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Love – power to change by Amore

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Helloo everyone!
Remember me? If not then ok and if yes then here’s my first FF for you all.
I’ve written some OS on TU but those are not FF.
1. Lifeless- Just Body No Soul
http://www.tellyupdates.com/lifeless-just-body-no-soul/
2. Desperation by Amore
http://www.tellyupdates.com/desperation-by-amore/
3. Hope by Amore (OS)
http://tellyupdates.com/hope-amore-os/
4. Encouragement by Amore (OS)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/encouragement-amore-os//

And here is the link of my Chapter-Series:-
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=smile+by+amore

Dear sweetie I have edited this one keeping you in my mind. Take it as my tribute to your love (and of course my boyfriend THoWeH hehe 😀 )
By the way you can view the original story in the given link.
http://ilekh.com/literature/story/879/love-power-change/

HERE WE GOOOOO
This is the story of Sebastian Vincent who was known to be an all-rounder. Sebastian was very intelligent from his childhood. He participated in different in-doors as well as out-doors games and was good at them. Although he was so good at his academics he was not happy at home. His parents – Bonny and Saral Vincent had no time for him. He spent his time with his grandmother and his sister – Samaira Bradford. They both were always there to help him in need. Sam had to go abroad for her further studies leaving Sebastian and grandmother with her parents. They were regularly in contact. He proved to be a good student by sustaining on his position with good marks. Everyone was delighted with his graduation marks.

Suddenly he faced a tragedy with his grandmother’s death. He was unable to control his emotions. Sam was abroad so everybody decided to call her for the last rituals. She arrived and wailed and she was in trauma. Then she looked around and saw that Sebastian was missing. Sam knew that Sebastian must be in too much pain so she calmed herself and went to him. She knocked at his door and asked him to open. As soon as he heard her voice; he opened the door with teary eyes and hugged her tightly. Sam was in the huge pain seeing her beloved brother so devastated. She hugged him back even more tightly. The moment she hugged, Sebastian cried for long time. Though Sebastian’s condition was not good, Sam went back as she had to continue her study. As days passed by, everything changed including Sebastian’s behavior. He was getting much rude and aggressive. His parents were so busy in their business that they could not realize that Sebastian had fallen in the bad circle.

He started fighting and messing up with everyone, always drinking and smoking. His parent decided to control him and started cutting off his pocket money thinking that he would stay quiet in home without money and admitted him to hostel as well. Sam was worried for Sebastian being lonely so she regularly called him but she was unaware of what was happening with his brother. Her parents also did not tell her anything. She started suspecting about the condition and behavior of his brother by their talks and through some of his friends. She was too worried about him. She decided to return but her parents told her not to do so saying everything will be fine very soon. They asked her not to bother. Since Sam was worried about Sebastian a lot, she returned without informing anyone because she knew they would not let her do so if she had informed them.

After returning, she went straight to meet Sebastian’s dean where she got to know about his changed behavior. Dean told her that Sebastian has been so undisciplined and quarrelsome in last one year. He even told her that he has failed in exam time and again. Sam got dumbstruck by the news. She asked him that she wanted to meet Sebastian but to her surprise he said that he was absent since a week or so and this was not new now as he had been doing like this since past 6 months. Sam got back to home angrily and was irked with her parents for neglecting Sebastian knowing him being on a trauma since grandmother’s demise. Knowing that Sam arrived, Sebastian came to home. As soon as Sebastian saw his Sammy, he hugged her tight. He didn’t leave her for almost half an hour and cried emotionally. Later when they parted they had some good time together and Sebastian was happy to be with Sam. During their conversation Sam inquired him about his changed behavior but Sebastian hesitated, excused himself tried to ignore her and went out unknown of the fact that his Sammy was aware of everything.

Sam handed a heavy bag which she brought from Sebastian’s hostel to parents saying that she liked the gift they gave. They did not understand her at first but when they opened the bag they saw cigarettes, drugs and a paper – Sebastian’s mark sheets. Sam taunted them that they were so busy attending their business and parties that they did not get to know about their own son. She furiously said them “It’s all because of your carelessness mom and dad. I wish you would give him time instead of money. And I so wish you would cut your time instead of his pocket money. If you would do that my Sabby would not be a thief to quench the thirst of all his addictions”. She left the place with tears on her swollen eyes that emitted pain, leaving Bonny and Saral shocked at the revelation of his son being thief and ashamed of themselves for not being able to understand their children.

After that day Sam made sure that Sebastian was not alone. Few days later, Sam got a call from Sebastian’s mobile and Neil – Samaira’s husband was on the other side who informed her that Sebastian was in the hospital and asked her to reach there as soon as possible. Sam hurried to the hospital while the Vincent’s followed her. They reached the hospital and visited doctor who told her Sebastian’s condition to be critical numbing Sam’s nerves. The doctor cleared that it was not the case of accident but was the case of drug addiction and very critical and asked them not to keep false hopes as his survival was less.

Sam burst into tears seeing his dear brother lying into the hospital bed struggling between life and death. Neil comforted her and told her not to worry as he’ll be with her. Neil further said, “Sweetie I called Chasni and Teji. They are renowned drug specialists as well as psychiatrists all over the world. I couldn’t talk to Chasni as she was busy but Teji informed her and now they are on their way and you don’t worry Sabby will be saved. You have to be strong babe not for yourself but for our Sabby.” Neil hugged her giving her a comforting smile and kissed her temple affectionately. Sam asked Neil like a baby,” My baby won’t leave me right love?” (To which Neil nodded and kissed her temple again with love) She gained some courage with this and wiped her tears on the same position where she was resting her head to hear her names which was audible on his heartbeat.

(Doc. Radhika Bradford – sister of Neil Bradford and Sebastian Vincent were friends. Sam’s grandmother wanted to tie their knot too, which everyone was aware of obviously except the duo. Radhika being a doctor was away because of some cases who returned after her brother informed her about Sebastian’s case.)

Two hours later Doc. Radhika arrived with her associate Teji McKenna and took over Sebastian’s case. Everyone was informed that Sebastian was not only traumatized but also highly depressed and extremely weak physically as well as mentally. His treatment went on a full swing and finally he was out of danger after a long 72 hours. Although he was out of danger he was still weak physically as well as mentally. After numerous psychiatric sessions and bed rest for a month Sebastian finally got stable after which Sam personally took very good care of him. Sam made sure of his needs and stood strong for her Sabby but she was very much pained to see her baby like that which made her pale. Sebastian was cursing himself and thinking that he was responsible for his sister’s pain and sorrow. He could not face her by any means.

Sam comforted him and assured him not to accuse himself and told him to pour his heart out; and… he did. He was feeling guilty. He regretted for not controlling himself when he started having drugs about a year ago. He remembered how his friends recommended him to try drugs. He remembered how he refused but agreed him when they insisted, saying, “You will forget all your pain after having it. So try it and forget all your miseries”. His eyes were full of tears as he was saying all this but Sam controlled her emotions and told him that it was not his fault. When he heard that, hugged her tight, and wailed like a baby. He then said her facing the truth that although he survived his addiction has ruined him. He is not the same Sebastian who was her pride. He failed in the internal exam. His reputation has doomed. He lost his interest in studies and his graduation was worthless now. The biggest pain he felt was that he had to see his Sammy cry which he never wished. He apologized expressing his guilt for making her cry.

Sebastian loved his sister more than his life so he now wanted to leave drugs not for him but for his Sammy. He now again wanted to be the same Sebastian who always brought smile on her face. When he said, “I want to be your old Sabby, Sammy”. Sam hugged him tightly with an ear to ear smile and said him encouragingly,” Although you failed in internal exam. Your reputation has not doomed. I know you have lost your interest in the studies but your graduation is not worthless. If you are addicted now who says that you cannot recover? My Sabby is not so weak is he? Sebastian saw her with wide confused eyes. Watching his expression Sam asked, “How can you give up, baby?” Sebastian was happy to hear baby after so long. Sam always called him baby with love and when she called him now he felt himself lucky to get a sister like Sam who loved him unconditionally. Sebastian was still negative towards himself. He said, “Nobody will understand it, they hate me now. I’m a goon. I’ve become a thief, Sammy. Nobody is with me and no one will help me to do so. I’ve disappointed you Sammy. I’M so sorry” and cried hugging her. To which Sam said,” I am with you Sabby. Am I not enough? (He overwhelmingly nodded as an agreement and she continued) We do not need anyone. We will prove them that you can get well. I will help you to get rid of it. And if anybody will hate you I will fight for you, encourage you and be beside you forever as your backbone if you fail and I’ll be a shield for you when someone will try to hurt you. You are my baby and you have not disappointed me. Yeah it pained me to see you in so much of pain but you are still my pride. You want to get rid of this addiction and I’m proud of you”. Sebastian was delighted with Sam’s words and he kissed her knuckles gratefully.His happiness doubled when his parents too proposed to help him. He was then brought back home where he was pampered and cared a lot. Whenever he felt like having drugs he went to Sam and lie down on her lap. Saral consulted with the best therapists and doctors to assist Tehika and Bonny fed him by her own hands. They supported, cared and loved him so much that he gradually started improving. He then started showing interest in studies as well and was happy. He took exam and also got good response too. Although, he was not the topper this time but he was happy as he has become a good man. His colleagues had started hating him but now their view towards him was changing. He was also being respected in his circle. People then started taking him as a brave man who fought with himself to leave drugs. He was able to earn a good life and a good example for the society.

Neil and Sebastian shared a good bond from the beginning and now even Radhika and Sebastian became ready for marriage after knowing grandmother’s wish

This is not a love story but a story of love. It was love that united the Vincent Family as well. That was Neil’s love that became Sam’s strength.
Grandmother’s love had power to change Sebastian but he did not get good track and Sam’s love had power to change him from a ruined addict to his self. This is the story of love between Sam and Sebastian, where one fought with everyone for her brother and another fought with himself for his sister.

So tell me guys howz it???
Liked? No???
Hope to get honest feedback…

31 Comments
  1. Sammy

    Awesome amore …well i have seen your one story Smile by Amore ..i found it’s title fascinating …but i didn’t red it till now …can you give me a summary ….and don’t worry i will read it too …by the way this was awesome ..really mind blowing 😘😘

    1. Amore

      Yeah sammy.. Please do read it and let me know your opinion about it too. and dont worry i’ll surely give a summary 🙂

  2. Rossy

    Very nice dear…bro sis bond awesome…it always has its own spark…i loved it

    1. Amore

      Thank you Rossy

  3. Sweetie

    OMG!! I’m jumping in happiness Amore.. 😀 Wait,didn’t read the chapter yet,will come back.. 🙂

    1. Sweetie

      Amore dear,thank you so much for this shot and writing it keeping me in mind.. 🙂 OMG!!You don’t know how happy I’m right now by seeing a story from one of my favorite writers.. 😀
      Teji McKenna-That surname rang some bells in my mind,McKenna is my love from wallflower series..Really you refreshed many incidents from this series.. 🙂

      And coming to this story,that was awesome as usual.. 🙂 Bro-sis bond is always unique in it’s own way and you portrayed it real well.. 😀 The way Sebastian came out of his trauma for his sister and Neil standing as ultimate support for both bro and sis is really applaudable.. 🙂 Radhika is a doctor,wow!!That’s another wow factor for me.. 😀 Thanks heavens,I’m alone while reading this story because I was grinning like a idiot the entire time.. 😀 Love you loads and take care dear.. 🙂

      1. Amore

        Sweetie…. I don’t understand what you have in your Veins? Is it full of sugar syrup instead of blood???? I wonder that is why you are as your name 🙂 😀

  4. Brin

    Outstanding episode, love it to the core, you nail it, well done. 🙂

    1. Amore

      Thank you Brin. Keep reading and please read my other creations too and let me know about your opinion regarding it too. By the way Rectify: is really too good. I am unable to comment as it don’t show comment section from my lappy and don’t know why and when i post from my cell it is not posted. Yet thanx for reading

  5. It was superbly cute ………most unique bond is bro sis bond ………….really loved It

    1. Amore

      Thank you Shreya keep reading. I’m glad that you liked it

  6. Aadia

    Hi Amore…good to see your story here,hope you remember me,I always comment on Smile and other one shots(as hima).Its really like the continuation of sweeie di’s THWHseries.like that your stories also contain messages and relevant issues..so nice…please write more here..

    1. Amore

      Dear how can i forget you? I remember each and every word you said on my comments. You are the second person who comes in my mind when i post my chappies and i expect to see how you felt. I know you might be a bit busy so couldn’t reply me but trust me dear girl you are my baby sisso and i am really glad to read you after sooooooo looooong 😀 and remember that i can never forget you. and yeah keep reading dear 🙂

      1. Aadia

        Oh…im so happy for your reply..you consider me as baby siss 😊😊😄..thank you so much my big Siss…and can you give me link of your fb page??

      2. Amore

        Sure dear its https://www.facebook.com/laamoremp/

        therez mu poems too tell me howz it.

  7. Jnana

    mind blowing……

    1. Amore

      Thank you Jnana

  8. Aasthu

    bro-sis bond was nicely depicted………and also friendship……….nyc msg…..I raed it in a hurry………

    1. Amore

      Its ok Aasthu i felt good that you read it even though you were in a hurry and took some minutes to comment here. I’ll be glad if you do read my other stories too. Keep reading

  9. Jessie

    Amore.. this is so fantastic.. had a gr8 time reading … thanks 4 presenting a nice story..

    1. Amore

      Thank you Jessie. Keep reading. I’d be glad if you could let me know about my other stories too. 🙂

  10. mindblowing…………

    1. Amore

      Thank you Subha

  11. Awesome amore….it was very nice narration. ..loved it…keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads

    1. Amore

      Thank you Roma… keep reading.

  12. Hey..amore ..I am really sorry that I am extremely sorry that I am so late in commenting…actually my exams r going on thatsy..BT for sure I WS not late while Reding..I read on that only.. And after Reding this I HV gone through ur all os they all r like mind blowing… No words dear and specially that lifeless: body no soul WS speechless..no words 4 that really …I WS really able to feel hr every pain ..and u kn wt after that I send the link 2 my besties and they were really amazed by u…u r terrific dear I mean every word from my bottom of heart..
    Even the Hope WS amazing ….it cherrishsd. Sm beautiful memories… Plzu continue writing and don’t stop ever ..will b eagerly waiting 4 ur next os and ffs …post soon …love u dear ..Accha nd can I call u loviiieee ..if u don’t mind..
    Bye. Take care

    1. Amore

      Thank You ana. I am really feeling soooo gooood to get such comments thank you for it. And yeah you can call me anything you like. And keep reading too.

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  14. _Ritu

    Its too lovely nd beautiful dear….bro sis bond I admire d most nd u narrated it very beautifully.. 🙂 loads of love 🙂

    1. Amore

      Thank you Ritu. Keep reading 🙂

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