love story in heaven part 11

Hey guys ridhima here…. thanks for ur love and suupport nd very sry for late update….??….

Here we go

Part 11

Scene 1
Twinj were seen standing on the gate of the heaven nd were having some bags in their hand… nd werre seeing back in the heaven…nd waving their hand in order to bid bye…nd also had tears in their eyes….
Kunj left the bag on the floor nd ran backwards nd lie down in the feet of god…( nautanki…??)…
Kunj- plz god g i have a request to u….
God tried to make him stand bt of no use….he started resisting nd said.
Kunj- (dramatically)–aisa thode hota hai har baar apki nhi chalegiii….( it doesnt happen always where only ur will be heard…)… kabhi kabhi hum jaise bachon ki bhi sun liya kijeye…..( smetyms listen to kids like us..)….
{Kunj bacha…??…means child marriage…hawww….evn in heaven…kya hoga is duniya ka…}….
God- speak up fast tym is less….
Kunj-( shocked)- hainnn…???? Tym is less..no god u r mistaken my tym is over…?… okkk on a serious note…i have a request plz plz plz….wen we will cme back…dont plan another surprise for me…
I dont need themm…..( cries fakely)…
God wid lot of struggle makes kunj stand straight….nd
God- ( sadly) – i was planning a surprise….bt…( kunj wid a pout face nods his head in negative….)…
Kunj-( almost crying..)- aap mare hue insaan ko kitna marengee….
God- huhhhh…i was planning to send u both to himland…bt its okkk….nw i will nt…
Kunj- okkk…bt wat is this himland…???
God- it is a real honeymoon spot of heaven…bt its okkk… leave it…i will nt snd u…
Kunj was nt able to belive on his ears… bt thn suddenly started laughing..nd went towards tw…kept his head on her shoulder…nd started crying…..
Kunj- meri kismat hi kharab hai…..god se puch na if he will allow…
Tw – he will nt change his decision…u know na mr.sharma our maths teacher…he is same like him….
Kunj- toh rishwat ( corruption)..chalegi na..
Tw- tere pass paise hain…???( raising her eyebrow)…
Kunj – chl jaan chlte hain…hell is w8ing for us.. he held her hand nd they left the place…
While rest of the members present their were laughing on the stupid talks…??…..

In earth…
Uv’s car was smashed by a truck passing nearby…such that his soul left his body at that tym only….{ very bad suicide…he is seriously nt a good guy…)….
Uv’s soul was seen flying/ hanging in the sky….
{ vaise only we ppl can see….nt anyone else…??}…
Uv- see i m uvraj luthra….sry sry…wss uvraj luthra… nw toh i m sooo happy…i will go to my tw …nd will kill that kunj…yippeee…. yar bt koi mujhe lene kyun nhi aya abhi tak….??
{ haan haan party mein jana hai…ata hoga driver…huhhhh…namoona…}…
Then he saw a car coming towards him….on seeing the car he started running…nd the car was behind himm….he was age age..car was piche piche…??…
After sme tym he finally stopped panting heavily…the car also stopped near him….
yamraj- why r u running…???
Uv- are truck se takar marke i died agr car se takra jata toh main zinda ho jata…huhhh….
( i died after colliding wid truck..nd wud have been alive if again that car had hitted me…huhhh)…
Yamraj- means u know u r dead..????
Uv- wat u think…ki hw wud i have nt been fainted after seeing myself in this sky…. see dude it looks soo beautiful from here…nd morever tumhare pass kaam nhi hai…???
Yamraj- wat..????
Uv- are aur nhi toh kya…. u are wasting ur tym wid me over here…leave me at my spot…nd go to pick ur another customer..she might be w8ing for u……
Yamraj-hw do u know…that my next customer is she…???( in mind)..- are hadd hai…do i look like a online driver to themm….who will pick nd drop them on their places…i need to talk to god…are meri bhi koi izzat hai…??

Uv – are i have already fixed ur apppointment wid her…she will be w8ing…i cant let her w8 more..plz…go nd bring her…otherwise she will eat me alive..
yamraj- whom r u talking abt???.
Uv- check ur list…u will get to know…( he smirks)..
yamraj- i m leaving the job…u r my last customer…
uv- kyun darr gye..???
Yamraj- haannnn…..( almost sweating…)…
They both settled themselves nd started their journey…..

uv kept on blabbering whole way abt himself… his looks nd all… yamraj was pissed off due to him…he stopped the car…nd slapped him hard….( ouch…bichara…)….
Uv- why this..????
Yamraj pointed towards smething…nd uv saw a mountain over their…
yamraj- dont u know that u shud nt disturb smeone….while driving…agr accident ho jata toh…huhh…meri toh jaan hi nikal gyi thi… he slapped him again….nd started the journey…
Aftrr smetym they reached near the hell gate…
Yamraj’s jaw dropped seeing twinj entering the hell…
Yamraj- i m dead…kyun bhagwan yeh sab mere saath hi kyunn….??? I will go mad by their torcher…( nd wipped off his fake tears…)..
Nd dropped uv in hell….
Uv entered the helll…..
He was sooo shocked to see the hell…
Uv- oye!!! I heard that heaven is beautiful bt this is soo ajeeb….lagta hai….earth pe kissi ko pta hi nhi iske baare mein….
{ poor guy thinking that he got heaven to live….i think he never heard of hell..}….
Uv’s face expressions turned happy in seeing tw their..he went near her…
Uv- hi twinkle….
Twinj turned nd were shocked to see uv their….kunj’s blood started boiling……

Screen splits on uv’s happy, kunj’s angry…nd tw’s shocked face in b/w……

Precap- hell dhamaka…..

So guys hw wss this??? I dont know wat i have written…sry if it is nt good…??…..

So guys i was nt supposed to write it bt written for baby…??

Sry for being late…??….

Love u all….???

13 comments

  1. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Ammmmazingly fantabulous ridhi ..itne super duper episodes kaise likh leti Ho…ask ur mum from my side kya kha ke paid a kia tha..well U know hum seriously bohot similar hain…
    I know thoda confused hogi …who this lovely is…so I am Shreya only and I request ek baat mera ff padho.. And tell me if I write nicely or not…

  2. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Tune kasam khayi hai ke mujhe hasaye bina tum manogi nai ….
    Whole episode along with ur fillers is soooooooo amazing ….full of comedy ….
    Seriously u r comedy queen of tei tu page ….kya comic time hai tumhari …Yeh Sayeeda tumhari fan …sabse badi wali fan hogayi …love u

  3. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Oh this uv.but kunj and god talks was great and the way yamraj said if they both come I’m in trouble and so was UV yanraj talks amazing

  4. panchi

    Woooooooowwwwwww……. ooo god ridhi u r really superb yaar ……. it was awesome,superb …….. so funny yaar …… jst fabulous ……..

  5. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    hahaha….what an ff.. hahaha …this is the best comedy ff that I hv ever read..hahaha…romance queen tho ho hi saath me comedy queen bi…hahaha. ..tumhara 1 ff emotional hai..2 ff romantic hai…aur 3 …hahaha….comedy hai ..i just cant stop laughing. …

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