My love a shraman OS (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys…!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
M here wid a romantic OS named “MY LOVE”
Hope u lyk it……. ๐Ÿ™‚

A boy is siting near his window wit a pic in his Hand he keeps staring at dat pic…..
Boy: I never though u will become my lyf Patner…..I never though that I will love u so much dat u will become my breath….
—-a girl cms to him—-
G: shr bhaiya…… (Yes guys d boy is shr malhotra) he hid d pic n looks at his sis….
Shr: yes choti….
G: bhabi ji aai hain…… (Naughtily)
Shr: shut up go….. (She goes laughing)
…….Shr takes out d pic……..
Shr: so u arrived my love wait I will go n meet u….
—–he kisses d pic n goes——

Shr cms out of his room he goes n stands….
……Here downstairs sme prepation a r going on……
Servants r running here n there…..
A lady is shouting : arayyyy ufff……here…ooh god…keep them there….oh god wat to do…..
A girl cms to her…: nir aunty…
Nir looks back in happiness: Sumo beta !! (They hug) how r u ??
S: m fyn n u…,. ( they chit chat)

Shr frm upstairs is watching all this…..
Sumo looks at shr…. Who is watching her n smiles…. Shr sings her to cm upstairs bt she nods no…….shr keep signing her bt she continuously Denys playfully…..
Nir: beta go meet shr…..
——shr gets a hope—–
S: no aunty I will meet him at ni8 ( she luks at him)
Nir: ok……
S: ok aunty m going (they hug eaChOther)
—-she wids him byyy n leaves—–

Shr POV:
Aww she didn’t cm to meet me……bt no worries party Mai thori na bache gi…. (He smiles) yes she is my love my sumo whome I love….the most….our alliance got fixed 3 months ago….at…Frst I don’t lyk her I though that she is a rich girl so she wants to marry me fr money, she luks expensive gifts just lyk other girls….bt no she is very different fr others……she is….just not only beautiful frm outside bt also frm inside her heart is so pure….that nobody can hate her…….( he smiles)

FLASHBACK:
3 Months ago:
It WS sumo’s birthday…..shr though to give her a surprise so he blind folds her….
It WS 4:00 am……
—-he makes her sit in d car n they drives away—–
S: shr where r we going???
Shr: I will tell u after we reach….
—–both reach at seaview side—-
—-he unblinded her—-
Shr: surprise!!!
Sumo is just so surprised there WS nothing except water no arrangement of dinner or smthing…..
Sumo: wow..!!! ( shr WS also surprised at that moment)
Shr: u lyked it??
S: hahahah lyked I loved it yr….. It’s so beautiful u knw wat thank u thank u soo much
Shr: fr wat??
Sumo: fr fulfilling my wish…..
—–shr is surprised—–
S: yes I always wished that somday I can watch sun rising n u knw wat today my wish is going to fulfill……( she hugs him in happiness) thank u thank u…..
—–she breaks the hus n ws shy n shr keep staring at her wid mixed feelings lyk shocked surprised love…..——-

Shr POV:
I was so shocked at that moment…..yes….it WS a test I though I will take her to seaside on her birthday where there r no arrangements od dinner or any other surprises bt she……dat day I knw dat she is totally different she is d girl who just find happiness in small thing she didn’t even notice or asked abt arrangement she WS just enjoying fresh air……n she didn’t only won d test bt my heart also……

FLASH BACK:
Both enjoyed sun rise together……
N after dat shr arranged so many surprises fr her……he WS just testing her whether she ask fr other surprises or nt but she didn’t n that makes him sooo I love wid her….

Shr POV:
Yes I arranged many more surprises fr her…..bt after reaching at seaside….she WS lost in d beauty of nature….nt lyk nt lyk my prev gf’s who wants romantic dinner at 5 star or expensive jewellery…..that’s wat made me so much in love wid her…….

PRESENT:
Shr thinks abt dat n smiles……..
—-suddenly he remembers smthing n gets in his room—-

After two hours at sumo home…..
A servant cms to her with a box…..
Sumo opens it….n find a beautiful pink n white gown…..wid accessories n a note…she open d note:
” I have sent a beautiful dress to d worlds most beautiful angel….I knw this dress is nt as beautiful as u bt plzz wear it in tonight’s party n increase it’s beauty”
Sumo blushes……

—IN PARTY—
All guests have arrived so does sumo—-
She is looking an angel in pink n black gown with high heels n beautiful silver n black pearl earrings…her hairs r opened in curls….
Here shr also cms downstairs wid white shirt black blazer n pant….n is looking hot…his hairs r as perfect as usual——

It’s now dance tym…….!!
Everyone arranged in pairs shr n sumo r in one pair……
Dance starts…….

Shr forward his hand n sumo holds his hand…..
She keeps her hand on his shoulder while he keeps his hand on her waist….

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

The dance romantically…..he pulls her close to him…..

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

He spins her n takes her into his arms….

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Shr: so did u lyk d dress??
Sumo: hmmmm kinda….
—shr smiles—
S: it’s beautiful….
Shr: nt as u…..

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sumo:hmmm flirting huh??
Shr: u can say so……
Sumo: waise u r also looking handsome….
Shr: hmm flirting??
S: u can say so…..
—both smiles—–

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hainโ€ฆ

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hainโ€ฆ
Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum

—-he lifts her in his arms—–

O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum

—–everyone claps——

Shr holds her hand n takes her out with him in garden…..
S: shr wat r u doing??? Somebody…will c…
Shr: ahh I don’t care….
—they stop—
S: so y r we here??
Shr: wait dear….can I breath…
—-she laughs—–

Shr suddenly pulls her close…..
Sumo: hey…..wat r u doing…???? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Shr: u were laughing huh??? Laugh again…….
Sumo gets nervous……
Sumo: no I…..I..was nt laughing…..
Shr: sumo…….I want to ask smthing……(sumo nods) look our alliance got fixed bt u r happy na?
S: wat do u c in my eyes???
Shr: I…..I…see (he says lovingly) brown lens in ur eyes……
(He strts laughing)
S: shr!!!!! (She hits him)
Shr: ouch……
Sumo cares fr him: hey hey…..lagi kya..??
Shr: (innocently) haddd hai yr….ek jagah marti ho or dosri jagah care dikhati ho….
S: awwww sorry…..
Shr: I ws joking Hehehehehehehe…
S: shr!

Meanwhile shr sis cms to him……
Sis: bhaiya..bhabi…..wat r u doing here evrybody is waiting inside…..
Shr: ufffff they can’t let us spent smtym alone…..
Sis: ufff bhai….shadi ke baad toh apne sath sath hi rehna hai na ( she says playfully)
Shr: oyyy…..choti….
Sumo laughs……
They goes inside….
——here ram shr father goes on stage——
Good evening ladies n gentleman…..thank u so much fr joining us fr this wonderful evening…..as u all knw that this party is fr that we signed a biggest contract …..bt I want to make another announcement……in this party that my 1 n only son shr malhotra n my best frnd’s daughter suman Mehta who will be my bahu kam daughter…..r going to marry this month…….
—–everyone claps——–

Shr cms to ram…..n says smthing in his ear (ram smiles)
Ram: so ladies n gentleman I guess Aaj engagement Bhi ho hi jai gi (he says naughtily)

Sumo is confused……Shr cms to her…….
S: shr ye sab…….
—-Shr forwards his hand n takes her to d stage—–
—–everyone claps——
Shr to sumo: I ws a boy who thinks dat love is nothing more than a fraud money is evrything..I never want to marry bcz I thinks that every girl wants a big house expensive jewelries n just mony …but after meeting u my thought got completely changed….I realize that everybody is nt same some r different….( he cresses her face) I got to knw that love is a beautiful feeling…..thank u so much fr coming in my lyf miss sumo Mehra…
——-sumo smiles——-
(Shr sits on knees)
So miss sumo,my sumo…
(He takes out a beautiful ring frm his pocket)
Shr: will u accept my love fr u……
Sumo happily: yes!!
—–everyone claps——-
—-he makes her wear ring—–

Ram cms wid shr ring….
Ram to sumo: here beta make him wear ring…..
—–she makes him wear too—–
——N they hug eaChOther—–
Both moms n dads hug eaChOther…..
Varun sumo’s father: lo hogai engagement!! Ye lo meetha ai khaao….

Shr leans close to her face……
—–sumo gets shy n close her eyes—-
………Shr smiles n say in her ears……..
Shr: I LOVE U……
Sumo opens her eyes..n smiles…
S: I LOVE U TOO……

////////////////——THE END——/////////////////

So guys how WS it……
Did u lyk it or it WS just a waste of tym….
Well thank u so much fr reading it guys……
If u lyk it then plz cmmnt n tell me how WS it……
N silent readers I will be waiting fr ur cmmnts also…..(don’t stay silent)

Till then by by…..
—-Love u all——

44 comments

  1. Anamika

    Awww… Maria baby it was soo cute and romanticโ˜บ๏ธ
    M blushing for now๐Ÿ˜œ
    Osm os by an osm writer
    Keep writing more such stories
    Love u๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜œ

    • Marie

      |Author

      Aww thank u soo much anamika dear…!๐Ÿ˜Š
      Hehehehehehehe u r making Me blushing now๐Ÿ˜œโ˜บ
      Thanks atone dear….!!
      Btw anamika wats ur age dear?? If u don’t mind……..โ˜บ
      Love u tooooโค

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Wht? You ate 14 presently. So in which standard are u studying in? I mean, am curious just becauuse am 13 and i thought that u were elder to me with 4-5 years. Oh gosh! Suprising.

      • Marie

        |Author

        Hahaha m studying in 10 standard n in which standard u r studying in?? If u don’t mind…… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
        Ooh wow u r 13 great yr….hahahaha ๐Ÿ˜€ 4-5 years ooh god… ๐Ÿ˜€ it’s surprising fr me also ๐Ÿ˜€
        Acha nadini which city r u frm??

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Am in class 8 presently and am from noida, you? And yes if its a typo error for u, but still its nandini. Suprising!

      • Marie

        |Author

        Acha Annie so were frnds na so may I ask u one more thing which city r u frm…??
        Hahahhaha u r thinking that I ask toooo many questions …… ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Marie

        |Author

        Acha Annie so were frnds na so may I ask u one more thing which city r u frm…??
        Hahahhaha u r thinking that I ask toooo many questions …… ๐Ÿ˜€ bt Mai aisi hi hoon ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Does this mean u r from pakistan? Idk why but i always have a confusion abt it. Always. So please answer it,love

      • Marie

        |Author

        Yes dear m frm pak n u…??
        Acha nadini I read on sm ff that ur bday WS on 28 so happy late bday…!!!
        May u have all the happiness in lyf n may god accept all ur wishes…!

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Thats so sweet of u di. Well am from noida, india which comes in the delhi-ncr area. So, am really suprised as well as happy that i have friends from pak rigjt here sitting n india. His sounds sooo cool. Thanks fkr the bday widhes. Love u too.

      • Marie

        |Author

        U r also toooo sweet my dear…
        Ya dear even m soo happy dat i have so many n soooo sweet frnds frm india…
        N dont need to say thanks yr it ws a frnd’s duty ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
        Love u toooooo

  2. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Knock knock love
    Open the door I said open it quick
    Hahaah
    One shot
    Amm boring
    But Bura
    Baqwas
    Ganda
    Biklkul b nae that it was ammmmmmaaaaazzzzzzziiiiiiinnnnnggggg
    I loved it to the core
    U loved sunrise part
    Silent readers comment my love needs it
    Sorry for the upper words
    I liked one shot
    Love u
    God bless u
    Keep smiling
    With lots of love
    Maria
    Hahahahah sorry ufaq
    Take care

    • Marie

      |Author

      Opening door…………….
      Hy API !
      How r u? ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Hehehehehehehe thank u sooo much fr such a sweet &
      lovely cmmnt API…!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
      Thanks a tone fr ur wishes api….!!๐Ÿ˜Š
      M glad u lyked it….!!
      Love u too much se Bhi ziadaโคโค
      May god always keep u happy…….โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ
      Lots of love maria….!
      U tooo take care…!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

  3. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Very nice story dear … luv it to the core … ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ … keep writing such stories .. luv u ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ …
    Stay BLESSED!!!!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thank u sooo much dear….!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
      Love u tooo๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      May god always bless u tooo……..

  4. Nandini aka Nandu

    It was so sweet maria dear and definetely not a waste of time. Oh! Yes u posted this os next day itself ! Punctual haan? Well really sweet one. Keep posting and posting and yes most importantly writing.( how can someone post without writing.) Lots of love for u.

  5. Marie

    |Author

    Aww thank u sooo soo much fr ur sweet cmmnt dear…..!!โ˜บโ˜บ
    Hahah u said correct without writing we can’t post๐Ÿ˜‰
    Love u toooo nadini๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  6. sona

    Yaar..maria
    .๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Tumhari itni sari ff’s padli..fir bhi..aaj bhi jab koi ff..padney chalti hu tho..end tak pata hi nahi chalta ki …the credit goes to u….๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    I mean..every ff was unique..cute..lovely..as u..my dear..โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello….!
      Thank u so much sona di fr such a pyaara sa sweet sa n lovely sa cmmnt……. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thanks a lot…! ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Naina

    It was superb….i really loved it and please don’t say it a waste of time and sorry for being late i didn’t find time to comment…..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Aww don’t need to say sorry yr….. I can understands lateness doesn’t matter ur sweet words matter….., thank u so much…! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Asalsmu Alikum Marie kutti…
    How are you…yesterday itself I read your o’s…but didn’t get time for comment…but now I’m free..
    My sis it’s my owner to read your o’s…really yaar mind blowing…hats off to you…today you made my speechless…Thank you sooo much for such outstanding…o’s…love you…take care

    • Marie

      |Author

      Walaikum aslaam… api…!!
      I m fyn alhamdulilaah n u??
      No prob abt cmmnt…… u read n lyked it its enough fr me ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      N thank u sooo soo sooo much fr such a sweet cut n lovely cmmnt di…!! ๐Ÿ™‚
      N m sooo sooo happy that u lyked it…!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      love u tooooooooooo api…!!!!
      U tooo take care…! ๐Ÿ™‚

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