was blowing horn again nd again…..( bichara yamraj…sachi driver bana diya..)..
Yamraj- hey bhagwan!!!! Kahan fasa diya…???

Wen he was busy complaining to god then he felt a tap on his shoulder…. he turned nd ws shocked to see two perons instead of one….??…. he rubbed his eyes again nd again…..
Yamraj- are it is the numbrr of anita jii…bebe wat r u doing wid her….??….
Bebe- kyun g??? Marne ka haq sirf anita ka hai ….mujhe apne bachon se milna hai…( why g??? Is their only right of anita to die…are i have also to meet my kids.)
Anita- if u ppl are busy quarelling wid each other….then may i complete my make up…
Their mouths hung open to listen the sentence as already anita was looking make up ki dukaan(shop)…??…
Yamraj- see deviyon…!!!! I didnt have much tym plz get sitted i will leave u ppl….plz….and (almost crying)…kissi aur ko bulana hai toh usse bhi bula lo….???….
Bebe + anita sat inside the car…nd yamraj drove off….
( guys i m feeling pity on yamraj….bhagwan ne bhi kaise kaise sample banayein hain..??)…
******flashback******

Wen they were at the gate of hell….
Yamraj- anita jiii ( badi respect de rha hai yeh isse…chkar kya hai….??…)..ur stop is here…nd bebe… ( he turned to see bebe bt he was shocked to nt find her there….he was tensed as if whered did she gooo…. then suddenly he heard a loud voice….)

Voice.- TWINKLE KUNJ……..( ya indeed she was our bebe…)….
Yamraj was shocked to see her running towards them…. he came out of car nd gone towards her….
Ymraj- bebe…stop!!!! This is nt ur stop…we have to go to heaven…..
Bebe stopped on hearinnng the is…nd saw yamraj in utter shock….
bebe- wat u mean haan…??? Wat is this…??? Then she examined the place nd found to be it as hell…
bebe- haye o mere rabba…!!! u kept my kids in hell…??? Wat they have done to anyone….???
Yamraj- no bebe..actually they are here for giving the test which is done after marriage…

on hearing the word marriage bebe, uv’s nd anita’s jaw dropped while twinj were smiling endlessly… lekin uv ko ek aur jhataka laga….( any gueses)….ok let me tell…
uv was abt to faint hearing the term HELL….?? as he belived he will get heaven….

Bebe hugged them tightly….. then she opened a knot in her dupatta nd take out a laddooo..?…
Yamraj’s eyes were abt to cme out of sockets on seeing this…
yamrj- wat why u brought it here..??? Hw is this possible..????
Bebe- huhh……dekha nhi…i brought it here tieing in my duppatta…..
Yamraj- i meant this is nt allowed… nd nt possible too
Bebe- o hello mr…yamraj…we r indians nd upar se punjabi…. so nothing is impossible for us….nd u r saying a mother that she is nt allowed to feed her children…( cries fakely…)… then aftrr sme tym….
Bebe- are meri ankhon se anson kyun nhi aa rhe..??
Tw- bebe yahan sukha sukha rona padta hai…. warna sachi mein sukha pad gya toh….
yamaraj was sitting on the floor holding his legs near his chest nd keeping his head on the legs…nd was crying….

yamraj- mmy…..pappa…i m dead…???… in logon ne mujhe pagal kr diya…??….
Then he felt a tap on his shoulder…. nd saw anita standing their….he immediately gets up..nd wiped his fake tears….
Yamraj- jii anija jii boliye…???
Anita- woh yamraj jii…( haww…jiiii abe tere bete ki umar ka hai..)…woh i wanted to ask can i get myemakeup box…..????
Yamraj -(shouts)….- go inside the helll right now..isse pehle tujhe jail mein daal doon nd take ur soon wid u tooo….huhhhhh…
Heyangrily walks towards twinj nd bebe….
Yamraj( to bebe) – chlo bebe lets goo we have to leave for heaven …mujhe aur bhi kaam hai…..
Bebe held yamraj from ears…
Bebe…- na badon se baat karne ki tameez nhi hai….nd wat u thnk i will go leaving my bacha over here..no i will cme wid them to heaven….
Yamraj goes from there..nd sat on drivers seat nd was beating his head again and again on the window….
And on the other side they entered the hell….
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Precap- uv dancing as basantiii.., anita tied in ropes….nd twinj’s secret romance…( ya romance ki band ….??)…

Sry guys for again a short epi….??….. bt i still cant manage to write continously for long tym…. really sorry..??….. i know i m sooo bad…
Nd yes now guys anita nd uv are in hell…i know u must be having soo much love for them in heart…which is needed to cme out…so if u want to torcher themmm…..then give ur ways in comment box…. i will surely try to add themm…..
Apna pyaar jatao…maa bete ki band bajao…???..

Love u all….??

30 comments

  1. Crazy

    |Registered Member

    Oyeee riddhiii remember ur promise na ..
    V shd go to disturb d romance
    Yaddd rakiyooo beta..
    Varna

    • kinjal

      Bohot maza aaya padne me tumhare expression k sath….lekin romance kam mat karna… or comedy bhi ese hi chalne dena..

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Haww….hamari aisi baat kab hui….?????
      Waise tu mujhe dhamki de rhi hai..woh bhi publically….i will complaint to police…..huhhhh u jst wait nd watch…..

      Vaise agr tujhe hell mein enter krna haim..toh mujhe band bajane ke ideas dene hongein….??

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thank u soooooooo much deary…..
      main tab tak hasaongiiii jab tak tum log tang ake bass nhi bol dete mujhe…???…..
      so u decide kitna hasna hai..
      love u..??

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Tere comment ka jawab nhi….hasa kar rulaya…..???…. sry meri buri adat hai mazak krne kiiii…??….
      vaise thank u sooooo much for ur comment…
      love u??

  2. Purnima.agrawal30

    |Registered Member

    Amazing awesome mind blowing funny ab toh words hi khatam ho gye yr….kitta mst epi tha…shandaar….aur unke romance ki acche se band bajana….taaki hass hass k sb pagal hi ho jaye….

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Awww…..thanks fr such a lovely comment… jaisa order mam….twinj ke romance ki band ridhis next mission….???
      love u dr

  3. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    hahaha…yaar aise kyun likthi ho…aaj mom mujhe pakad leti seriously. ..first jab maine dekha ke tum ne apna do ff post kiya hai…I had a big smile. ..then after reading ur episode I m unable to control my laughter. ..hahaha. ..my mom asked what m doing In mobile to laugh so much…I told I read a joke…sacchi kitne lies bolne padte hai…plz post next epi asap…

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehehe…sry meri wajah se jhoot bolna pda…par i m also sailing in the same boat re …tu epi padne ke liye jhoot bolti hai…main likhne ke liye.. ??….
      vaise thank u sooooooooooo much bcz of ur comment nw i m having a bright smile on my face….
      love u dr…??

  4. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Uviya….hhhaaahhaa….bajao bajao acche se band bajao…itna acche se ke band baaje wale bhi daar jaye ….chalo tum ache se uviya r anitiya ka band bajao….lolzzz…
    Kya yrr Riddhi sacchi comedy queen toh Kuch nai tere liye isse bhi bada Kuch hota hai toh woh hai tumhare liye….
    Heaven r hell aise lgta hai ke bagal main hai mere…. hahhaa…
    Thanks for always making me feel so happy through ur ff….hats off to u ….nd spoilers queen plzzz jaldi se next post krdiyo

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehehe….thanks soooo much…tere konpta hai…ur commnt always makes me blush…aur meri mmy mujhpe doubt krti hai…. huhhh…
      vaise apna hukum sar ankhon par…i will try my best ki main uviya nd anitiya ki ache se band bajaon….hahaha….
      Will try my best to post soon
      …..
      love u soooo much dr…??

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehehe….thanks soooo much…tere konpta hai…ur commnt always makes me blush…aur meri mmy mujhpe doubt krti hai…. huhhh…
      vaise apna hukum sar ankhon par…i will try my best ki main uviya nd anitiya ki ache se band bajaon….hahaha….
      nd madam plz meri itni tareef bhi mat kr ki main zameen pe hi na ayon…agr sachi heaven/hell mein chali gyi toh….epi kaun likhega…??
      Will try my best to post soon
      …..
      love u soooo much dr…??

  5. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god ridhima episode was too awesome loved every single thing about it.and yaar pls help I’m still laughing I can’t stop it was tooooooo funnyyyy yaar pls.I pity yamraj so much.Anita asking for makeup upper se Bebe or ladoo.woww I’m gonna give you a hundreds of pecks on your cheeks and gonna give you a bonecrishing wale hug.just so awesome ridhi.loved it×1000

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thank u sooooooooo much dr…
      haye bhagwan..itni saari hugs nd kisses…..main toh mar hi gyiiii….
      Really thanks a lot
      love u yaar

  6. baby

    hey ridhima di muaaahhh kya episode tha i mean amazing yr di luvd it u made me laugh as well as bas maza aa gya osm episode

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