Love on Road.. The unique ff.. EPI-11 (Unique wala Yes or no)

I’M here with ur most awaited epi of my Fan Fiction LOVE ON ROAD… Any guesses wat this epi will be??

If u guessed….. Then move ahead and find out if ur guess was true…..

…… Viplav and Dhaani are sitting on the bench while Shalu on the swing… There was silence there.. Only sound was chirruping of birds ?? And sound of Swing as shalu swings.. Bt the silence was meaningful.. The wind blowing was having the essence of love ❤ while trees are giving pleasure to the love ❤

Viplav breaks the silence and speaks.. Manager told me that every night ? thy have programs being conducted here in the resort.. Like games.. Songs ? Dance ? He have requested me.. Means we all to participate in any item.. So…
Dhaani nods.. Shalu too nods..

Shalu:: Di.. U knw hw to sing ? na..
Dhaani:: Quite.. Bt I won’t…
Shalu:: Y
Dhaani:: No I won’t sing ?
Shalu:: Then dance ?
Dhaani:: Lets go to room… And think ?
Viplav:: Tats great..

Viplu & dhaani are moving back to there room.. Shalu walked ? in front of vidha.. Giving vidha some space..

Dhaani:: Hw fast this girl ? walks…
Viplav:: Yeah.. She is soo fast in every thing.. Especially eating…
Shalu:: Ah… Bt being fast is better than being soo slow na..
Dhaani:: U too slow..
Viplav:: Yep.. Em.. U too means..
Dhaani:: Me too very slow.. In watever it may be I’m very slow..
Viplav:: Eh,me too..
Dhaani:: Do u knw.. Varsha and Meghs are fast… And always waits fr me.. Thy usually shout at me fr being slow… And laughs ?
Viplav:: Ah.. Same here.. Evn my bsties shouts at me fr being slow..
Dhaani::We bth al most share same character and behaviour it seems…
Viplav:: I too thought that now..
Viplav holds Dhaani’s hand and walk ? Dhaani looks at Viplav…
Viplav:: Oh,sorry And suddenly takes his hand away from Dhaani’s…
Dhaani::(Smilingly)It’s ok ?
Viplav:: Really..
Dhaani:: Yep…

Viplav smilingly ? holds Dhaani’s hand ? and walk ?… Dhaani smiles ? as they walk ? hand in hand.. Shalu sees this and ? smilingly ? walks… Dhaani feels the breeze more lovely.. And the short bushes ? dancing ? as thy are happy for Viplav & Dhaani…. They reach their room.. Shalu runs and sits on the bed ? Vidha share a deep eye lock near the ? door… Even now they locked there hands in each other’s hand ✋… Shalu who is sitting on the bed ? gets an idea..

Shalu:: Bhaia..

Vidha comes to senses.. Thy move inside the bed room..
Shalu pulls viplav and thy both go outside the room while Dhaani is blushing and is lying on the bed reminiscing the moment she realised the love ? towards Viplav…

Shalu:: Bhaia.. Wat happened to u.. Y u r always hanging around Dhaani didi..
Viplav:: Patha nahi kyun.. Bt I feel like I understood the meaning of PYAR HONA HAMRE BAS MEIN NAHI.. LEKIN USS PYAR SE DHUR CHALE JANA VO HAMARE BAS MEIN HAI…
Shalu:: I knew it..
Viplav:: Hw come u knw it!!
Shalu:: It’s clear from ur face… Ur eyes ? speaks everything… Even Di ka bhi.. Ur eyes ? has already talked to each other.. Now u have to say it from ur heart ♥
Viplav:: Bt how..
Shalu:: Lt me think ?

Viplu(Together):: Gt an idea..
Idea is muted.. Thy go back to their room.. And sees Dhaani on bed ? with eyes ? closed..
Shalu:: Di
Dhaani:: Wakes up from bed ?
Shalu:: Today ur face seems like glowing much..
Dhaani::(Hiding her smile ?) nahi toh.. May be u’ll be feeling it…
Shalu smilingly ? nods…
Shalu:: Di.. If u don’t mind can we go to night ? in that auditorium… I want to sing ? a song ?
Dhaani:: Em.. Okay ? Which song??
Shalu:: Suspense…
Dhaani:: Smiles ?

Later by 3:00 thy had thr lunch… Later by 3:45-4:00 thy came back to there room… Shalu took a deep nap ? Dhaani reminisced her and Viplav’s journey till here.. And went to sleep ? Viplav watched Tv ? and later mobile ? and he too went to a deep nap ? By 5:30 Dhaani opened her eyes ? And saw Viplav sleeping on his extra bed ? Dhaani stares at Viplav lovingly ? She thinks ? What a character he has.. Shalu is blessed to have a brother like him… Dhaani’s thought suddenly got diverted to her Brother DHYAAN… As she thought of the word Bhaia… Her eyes ? became teary ? as she missed him.. She took her mobile ? and was abt to call ? him… Bt stopped as she felt that this call ? might get tracked and Viplav and Shalu too will fall to trouble… Later Shalu wakes up followed by Viplav… They all washes thr faces and orders for drinks followed by thr snacks ???☕?? Later they all had thr snacks with some gossip talks…

After few hours.. Light was conquered by Darkness… ? sky got adored by twinkling stars ?? And Dhaani was hugged by cool breeze… Viplav,Shalu and Dhaani are moving towards the auditorium… Viplav had worn a orange top with an over coat and jeans? While Dhaani Red Top and leggings…

Dhaani:: Shalu which song ? are u going to sing ?

Shalu::We have reached the auditorium.. Now within minutes I’ll be on the stage.. So u here @ that time….

Dhaani:: I’ve not seen u practicing anything.. Thn hw u gng to sing ?

Shalu::When u r on stage.. U’ll automatically sing ? because on stage singing ? becomes necessity…

Dhaani:: Em..?. Whatever.. Al d bst ?

Shalu::Thankss di….

They reached the auditorium and are waiting for Shalu’s turn to sing… The auditorium was decorated with balloons ? and other decorative… Their were nearly 50-60 people.. On the stage… While some put rhythms to song… Some put lyrics to the karaoke.. And the anchor said for the 5th time NOW PUT TOGETHER UR HANDS FOR A BEAUTIFUL SONG… And this time it was shalu’s turn..
Dhaani was all excited ? to knw whch song she is gng to sing ? Viplav was looking at Dhaani.. As Shalu steeped on to the stage Dhaani applauded followed by viplav and later all the fellows in the auditorium…. Shalu cleared her throat and the karaoke stared to play ??

Dhaani’s pov
I’ve heard this tune.. It’s soo familiar…

Shalu pov
Hope by this song ? My and bhaia’s plan workout…

Viplav pov
Hope she will say yes to me… Hope she will speak out today…

Shalu started to sing ?

? chhuTeya na chhuTe mose
rang tera Dolna?
DHAANI SMILES AS SHE LOVE THIS SONG ?

?ik tere baajo dooja
mera koi mol na?
VIPLAV LOOKS AT DHAANI AND SAYS THESE ARE THE WORDS OF MY HEART ?

?bolna mahi bol na?
SORRY ? WAT U SAID I DIDN’T HEARD SAYS DHAANI
?bolna maahi bol na?

?tere sang hansna main?
DHAANI LOOKS AT VIPLAV AND SMILES ?

?tere sang rona?
DHAANI STARTS TO HUM THIS SONG ?

?tujh mein hi rehna main?
DHAANI SAYS IN MIND THESE WORDS ARE FOR U VIPLAV
?tujh mein hi khona?

(((#MEANINGS OF THE LINES ABOVE#
I want to laugh with you,
and cry with you..
I want to live in you,
and get lost in you only..))

?dil mein chhupa ke tujhe?
DHAANI LOOKS AT VIPLAV WHILE HUMMING THE SONG ?

?dil naiyo kholna?
THE CAMERA FOCUSES ON VIDHA’S EYES ? ?

?mar ke bhi maahi tosey?
VIDHA SHARE AN EYE ? LOCK

?munh na moDna?
DHAANI NODS WHILE HUMMING

?bolna mahi bol na?
SHALU SINGS IT LIKE SHE WANT SOMEONE TO SAY SOMETHING
?bolna maahi bol na?

(#Meanings of the abve lines#
I want to hide you in my heart
and not open that after that.
even after dying,
I’d not go away from you..
say, O my beloved, please say.
say, O my beloved, please say..))

?chhuTeya na chhuTe mose
rang tera Dolna?
VIPLAV LOOKS AT SHALU

?ik tere baajo dooja?
DHAANI LOOKS AT VIPLAV
?mera koi mol na?

?bolna maahi bol na?
SHALU LOOS AT DHAANI AND SINGS ?
?bolna maahi bol na ?

All the people in the auditorium gives shalu a loud clap ?? clap.. Shalu thankss everyone.. And comes near vidha.. Dhaani hugs shalu and says super song ? wonderfully sang.. When u sand it felt like u were saying ur stuffed emotions or words to someone!!

Shalu:- Yeah I was…. Didi,did u felt it to be the wrds of ur heart??

Dhaani:-(Suddenly)Yeah.. Don’t know why.. Later Dhaani realises wat she said and more than that to whom she said… She didn’t want to expose her feelings… As she felt it was wrong ? to fall in love ? with Viplav the guy who saved her from the bad happenings.. Dhaani looked ? down..

Shalu kept her hands on Dhaani’s shoulder.. Dhaani looked at Shalu’s face.. Which was glowing with happiness and smile ? Dhaani smiled at Shalu…

Shalu:-Di,Can I ask u something.. Be truthful.. Even if it is negative answer.. It’s ok ? bt u have to answer the question honestly and also pls don’t mind me asking this question.. I don’t know ? how will u react..

Dhaani:: Never mind.. I won’t feel bad even if it be a bad ? question though.. Shoot the question!!

Shalu:: Pls don’t feel bad.. Shalu closes her eyes ? and looks down.. And without leaving a single breathe she asks.. “Aap bhaia se pyaar karthi ho?”

Dhaani’s eyes ? pop out.. Her face blushes.. Shalu opens her eyes ? and smiles ? showing al her 32 teeth..

Dhaani:: Em.. Pyaar toh.. NA.. I… Lov.. No no..no..no.. I

Suddenly the lights got off.. And someone said through mike ? BUT I LOVE ❤ YOU.. A beam of light concentrated towards the person on the Stage..

Dhaani says this sound is soo familiar… Shalu shouted.. Bhaia go for it.. And hugged Dhaani.. Dhaani suddenly looked at her near chair ?where Viplav was been seated… Ya,He was not in the chair ?Dhaani shifted her eyes ? from chair ?to the stage… Yes it was VIPLAV.. The beam of light on the stage was adoring viplav… Dhaani felt surprised ? as well as Her eyes ? had almost tears of happiness…. Her face was covered with excitement.. YES I LOVE YOU M\S RAO.. Said viplav from the stage through mike ? The song played…

?Dekha tumko jab se, bas dekha tumko yaara,?
VIPLAV STARTED TO DANCE ? WITH POINTING THE INDEX ? FINGER ON DHAANI

? tumse koi accha hai , na tumse koi pyaara?
DHAANI SMILES WITH HER TEARY EYES ?

? yun nazrein na phero tum, mere ho mere tum !?
SHALU POINTS AT DHAANI.. DHAANI LOOKS AT SHALU…

?keh do na, keh do na, u are my soniya,?
VIPLAV WITH A POUTY FACE SINGS THIS LINE

? you – you are-are you are my soniya !?
SHALU PUSHES DHAANI TO THE STAGE

?Dekha tumko jab se, bas dekha tumko yaara,?
DHAANI RUNS ? TO STAGE..

? tumse koi accha hai , na tumse koi pyaara?
DHAANI HUGS VIPLAV AND SINGS THIS LINE..

? yun nazrein na phero tum, mere …………?
DHAANI TWIRLS AROUND VIPLAV

?Keh diya, keh diya, you are my soniya,?
DHAANI RESTS HER HAND ON VIPLAV’S SHOULDER..

? you are you are my soniya!?
SHALU LOOKS AT VIDHA AND SINGS
? you you are are you are my soniya.?

? teri mohobbat mein, ye dil deewana hai !?
VIPLAV REMOVES DHAANI’S HAND AND DANCES ?
? isme hai meri kya khataa !?

?ho..ye dil churaane ka, accha bahaana hai,?
DHAANI HOLDS VIPLAV’S EARS ? AND DANCES ?
? mujhko hai pehle se pata!?

VIPLAV SINGS..
?milne me humko kitne barson lage hain yaara !?

?DHAANI HOLDS VIPLAV’S FACE AND SINGS?
aise khushi ke pal to firr na aayein dobaara !

SHALU RUNS ? TOWARDS STAGE AND SINGS ?
? aisi khushi mein yaara ye nasha kya kam hoga,?

VIPLAV MOVES BACK AND PUT RYTHMS…
?keh do na, keh do na, u are my soniya,?
VIPLAV POINTS INDEX ? FINGER TOWARDS DHAANI AND SINGS…
? you – you are-are you are my soniya !?

VIPLAV DANCES ? WITH MANY FEET ? STEPS
?pagal banaya hai, teri adaaon ne,
mujhko to hai tera nashaa,?

DHAANI DANCES KEEPING ONE HAND ✋ ON HER HEART ?
? maine bhi palkon me tumko chupaaya hai,
tu mere khwaabon me basa,?

?VIPLAV RUNS ? TOWARDS DHAANI AND LIFT HER ?
betaabi kehti meri,
aaja baahon me bhar loon !

VIPLAV KEEP HER DOWN ? WHILE DHAANI ROLLS HER HAND OVER HIS FACE
? jeena hai teri hoke,
mil ke ye waada kar loon,?

SHALU IN EXCITEMENT ? SINGS..
? dono ne kasmein li hain
pyaar kabhi naa kam hoga !?

SHALU SAYS
?one-two-three-four,?

VIPLAV MOVES NEAR SHALU & LOOKS AT DHAANI AND SINGS …. HUGGING SHALU
?keh do na, keh do na, u are my soniya,
you – you are-are you are my soniya !?

DHAANI ALONE DANCES ? LOOKING AT VIPLAV
?Dekha tumko jab se, bas dekha tumko yaara,
tumse koi accha hai , ?

VIPLAV LOOKS SHALU AND NODS AND ? KISSES ON HER FACE
?na tumse koi pyaara?

DHAANI HOLDS SHALU’S AND VIPLAV’S HAND AND BRING THEM TO THE CENTRE OF THE STAGE
? yun nazrein na phero tum, mere …………?

THE TRIO SINGS…
?keh do na, keh do na, u are my soniya,?

VIDHA HUGS SHALU… AND VIDHA LOOKS AT EACH OTHER’S EYES ?
? you – you are-are you are my …………..?

Every audience give them a standing ovation.. And a great applause ? Dhaani smiles ? But her face is fully blushed and over shied that she ran ? away from the auditorium.. All audience look at Viplav.. And shalu and smiles ?.. Viplav and shalu too run ? away from the hall.. And follows Dhaani..
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Hope u all loved today’s epi.. Isn’t this epi you all guyss waiting for.. Soo say how was the proposal❔ I wanted in this unique ff a unique style of proposal.. Hope this was a unique way… Was this unique??

Soo all happy… With this Proposal this epi too came to an end…

Pls post ur views in comment box… Waiting for it… Silent readers if any.. Pls pls pls cmnt here!!?

Keep smiling… ?
Keep enjoying… ?

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  1. oh my god!!oh my god!!!….
    what an episode shani….
    i have no idea no guessings about this episode yaar…infact i dont want to guess because i like twists and thrills…
    And this reallyyy unique way in all proposals….
    In this episode more than half time toh song mein aur expressions aur proposal mein hi hogaya…kamal kardiya yaar…
    what a situational song….
    plz plz come soon…
    bye…
    keep smiling….

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss lalitha didi… I hope u lvd ths twists…

      Happy that u lvd ths style.. I was a bit cnfussd if I had givn crrct reactns.. Of Vidha and shalu during sng.. And al that..

      Happy that u al lvd it!!?

  2. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Swetha! So happy to read a brand new episode of your story?
    This was mind blowing yaar finally ViDha realized their feelings?? the proposal style was unique as well as beautiful dear, just loved the songs, scenes, dialogues everything ❤
    Now waiting for the next one. Keep rocking!
    Take care ?

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss Maha didi ?

      Unique ff pein to unique hona chahiye sab.. Soo…

      Wl keep on rockng untill u r ready to ready and cmnt?

      Insha’Allah!!?

  3. Sujie

    Haaaaaaaaaayeeeeeeeeeeee….. You brought me to the dreamy land hayee……
    Its super awesome Chuttku…..love you for this…. and Dhaani’s eyes popped out best reaction…. the whole dance ….a unique proposal…the song choice…..
    KEH DO NAA…KEH DO NAA…. YOU ARE MY SONIYAA…..
    and I was like……
    KEH DO NAA…KEH DO NAA….YOU ARE MY DHAANI YA….:D 😀 😀 insane me……
    this is superb Swethu….lots of love….keep rocking ….mwaaaaaaaaaaah mwaaaaaaaaaah…love you 🙂 🙂

    1. Shanitics

      Tahnks suje didi….?

      Hav to brng u too a fantasy wrld na.. Varna bre legaga na…?

      Actually whn I was writing ths epi I was insane.. My mood was 200 volt bulb..?

      Wl rock.. If u guyss read my epi and cmt like ths!!?
      Love u lot.. Say a million ton… Love

      Mwahhhhh?

  4. U r my sis na…I know u will do the best….just kidding.. …u rock it chotti… U always make the seen infornt of my eyes..keep Rocking

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss…. Chechi…. ?
      Devathinn ariyam vayicho enn!!?

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