Love story in Heaven part 10

Heyy guys ridhima is back again…
Missed me???? Bt i misss u all sooo much…
I replied to each of ur cmments personally… hehe.. guys u know wat i ws at mama’s place… i wnted to write bt was nt getting privacy…my hands were paining to hold phone…. i was there bt not there… wat u ppl have done to me… i was already half crack…nw u ppl made mee full one…. hehe??.. jokes apart… bt i love u alll soo much.. i m really very happy tat i got tu…
Bt sry will nt be able to post for more days….
Nd i must say u guys are very intelligent….

Part 10

Here we go

The scene starts wid uv buring twinj’s photo…..
Then he took out his own photo from his wallet nd started buring it….( hehe…photo jalane se kya hoga… apne aap ko jala…??)…

Then he called a no…
Uv- u have to do one more accident…
Caller- no sir…firstally i have done bad work..i dont want to do it again…plz sir i dont want to open hell gates for me..
Uv- u already opened that once..nw it will nt matter if u will do it again… so do as i say???
Caller- noo….
Uv- then be ready to go to hell…
Caller-noooo….
Uv- okk then…u have to do accident of my car…
Caller- nooo….
Uv- dont u know any other word then no…it is soo irritating…
Caller- i know sir i know…
Uv- then kindly use them…
Caller- ok sir as u say…. sir why u want to do ur accident…
Uv – bcz i want to go to heaven….
Caller- ( in mind)- hahaha…yeh aur heaven …mamamiya.. he is joking..??..( to uv)- okk sir as u say… bt wen..???
Uv- their only… where u did first one….
Caller- bt why accident sir take poison na…
Uv- i dont want to do suicide…i m not a coward… ( are re baba koi isse samjayo..this is also suicide…)…
Caller- no sir i will give u by mixing in ur milk…
Uv- ( gets into thinking)- nhiii…teri poison is of no efffect…
Caller( in mind)- haa ofcourse…more than tat he is having poisonn inside him..huh…??…
( to uv)- sir i will happily do this…
Uv- wat????
Caller- noooo… i mean i will do it… cme to the spot in half an hour…
Uv – okkk…
He cuts the call nd leaves from their…
On the other side…
The cller ws seen dancing on song…Main jaat yamla pagla deewana….in full toh dharmendra style… ( hehe…ofcourse yaar he will be happy only…)…??… ( jst imagine guys cid wala takla( bald) khooni dancing like dharmendra)..???

In heaven….

Twinkle was sleeping peacefully in her room…wen she heard noises nd woke up..
She ws firstally scared then she realised it to be heaven not earth..where ppl are scard of other ppl….
Tw moves towards the sound… she was shocked to see…..( from the window)…
( any guesses….. no ok i will tell…?)..
She saw karan nd ria were hugging eo…..
Then she rembered that she has seen karan wid ria in valentines party…. he is her husband who cutted her nose…??…

Then she turned her gaze towards left where her room door is present…as smeone wss banging it…
She opened it ndd saw her kunj over their….( guys biwi ka kamra hai direct entrr kr skta hai.. har baar window ki zaroorat nhi hoti…?)

They both were lost in each other’s eyes … after smetym kunj started moving towards her…nd she started moving backwards….kunj closes the door wid his leg… nd both were still moving in same position… finally tw collides wid bed nd fell on it… kunj also goes above her… startd touching her cheeks sensously… tw started breathing faster.. he leans towards her… nd was abt to capture her lips wen… wen…
Thunderstorm….⚡⚡.. bichara kunj immediately left her nd went bow the bed….
and tw also gets up nd started laughing loudly…??… while kunj ws shivering…
aftrr sme tym kunj relaxed nd was abt to cme out suddenly again…⚡⚡…
Then he went more under bed…??…
tw was shockd seeing the thunderstorm nd to know abt the reason she went out… nd saw ria nd karan fightting holding eo’s hairs??… it is clear that if tey are showing tHis much love to eo then must be using sme good words for eo… soo result is thunderstorm…
God cmes their along wid other angels….nd wid lot of hard work separated them… till then kunj also came their as from last 1 hr nothing happened…
They were abt to go wen god stopped themm..
Kunj murmers- i m dead..pta nhi ab kaunsa test hoga..plz smeone save me nd give tym for romance….who will say i m newly married. Meri toh suhagraat bhi nhi hui…..( nd pouts)….{ aww…hw cute)…
They turned towards him…
God- my children get ready u have to go to give test in hell…nd before tat u cant start ur relation…. this was it… kunj felt as if smeone has snatched everything from him….??…
Saying this god left…
Twinj goes to tw’s room…
Kunj enters first nd sat on his knees….nd started crying like a child…
Tw immediately closed the door…
Kunj started punching the floor wod his hands…
Kunj-( dramatically))- no no no….why god why… why u killed me…i ws happy on earth… even maths test was also nt this much difficult….??… inke test ne toh murde ki bhi jaan le dali….. ??…..
Tw ws standing their dont know hw to react suddenly strted laughing loud…..
Seeing this kunj lie down on floor nd started crying like a baby…
Kunj- see meri biwi also nt understand me… huh…i m toh going to die…
Tw hardly controls her laughter… bt again started…..
Scene freezes on tw’s laughing, kunj’s pout nd uv’s evil smile…

Sry guys for short update…nd dont knoe wat i hve written in it…get sme tym nd write it…in only half an hour…as tat devils lest me only for few minutes…. plz guys pray for my safety….
I m very sry if it is boring or soo….
Do leave ur comments…

Love u all??

14 comments

  1. Sayeeda

    Hey !!! Hello madam sorry or boring kaha na toh u will see an anger side of mine….lolzzz…batao bhala koi itne acche episode ko boring kaise keh skta hai ….Ya Allah is ladki ko kuch smjh do….
    Jokes apart…. u know Riddhi…I was going to sleep but I thought let’s check one last time nd then I will sleep nd as soon I checked in I found ur ff ….I can’t tell me I felt so happy at that moment… Now a days my mood is upset but after reading ur ff I’m smiled whole heartedly after a long time….I’m just bowled with ur comedy section …how u manage to get such great ideas…. love u…

  2. panchi

    Hey ridhi dnt u dare to say it boring ….. it was awesome yaar …….loved it ……superb ……. totally unique …… and that thunderstorm part ……… really loved it ….. luv u…..

  3. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    awesome. ….comedy. ….wow…romance. ….u should be the writer of any comedy movie. ….yaar what to say I loved it…

  4. shin min honey

    Yaar plzz…. I think I am in love with this storyyy plzzzZ ridima aap plzz jaldi jaldi post karooo I am reallyyy dieing for next part

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