In Love #Raglak Ff (Chapter 1)

Hellooooo !…hello everyone.. I am completely new here (though I silently read some ffs )…I am a crazy crazy crazy Raglak fan!…I have a friend amongst you…Anjali..
Hope I’ll be able to make more!

Well let me introduce myself…

I am Ani…Shreyani..a 9th class student..I have been writing 3 ffs for Twinj (tashan e ishq) and 1 ff for devakshi…and now I am here to be a member of this beautiful swaragini family.. Do I have a permission?

So let me tell you guys about this story..

This is basically a – Horror and Romantic story!

I don’t know if anyone had tried this genre here before or not..but I hope you like this…

What happens when an in-love just married couple from London..comes for their honeymoon in Ernakulam… But the bungalow has secrets to be revealed!

So let’s start
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Wait wait…
Lights
Camera..

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Smile 😃
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A big white-grey bungalow is shown… A lavish one in Ernakulam..in Kerala..the camera moves inside the entrance and shows a big and beautiful hall ………the camera moves further on the stairs… And reaches a beautiful room…where a couple is shown hugging each other tightly… So tight that no one can seperate them….all the powers on this Earth is weak in front of this feel…the feeling of LOVE…. It wasn’t a happy hug….it was a hug to console… an inseparable hug…a hug of intense love……

After sometime they break the hug…the face of the girl is shown… A gorgeous girl in a pink-blue anarkali suit…her beautiful’deeper than the ocean ‘…,teary eyes are shown.. tears roll down on her pink-rosy cheeks… the guy clears them with his thumb…
G:..shhh..hey Ragini.. Plz don’t cry..u know naa I don’t like tears in my wife’s eyes…

So the girl is RaginiLaksh Maheshwari…wife of Laksh Maheshwari..

He caresses her forehead she closes her eyes…
R:..but Laksh…
L:..shh..
he keeps fingers on her soft lip and smoothly rub his fingers on her lips… then her face…and slowly on her neck…she keeps her hands on his chest… he takes her right hand and they interlocked their fingers… Soon ..their lips met they had an intense , smooth and long liplock…..after some time their lips parted…Ragini rested her head on his chest…

R:..why r u leaving me here..Laksh… I want to b with u only…
L:..Even I want to b with u only.. But the work for which I am going is not safe….if u will b there then u will b the most unsafe…ur safety is my priority… I just want to keep u away from that house….
R:..but why..
L:..leave it..
R:..I love u …Laksh..
L:..I love u tooo …Ragini.. I love u….OK…I have to go now…she stands straight…. B here with Swara and Sanskar… And plz take care…
R:..hmm..
L:..now may I see my lovely wife’s beautiful smile..
R:..ya..u r going and asking me to smile… u r the reason for my smile …Laksh…and gets a curve on her lips…
L:..okay..bye..
R:..Laksh plz..don’t say bye..just say..see u soon…
L:..okay…c u soon..cups her face and turns to leave but Ragini catches his elbow….YYwhy r u not telling me the whole truth…
L:..which truth Ragini..?
R:..Laksh …I know u r hiding something from me..tell me naa..plz..
Laksh turns and cups her face..
L:..I love u..only u..

He turns and leaves…

Ragini follows him…
Laksh’s POV-

I am sorry Ragini.. But to keep u safe is my priority… Even if I die…I will not let anything happen to u…in this war..either we will b together for always.. Or I will never meet u again….but I can’t lie to u …u should know about this…

R:..Laksh.
.she sobs..but feels warm hands on her shoulder …she recognized the touch and hugs the person tightly…
R:..Laksh…(yes ..Laksh returned..)
L:..Ragini.. I can’t lie to u ..listen..
He makes her sit on the house swing… surrounded by greenery…(after all they are in the God owned city…Kerala)

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This chapter ends here… I hope it was not boring.. and sorry for wasting ur time but trust me ..its a very beautiful story.. Do read..and comment..
I know ..many of u must b a bit confused… but soon all the confusions will b cleared… And yes its not a common luvstory…

All kinds are accepted here..roses..thorns …rotten tomatoes.. And yes kisi ka man kare toh Lillie’s bhi throw kar Dena…coz I love them a lot…

And yes there is another writer named Lovely… Who was active…is still I donno…but I am not her…don’t get confused

With Love ❤

66 comments

  1. Pinky

    Lovely I want give u rose with big kiss also …the epi was sooooo good.who said its boring ..it was superb. R u from Kerala ? Okay I want be ur friend ? Will u accept me as ur friend? Update soon.I am waiting

  2. Raglakholic

    |Registered Member

    Wow dear
    I just say one word
    Nd that is u left me spellbounded
    It’s in deed interesting and outstanding
    In single episode
    U showed all emotions suspence,romantic emotional nd all
    Please do continue soon
    Eagerly awaiting for the next episode
    Love u dear

    • Jiya_Ani

      |Author

      Thanks a lot dear!..and you have a name like me!..even I am a Raglakholic !

      I am really happy that you liked my post…I’ll post next tommorow
      😃

  3. Samira

    |Registered Member

    Hi lovely.U know telugu??
    It’s some what like a telugu movie which I saw. I don’t wanna reveal which movie to hold on ur suspense. Ur great keep going girl.

  4. Bela

    Ah, this is really interesting. Now, I am eager to know what Laksh has to say to her. Please do continue soon. Good job😁

  5. Astra

    |Registered Member

    Oh my lovely dear…. it’s an awesome and as you said it’s really very very beautiful…loved it a lot my dear…. plz continue…..

  6. Kanchi

    |Registered Member

    Lovely see I m following u everywhere
    Just kidding n i have read this story but will not reveal the whole story as it may harm ur ff
    Loads of love
    Kanchi

  7. SRSL

    |Registered Member

    Awsm…are you a mallu…if yes hi-fi…at last got someone from kerla…and by the way whenever I go to India I stay in Cochin…so it my favorite place…I feel a bit of happiness from this deserted area to a greenery place…so freinds….sorry if you are not from Kerala….

    • Jiya_Ani

      |Author

      Thanks but Sorry..I amn’t Mallu nor Am Kerelite…but We can be friends haan…
      And dosto main no thanks and no sorrys…ohkay!😃

  8. Sohi

    |Registered Member

    Hi lovely I loved this story very much well I know this story but I wanted to read it in another way too so looking forward to it one question you are crazy fan of raglak then what about twinj do answer it keep writing bye

    • Jiya_Ani

      |Author

      Hi Sohi!..it would be same only.. And yes I am a crazy Raglak Fan but but but!…Twinj…Twinj toh meri jaan hai …I am the craziest fan of Twinj…actually that’s the reason behind the same story as..I can’t imagine a story if Twinj aren’t there!…whatever I imagine.. I imagine Twinj…write Twinj..though I replace the names afterwards… That’s it!..I’d suggest..rehne do..mat padho or else you’ll get bored!… You know everything 😃

  9. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    Hey shreya! It was flawless tremendous you are raglak fan! I like raglak but not actually fan of it! You must have know me I commented on your twinj ffs I am twinj ff and I read raglak ffs too I wrote ffs on them too! But mostly on SwaSan! As I am a crazy fan of them keep going girl I missed your twinj ff said can you give me links please and do read my raglak ffs if you have time one is I love you raglak few shots and raglak rockstar love story ( short story) they are incomplete I will complete them soon and start a new story anyways enough of my bak-bak bye take care and love you! 😘🙂❤️😍😻

    • Jiya_Ani

      |Author

      Yes I understand what you mean di..see I rarely get attracted to any pair…But for aaye the sweetheart Couple Twinj…jinki ye pagli deewani hai!!…I am mad for Twinj…and secondly I feel that Namish – Tejasvini pairing is good too…I watch swaragini only when Raglak track is On..

      I am Raglak Fan but Am Twinj Cooler, A.C. , and…….To of an….(what can I do…Sidhant ka deewanapan hai 😍😳😁)

      Well thanks di..And I’ll surely read ur post 😊

  10. abi

    Yipeeeee you r also a crazy raglak fan
    Yaaaeee I’m soo happy to get a new raglak ff
    Love u soo much
    Please continue

  11. Criz

    |Registered Member

    Hiii nice episode i’m died heart fan of swaragini. are you from kerala. i asked because i saw ernakulam thats why !!! 🙂

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