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Our Love stays On… Shivika OS by Naina

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Hello Peeps!! I am here with an OS. My mind got struck with an idea and I want to present it as an OS as I am full with FFs. It’s my first OS and if you find it interesting please share your views with me in the comment section below. I know guys this one is going to a very long one. Don’t get bored and Do read it and drop your views.

Current IB track is a bit interesting and upcoming story is truly on fire guys. After returning back to OM Anika starts to ignore Shivaay and Shivaay will be doing many things to grab her attention. What say guys IB is gonna grab its past Aroma and its evergreen charm.

Short introduction::

Anika (Nik):: Vocal + Pianist and Lead character in my OS
Priya (Pri):: Drums + Chorus. She is a friend of Anika and supporting role in my OS
Akshaya (Aksh):: Electric guitar + Chorus. She is a friend of Anika and supporting role in my OS
Tulasi (Lassy):: Acoustic guitar + Chorus. She is a friend of Anika and supporting role in my OS
Nandhini (Nans):: Bass guitar + Chorus. She is a friend of Anika and supporting role in my OS
These five together form a famous Jazz & Blues band “FIFTH HARMONY”. They are something more than friends. They are God sisters for a reason.

Shivaay (Shiv):: Vocal + Guitarist. He is the lead role in my OS.
Vihaan (Viyu):: Drums + Chorus. He is the friend of Shivaay and supporting role in my OS
Yudhjeet (Jeet):: Piano + Chorus. He is the friend of Shivaay and supporting role in my OS
Aarav (Rock):: Saxophone + Chorus. He is the friend of Shivaay and supporting role in my OS
Reyansh (Boss):: Bass guitar + Chorus. He is the friend of Shivaay and supporting role in my OS
Yash (Yash):: Electric guitar + Chorus. He is the friend of Shivaay and supporting role in my OS
These six together form Pop rock band named “BEAT SEQUENCE”. All the six are childhood friends and they share a great bond.

Let’s get started with the OS..

11:45 PM

At Night club…

A guy ordered two more glasses of scotch. “Shivaay!! It’s enough now, you have had enough nasha to lead two days with ease…” said Yash with full rage in his voice though with a concern side. “Yash it’s not enough” He said with a breaking voice. Yash is just looking at him with wet eyes. He can’t bear seeing his friend breaking down like this. Shivaay starts speaking “How can she do this with me? She cheated on me with the creep Rohit. I don’t know how can she change her colors so soon? It’s been 4 long years and I don’t know how I was able to stay with out my first love, my true love. Even after all this time I am still wondering why I can’t move on just the way she did so easily? Yash!! She moved on in her life with such ease that I don’t bother her and I was just a tissue paper in her life. She is a cheater. She is a big con. I hate her and I hate myself coz I loved her and I still love her…” saying this his eyes became fully wet and he stamped his hand on the glass table making the table and scotch glass in his hand break. His hand starts bleeding vigorously and he loses his consciousness and breaks on Yash’s shoulder.

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“Just stop this madness Nik!! Drinking isn’t the only solution” said Priya with devasted tone. “You don’t know priya it’s the only solution to forget him” said Anika with a lifeless tone. “Anika!! You never tend to share your pain with anyone but trust me sharing lessens the pain” said Priya holding Anika’s hand as a gesture of assuring her. “I don’t think so, and I don’t want anyone to be a part of my sorrow” she said in a low voice. “But why Anika? I want to know what happened with you that you became do lifeless…” said with the past rage in her. “Okay you wanna know right.. Here you go” saying this she starts narrating her story.

*FLASHBACK*
“He is in my college. He is a fun loving guy… with or without his concern he left no chance to affect me and attract me towards himself. One day as usual I came to college and I attended the first session class which is chemistry class while he was busy making music combinations in college auditorium for fresher’s eve. After the class I was sitting all alone in the canteen gulping each minor drop of my Latte (My favorite coffee drink). He came rushing and sat next to me. He was breathing heavily as if he went to fight at LOC border alone. I passed my water bottle and he drank. After a while he became normal and started to stare me as if the world’s going to end after that moment. I started to melt in his eyes in his blue eyes. Although I am so angry at him. I composed myself and started to speak “Did you submit your chemistry assessment?” I said with rage full voice.

He gulped at first and started to speak “Woh.. actually I forgot to do” he muttered slowly. “What!! Shivaay atleast once in a day you get serious about your life and think where your life is leading you” the anger barrier in me broke down. “what happened?” he asked irrelevantly. “you might have failed in your exam if I haven’t done an extra assessment” I said with wet eyes. He smiled and starts saying “you know what Anika I don’t need to anything till you are with me” he said with full of love in his eyes. “What do you mean?” I asked with suspicions budding in my heart. “Anika!! I want you in my life till I breathe my last one” he said with super cute tone. “Shivaay!! You are kidding me right” saying this I grabbed all my things on the table and puts them in my sling in one go and I started to leave.

“ANIKA” I stopped hearing to this loud tone. It’s quite familiar voice to which I love to listen all day Yes!! It’s my Shivaay’s voice. I turned back to look at him. He was standing on the table where sometime ago we both sat. I was just looking at him surprised. He is a very secured person. He never let anyone know his personal matters not even about our immense friend ship. I don’t know what he was upto but his eyes are speaking much more than his mouth. Finally finally he started to speak..

“First of all I am so sorry for making you angry. I know till the time you will be there by my side I will be free from all worries and I don’t need to bother about anything not even about chemistry sir (we both laughed) you know what I am not so dumb as you think (I nodded no) sometimes I’ll be taking some crucial decision using my wit like choosing you is one such decision. Sometimes difficult things are easy to say and small things get difficult to express. I never knew that even for you I have to give explanation just like we do for some typical girls I have to say ‘I love you Anika’ even for you”. “what are you saying Shivaay?” I asked him with happy tears breaking barriers in my eyes. “I Love you Anika” he said that at last. The happiness in me is breaking barriers and I came running to him. He jumped down the table and we found peace in each other’s arms. We know many eyes are on us clapping and chilling at their places. But we didn’t break apart as we want to be like that for whole life.

After that there isn’t a single moment where I was alone and He is not there with me. We used to come college together, study together, party together and make music together. Every single thing we did together. I felt like I was the luckiest person to have him in my life. we both we deep in love that I never mind 3 months completed so soon and the day of fresher’s eve we were almost done the arrangements together and I didn’t attended that party as I have to prepare for an assignment. After that day I never saw him again he changed his house, he changed his phone number and I have no means to communicate with him all his social media accounts were blocked for me. I have been in depression for 6 months and after getting out of the trauma I got my peace in music.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Anika starts crying. Priya hugs her and consoles her by rubbing her back. Breaking apart “We are having a show tomorrow, you need to rest.” said Priya. Anika nods still with a plain expression. Priya thinks that she needs rest and leaves from there bidding good night to Anika. Anika lyings on the bed sobs remembering her good time with Shivaay and again starts crying thinking how he left her.

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5:55 AM

Anika wakes up with her eyeballs trying to emerge in her eye sockets. She rubs her eyes and stands from her bed like a machine and walks towards window. She feels the whiff of cold breeze and feels some eternal power in her she looks down at the pool and then at the trees around and at last she smiles. She then goes to rest room and takes shower for 2 long hours to generate power within. She comes in the bathrobe and stands in front of the cupboard. After a long fight between her heart and brain she finally selects her dress and goes to get ready in it.

At down stairs Lassy, Nans, Pri and Aksh are already present and they are waiting for Anika to come as they have to travel long to reach their destination. Anika comes down in full sleeve blue denim trench dress her hair with slight curls falling on her both shoulders with black shades and black booted heels and black sling. All of them leave for there.

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Shivaay is already done with his looks and he is waiting for his gang to complete their packing. He is wearing blue denim jeans and black over coat with perfectly made messy hair making him look dashing. Shivaay’s right hand is hurting due to the stamping and he is feeling immense pain. He did the dressing again and how tights his fist reminiscing Anika how Tia said that she is cheating on him with Rohit. His face becomes red and his eyes are like two fire balls. Jeet comes there and calls out his name. Shivaay reacts and all of them leaves.

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‘Fifth Harmony’ reaches their destination which is a club famous for break up parties. By god’s grace ‘Beat Sequence’ also comes to the same club. ‘Fifth Harmony’ comes to foyer and they are waiting for the manager to come. ‘Beat Sequence’ also comes to the foyer for the same work. Shivaay senses Anika and Anika feels the sudden raise of her Heart beat. Anika looks around and her eyes meets Shivaay eyes which are already staring at her. Anika and Shivaay looks at each other still with the same intense feelings they shared 4 years ago. Their eyes are wet now and they are melting each other all over again. Shivaay remembers how she ditched him?. Anika remembers how he left her?. Shivaay looks away with rage and Anika feels strange by his behavior as she only saw true love in his life when they were together. Manager comes to them and says them that the party starts at 8:30 PM and for now they can rest in the directed resorts. Manager leaves from there. Pri, Nans, Aksh and Lassy leaves from there as they have to check the instruments for the evening cover. Viyu, Jeet, Rock, Boss and Yash to leaves from there. There in between such a loud silence Shivika were left all alone.

Anika comes to Shivaay who is just staring her with his fire red eyes. Anika can clearly see that Shivaay’s eyes are blaming her for something big.

Anika~ Chaar saal itna kam wakth nahi hai… Zindagi ne bahut kuch sikha diya
{Anika~ Four years isn’t a short span of time… my life has taught me many things}

Shivaay~ Meri life ne bhi bahut kuch sikha diya mujhe…
{Shivaay~ even my life has taught me many things}

Anika~ Phirse kyun aaye ho?… meri zindagi ko phirse kharaab karne ke liye…!!
{Anika~ why did you come again?… you want to spoil my life again…!!}

Shivaay steps forward and pins her to the wall..

Shivaay~ Actually not a bad idea ek baar tum kare chuke ho… aur meri bhi baari aani chahiye right!
{Shivaay~ Actually not a bad idea once you have spoiled and I too need to get a chance right}

Anika~ Mein who purani wali Anika nahi hu jo bewakoofon ki tarah tumse pyaar karti thi…
{Anika~ I am not that old Anika who loved you madly}

Shivaay~ Ahaa… tumne mujhse pyaar kiya tha… I don’t think so..
{Shivaay~ Ahaa… you have loved me… I don’t think so}

Anika~ You are right.. you khus talking jaise tumne mujhse bahut pyaar kya tha..
{Anika~ you are right.. you are talking as if you have loved me so much}

Shivaay stamps his hand on the wall and his hand starts to bleed again.

Shivaay~ I really loved you a lot.. so better don’t go there..

Anika~ tum jhoot bol rahe ho Shivaay.. tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya.. Ek din tum aise hi bina bataaye chale gayi.. ek baar bhi meri bare mein jaan ne ki koshish nahi ki…
{Anika~ you are lying Shivaay.. you never loved me.. one day with out any intimation you left me… you never tend to know about me..}

Shivaay~ Agar tum mujhse pyaar karte toh woh sab nahi karte jo tumne kiya…
{Shivaay~ if you have loved me then you wouldn’t have done those what you did actually…}

Anika~ do you even know tumne mujhe kitna hurt kiya?
{Anika~ do you even know how much you have hurted me?}

Shivaay~ Tum dard ki baat nahi karo toh accha hai… kya kuch nahi kiya tumhare liye, aur kya kuch karna chahta tha…
{Shivaay~ it’s better if you don’t talk about pain… what not I haven’t done for you and what not I wanted to do…}

Just then Tia comes and calls out “Shivaay Baby”. Shivaay leaves Anika and looks at Tia. Tia smiles and hugs him. Shivaay too hugs her back. Shivaay introduces Tia as his current Girlfriend leaving Anika shocked. Anika feels devastated and thinks Shivaay moved on far and she has no place in his life. Anika just stares him with wet eyes. “Can you leave us alone?” says Tia looking at Anika who is staring Shivaay since a long time. “Yeah… Sure.. I am sorry” saying this she leaves from there. She turns and starts crying. Shivaay could sense this but he didn’t reacted instead he gave a plain expression. Lassy is seeing all this and gets suspicious about them.

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Lassy brings Aksh, Nans and Pri to the back yard of the resort unaware of the fact that “Beat Sequence” except Shivaay remaining all are also chilling there. They are on either side of the yard So, the girls can’t see boys but the boys can see girls.

“Do any one of you know the reason behind Anika’s depression and Anika’s mood swings?” asked lassy with full of curiosity. “May be because she might be missing her parents” said Nans folding her hands. “May be because her sister died and she is taking herself responsible for that incident” said Aksh in one go. “No Guys.. it’s actually because of her break up” said Pri clarifying. Aksh, Nans and Lassy looks on shocked. “What do you mean?” says all the three at once. “Yep.. She had gone through a break up in her past which happened nearly 4 years back. She really loved that guy and Anika don’t even know the reason of breakup” said Pri with wet eyes. “And the guy whom Anika loved is the same one, Vocalist of ‘Beat Sequence’ I guess” said Lassy waiting for someone to confirm it. “If he is the one then his name will be Shivaay as Anika told me about him” said Pri looking at the blown out faces of Nans and Aksh.

All the Five boys start to walk toward them. They see each other.“What are you guys talking about Shivaay?” asked Yash with a skeptical look. “It’s nothing related to you all” said Pri who is already burning on Anika’s matter. “I know it’s not related to us but it’s related to Shivaay who is related to us..” said Viyu with assuring look. All the girls look away. Please let us help you as we can’t see Shivaay in that state” said Jeet with wet eyes. “Okay then tell us do Shivaay have any Girlfriends?” asked Pri. “Yep.. he is having one she is Tia” answered Jeet casually. “She is his present GF. What about his past one?” said Lassy. “He is having one named Anika. He really loved her a lot. He says that she cheated on him with some Rohit” said Yash. All the 4 girls were hell shocked. “What do you mean?” asked Nans with rage full voice. “Yep.. Shivaay told me that Anika cheated him with that guy” said Yash confirming them. “Cut the crap okay..

Anika can never do such cheap thing.. Only I know how much she loved Shivaay? She is in depression for 6 months after their break up”. Shouted Pri losing her control after all what she heard about Anika. “Anika can never do this.. only we know what she had gone through in her life and how much she values realtions” said Aksh showing her belief on Anika. “I don’t know anything other than this” said Yash. “wait did Shivaay see Anika with Rohit” asked Pri to clarify herself. “He told me that Tia said all this to him and that’s why he is grateful to Tia” said Yash like whatever. “Pri!! You are thinking the same like I do?” said Lassy. Pri nods her head in positive. “Guys!! Maybe Tia lied to him…

I mean she wants their breakup to be done So, she played this game”. Said Pri with a smile on the edge of her lips. “We can’t conclude like this… and I know Shivaay he will never trust us if we say him all this on the basis of conclusion”. Said Yash disappointing girls. “May be they are right.. do you guys ever observed how she acts when we ask Shivaay about his past incidents”. Said Jeet giving a new ray of hope. “Then we need to expose her in front of Shivaay”. All of them made a plan to expose her. (I will reveal it later guys)

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8:30 PM

The foyer is filled with many cute couples and with their laughs. Host comes there and he speaks “Ladies and Gentleman today’s weekend special treat is some heartwarming songs from Our very own music bands ‘FIFTH HARMONY’ and ‘BEAT SEQUENCE’. So, ladies and gentleman welcome ‘BEAT SEQUENCE’ to rock the stage.

All of them comes there and they start their performance.

Shivaay starts his vocals on We don’t talk any more..

We don’t talk anymore, we don’t talk anymore
We don’t talk anymore, like we used to do
We don’t love anymore
What was all of it for?
Oh, we don’t talk anymore, like we used to do

I just heard you found the one you’ve been looking
You’ve been looking for
I wish I would have known that wasn’t me
Cause even after all this time I still wonder
Why I can’t move on
Just the way you did so easily
(He remembers how he proposed her and how she too confessed her love)

Don’t wanna know
What kind of dress you’re wearing tonight
If he’s holding onto you so tight (He reminisces Rohit and how Tia told him that Anika is in love with him)
The way I did before
I overdosed
Should’ve known your love was a game
Now I can’t get you out of my brain
Oh, it’s such a shame (He thinks of the time when he left her and she didn’t even try to communicate with him)

That we don’t talk anymore, we don’t talk anymore
We don’t talk anymore, like we used to do
We don’t love anymore
What was all of it for?
Oh, we don’t talk anymore, like we used to do
(He removes the microphone from the stand and starts singing)

I just hope you’re lying next to somebody
Who knows how to love you like me
There must be a good reason that you’re gone

Every now and then I think you
Might want me to come show up at your door
But I’m just too afraid that I’ll be wrong
(He folds his fist to control his anger and a tear escapes from his right eye)

Don’t wanna know
If you’re looking into his eyes
If he’s holding onto you so tight the way I did before
I overdosed
Should’ve known your love was a game
Now I can’t get you out of my brain
Oh, it’s such a shame

That we don’t talk anymore (We don’t, we don’t)
We don’t talk anymore (We don’t, we don’t)
We don’t talk anymore, like we used to do
We don’t love anymore (We don’t, we don’t)
What was all of it for? (We don’t, we don’t)
Oh, we don’t talk anymore, like we used to do
Like we used to do

Don’t wanna know
What kind of dress you’re wearing tonight
If he’s giving it to you just right
The way I did before
I overdosed

Should’ve known your love was a game
Now I can’t get you out of my brain
Oh, it’s such a shame
(During his whole performance his eyes are just on Anika)

The host now announces ‘Fifth Harmony’ performance.

Anika starts singing Like I’m gonna lose you..

“You too loved… you’re a woman… stretching me thin and pulling me apart… reflection in the mirror… asking me who you really are? Listen, to the song here in my heart.. A melody, I start but can’t complete…” saying this she starts singing…

I found myself dreaming
In silver and gold
Like a scene from a movie
That every broken heart knows we were walking on moonlight
And you pulled me close
Split second and you disappeared and then I was all alone
(She reminisces how Shivaay proposed her and How they promised each other that their love will be eternal)

I woke up in tears
With you by my side
A breath of relief
And I realized
No, we’re not promised tomorrow

So I’m gonna love you
Like I’m gonna lose you
I’m gonna hold you
Like I’m saying goodbye wherever we’re standing
I won’t take you for granted ’cause we’ll never know when
When we’ll run out of time so I’m gonna love you
Like I’m gonna lose you
I’m gonna love you like I’m gonna lose you
(She removes her heels and hold them with her left hand and with right hand she holds mic and starts singing again)

In the blink of an eye
Just a whisper of smoke
You could lose everything
The truth is you never know
So I’ll kiss you longer baby
Any chance that I get
I’ll make the most of the minutes and love with no regrets
(She remembers her first kiss during their combine studies)

Let’s take our time
To say what we want
Use what we got
Before it’s all gone
‘Cause no, we’re not promised tomorrow
So I’m gonna love you
Like I’m gonna lose you
I’m gonna hold you
Like I’m saying goodbye wherever we’re standing
I won’t take you for granted ’cause we’ll never know when
When we’ll run out of time so I’m gonna love you
Like I’m gonna lose you
I’m gonna love you like I’m gonna lose you

Hey
Whoa

I’m gonna love you
Like I’m gonna lose you
I’m gonna hold you
Like I’m saying goodbye wherever we’re standing
I won’t take you for granted ’cause we’ll never know when
When we’ll run out of time so I’m gonna love you
Like I’m gonna lose you
I’m gonna love you like I’m gonna lose you
(After completing the song she is almost in tears. She runs from the stage and leaves from there. Shivaay looks at her with wet eyes)

Shivaay goes to his room thinking about Anika and her performances. He feels something weird and feels like something is missing. “What are you waiting for Shivaay? Just go and get her”. Said Yash placing his hand on Shivaay’s shoulder. “Don’t you know she cheated me in relationship.. How can you say to patch up with her” said Shivaay anger in him is breaking the barriers. “Shivaay.. tha truth is she never cheated on you and she really loved you a lot” said yash with wet eyes. “What are you saying yash? Said Shivaay being shocked. “Pri, Nans, Aksh and Lassy comes there with Rohit. Seeing him Shivaay gets furious and he is about to hold his color when Yash stops him. Let him speak the truth said Yash holding him back.

Shivaay calms down and looks at Rohit with red eyes. “Just speak out Rohit” said Pri shaking him. “Shivaay!! The truth is me and Anika have never been in relation Tia just wants your breakup to be done So, she she threatened me that she will kill my family if I didn’t tell you that Anika came to my house on the night of Fresher’s eve. Tia was very sure that she will never let you meet Anika after that day”. Confessed Rohit. After listening to this Shivaay is losing his temper and he went to Tia and he gave a hard slap on her left and right leaving Tia in shock.

Shivaay again comes to Yash and asks him about Anika. Yash asks him to stress his brain and to know about it by himself. After a long time of pushing and pulling of his brain he remembers Anika saying him that she will be going to Beach whenever she feel any sort of overwhelming. He enquires about nearby beaches and he leaves to meet his Love.

He comes to beach and he searches everywhere and at last he finds Anika sitting on a bench. He comes to her and stands infront of her. Anika looks at him and she gets up and tends to leave. Shivaay holds her hand and pulls her back. “Why are behaving like this?” asked shivaay in his deep husky voice. “You left me for the sake of Tia and assumed that I am cheating you with Rohit right” said Anika with wet eyes seeking answer from him. “You know the situation is like that and Tia framed it in a perfect way such that I will believe her”. Said Shivaay clearing his side of fault. “So you believed her right… you know what Shivaay just damn yourself when you want you will leave me and when you want me you say that you love me” said Anika with tears rolling down from her eyes. “Look at you Anika.. you can still read my blue eyes like you used to do 4 years back” said Shivaay smilingly. Anika starts to leave from there.

Shivaay holds her hand and pulls her back. he grabs her by her shoulder. One hand at her waist embracing her. He looks into her deep black orbs and Anika is loosing herself in his Blue orbs. Shivaay leaned into place a soft passionate kiss upon her lips. He presses his lips on her lips and All his fantasies being realized all at once in a single second as she didn’t pull away but allowed her eyes to flutter closed. Slowly, very slowly, he opened his lips and began to explore each other’s warm mouths. Eventually though the gentle passion has to diappiate all at once to let them breathe once more.

“I promise you that I will never leave you and I will never doubt with and let you do what you want. I will love you till my last breathe. I promise you that from this moment I will spend every minor moment with you. MY LOVE FOR YOU STAYS ON” saying this he kisses her forehead. “I promise to never leave you with out confronting you any time. Even I would like to spend my whole life with you. Not only you even I love you. OUR LOVE STAYS ON” saying this she hugs him and rests in his arms.

Okay I am done with this OS. Please let me know how it is. Guys!! You know what for the first time ever I have included some romance please do tell me how it is.

132 Comments
  1. Superbb OS dear..

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  2. Loved itt…

  3. Offo… I just Loved it Di…. you know what you have killed me with this OS… haayee!! I am just like iss se agge aur kya hoga… You are an awesome writer… and I truly mean it Di…
    I just want to say one thing Do you have any degree in literature? like seriously, I mean you write so well and you express so well. So, it’s not any of my fault to think like you got a degree in it. Di!! I just want to say one thing to you.. don’t get labelled in TU Do use your talent everywhere… I request you to write more and more OS like this… stay like this and entertain all your readers with your sweet and cute talks….

    A special request to you Di.. Can we be friends? if you like to be one…
    No offense love you always….

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Dear😍😍😍
      Seriously, I didn’t do any graduation in literature and I am still 9th…
      Thank alot for those sweet words…
      We can surely be friends my buddy…

  4. you rock like always..

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  5. Fantastic…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  6. Awesome OS

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  7. I a speechless to say anything… you did a great job

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  8. Emotional one..

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  9. Crazy crazy… I am just going crazy at your writing skills

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  10. I loved it… keep posting more..

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  11. Tussi chaa gayi Baby… keep going.. I’ll never stop loving you…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  12. Yeh toh super se bahut upar hei.. I loved it…… 🙂

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  13. Aadhya

    I have no words to say and you just left no stone to make me speechless…
    I was just wondering my cousin is blessed with a insane quality of creating magics with her writing… I am proud of you Inuu… 😉
    This one shot is really worth lovely and emotional one… you described it in a very perfect way..
    I know you are so mad at music and you showed it clearly…
    And Beat sequence is our crazy cousin band and I just feel like it’s your tribute to all our cousins gang and I know Yash, Viyu and Jeet will be on cloud 9 as you have mentioned them and I can’t even confirm that as they might have flew to heaven…
    Keep going my Crazie music lover…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Nishi Baby…
      Haha I agree they are totally blown out after this surprise… you know what they called me and they were like I love you Rey.

  14. Prateekh

    Let me say you one thing… you are trying to chill our cousins right… you have included me in one of your ff and now you have included Jeet,Yash and Viyu. What is this? are you serious you wanna tell us that how much you love us? then trust me it’s really not needed as well know that you love us… what say cousins gang?
    This one is so rocking and I have to bend my head infront of you.
    Oh Man!! Till now we all just know a nerd and unromantic angle of you and today you prove that you are nothing less in writing romantic scenes…
    Keep rocking like always..

    1. Nainaa

      Aww!! I am so happy with your comment and I also know you all love me the same way I do…😍😊
      I am not at all romantic okay… it’s all my ChocoPIe who helped me in writing those scenes…😍😍😍
      Thank you for this lovely comment…

  15. Umm.. I have no word to say about this os….. you did a great job and ff and os are a way crazier than the original track…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you… I agree but original is the reason for all this budding Os and ff’s

  16. Kidki thod OS…..

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  17. Feel good on Di…
    I have no words to express like how I am feeling right now…
    It is full with all contents…. it’s a emotional OS….
    I was almost with wet eyes when I completed reading this one…
    Thank you so much for such an overwhelming feeling…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you so much Yogi…
      I am so happy with my cuties comment

  18. Hi you were created this os from yeh hai aashiqui siyappa ishq ka episode 6 staring teeshay … with some changes Anyways nice episode

    1. Nainaa

      Actually I took only those dialogues from an website but I really don’t know that it’s an series but after reading the story of that YHA I found mine really very different from it…
      Anyways thanks for your comment…
      I never mind I will just write what ever I felt and I have experienced…
      But you need to know one thing My inspiration for this OS is we don’t talk any more song which I actually mentioned above…

  19. wow! fantastic os ever…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  20. Awesome story with ever awesome portrayal…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you

  21. Such an emotional os…keep writing…the os was too too too good…i loved it…story line was too good..I agree with u about the we don’t talk anymore song-love the song…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Dea😍😍

  22. Nithu

    Its awsm..lovd the story line…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you dear 😍😍

  23. Akshaya

    Last but not least cutie. Fantastic os. You rocked in the first.

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Akki😍😍

  24. Tulasi

    Hey cutieeeepieeeee……. first of all congrats dear for dis overwhelming response…… u gave ur best in dis one shot…… awesummmmmmm….. each n evry line of d song expressed their pain n tgeir separation……. i m suprr surprised lookng at my as one of anikas friends n a as one of d band member as singing is one of my hobbies…… thank u sooooo much for tgt ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ i luvd d eay how he proposed anika…i luvd d way how tgey wer 2gether all d time…. its simpleeeeee fantastic…. amazng….. fabulous….. it showed up d great writer in you😊😊😊😊😊

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you so much Di…
      your comment means alot to me and I am so happy that you liked it…

  25. Sreeja

    Nice os naina ur rocking …….the intro is nice and I can’t express my feelings naina super that’s it……..

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks rey…

  26. Mrunal

    hey nainaa….
    it was tremendously amazing dear….👏👏
    kudos to u..
    such a great storyline…
    with superb justification to each character & scene….
    it was pleasure to read ur os….
    loved ur writing a lot…
    keep writing & entertaining us like this plzzzz….😍😍😍

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you so much Mrunal…. I am so glad to get a reader like you….

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