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Home»Fan Fiction»Love in Rain – Shot Three (Someone is back) Twinj FS
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Love in Rain – Shot Three (Someone is back) Twinj FS

TwinjBy TwinjApril 20, 201715 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hi guys,
Sorry to keep u guys waiting. Thank u everyone who cmted on my previous shot. Sorry I couldn’t reply to the cmts n sorry to keep u guys waiting. I was overwhelmed by reading ur cmts. Thanks for showering so much love. N hope ur guesses are correct. If incase anyone missed the previous shot here is the link. Enjoy reading.
Shot 2
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“Yeh kya kusur pusur kar rahe ho.” Aunty scolded. We both bowed our head. “Kunj don’t u think u should leave my daughter.” She said indicating our current position. Oh fish my arms were still wrapped around her waist. I slowly left her waist. She stumbled. So I was about to catch her but Leela aunty gave her support. “Aunty now I should go. May chalta hu.” I said. She just nodded. Twinkle n her mom turned around to leave. I also turned around n took two steps ahead to leave but I felt as if something was stopping me from going I turned around; at the same time Twinkle also turned around. Her dupatta was stuck in my bracelet. Leela aunty also turned around. Oh god what must she be thinking? I hurriedly tried to take out the dupatta from her bracelet but my efforts went in vain. By seeing this Twinkle with much difficulty came near me. For an instant we were staring each other then slowly she took out the dupatta n said, “Mr. Khadoos itna be khadoos maat bano…stay calm.” As she was about to turn around her leg twisted n she fell right on top of me. For a moment we were lost in each other (Sajana ve plays in background). The raindrops from her lips rolled down n dropped in my lips. The raindrops brought back our senses. She tried to get up but failed due to which she landed on me. Her hands were on my chest. Literally we had an eyelock. Her wet hair was disturbing our eyelock. I slowly tugged the hair coming on her face. “Siyaapa queen.” I said. “May koi siyaapa queen nai hu.” She said hitting my chest slowly. “Siyaapa queen.” I said. “Huh sadu kahi ke.” She said. She tried getting up but failed. So Leela aunty came near us n helped Twinkle in getting up. I left from there as soon as I could. Mujhe thodi na siyaapa may fasne ka shock tha.

Next Day

I was surprised to see Leela aunty in sarna mansion. She was talking with usha maa but I couldn’t hear what they were talking as I was watching them from the kitchen. Oh no Leela aunty must be complaining maa about yesterday’s incident. “Aaj toh tu gaya Kunj.” I said to myself. May be she is talking about something else. I should go there n listen their talk. Yah that would be better.

I headed towards them. Within few moments I was standing just a few meters away from them. “That would be better.” Leela aunty said. What would be better but anyways she is not talking about me. I turned around to leave but Leela aunty stopped me. “Kunj beta actually we two are going out. Twinkle is suffering from high fever n has even sprained her leg. So I want u to take care of her till we come back only if u are fine with it.” “Kunj u go n take care of Twinkle maa.” Maa added. I just waggled my head which meant to say “Ok.”

Oh no now I have to bear siyaapa queen but what did Leela aunty sayu she has high fever n has even sprained her leg. Oh god iss ladki ko kyu barish may bigna tha. Actually it’s my fault because of me she fell down. Because of me she sprained her leg. Without thinking much I immediately rushed towards Taneja mansion.

@Twinkle’s room

I slowly opened the door of Twinkle’s room. She was lying on the bed n she was shivering n sweating. I immediately checked her body temperature with the thermometer lying beside the bed. Oh god her body temperature was 102 degree Fahrenheit. She had high fever. I touched her forehead. Her forehead was fiery with fever. “Tumhe barish may bigne ki jarurat kaya thi.” I scolded her. “This is all because of u.” she said. “Tu na hamesha charge rahaeti hae na thodi der chup nai rahae sakti…siyaapa queen.” I said placing a cool, damp washcloth on her forehead while she rested. “May koi siyaapa queen nai hu kitni bar kahu.” Oh god this girl is suffering from fever but her battery is fully charged. “Sadu kahi ke.” She said. “Ok now keep quiet.” I said placing the cloth on her forehead. “No I Won ‘t. What..”Before she could complete I placed my hand on her mouth. “Shhh.” I said. With much difficulty she became silent. After sometime she sat on the bed crossing her leg. “Now I am feeling much more better.” She said.

Her medicine was in the drawer just beside the bed. “Now take this medicine.” I said giving her a tablet n a glass of water. “No I don‘t like medicine n I am absolutely fine.” I insisted her a lot n finally she took the medicine. “Mujhe washroom jana hae.” She said. “Go then.” I said. She pointed her leg. Oh god I forgot that she had sprained her leg. I just lifted her in my arms n this time she didn’t resist. I took her to the washroom n stayed outside the washroom. After sometime she opened the door I was about to lift her but she stumbled a bit n we both fell down. “Couldn’t u be careful.” She said in a mood to argue. “U should have been careful..siyaapa queen.” I said getting up. “What did u say? How many times I have said I am not a siyaapa queen.” She said. “Ok ok.” I said while lifting her in my arms. I slowly placed her in the bed but as I was about to get up her hair stopped me. I mean to say her hair got stuck in my jacket’s chain. She slowly took out the hair from my jacket’s chain but before I could get up I heard a coughing sound from behind.

“Thoda sabar karo…itni jaldi romance karne ki kya jarurat hae.” Usha maa said as she n Leela aunty entered the room. What did she mean thoda sabar. “Actually we are going to turn our friendship into rishtedari. Yah we have fixed u two’s marriage.” Leela aunty spoke out. “W-H-A-T??” Twinkle n I said at the same time. Has maa lost it. I n Twinkle to be married. “Yah we have matched ur kundali as well but pandit ji has said that subh mohorat 2 months ke baad hae. So till then u two can know each other n hangout. Kesa laga surprise. ”maa said. I couldn’t tell no to my mom as I couldn’t break her heart n same was with Twinkle so we two had to agree.
“ Zor Ka Jhatka Haye Zoron Se Laga, Haan Laga
Shaadi Ban Gayi Umarqaid Ki Saza, Haan Saza” This two lines were continuously running in my mind but I had to stop this marriage from happening.

PRECAP: Hum dono ek kamare may band ho…

Hope u guys liked it. Do drop ur cmts below either positive or negative n I think today’s epi was boring…sachi may…so sorry for that… next time I promise to improve.

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    15 Comments

    1. twinjfan.tamanna on April 20, 2017 4:33 pm

      wowwwww…. beautiful epi yaar! just loved it to the core! beautiful se bhi zyada beautiful! post soon can’t wait!
      see you

      With love,
      Urs Tamanna

    2. Auror on April 20, 2017 4:55 pm

      Awesome.. update as soon as possible ..please..

    3. nishfd on April 20, 2017 5:53 pm

      Wht should I say I m out of words
      It ws funny yet romantic. …
      N there marriage aur upr se precap
      Oh god cnt wait for it….
      Post jaldi jaldi….

    4. Swasti_aaku(registered member) on April 20, 2017 6:38 pm

      Woahh aaku that was wonderful.
      Everything was superb. Jhor ka jhatka wow was superb. N the most beautiful part when kunj lifted her n took her to washroom n their nokjhoks. Love each n every scene n don’t u ever call it boring. The track is awesome. Romantic n easily imaginable. Can’t wait. Post asap.

    5. Cp on April 20, 2017 6:45 pm

      ?????Ammmazingg..

      .

    6. Presha on April 20, 2017 7:09 pm

      Wow so good epi…
      Just loved it…
      Amazing…
      Post soon …
      Love u..

    7. Simiyy on April 20, 2017 8:31 pm

      Hey dear
      It’s me Simiyy
      I really loved it
      Post soon
      Loads of love

    8. SidMin on April 20, 2017 10:48 pm

      Loved it Awesome . .. I mean the episode was a perfect combination of humour +cute moments….
      Love you post soon ❤

    9. maha on April 20, 2017 10:55 pm

      awesm cute
      post sooon

    10. mia12 on April 20, 2017 11:30 pm

      Omgggg my chocochips yarr speechless episode,,????.. What a thought ufff,,?????.. Hahaha twinj sirf bar bar gir hi jate hai,,????? and their nok jhok was Awesome,,???? or last mai jhor ka jhat was uff hilarious,,?????.. I Loved each and every part yarr,,???????? Plssss next jaldhi post karna yarr or wait nai hota,,??..
      LOAD’S OF LOVE,,❤?❤?❤..

    11. SidMin23 on April 21, 2017 8:10 am

      Funny ? love twinj nokjhoks and precap jhor ka jhat ?????? can’t wait to read more ? twinj to be lock in room I guess it will be Usha and Lela thought so that twinj can spend time together.

    12. jasmin on April 21, 2017 1:08 pm

      Its awesome dii..loved it..plzz post nexrsoon..love u..♥♥

      • jasmin on April 21, 2017 1:09 pm

        Next soon*

    13. baby on April 21, 2017 11:29 pm

      I mean …………♥
      ohhhhh my god aakriti ♥
      mujhe lag hi rha tha shaadi hone wali hai……….☺
      wwooooooohoooooooooooo……..♥
      osm marvelleous speechless………………..♥
      loved it too cute…….♥
      srsly d songs do match dude…..♥
      lods of love…….♥
      cant w8 for nxt…..♥

    14. Ramya on April 23, 2017 2:22 pm

      Aaku it’s amazing Superb
      Lovely
      TWINJ moment r superb
      N vo song hehe superb auur vo dil se dil tak mai bhi bohat de rahe hai
      Lovely
      Sacj mai jatkaa laga becharo ko
      Love u keep smiling

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