Love On Road.. The unique FF epi: -17 (Goa Diaries!)

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Hlooo ? gys.. Al ready to knw the full memories me.. Viplav bhaia… Shahid jiju and al othrs created!! Then let’s go… Morning part bhol toh nahi gaye na??

Hey! Be frank if you forgot.. Thn here ? is the link.. Go and again refresh ur memory…

Episode 16
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By 5’o Didi(Mira)Made viplav bhaia.. Aki.. Avi.. And shalu didi wake up.. While kaki(Kanak) made kaka wake up.. By 5:15 all were be seated ? in front of dinning table which is filled with coffee ? and tea ? cups and snacks consisting of yummy ? Finger chips ? Fried Cauliflower.. And Banana ? fries…

With the waves ? of sea ready to splash.. In the beach.. We ate our snacks and drank our drinks watching the waves ? (As the dining area is sea faced room) and with some teasing and talking…

Later by 5:45 we children led the way to the sea with joy ? and happiness on each face… As we step towards the sea ? Kaki warned each one not to go soo deep in sea and also warned we girls ? not to take dip in water ? bt just make the feet ? play in the splashing water ? As we walked towards the sea… We saw the beach quite covered with people… Everyone busy in their own activity.. Small children playing with their feet ? when waves splashes… And while other busy with making sand arts… Young people are busy talking to their love and walking ? on the beach side while other bachelors are busy taking sun bath… While few young gentlemen are diving ? other people with full energy are swimming ?

We youngsters led the way to the area least crowded.. The boys ran and took a dip on the beach while we girls sat and took selfies and started our chit-chat.. Later we moved towards the sea and made the our feet ? play ? with the waves.. And started for a small walk ?

When the colour of beach turned the almost red due to sun ? Set… We made our ways back to our resort ? Leading behind beautiful memories..?

As we reached the resort.. Kaki gave a sharp look to boys who are drenched with water ? from top to bottom… But jiju mentioned that they didn’t went too deep and we girls ? gave a nod to that… Yes!we GIRLS ? gave nod who almost forgot the boys ? as we were busy in talking…?

Later each one took a bath ? and we all busied ourselves in dressing for the dinner ? that night ? Mira didi and jiju worn a blue off shoulder gown and formal suit respectively.. Viplav bhaia and bhabhi worn a white shirt with orange overcoat and Black knee length frock respectively… Avi and Akki bhaia worn jeans and blue and Green shirts while I worn a jeans and white sleeveless top… Shalu didi worn a beautiful kameez.. Kaka and kaki with their as usual dressing.. We locked the resort and entered in to car leading the hotel ? Akshay bhaia showed the tickets and the hotel manager led us to a 10 seat table decorated with flowers and dishes… We settled ourselves when The talented violin ? artists played HAPPY B’DAY SHALU On their instruments.. We again sang b’day sng ? for shalu didi and for our surprise ? the manager who led us gave shalu didi a bouquet ? of roses ? shalu didi Thanked him and we busied ourselves in eating.. We with some style ate the food ? As the dish got finished and we waited for finishers’ The light went of… The beautiful L E D lights were switched on.. And I saw jiju standing under a beam of light.. We all saw jiju and wondered why he is standing their.. The instrumental of a song ? adored the noise of ours…

SHAHID JIJU SANG
?O mere mohalle mein?

CAMERA ? SHOWS DIDI’S FACE
? Chaand jo aaya hai?

SHAHID JIJU SWIRL’S AND COME NEAR TO MIRA DIDI
? Eid jo laaya hai
Tu hi toh nahi?

VIPLAV SINGS
?Ammi ne meri jo
Suit silaya hai
Khwaab dikhaya hai
Tu hi toh nahi?

SHAHID JIJU EXTENDS THE HAND ✋ TO DIDI
?Haan jiske liye dil bigadne lagaa hai?

MIRA DIDI HOLDS THE HAND
? Woh kaun hai, Tu Hi Hai?

VIPLAV BHAIA EXTENDED HIS HAND TO BHABHI
? Jiske liye dil sambhalne lagaa hai?

DHAANI BHABHI HELD THE EXTENDED HAND
? Woh kaun hai, Tu Hi Hai?

VIPLAV BHAIA AND JIJU SINGS LOOKING AT ME
?Door ye kaun hai?

CAMERA ? FOCUSES MY FACE
? Paas ye kaun hai?

CAMERA ? SHOWS BHABHI’S AND DIDI’S FACE
? Khaas ye kaun hai
Tu hi hai?

VIPLAV BHAIA AND BHABHI DANCES ?
?Jiske liye maine
Saari haseeno ke
Dil tode jaana hai?

VIPLAV BHAIA TURNS BHABHI’S FACE TOWARDS HIM
? Tu hi toh nahi?

JIJU AND DIDI DANCES ?
?Jiske liye mujhko
Jeete hi jaana hai
Beema karana hai?

JIJU AND DIDI LOOKS AT EACH OTHER
? Tu hi toh nahi?

AKSHAY BHAIA SINGS LOOKING AT ME…
?Aane se jiske aa jati hai saansein
Woh kaun hai, Tu hi hai?

AVI BHAIA LOOKS AT SHALU DIDI AND SINGS
? Jaane se jiske jaati hai jaanein
Woh kaun hai, Tu hi hai?

AVI BHIA AND AKKI SINGS
?Door ye kaun hai?

CAMERA ?. SHOWS MY AND SHALU’S FACE
? Paas ye kaun hai?

VIDHA AND SHAMIRA(SHAHID+MIRA)SHARES AN EYE ? LOCK
? Khaas ye kaun hai
Tu hi hai?

KAKA SINGS
? Mere shairon mein ye kaun hai?

CAMERA ? FOCUSES THE SURPRISED KAKI
? Meri shayari mein kaun hai?

VIPLAV AND JIJU MAKE THEIR RESPECTIVE LOVE TAKE A SWIRL
? Meri diary mein kaun hai
Tu hi hai…?

AKSHAY BHAIA SINGS
?Gubbaron mein ye kaun hai?

AVI BHAIA SINGS
? Khumaron mein ye kaun hai?

JIJU SINGS
? Guitaron mein ye kaun hai?

VIPLAV BHAIA SINGS
? Tu hi hai, o…?

As the song ? went off the light came and we all clapped ? for each other and thanked each one.. Later the deserts came.. We ate it and we left.. Making our car less visible to the hotel…
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Toh bolo how was Shalu didi’s birthday… Was that a grand one… ?

Guyss now there is now only 3-4 epi’s lefy it seems!! So pls do comment to the maximum.. And pls do share my mistakes..

With hopes that you will do comment and are loving ? my ff.. Let take a bye ?

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16 Comments
  1. woooow superb shani…awsome birthday celebrations…
    U know what..this story is really looking like reality as u said..that also not in one or two scenes but each and every scene look like real only…
    woow i love beach…i am missing beach enjoyment…
    After that song is very very nice…i love that song…i thought that after introducing shahid…u may select the
    song from his movies only but u selected a song from dear zindagi…unexpected amazing song…keep it up shani…
    By the way congratulations shani for ur achievenent in os competition…
    i want to read ur os plz share the link in reply..ok…
    bye…
    keep smiling and keep writing…

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss Lalitha didi!!

      Happy that U r feeling ths stry to be realistic… I wanted it to b realistic.. Because d beauty of ths try lies in that realistic part?

      Nothing like that… I just wanted to make shahid Kapoor my bhaia.. But fr ths stry I thught makng him jiju wl b gud ? Nah! I think shahid sngs wl b lss..

      Thankss didi.. Yeah!! I too love that sng.. In that song ? I especially love Alia bhat…?

      Oh.. Thankss didi.. I was thinking wat I frgt to add in this ff.. And nw I gt it it was d lnk fr my os and result.. Again Thank you.. And how u came to knw abt that ?

      Here ? Is the lnk fr my os

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/curiosity-led-beautiful-love-story-os/

      And didi pls tl ur cmnts abt my os too.. Curiosity ahead ?

      U too keep smiling!!!

      1. hey shani beaitiful os dear…i want to comment in that os only but there is no possibility of commenting in that os..i dont know why comment block is not there…
        Really a different cute love story…
        i want to ask u something…plz write an os about vidhani also…
        And ha i saw results in ishqbaaz page…
        byee..

      2. Shanitics

        Lalitha didi.. It may b because it’s been soo mny days na aftr I postd that os… Say max of 2 weeks the cmnt bx wl appear on the page!!

        Thankss fr reading and showing an interest on my OS!!?

        Yeah! Soon wl do write a OS If I gt time…

        Okay thn bye!

        Lastly r thr on FB

  2. Sujie

    Shaani… no need to say how much I am loving Goa diaries…okay…keep rocking …. aur haan….god bless you my sisso… lots of love to you…keep writing meri pyari beheniya 🙂

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss Sujie didi!!?

      Love ❤ u too meri jaan…?

    2. Shanitics

      Sujie didi.. I’ve wrote an OS on ishqbaaz page… If u hav tme pls do read and share ur views..

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/curiosity-led-beautiful-love-story-os/

      1. Sujie

        Swethu…meri sisso… As I can’t comment in that OS wala page… commenting here…okay
        You did superb job in this one…. thank you for this….
        LOVED THE NARRATION OF THE LOVE STORY OF SHIVIKA…. khidkitod I would say in Anika style… Glad that you gave me the link dear…..
        okay… I toh loved it… and yes…. Love you for this one… because you gave me something nice to read …. haan waise… this is the first time haan… i am commenting on a fan fic of SHIVIKA(in fact other than Viplav and Dhaani……and thanks to you…for this…waise ek baar I had commented in… FUN fan fic on krpkab page….
        love you Swethu for this… keep rocking

      2. Shanitics

        Thankss again meri pyari didi… Fr reading the os!!

        Kya baath hai… Anika style bhi aatha hai aapko?

        Oho… Meri behen haina… Toh link deni padthi hai… Just kidding!!

        Soo.. Just because of me u read… That was great to read!! Luv u?

        Actually mein regular viewer nahi hun Ishqbaaz ki? Bas ase hi likha tha…. Ye read toh ishqbaaz fans wl thnk mad of me..?
        U guyss all know me how crazy I’m… After all it’s been mre than a yr u gyss knw me.. My craziness for shahid Kapoor u knw na?

        Wl keep rocking… ?

    3. Sujie

      Of course swethu ?????
      Lots of love

  3. Maha_Aijaz

    Swetha it was an enjoyable episode! Loving this celebration and family moments. Also liked the song and the scene’s description.
    Keep going dear! Loads of love<3

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss Maha didi!!?

    2. Shanitics

      Maha didi… I’ve writtn a os pls do a read.. It’s on ishqbaaz… Bt pls didi hav a read…

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/curiosity-led-beautiful-love-story-os/

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Yeah sure I’ll read it sweetie!

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